Back to 1986 in a Small Mountain Village

First of all, I want to apologize. I saw this book on another platform. I like the subject matter very much, but I really can't bear the quantification in the book, so I came here to tell the author about it. I'm sorry 🙏 There are many money-related scenes but there are no No matter how "exciting" you describe the plots of sales, profits, and giving money when there are any numbers, it is difficult for readers to have emotional fluctuations ~ let alone feel any "refreshment"... Give an example of a quantitative scene: [On New Year's Eve, Gao Mingcheng sent a red envelope to the younger sister] ① The younger sister was too embarrassed to accept it. She was studying and helping in her brother's and sister-in-law's shop. Her brother and sister-in-law would give her 50 yuan every month, although she was basically ignored. Her mother took it away, leaving only 10 yuan for her as pocket money, but she was too embarrassed to take the second brother's red envelope again... Gao Mingcheng looked at her and said with a smile: "Take it quickly, as long as you are a child, you can receive the red envelope. When you grow up and get married, the second brother will not give it to you." The little girl happily took the red envelope and felt the thickness of the red envelope. She was so excited that she wanted to put down her chopsticks and open it immediately to take a look. After a long time, the New Year's Eve dinner was almost done. She quickly ran to the kitchen. The pot was still boiling water. She quickly sat in front of the stove, and with the light of the firewood, she couldn't wait to open the food for her second brother. Her eyes gradually brightened. One red envelope inside was 50 yuan, three were 10 yuan, and four were two yuan, a total of 88 yuan. The largest red envelope she received during the Chinese New Year in the past was only 5 yuan... Beside the stove, she didn't know whether she was excited because she received such a big red envelope for the first time, or because it was roasted by the hot firewood. At this time, the girl's face was flushed. , Quickly took out the 50-dollar bill and hid it under her body, stood up and shouted: "Mom, the water is boiling"... ② The younger sister was too embarrassed to accept it. She helped her brother and sister-in-law in the shop, and her brother-in-law would also pay her monthly salary. Her mother would take most of it away every time she came home... Gao Mingcheng smiled and handed it to her and told her to collect it quickly. Next... After eating the New Year's Eve dinner, the younger sister opened the red envelope given by her second brother. She was pleasantly surprised when she saw the money in the red envelope. It was larger than the red envelope her father gave every year. The younger sister quickly collected the red envelope and her face turned red; ③ The younger sister happily accepted the red envelope and said happily: "Thank you, second brother." End~ It would be a pity if you really put more effort into quantifying the daily articles you write... Even if you don't know the price of the key items, you must at least reflect the "total number". For example, when you go to Yangcheng to sell goods, it doesn't matter if you don't know the unit price of an item, but you have to explain how much you bought and how much you earned this time! How much money do you have on you in total? Etc. It is a daily article in itself. Readers who like this type of writing will not say that you are stupid, but "quantification" corresponds to "coolness"!! In the novel, making money is more fun, and spending money is also more fun! In historical texts, when spending money, you should reflect "this money is valuable", it will be very enjoyable! Ignoring quantification, although the difficulty in the writing process is reduced, the "refreshment and comfort" are missing. Price can be found by spending some time. To put it bluntly: it doesn't matter if you look at other works and refer to key prices. As long as the deviation is not outrageous, it is not considered a poisonous point. Moreover, quantitative work does not only refer to "prices". For example, the example of the red envelope scene I gave earlier does not involve prices, but involves "cooling points". Everyday writing is already very "bland". If you voluntarily give up this natural "refreshing point", it will be difficult to attract people and readers will not have a "sense of gain"~ Come on~

The protagonist is like a tamed hound. He licks too much, and his family doesn't want to see him, nor does he live there. Every time he catches prey and buys things, they are all delivered to his home. Give him a little attention and his tail will start wagging. The author probably has Stockholm Syndrome and unknowingly wrote about the protagonist.

