Lord of the Mysteries: Yao Guang

I feel that many male readers click in because of the mysterious fandom... As a female reader, I found that the details of life and the emotions of the characters described by the author are quite good. The extraordinary battle scenes are actually not even well written by Squid, haha. The sense of immersion is also very strong, and the suspense in the early stage is also very high. The heroine is a relatively emotional character, and she is matched with a high level of character and ability. There is still a sense of inconsistency, but the flaws are not hidden. I am very happy to see such a fanfic that is very close to the original work. Speaking of the heroine, the Virgin, in fact, strictly speaking, isn't Ke also the Virgin? It is actually normal for the focus on saving the common people to focus on the remnants of the past who have a relatively high sense of morality. It's just that Ke is very cautious and calm, and the foundation of his kindness must be based on his own sufficient strength. The heroine cannot control her own abilities and influence at the beginning, and she is not cautious enough. For readers who already know how cruel the mysterious world is, they will naturally think that the heroine is innocent and stupid, so the impression is not that good. But I think the author has to deliberately create the heroine like this, and everyone has to grow up. I like the monster path very much, and I also like the little snake and the big snake. The extraordinary people in this path have to be more or less happy with the situation, and after experiencing the ups and downs of fate, they can see through the ending of the mortal world, hahaha. As the Key of Light, the heroine will definitely be unable to control herself due to the chaos of fate at the beginning, but... I am really looking forward to the future development! Objectively speaking, the biggest advantage of this article is that the character description is very three-dimensional and not OOC. I have seen many male fans who play the original characters crazily, resulting in the portrayal being too marginalized. This book has the tone of a slow-cooked squid, and the daily writing is very interesting. I love reading it, and the interaction between the heroine and Meng is also very interesting. I really want to watch Meng's process of understanding human nature. (The process of being persecuted.) The author is really amazing and his writing style is very good! I hope the author can be more careful and not unfinished! I hope Xiaoke and the heroine will no longer be so lonely...

It's so weird. It's actually easy to capture the coolness of a mysterious fan novel, but this book doesn't feel cool at all. The lines are filled with pain, depression, and confusion. Who can bear this? Reading a few chapters can make me emo for a day. It's so uncomfortable.

In a sense, what first attracted me to read this article was the male protagonist label of Amon on the character interface. I clicked on this article with doubts about how ambitious the heroine would be to fall in love with Amon. Although I now know that Amon can only be said to be the male protagonist of the plot, and the female protagonist has no emotional scenes with him, this article is surprisingly good.

To Esther. Drawn By Chris.

When I saw the captain sacrificing himself, I had no idea what the author was writing about. If you miss the opportunity to save, it happened, and you sacrificed yourself to save it. Old Neil once, Cohen once, and the captain a third time. As the saying goes, again and again, two, and not three, it feels a bit disgusting if your repeated statement is true. What's the change of having one more person? Do you just miss it again and again? After one event, go to sleep and then move on to the next event, making the narrative as fragmented as reading a catalog? Regarding 🪶, a copy of Sequence One Extraordinary Characteristics leads the protagonist. Why do you give her the background of the Sefirah? One moment he was communicating with the gods, and the next moment he was being played around with by a quill pen? The original work is about increasing the combat power from low to high. You are a high level being tortured by a low level. For the sake of sensationalism, you are forced to sensationalize: ah, I know, I want to remind you, I'm sorry to interrupt, I forgot, ah, missed it, wuwuwu, I won't let you die, sacrifice, sleep, and then repeat it again, and again, I just feel sick when I see the captain.

I probably know who the protagonist is. The Key of Light has become a spirit, and it is still hung on the Source Castle. It has certain permissions from the Source Castle, so I can use some of the abilities of the Gou Sanjia path.

It's not the first time in a long time that a fan can save the regrets of the original work, but it doesn't make people happy. On the contrary, they also have a bad feeling for the characters that the original work thought were okay. I can only say that it is a kind of talent. I only saw the first chapter of v, and I'm not sure what's behind it. I thought about whether I should complain about it all night long because I only saw it for free, but I felt so uncomfortable that I didn't want to complain about it. As of v, the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is a tool for the author to express his preferences. Wherever there is a need to interact with the author's favorite characters, and wherever there is a need for a scene to redeem the author's regrets, the protagonist will appear there. As for the protagonist himself, he hinted that his background was awesome, and then he was imprisoned in the Nice Gate. At the same time, he believed in a witch that he had just met a while ago, but he was extremely wary of Amon's clone who was with him when he landed in time travel. Everyone knows Amon, but for the heroine, Amon and the witch who cannot be parasitic are still the same as Triss who was turned into a vessel for the gods to descend. Isn't the latter more dangerous? The original witch is an evil god, and Amon and the materials that cannot be parasitized are almost the same. Then there is the most outrageous plot, which best reflects the heroine's tool-man status. Triss also prostituted something from the heroine that can increase her spirituality. Not to mention the development of the plot and what the heroine left behind, weren't they all written by the author? From this point, you can clearly feel that the author's preferences and the protagonist are completely based on his preferences. Then there is Amon. To be honest, a novel, even a composition, needs to have a point of interest (theme), but I really can't determine what the point of interest of this article is. Let me just talk about myself, I personally came here for the male protagonist Amon. I was wondering how Amon could be the male protagonist, but I looked at the comment section and said that he was the male protagonist in the plot, so... That would be fine. As a result, Amon fell asleep due to the seal of Chanis Gate throughout the whole process, and he would make yin and yang comments from time to time. When the heroine woke up, the two had a good relationship and the heroine listened to Amon's opinions. This is where it gets even more outrageous. Chanis Gate is really outrageous. What method is used to provide sleep comfort to Heiye? It's okay to directly make it a sealed object. When you go to talk to people about cooperation, you just give them a day trip to Orange. Is this Heiye's brain underdevelopment or is the crazy trait of the Demon Wolf King inherited to Heiye. This point makes no sense at all. It was purely written to make people think. The early interactions with Amon in the dessert shop and some small details that seemed quite heartwarming were fine. But later on, the main plot was just a mess. Amon, the male protagonist of the plot, might as well be a filler. Yes, judging from the previous plot, Klein has more plot content than Amon. Amon is even better than this if he directly makes it into a charm and uses it to save people at the end of Yangen's plot. The early plot was so easy to write. Either it was a Nighthawk, or it was a wild Beyonder who acted as an informant for Klein. At the end, the heroine used her own reboot or Amon's time reversal to save her, but the result was that it was written as a sealed object. I really don't understand whether the investment in the night or the enmity, is Fregra resurrected in the night?

