The Yang Family Cultivates Immortality

As long as you sign a contract, it will not be updated immediately. The current backend never cares about writing books, only charges.

It's true that there are a few updates, so the quality must be guaranteed.

The writing is quite good, but the plot is a bit bland, why didn't you write it again?

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and it's okay. Come on, author.

It's all encouraging. I don't want to say too bad things. First of all, I'd better think about the issue of naming various things. I really can't open a post and ask book friends for help. Now, how can there be a god named Xiaohei named after a spiritual beast with hair? 😅 The overall story is so bland. I haven't seen the growth of the protagonist. I always feel that the protagonist is weak but has amazing talent. 🧐 If I don't talk about other things, I only see that the protagonist is going to become a disciple. Come on, author. (*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑

How should I put it, everything else is fine, but the story after foundation building is a bit awkward! Also, the name is a bit useless. The exercises and instruments are all eye-catching. If you really don't know how to get them, just copy them elsewhere...

I don't dare to look at this amount of updates, there's no guarantee

I feel pretty good at the moment. I'm slowly developing from a weak point.