Harry Potter: A Parallel World

Is this the legendary power generation for love?

The plot is pretty good, but the language is too formal, not like dialogue, and there are too many long sentences that make it difficult to read. Come on, author

It's nice to read, but the sentences are a bit cumbersome.

I want to know who the heroine is dating

Author, if you write other fanfics, such as many two-dimensional fanfics, the results now should be better than those of Harry Potter fans. Not many people read Harry Potter😭 All of them are subscribed, come on🙂

Thank you to the author for your hard work. The plot seems to be creative so far, but sometimes the sentences are a bit strange, and sometimes a sentence is too long, making it a bit difficult to read. But it's really awesome for one person to write such a long book, come on!

HP fans report! I just want to urge you to update more I can't see enough. I can't see enough.

It's on the shelves, HP fans come to report 🤭🤭🤭

The novel setting opens up the magical world from another angle. Apart from the long sentences and the attributive (still the subject) that are always placed at the end, which is a bit difficult to read, it is really very attractive! Look slowly, come on!