Taoist Priest

There are too many dragons now, so why not change the direction, for example: Giant Long Bo, maybe the protagonist can use this to understand one of the thirty-six heavenly powers, Butianyuri😄😄

After failing to transform into a dragon, he transformed into a dragon and carp, fighting monsters all the way and leveling up in Dragon Transformation. He could see the whole story at a glance, and his level dropped to the bottom in one go.

What's going on lately? There's no profile for being popular?

Author, isn't it awkward to put the protagonist's name in every sentence? Just use it at the beginning and just write the content directly afterwards. I'll give you an example and you can see for yourself if it's awkward. (Xu holds the bowl, Xu picks up the chopsticks, Xu picks up the vegetables and starts eating.) Just use a name at the beginning and then a complete sentence. You have to add the protagonist's name to everything. You add a name to each event, just like writing a diary.

As a father, he still has a very good relationship with his aunt and daughter. He still has to help out if something happens in the future. It's great to be a lone ranger without worries. I have nothing to do to cultivate immortality, I have nothing to do to go shopping

I don't understand why it's not good to cultivate immortality honestly? When I went to a college outside the city and met a wife who was scared to death, I was lucky enough not to be scolded. I was really speechless.

It is not a good thing for a scholar to learn magic. If he is famous, he will not build a few vests. Do you think that everyone can only have the chance to be the protagonist?

There are too many typos, which greatly affects the reading experience. I hope the author can check them before publishing.

If the introduction is not perfect, it will be difficult to attract people.

The writing is very smooth, and it feels like it was written by AI.

I read three chapters, it's like the diary I wrote in elementary school and junior high school

There are a lot of typos in this book, and secondly, it's a bit cluttered, and it feels like it's written by Al or a studio.

I found a problem. Why don't you study? Study for the Five Ghosts?

It seems that the author is a newbie, and there are many mistakes and typos.

Is there a system? Brother, who has seen it, please tell me.

After I read your book. In 2 years, I learned to raise Qi in the first 2 months. Now you can absorb spiritual power. Of course I won't talk about the process, I was scared to death at first. The pain in my Dantian has been excruciating for a year. Later, I don't know what happened, but I accidentally got hit by a car and survived. I was able to hold my breath in the water for 10 minutes. Then find a way to become a master now. Although it is embarrassing to the Grandmaster. I worked hard to earn 200,000 yuan a month as a bodyguard for a Fortune 500 company sponsor. Thanks