Lord of the Mysteries: Yao Guang

The author made the protagonist's ability as a thief too weak. As a Sequence 5 dream thief, he was beaten into a dog by the audience's Sequence 8 psychiatrist. Even if the thief was weakened by Ah Meng, even if his original ability was not that of a Sequence 5, a Sequence 6 fire thief could be defeated by him. However, he was as embarrassed as a Sequence 9 using a sealed object. When talking about how much spirituality a Sequence 8 has the ability to do, he used the ability of a Sequence 6 judge several times to show off his face.

It is well written. The protagonist of this book is well integrated into the original plot, and it also changes the story to be different but also very interesting. The plot is also very reasonable. When I read this book, I even had some mysterious emotions, fear and struggle, but also humor and sadness. It's not as secretive as the original in some places, but that makes sense because there are very few books that can truly match the mystery of the original. I highly recommend reading the original version of Lord of Mysteries (written by Squid Who Loves Diving) before reading Lin Zixie's version of Lord of Mysteries.

So can you directly tell what the protagonist is? Get to know Esther, the goddess of the night, the daughter of Yuanta and the time traveler. Can you forcibly arrest Amon's clone to obtain the Thief Path ability, second only to Amon's Thief Path extraordinary characteristics? Have the ability to reverse destiny. The Key of Light turns into a human?

The first thing I read was a few excellent fan novels with loud names, but now that I'm reading this, I feel like it's too long-winded. Later, I went hunting for a few more fan fictions, and it turned out that there were still more low-quality than high-quality ones. I found that my requirements for fan fiction were too high. So overall, I rated it as "average." What are the strengths and weaknesses of this novel? The disadvantage is that what I said at the beginning was long-winded and not refreshing enough. The advantage is that the three views of the work are relatively positive, the three views of the characters are passable, and there is no vulgar plot that seeks for novelty. It is more comfortable to watch - the prerequisite is that you don't think that "Amon can have feelings" is a novelty. At the same time, I know this is a drawback for some people. The rest of the features either I don't have enough experience to see, or they are more "different from person to person", so it's not convenient to talk about them, so I won't talk about them.

The best I've ever seen, no less than the original, and the writing is pretty good.

The author's writing is very good. I only saw it recently. To be honest, the flow is a bit low and not worthy of the quality.

There is no cliched plot, it is not a cool novel, it has an official feel, in short it is very enjoyable to watch.

Really, it is one of the few fics that is close to the narrative style of Mystery itself. I didn't expect to see such a good fic in Mao. It's a pity that the flow and quality are not equal.

The plot design is interlocking and it is amazing. The foreshadowing is exquisitely laid, and when the truth is revealed, it will be nerve-wracking. The conflicts are cleverly designed and the drama is full of tension. The detailed description is textbook level, and all five senses are awakened. It has a strong emotional rendering power, and I couldn't help but burst into tears when I read the emotional part. The world view is grand and detailed, as if you are on the scene. The narrative rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, making people unable to put down the book. Taking cliché themes to a new level shows the author's profound skills. It is a rare masterpiece with a perfect balance between literariness and readability.

Halfway through, I started writing the prequel + the main story.