After Ten Years of Cutting Firewood in the Mountains, I Have Become Invincible When I Come Down.

I feel that the story is clearly written, which is worthy of recognition. The character description is poor and the rhetoric is poor. The most critical thing is the lack of details. This style of writing requires using details of things and character actions to strengthen the story narrative. The simplest thing is that the chicken drumstick noodles in the front are not described in detail, and there is no preparation for the usual simple meals. This results in the incident of the chicken drumstick being robbed without a strong sense of conflict, which makes this link tasteless. The same problems continue to appear in various parts of the novel, such as: the waiter's contempt, the county magistrate's arrogance, the boss's husband's change of heart... They appear very abruptly, and the plot is feeble.

Shennong was poisoned to death! You're a firewood seller, taking care of the restaurant owner's housework? Do you want to have sex with any woman? Do you even help take care of other people's children?

As soon as I saw the beginning, I felt that it would not work. It would be much better to copy your previous devilish life than it is now.

If you don't have the ability, you have to write it by force...

It's not bad, longevity, stop and go, look around, encounter bumps and smooth roads, it's pretty good

I used to write pretty good horror novels.

If you don't write about the harem, don't over-describe the female characters. It's quite disgusting if you've flirted with them and then don't accept them.

No, no, no, I have always wanted to find this type of book. I even wanted to write it myself, but unfortunately I never finished it.

Brother, you have been writing books for so many years, but you are still at this level?

Chapter 19, there is a typo!

It's so scary, this Xianxia session is too complicated

It's okay, but there are too few updates.

Keep going and don't get discouraged. You think your early-morning, fast-paced stories are very interesting.

Recognize yourself, you are not that material 🤫

A long time ago, I saw you writing horror articles like Despair Game on QQ Reading. Unfortunately, Harmony has been removed from the shelves. I really loved reading that one. I forgot what it was called. Will you continue to write new books?