Swallowed Star: From the Start, Slaying the Savage Rong Jun

I suggest the author revise Chapter 8, otherwise many readers will be turned off. A transmigrator, possessed by another, gives away a crucial opportunity related to his cheat ability to someone completely unrelated, not even the original owner's older brother. Where is the sense of belonging? Possession! From an extraterrestrial demon! It's too off-putting.

Hmm, I read dozens of chapters in one go, so here's my review. First, the strengths: The opening is captivating, with a good premise. I really wanted to see the story of Hong and Thor from the original novel, and it would have been even better if it started with the mutation, though I doubt the author had the writing skills for that.

Your naming skills are a bit lacking. Either don't name it at all and just call it "Thunder Blade Style 1 & 2," or you should look it up in a dictionary or browser and come up with something more sophisticated.

If the ability to create clones is so powerful, why not create clones from the primordial universe itself?

This Earth clone is truly incomprehensible. The nature of Earth means it can't move; it can only be placed there. Apart from having a small effect in the early stages, it's basically useless. It's a completely mindless choice.

If the protagonist is killed, will the entire Earth be dragged down with him?

You should just fix the time-based damage; why bother with spatial manipulation?

The protagonist is Hong's dog, right? In essence, the protagonist is not Thor, but an extraterrestrial demon who possessed Thor's body. He treats Hong like a father and entrusts his life and fortune to Hong.

Who doesn't need these fragments of law? Everyone on the Origin Continent needs them, right? Forget about the primordial universe, which realm doesn't need them?

Those stupid clones are annoying to look at. They're just messing around with Earth and creating clones, what's the point?