Time angel. Drawn by Chris/The cat that ate Chris.

To be honest, the author's writing has a very mysterious style and flavor! Like Squid's novel about Klein, the heroine has a cruel fate and struggle, and is a bit sadistic, but she does not give up hope. She has the beauty of humanity, companionship and friendship, and does not despair about life and destiny! On the contrary, the description of the Amons is quite interesting, a group of cruel and interesting fun-loving people! Amon does not lie to Amon, Amon does not cheat Amon, Amon is still Amon! Amon and Meng Quan, all eyes are filled with Amon!

It's tasteless, and it's a pity to discard it It's not sweet, it has no passion, it has no fan fiction, it should have the fun of changing the plot, or it has advantages like foresight (especially the part about getting along with the protagonist), and it doesn't have the fun of the normal novel type It's hard to tell what the author wants to write, it feels like he wants to imitate it. The original book of Best Friend, but the writing skills are limited, and it is far less graphic than the other party In short, I can't tell what story the author wants to tell. The protagonist seems to be following the plot and following Ke around, not knowing what to do It's not impossible to say that the main line (goal) is not clear. Either write about daily sweets, that is, the direction of a light novel, with a sweeter tone, whether it is a cp with Ke or Zhengyi/Puppet, and then save the regrets of the original book (another mention Although the captain is saved here, the writing is really bad and does not make people feel happy at all... It only hurts. It's hard to tell whether you want to make everyone who reads the book happy or want to kill people). Everyone is happy, but here there are restrictions on the protagonist, which makes people suffer and hate each other; or it is based on the feeling of "rebirth" and takes advantage of the plot to use pretentiousness as a highlight, such as giving Kwan two hands to show off to others, and at the same time, his combat power can kill indiscriminately (such as a fan) "The foreign god is actually myself", these are these two characteristics), and the senses are okay. As for this book, it does not achieve the goal of "just writing a protagonist based on the world view of my best friend", and it does not write any exciting points when it comes to playing a supporting role for Ke. In my personal evaluation, the author has more than enough ambition: he is not willing to write some exciting articles about killing people or sweet posts, but wants to tell the story of his own characters - but he is not strong enough: he does not have the ability to establish his image. Especially in the Western-style, gentlemanly setting of the original book of Best Friend, the emotions are restrained, and it is even more difficult to express the characters if they want to be polite (and if the expression skills are not good enough, they have to play this restrained image with Squid, which is very tiring to read - Squid at least has an obvious climax at the end of the volume before the end of Being a Pirate, which makes people feel this The excitement of the story has the sense of a grand finale. At the end of your story (Tinggen), I felt like "Oh, the protagonist is so excited and wants to fight, but why, I can't see why there is such a rush." Or in other words, writing a fanfic protagonist without plot memory is quite thankless in itself, because the reader thinks: Oh, the big boss is coming. Now, the Black Hand is that so-and-so, how should we deal with him. As a result, the protagonist is still cheated like in the original work, and his performance is not even as good as the original protagonist. Then the readers will feel uncomfortable - unless you just want to play with such a sense of powerlessness and focus on depression, the audience is not without it, but I can only say that it is different anyway, and I believe that most people who click in to read the fanfic are more inclined. I want you to solve some of the regrets in the original work, instead of adding another person to re-read the plot - does this still need to be written by a fan author? Wouldn't the writing level be higher if you just read the cuttlefish? My suggestion is that the author has some awareness of his own simple writing skills. If the writing is not good and cannot impress people, it is better to put it away. Take this book for example. According to the reading level, if the writing is smoother, it will be smoother, but if you want to tell your own main line (and it is still depressing), I can only comment that the level is not enough - a happy story can be read even if it is almost written. The most you can comment on is that this place is boring or too cliche. But for something that is more tragic and depressing, if it can't move people emotionally, it won't be interesting at all. It will only get more annoying and leave you. For a more leisurely person like me, I might have to come and watch it. (So ​​subjectively, I don't like "poorly written" tragic novels. As a certain crazy lich said, everyone is tired from living a day, so why bother to read a novel online to make yourself unhappy) How simple, before Human Squid wrote this thing, the Arcane Throne was a mainstream cool novel with a slap in the face upgrade method. Okay. In short, my first impression when I wanted to comment above was "It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away". Now I think it is very accurate. It has no characteristics, no story (the amount of information in a book is like the original book's extra chapter about an important supporting role), it can't make people happy, it can't move others, I am satisfied, I think this book may be less tearful and easily moved/best friends and fans have read less and there are few new ones. It may be more suitable for people who are new to it Don't go back and read the comments. I estimate that there are dozens of replies to scold me in the comment section of other books. After all, those who write rubbish are directly criticized, so if the author is anxious and wants to delete it, feel free to delete it. Anyway, I'm done complaining.