Is it the protagonist or the one who is reborn? I won't mention it before rebirth. There are always such stupid or foolish people, but after rebirth, knowing everything, they still want to ask family members why they treat their wife badly. Does this thing need a reason? The protagonist is not taken seriously at home, and your wife will definitely follow suit, so if I were rich, I would move out and live separately. This kind of parents can just give money every month, and I don't care about anything else. I just live well on my own. After reading nine chapters, the protagonist actually has no plans to separate and live alone in the future. I feel that the protagonist is a bit stupid and a virgin.

No wonder there are so many orphans in Qidian. Your book is all about family members, which disgusts me. Wouldn't it be better to write about an orphan, leading his wife to a better life?

In that era of scarcity of supplies, most close relatives in the countryside got along with each other in a bumpy way. Not many could live in complete harmony. Those who could see each other without saying a word or turning a blind eye were extremely rare. Only a few strange families could get along with each other like enemies. My father also has many brothers and sisters, and several families live next to each other. When I was a child, my mother often quarreled with several aunts. One day it was a date tree in front of the door, the next day it was a few feet of vegetable soil, the day after tomorrow it was a wall, etc. There was never any quiet time, and my father and his brothers were not in harmony. However, no matter how the quarrel went, even if they swore not to have any contact with each other until they died, after a period of time they could borrow farm tools and grain from each other, and then they would go back and forth in the quarrel and reconciliation. As a younger generation, we have never been affected by friction between adults. We can go to whose house we want to go at any time and eat at whose house we want. Adults will not anger children because of quarrels. Of course, in today's increasingly urbanized and technologically advanced world, where there are more and more people with low heads, due to differences in space, time, and cognition, the bonds between relatives are becoming less and less, and the existing barriers are getting deeper and deeper, becoming more and more difficult to resolve. The younger generation is becoming more and more indifferent to each other, and young people are becoming more and more likely to go to extremes. From the increasing number of weird comments and online violence on the Internet, we can see that there is a lot of violence around us, so let's do it and cherish it.

He had conflicts with his family from the beginning. His parents didn't want to see him, and no one cared about him at home. The family had money to buy a house for his eldest brother, but the protagonist didn't pay a cent for his marriage. There were endless conflicts. He kept saying that he would separate and live alone, and there were more than 400 photos. The wife is pregnant, and she is still here. More than 400 photos have not been dealt with. It is disgusting and disgusting. Readers, don't you know how to write if you don't write like this?

It's unreasonable for you to use the excuse of needing to pee to escape. Do you think the police in the past are the same as the police now? The police today may be easier to talk to and talk about human rights to prisoners. The police in the past were retired from the battlefield. If there is any situation, they will shoot directly. Like what you wrote about Chief Gao Guobing, four people escorted seven or eight people, and one of your own was injured. Your prisoner said he needed to pee, but you still let your subordinates The policeman takes off the prisoner's pants. You are really insulting people's IQ. It is completely different from the wisdom and determination shown by Gao Guobing in the previous article. Even if you want the protagonist to turn the tide and pretend to be cool, you have to find a reasonable reason. This plot is really a big failure in my opinion. Of course, this is my personal opinion based on the characters in the book. There is nothing wrong with the rest. Overall, it is a good book and worth recommending.

Gao Mingli is already married, and the protagonist still supports his family. Why did a tomb robber and smuggler in his previous life become a virgin after his rebirth? I can't figure it out...

Let me start by saying that I don't know that the author is a woman But it's easy to tell the author's gender from the book How could the male protagonist be a person who is a gangster, hesitant, hesitant, and indecisive? If your parents don't want to see you, just separate the family. In the previous dozens of chapters, you have been constantly testing and testing, submissive and self-pitying. There are a few male readers who like this kind of thing. The honest words are offensive to the ears. The author, you are a girl, and I won't say anything unpleasant. If you want to write well in a male channel, you have to conform to the concepts of the vast majority of boys. Otherwise, you should go to a female channel.

To be honest, except for the three golden chapters, I felt more and more unhappy the more I read the rest of it. Although the author's writing is not great, it is on par; the story is okay, but the characters are really bad. The protagonist's various psychological processes go back and forth, and the same idea is firm, hesitant, firm, and hesitant... It keeps pulling back and forth, which makes it very uncomfortable to watch. The more I read, the more angry I feel, and I can't help but want to curse.