Reborn in The King's Avatar

Are you writing a novel? Are you obscene?

It's so funny. Do you want me to pay for my life if I laugh to death? ●^●Update quickly!

The writing before Chapter 19 was okay, but Chapter 20 is really hard to describe. The protagonist turned into a monkey when he met Su Mucheng. The most important thing is that Su Mucheng used Su Mucheng as a bet, and Su Muchiu's character completely collapsed. He can't write emotional scenes. Look at Chong Daddy, and he won't write it.

It's okay, but don't write so much irrelevant content. Why write so many songs? It was so embarrassing

After reading ten chapters, I realized that I didn't even know what profession the protagonist used! !

You really nb only has a few chapters and it's already on the shelves

I want to know who the heroine is? Or is there no heroine?

Very poisonous. He teased Su Mucheng just a few chapters into the game. He was only a minor at that time. Even if he was not a minor, he won a bet with his brother and kissed Su Mucheng. This kind of thing, no matter what the reason is, he would not agree to it. Moreover, the protagonist's background is not ordinary. How can such a tutor do such a thing? His character is just a piece of cake.

I can't stand the writing style of a junior high school student anymore. Goodbye.

The author should decide on the heroine first.