Swallowed Star: Cultivation Makes Me Stronger

To sum up: I took the blame for Luo Feng and was chased by Li Yao in the city center. Li Yao didn't have anything to do with it. He said it was to train the protagonist. The big guy just did whatever he wanted. Anyway, I couldn't stand it anymore. Bye.

Judging from the name, if you don't get stronger through cultivation, will you become weaker? Obsessed?

The protagonist, Goldfinger, needs to fight between life and death in order to progress quickly. The protagonist is a relatively radical person. I hope the author can arrange a clone opportunity, so that the life-saving ability will be greatly increased and it will be better suited for Goldfinger. As the saying goes, don't be afraid of ten thousand, just be afraid of the worst. Every time between life and death is life. Even if this is the protagonist, this is contrary to common sense and illogical. In fact, the golden finger of the protagonist is also suitable for Gou Daoliu. Swallowing the Starry Sky has a long life. As Gou rises and slowly improves, he can also become the strongest. This opinion is for reference only, it depends on the author how you write it.

Regarding the opinions on the treatment of the earth, before the people on earth have the overlord of the universe and powerful people, it is a very wise choice for the earth to be hosted by the human race. It is also the safest and most reliable choice. The reason is very simple. It doesn't matter if there is a genius-level Luo Feng. Plus the protagonist, if I were the intelligence manager of those alien races, I would use countless methods to destroy the earth ten thousand times.

In Australia, the protagonist has a parliamentary level of strength and takes the initiative to set up a trap to lure Li Yao here to get rid of him. What is the result? The original book clearly states that someone brought a laser cannon, but the protagonist didn't take it seriously and stayed on the island in the middle of the lake. He exposed the coordinates through the communicator and waited for someone to come and deal with him. As a result, Li Yao came, but the protagonist was almost killed by a laser cannon. He won the game with one hand, but almost lost his life thousands of miles away. There is no one else who can be so brainless and intelligent.

The previous writing was fine, but Li Yao's writing was completely broken. In the original novel, no one dared to use force directly in the base city. Moreover, the protagonist is more than ten times different from others. Even if you go around in circles, it is completely impossible to escape. You must know that the speed in the swallowing increases almost linearly. If you try to get around it at 10 times the speed, can you, a person with a speed of less than one meter, be able to get around a normal person?

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You haven't read the original work. It's very well written. Don't write it again.

Why add the plot of Levi to the protagonist? So sick. I thought it was okay at first, but now I feel extremely toxic.

There are too many poisonous points at the beginning. Why does the protagonist have to lick Luo Feng? I don't like to read dog-licking novels like this.