Mystery Revival: Saving the Heavens from Collapse

That's pretty good. Since we're using the Great Sage template, the Crimson-Eyed Ghost corresponds to the Fiery Eyes and Golden Mirror. We could add a puzzle ghost to the Crimson-Eyed Ghost, such as a ghost that can see through the killing patterns of vengeful spirits or a ghost that can directly see the source of the ghost's existence, able to directly see the location of the source ghost.

The author's synopsis reminds me of the most powerful open scheme of our time, the Nine-Turned Intestine, a one-for-three exchange at the ultimate level.

No matter how well it's written, I won't read it anymore. Seriously, with so many captains dying in Dajing, they're still thinking about nails to their coffins. The mysterious resurrection of the old Buddha... Even if Liu San is incredibly stubborn and unwilling to die, he wouldn't be afraid to fight abroad. When the country is in trouble, they only think of their own people. It's disgusting.

No matter the time, Sun Wukong's most distinctive features are his body as hard as iron, his fiery eyes, his immortality, his seventy-two transformations, his ability to travel 108,000 li in a single somersault, and his wielding of the Ruyi Jingu Bang. The indestructible, incredibly strong physical body cannot be dismembered or suppressed to death.

The plot is so ridiculous, it's no wonder the book isn't popular. The first ghost is the most important element of the book; if it's well-written, it'll attract readers; if it's poorly written, it'll definitely lose readers. But how did you even come up with the idea of ​​a "touch and you die" rule before writing the book? 😅 It only dies when it touches a person or a person touches it.

So why write about watching foreign organizations lure the enemy into the country? It's fine not to help, since there's a grudge, but since they knew about the other side's plan, couldn't they at least give them a heads-up? Even though Liu San and He Yin'er were about to fight in the original story, they still put aside their differences and formed a united front in the face of foreign invasion.

The first major flaw is that things like ghost heads and human skin paper, which are very rare in the original work, become commonplace in this book. Every ghost has its own consciousness, and they are all depicted as anthropomorphic. The second major flaw is the protagonist's handling of situations.

What rubbish! Headquarters has never given up on protecting ordinary people. This is just a baseless accusation with no logic whatsoever.

The information in the first chapter is too cluttered, and the protagonist's reaction is incredibly slow. He knows it's Dahong City but doesn't realize it's a mysterious resurgence. I'm not trying to argue, but at the beginning of the first chapter, the protagonist already knows he's transmigrated and has received memories, knowing he's in Dahong City.

Highly poisonous I have a strong aversion to headquarters, especially to those politicians, regarding the mysterious resurgence. Anyone who's read the original novel knows what a mess the headquarters is in. When Yang Jian died, instead of seeking revenge, there was still Old Qin. Yang Jian had at least resolved the S matter. Kill them here. They're already seeking revenge on a worthless headquarters?