The Outcast: My Cat Is Actually a Divine Beast Who Travels the World

Bone scraper

Little kittens

One person: All the skills are brought to me by kittens

He is an opera singer again. Several books under one person all have the opening scene of an opera, a studio.

Just read the first few chapters, there are big problems with age, location, logic, etc. 1. Although the specific age is not mentioned in the article, it is obvious that the protagonist is more than ten years older than Zhang Chulan, but the protagonist has obviously had more than one or two contacts with the three Taoyuan brothers, which shows that the age difference is not big, or even very close. But in the original work, Zhang Chulan is of the same generation as the three Taoyuan brothers. Even if they are older than Zhang Chulan, they are not much older. You, the author, are at least ten years older. There is obviously something wrong. Why, in the future Luo Tian Dajiao, these three people will all be in their thirties? 2. The protagonist went to the city to meet the three Taoyuan brothers in Tianjin, but in the first two chapters he also met Zhang Chulan's family, which is a serious problem. During this period, Zhang Huaiyi only had the last one or two years left. He wanted to fight with various sects before his death. The original place for the fight was near Tangmen. At this time, Zhang Chulan's family must be in Yungui Sichuan. In the original work, Zhang Chulan also lived in Yungui Sichuan when he was a child. I really don't know how the protagonist's family got there. Could it be that they were flying? Even if the protagonist lives in Yunnan, Guizhou, and Sichuan, how did you meet the three Taoyuan brothers? Hat trick? 3. How could Zhang Huaiyi still see his friends while he was on the run? This would directly expose his whereabouts. Not to mention that other people didn't know, major forces have been looking for Zhang Huaiyi. How could the protagonist's family be so close to Zhang Huaiyi that no one would be monitoring him. The most important thing is that Zhang Huaiyi himself cannot tell anyone his whereabouts. Even if the protagonist's grandfather encounters him by chance, how could he still stay where he is? Others, Zhang Huaiyi, had already run away with his family, and he waited for the protagonist and his family to go see him and have dinner together. . . 4. The main character's family tradition of singing skills is said to be passed down only by the main character's family and Quan Xing Xia Liuqing. This is also an obvious mistake. The author, you wrote that the protagonist's family and Xia Liuqing are the most awesome are quite good, but you two have to inherit it, who will believe it! Masks of the Godhead, or in other words, chariots, are not very common in the original work, but they are not particularly rare either. In the original work, there must be a lot of methods like Northeast Nagada, which is the birthplace, let alone there is no such thing. The author can obviously say that it is a unique method that is different from traditional methods, but no, it has to be mastered by the protagonist's family and Xia Liuqing. Summary: I just read Chapters 4 and 5. There are some problems, which may be explained or changed later, but obviously I don't understand the timeline of the original work or even the relationship between the characters.

Xia He's bone scraper has an innate power, so she can't control her sexual desire. Arranging such a character to get the protagonist's first blood, 6

Gentlemen, because of recommendation reasons, it is best not to keep books. If you feel something is wrong, you can remind me and I will make corrections, 😘😘😘

How should I put it, I feel like he is a semi-torturous master, but something seems wrong, and I feel a little aggrieved.

What scares me the most is this pile of martial arts treasures, all of which are sparse. The awesome part is not written at all. At least he stole the show twice. Look handsome

The feeling of being chased was very unreasonable and wrong. With Ziyun Wings and the ability to fly, in this world where only one person can fly, how can others chase me? Bring enough dry food and find a cliff to hang out. When others finally come, you fly away and they can only stare. You can also learn the art of disguise, adjust your facial bones, change your appearance, and in turn, inflict evil on others.