After Becoming the Cannon Fodder Villain in the Book, the Heroine Confessed Her Love to Me

Reason for recommendation: A super interesting time-traveling villain story. The relationship between the characters in the story is well-founded. The promotion of various realms does not suppress the protagonist too much. However, the male protagonist's character is a bit unstable or even collapsed. In some plot descriptions, the system is set to a human-like image, but many times it is forgotten. The system is there, but overall, the plot logic is relatively normal, and the character creation of the male protagonist is because the specific performance is too different from the original character. The author's writing skills are slightly lacking in this aspect, but the whole work is humorous, interesting, and sweet, so it is still worth reading! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}. Book title: "After passing through the cannon fodder villain in the book, the heroine confessed to me" Author: Flightless Wei Tag: time travel, golden finger, alien world, fantasy Status: serialized Recommendation index; four stars Plot introduction: When I wake up, He unexpectedly traveled through an ancient fantasy novel about Feng Aotian's upgrade style with a heroine. Fortunately, he was not a big boss, but he was a version of cannon fodder that ran through the early, middle and late stages. In order to survive, he started a series of desperate attempts, but the clinker heroine looked at him more and more wrongly...

Forget it if you have a system. The system is very smart and it's already ridiculous. To be honest these days, there are a lot of people who immediately abandon the book when they see a system at the beginning. Then you are even more outrageous. The system is really fucking human or male, and it can read the heroine's mind. I don't even think about it. TM can't be described in words. I really tolerated the newbies in the past and read more. The seedlings of sweet articles need to be cared for. But I really can't understand your current operation. It's too outrageous. I'll die from poison. Bye bye.

Isn't it too deliberate? After reading Chapter 10, the male protagonist helped the protagonist's group. The sword energy can also help the protagonist. Do you want to write it more cruelly, and fuck the female protagonist hard in the early stage, and then the female protagonist kills the male protagonist and later finds out that everything was done by the male protagonist to save him?

The writing is good, but the logic of the plot is poor. I hope the author can think about it carefully after finishing it. In addition, pure love is invincible, long live the single heroine. Personal opinion: Is Peak Master Zuan not very smart? She had obviously read the 100 Beauty List before about the male protagonist's life experience. How could she not know about the male protagonist's life experience? And can she really become the group favorite? I hope that the plot of this peak leader can be further polished. Although it is a secondary character, in the same sect as the male protagonist, there must be more descriptions. It is best to change it slightly (it does not have to be a character change); Although the heroine is a big heroine, it is best not to overlap the supporting characters. It is indeed difficult to write group portraits. Don't be too intellectual, just add some distinctive characters. Thanks for reading!

Open a forum for soliciting opinions. Do you think it is better for the male protagonist to take the initiative when it comes to confession, or the female protagonist? The two ways of writing are very different, but I have some ideas and it's hard to decide. Please give me your opinions.

The old fairy is so disgusting, can she change her ways?

There are too few romance novels with a single female protagonist, please give it a try, author. I don't reject harems, but harems must have logic. I think the plot should be used to promote the harem, but there are too many novels where the harem is used to promote the plot, and I can't stand it. Look for this pure love to detoxify.

It's so troublesome to name the supporting characters, I don't have enough brain capacity. If anyone has a good name, please help me. Both men and women are welcome.

What are these two chapters about? My brain is gone

In this novel, the behavior and brains of everyone in it have nothing to do with their status It is recommended that friends who read novels with brains read it with caution. Of course, if you want to bring a love brain, let's talk about it separately.

The beginning is wrong, right? Even if the villain is an early villain, his talent cannot be bad, at least he must be around average, otherwise he will not even be qualified to be a villain. The villains are (the initial talent is ridiculously high, the luck is too, and the appearance is handsome), one is a small-bellied type, and the other is for his own great cause.

What male channel should female channel novels be linked to?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ The book is creative and well-intentioned, but the logic of the story is relatively poor, almost ruining the tone of the entire story and giving people a sense of industrial saccharine. The character treatment of the male protagonist is too loose. If the system can portray it more indifferently, it may make this story more like the same thing. The plot design can be more clever. For example, the male protagonist has already been burdened with some heavy things at the beginning, whether it is hatred or ideals. These things are indispensable for pure love, which also facilitates the development of the story. Good pure love is like a good latte. The milk is sweet, but it is different because of the black coffee itself. It is completely possible to make the system a purely purposeful existence. It should be like a machine. The male protagonist has been punished many times for failing to maintain his darkened persona, and he has gained the attention and love of the female protagonist. In order to make himself stronger, he has gone darkened to obtain resources to protect the female protagonist or other important things (so the male protagonist mentioned above has a huge burden, which facilitates the unfolding of the story). It's easy to get the audience's satisfaction with one piece of sugar and one knife. The author will soon open a new book and some things can be modified while there are few people ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧,

It's so embarrassing to see that even one person can deduct three bedrooms and one living room. It's so obvious and deliberate, and several people knew about it in just 10 chapters. The character design is so ridiculous that it's completely off the mark.

I can only say that the two of us are like kneading dough. If I ask, I will do it. The protagonist doesn't have any masculinity 🙂🙂

Sorry, bro, your writing is good, above average, with a pure love for the single heroine. However, I don't agree that your childhood sweethearts are not in love with each other, because bro, I missed it because I didn't cherish my childhood sweetheart. I can't watch the plot of the story where my childhood sweethearts are not together. Sorry, I gave up the book.

The more I read the dog-licking article, the more frustrated I become. It's hard to imagine the audience for this kind of novel