After I Transmigrated into a Book, I Was Forced to Become a Fake System

Just tie up the author, I'll be relieved if she's half as good as the heroine

I just discovered that the heroine's name "Jia Xitong" is the "fake system"! ! !

The first 500 chapters of this book are quite good. I am following it sincerely. After Chapter 500, the plot becomes a bit too much, and there are some inexplicable clowns on the emotional road (not even stumbling blocks, just pure water figures). In fact, I think the double male protagonist is a big failure, because the original novel Xiao Shang obviously diluted the love of the readers' grandfathers for the male protagonist. I would like to ask which reader's grandpa doesn't like a beautiful and powerful miser who is so miserable that no one loves him? The male protagonist has been raised to be fat and white, and he is busy fighting for fame and jealousy all day long, exuding the aura of a king. He can no longer live a good life and only needs to be king and dominate step by step. In contrast, the small businessman in the original novel is tortured to the point where he is completely human-like. Can the reader's grandfathers' hearts not go to their armpits? Anyway, I don't really want to watch it now that the heroine can't travel to another world. The extra story also features a heroine from a parallel world and a small businessman from the original novel. The emotional line is awkward, and it feels like there are too many male and female protagonists (let's just call it four), which dilutes the love of the readers' grandfathers for the male and female protagonists. In fact, whether you can persist in following a book with millions of words really depends on the charm of the protagonists. And the four main characters created in this book are very unfavorable~

Dad, I want to make you into a puppet and write crazy articles 😌

This book is really a primary school student's emotional line. It's a waste of time. It's good at the beginning, but there's really no growth at the end. The female protagonist is like a virgin, and she has to give medicine to the original male protagonist. What's the purpose? This emotional line is really sparse, and the literary love is really childish. I still hope that the male protagonist will have some growth in the back. There is no, the character is not clear, and he is just a tool for the plot. You can't read it at all.

I saw Hanfu on Taobao, and I feel that this outfit is in line with Shang's aesthetics

I really, really like this setting of lasting love. I can understand the motivations of the heroine and hero through their interactions and experiences and gain a better understanding of the protagonist's character. The protagonists all come alive. Love at first sight is all about lust in my eyes. At the beginning, the male protagonist treats the female protagonist like a good friend and regards the female protagonist as his salvation. Later, when the male protagonist slowly discovers his feelings for the female protagonist, it is so cute. The male protagonist likes the female protagonist more because she is the female protagonist than because the female protagonist is good-looking (although the female protagonist is also very good-looking). Although the male protagonist is a bit yandere, he respects the female protagonist very much and is not the kind of morbid "you can only see me" kind of person. He will not hold the heroine to his own standards. I love this kind of male protagonist so much. I don't feel the love between the heroine and the hero yet (I haven't finished watching it yet). What's more, she likes the male protagonist's face and "the male protagonist of the novel". It's more like chasing stars and liking paper figures. But I really like the process of the male and female protagonists slowly establishing their relationship. I hope there won't be a bunch of bloody misunderstandings after the relationship is confirmed. I don't like to have a lot of misunderstandings after the relationship is established. If you don't trust the other party, it's better to break up. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you~

