The Warlord of the Witcher World

I really don't understand. You're writing about guns and cannons in a whole fantasy world? Aren't you just trying to disgust your readers? Don't you see how many people have stopped reading because of this gun stuff?

The most illogical aspect of the Wizarding World is its attitude towards the supernatural and the portrayal of Witchers. If sorcerers and Witchers are discriminated against due to the influence of the nobility, then it's absurd that a few commoners would dare to openly mock those they feel entitled to kill.

The beginning was well-written, but the scene where the protagonist marries off his daughter and then hands over weapons and an army to his father-in-law to fight is a major turning point. Readers will likely lose interest at this point, as the story won't improve.

This book definitely follows the path of conquest, which is certainly not a problem for the original Wizarding World. Sorceresses may seem powerful, but they can all be burned at the stake if the ruler so desires; Witchers may seem invincible, but they can't withstand two pitchforks; Monsters are just scattered mobs and not worth worrying about; Only the Wild Hunt has something to offer, but in…

This is a map of the northern part of the Witcher world created by the University of Warsaw, and it serves as one of the main map references in this book.

Swords and magic have turned into... Lining up to be shot... Speechless. It's become history.

Putting aside the quality of other parts of the story, the fact that the protagonist invented firearms alone was enough to turn me off. In a fantasy world, if guns were invented so quickly, wouldn't everyone else just be killed by technological limitations? Witchers and mages would die just as easily if surrounded by armed soldiers.

My goodness, the name is a bit low-class. Maybe use a world name instead of a warlord from the Witcher world; it's so lame.

The name is really something else; it would be better to replace the warlord with an emperor.

I've never understood why ordinary people dare to mock Witchers. In real life, if a two-meter-tall man were standing in front of you, would you dare to mock him? This is still a society governed by the rule of law.