Being Forced to Be a Villain, I Put My Righteousness First

The writing is actually good, but do you know why it's not popular? The main reason is that others don't know what you want to write after reading many chapters. Do you know why this is the case? Because I found that you seemed to write each chapter separately, cutting off the end of each chapter, and then starting the second chapter with a new narration. Do you want us to figure out how to connect the two chapters on our own? Reading this way is very tiring, and not many people are willing to read this way. You just need to connect the previous and previous chapters and write the plot coherently so that we can read it smoothly.

I gave up after reading the first volume. I can tolerate the poison, but the righteous words I promised you should take the lead, and I'm talking about Xiao Liu! What the hell is the protagonist? Your friend helped you, he died, and you ran away with your tail between your legs? Is this the word "return of righteousness" that takes the lead? ? ? Change your life, coward diary!

Let's talk about logic first. The first chapter is full of riddles, but not all clues are given. In the end, I even knew less than the protagonist, and the inference was very different from the author's final result. Let's talk about the characters. The protagonist is really good. I don't see the righteousness at all. I am full of money, money, money, not to mention that a time traveler actually does such a thing. You might as well write about a native. The one who owes a million dollars is even more outrageous. For a formal loan, it depends on your repayment ability. 5,000 Taels for two years is not enough. Irregular interest rates are ridiculously high, so I don't care about you.

I've finished reading the first volume... I feel so sick🤢What kind of broken protagonist is this? Xiaoliu's death was so unworthy...

I've finished watching it, so the main plot is to do tasks to earn money and pay off debts. This doesn't make me feel happy.

The writing is good, but sometimes the transitions are too fast and it does feel a bit confusing. But maybe it's because of the writing technique?

After reading ten chapters, I just feel baffled! Can't read

It's very uncomfortable to watch, and I don't know what the whole story is about.

The writing is very good, the world view and plot are good, I want to follow it.

What's going on in front of you is inexplicable. The woman opposite wants to kill you, but she just grabs your hand and doesn't break it? Can't kill women?

A bit like the legend of Lu Xiaofeng

There are 12 sects in the Three Religions and Nine Streams. Each sect has a divine will. I have written almost a hundred chapters and still haven't introduced the protagonist sect clearly.

Wu Tiao read Chapter 32, and kept jumping after that. Generally speaking, it was okay. The writing was a bit poor, and the plot was often incoherent when it was not a group portrait. The author obviously did not understand the needs of current readers. The death of supporting characters who have a certain relationship with the protagonist has long been used to promote the plot. It became very popular, so many authors either faked their death and later came back to life or were scolded and criticized. The plot of the two female characters was also written in such a way that it was easy to persuade them to quit. If the person who wanted to kill the protagonist did not die, someone would definitely hate it. This behavior is very similar to the story about a son-in-law licking a dog, but it has been out of date for many years.

After reading more than thirty chapters, I feel that the girls who have appeared so far are all very strange and not likable at all.

Well written, I would like to recommend it and reward it. It is waiting to be put on the shelves. Looking forward to it👍👍

It's so embarrassing at the beginning, the setting poem? That's just a few random words thrown together, and then there's nothing wrong with bullying young people into poverty. . . Could it be more embarrassing?

This book is unconventional, I hope to finish it

At the end of the first volume, you are persuaded to give up. If you were seeking revenge or preparing for revenge, you would not be so persuaded to give up. The protagonist you created has no personality charm.