How can I put it this way? It's just a purely enjoyable article. If you like it, it's definitely enjoyable to read. If you think it's unrealistic, it's just annoying. I won't comment on this. The whole story is very smooth. The heroine is a complete koi. All powerful people like her or can be manipulated by her. Every good thing can be done anyway, but I personally feel... It is still too smooth... It feels really good when I feel good, but it feels really... The more I read, the more unrealistic and a bit uncomfortable. I think it is really hard to endure the hardship. It's quite important, except for the last and early stages, there are really no ups and downs, and to be honest, the final calamity is a bit disappointing. It doesn't reflect the personality charm of the male protagonist. He seems to have done nothing, just waiting, waiting for the lotus. In the end, the dragon or the devil did not come into play, and the heroine and the small businessman died together. In addition, the heroine felt that she was sometimes too smart and sometimes a little silly, and there was still a bit of ink in the final ending. What do you say about Xiao Shang? I feel like I have endured too much malice. It is understandable that the author prefers the male protagonist, but in the end I am really a little bit upset. If the female protagonist is the Holy Mother, then it will always be the Holy Mother. The ending makes the two male protagonists merge into one. If not, the Holy Mother's kindness to Xiao Shang in the early stage would always feel more cruel. She gave him hope but ultimately destroyed him because he gave too little, which led to the darkness. Forgive me for feeling that the female protagonist The atonement seems too shabby, not to mention that she paid for it with her own life. From an objective point of view, the heroine has always been happy with the hero, and it is worth it even if she dies. However, Xiao Shang feels that it is entirely because the heroine is a good person and he has an obsession. He is selfish and destroys everyone in another world without the heroine. He is still a god. The little happiness the heroine gives him makes him feel even more uncomfortable. It's better to have experienced it than not to have experienced it. I feel that this view is too nonsense and ordinary people cannot accept it. It's like pruning a small tree and pruning its leaves. After a few days of pruning, it becomes loose. After a while, it will grow crooked and it will be uprooted. There is no difference. Some people must say that you can write your own, and you come to criticize other authors. I think that when you write a work, readers must figure out the plot. Books such as "A Dream of Red Mansions" will be repeatedly scrutinized by the world. I believe that an author who can write such a male and female protagonist will not be too pretentious. Everyone's experience of reading the novel is different. I'm just putting forward my thoughts. I think the ending is a little rushed. As for the other three deans, I felt that there was a lot of momentum in the early stage. Later, at the end, as the male protagonist quickly became awesome, these people just ran away with the crowd. I felt that their characters were in vain. When Tiangong fought against the demons, they directly moved out Karl, the tallest man in the college. The three of them were so tossing that they felt isolated from the world. There are also endings. There are so many supporting characters in the early stage, and I feel that everyone is important, but the final ending does not reflect the role of those people at all. To be honest, it is a bit disappointing, and the personality charm of the male protagonist and female protagonist is not displayed. What theme do you want to sublimate in the end? Are the male and female protagonists stronger than each other? The heroine didn't recognize the hero, and her memory was tampered with, so in the end they couldn't bear to part with each other and it became modern. You talk about pity for life? The biggest villain, Xiao Shang, has not been redeemed. The solution is destruction. The male protagonist is a bit weak in resurrecting people. In the final analysis, he wants to resurrect the female protagonist. How much mercy can he have in the end? And his rating should be a clue throughout the whole story. Then this pit was abandoned directly? You said it was the relationship between faith and gods. I felt that there was too little foreshadowing, sometimes it was about the Talisman God, sometimes about the Dragon God, and I also forgot about the sharks and the academy. In short, the author just wants to describe a utopia. I feel that the writing is very good, and the writing style is also very good. Otherwise, I would not be able to read every chapter without stopping. However, I think it can be more exciting. There will definitely be trade-offs in life, and you will cherish what you have when you have to lose. The male and female protagonists have everything. One person has fallen, and one person has not died. There is no pity, it is all beautiful. The demise of the small business is the disappearance of the last scourge. In the end, you can still wear ancient and modern clothes casually. I really feel that having everything is not very exciting. And it's getting more and more tiring to watch like this. There are no twists and turns. The characters and novel settings are really attractive. The original basis can really be better. If anyone thinks this is a cool article, I don't want to read it, and I don't want to read anything else. I still express the above point of view, and I don't agree with it. You are right, you are the most successful, you are the best protector, and the patron saint of male and female protagonists. But! That's what I think, that's it. If I feel that I don't understand or am not satisfied with the novel, I should point it out. I think readers' opinions are very valuable. Nothing is perfect, but the author can make progress based on this improvement. Reading without thinking is really better than reading with thinking. I'm happy with it! Internet trolls who have the ability will bite me to death (😛)

I can't stand Chapter 39 anymore. The heroine looked very affectionate in the past, but she is actually just as ruthless inside. In order to straighten the hero out, she asked him to make friends. The heroine saw her friend being tortured and skinny, but she didn't feel any fluctuation in her heart. , Without giving any attention at all, it was very bland. When the male protagonist refused the "friend"'s request for help for the second time, he even instigated him to kill someone. Finally, when the "friend" was at his most desperate, she asked him to be loyal and never betray, but the female protagonist actually still complained about it? ? ? It feels like someone is laughing when someone is about to die :)