Reborn in The King's Avatar

Is this writing a novel? Or is this just wishful thinking?

This is hilarious! I'm dying of laughter! ●^● Update soon!

The first 19 chapters were alright, but the 20th chapter was truly indescribable. The protagonist becomes a monkey the moment Su Mucheng appears. Most importantly, Su Muqiu uses Su Mucheng as a wager, completely ruining Su Muqiu's character. He can't write romance; just look at the author, "Insect Father," and he'll stop writing it altogether.

It's alright, but don't write so much irrelevant content. Why write so many songs? It's so awkward.

After reading ten chapters, I realized I still don't know what profession the main character uses!

You're amazing! It's already on sale after only a few chapters.

This is utterly toxic. The protagonist starts flirting with Su Mucheng in just a few chapters. How old was he then? A minor! Even if he wasn't, betting with someone's older brother to kiss Su Mucheng after winning is something no older brother would agree to, regardless of the reason. Besides, the protagonist has an unusual background; how could someone with such upbringing do something like this? The character is a complete mess.

I want to know who the female lead is? Or is there no female lead at all?

This is written by a middle school student; I can't read it anymore. Goodbye.

The author should decide on the female lead first.