Gou Zai Shen Seeks Immortality

Come on, author, the writing is so beautiful. I'm waiting for the update.

After reading the novel for so long, this is the first time I saw the monks at the bottom having nothing to eat and fearing to starve to death. I was really convinced. They were about to starve to death and they still said they had no spiritual rice to eat. Do you want to say that there are no mortals in the whole world? How do they survive? You dare not enter the deep mountains, and there are no prey outside? Is there something strange about every river or lake? Are you going to starve to death, or is someone out there trying to catch you? You have to dig a hole to escape.

. . . . It starts to feel disgusting in the middle. One person said: 1, I wrote this kind of Gou Daoliu, with two women, and then I couldn't understand the writing. It's not that women can't do it. Don't you feel stupid if you read this yourself? If you don't have enough writing power to write about women, then don't write about it.

It's nice to read and well written. Some people don't want to play with others. It's unforgettable to stay in the mysterious world. Keep up the good work, author!

Is this called mortal flow? Mortals have a pretty big world view. And there's also a little bit of mortal drama. The city where you, a cultivator of immortality, lives is described as a slum. There was also the smell of urine and even feces on the road. Is this a cultivator or a beggar's den?

It was really boring in the later stage. It was a bit too much to learn from the mysterious recovery. Cultivation of Immortality had no flavor of cultivating immortals. It turned into climbing a weird technology tree, which was boring and abandoned.

If someone asks you to make an elixir, just make it. If someone asks you to prove that you are not Jia Ren, just prove it. What a fool. If someone wants you to prove that your parents have passed away, do you have to take her to dig their parents' tombs?

The second novel I subscribed to, it is really written with feeling.

After 150, I basically can't stand it. If you don't know how to write a female supporting role, don't write it. I wrote a lot of poison. Just the king's smoke. Is it poisonous or not? Is it a foundation building? Is it qualified to play in Shengui? Jin Dan was killed by Weiyi in seconds.

To be honest, I really hate the useless protagonist. He trembles with fear at the slightest movement. He is bullied by monks of the same level and those lower than the protagonist and dare not say a word. He makes money and does not engage in powerful spells to practice. He only wants to acquire unattractive foreign objects. It is still a very low-level kind. If high-end goods can save his life, it would be okay. To describe the protagonist in one sentence, he has a net worth of more than ten million and a useless person.

It was boring in the later stages, I barely managed to read Chapter 668

The first part is good, but the middle and later parts are not good. It's too boring. I keep studying various things. The key is that there is no logic and I feel very self-motivated.

The early stage was good, the creativity was good, but Xuan Shui Sect started to collapse, and later it was like shit. One golden elixir can control 5 flying yakshas. If you practice any magic weapon, you can evolve into an immortal weapon on your own. It doesn't matter whether it is made of materials. It seems that as long as you burn it with fire and spiritual energy, a piece of shit can evolve into a diamond. Those who fight are all at least Nascent Soul, and enemies with lower levels will not be accompanied. You can practice the Yuan Shen Talisman Bag as you like.

It's so disgusting. How could you write such a disgusting plot? A man drinks the leftover fish soup that the protagonist ate (the fish in the fish soup has the function of improving the talents of the heirs), and gives birth to a son with a peerless physique with Senior Sister Tank, and then looks down on the protagonist.

After reading the first chapter, the author thought that a carp that is more than three feet long is equivalent to more than one meter in length and weighs almost six kilograms. I am afraid it is not a stripfish...

After reading Chapter 100, I really can't stand it any longer. In order to survive, I found that the spirit stone veins should not be prepared, so I moved the daily necessities there to live there and slowly mined them, silently making a fortune. In the end, I kept forcibly creating conflicts and forcing the protagonist. It was not enjoyable enough to watch, especially the two brothers in the front. Good guys, I just turned around after eating and guessed it was Jia Ren. I stopped acting and left.

I have always emphasized not to do calamity cultivation, but my true form showed during the period of Xuan Shui Sect. The Great Love Immortal with a clear goal is much stronger than this.

The previous practice of refining the void was to use the power of the void to transform the spirit into the void, thereby stepping into the void and returning the spirit to the world. I don't know when to start cultivating the immortal novel, but it also requires a lot of world spiritual energy. A fifth-level spiritual vein is needed to refine the void. Can the world of immortality support so many people? Even after ascending, there is no spiritual energy to regurgitate back to the world. This world has long entered the Age of Ending Dharma. There is no closed loop at all.

The author should change the title of the book and remove the word "gou". He always starts to think of a way out when he is about to die. He knows the risks but also thinks about the risks and no benefits, so he just wants to do it. I don't understand the connection between your content and the title of the book.

Wang Fugui just invested in you, why are you so impressed with yourself? Is he still very kind to you? Hahahahaha, laugh to death

After reading Chapter 200, since fish and insects can return to their ancestors with a few pills to build a foundation, why don't they study a person's pills to return to their ancestors? It feels good to break the limit, and even cultivate a chicken-feather fairy, and directly take medicine to return to their ancestors and become immortal.

A world of cultivators that bullies men, dominates women, and sells one's body and flesh. The writing is just like the ordinary world. It is really unimaginative. There is no basic social logic. The power of cultivators is attributed to individuals. One person is comparable to a force. Please don't bring in the concepts of ordinary people, such as the person named Yang at the beginning. It's very interesting that the Taoist companion who was injured would be threatened by someone. If I were that woman, I would directly help my Taoist companion to escape. Since there is no hope of becoming a Taoist, I just want to help Yang. I just want to help him. What's the point? There are also female monks who sell themselves. Unless they specialize in Hehuan Kung Fu or they like it themselves. Otherwise, the profit for a monk who sells his body for a few spiritual stones is too little. Even if he goes to mortal time to kill people and train his soul to sell it, it is understandable that he sells his body. I really can't understand that you are an immortal cultivator, not a brothel sister, and the spiritual farmer system is also a speechless immortal cultivating magic array. Anyone with some intelligence will try his best. Realizing the magic formation and allowing monks to farm like farmers is just an idiot. Especially these immortal cultivators actually turned into farmers. There is really no need to look at this kind of immortal literature. With extraordinary power, it is impossible for such a person to be the head of a chicken rather than the tail of a phoenix. It is impossible for the bottom of the cultivators to have such a society.

Don't watch, just watch the free part. The latter part is off topic, a batch of chili peppers

I approve of your writing style, but I don't know how to write about women. I'd better not get involved in the future. The male protagonist is like a 🐢. After his senior sister died, he lost his face after being blackened. He joined his sect and killed his entire sect. As a result, he didn't even dare to have revenge. There are too many poisonous points. Sometimes Gou Daoliu can't just be stubborn from beginning to end.

During the foundation building period, he contracted digging bugs, itchy bugs, puppet bugs, blood-sucking bugs, transformed bugs, etc., And contracted golden elixir turtles, golden elixir fish, unicorns, toast silkworms, etc. Others thought that he was a Nascent Soul with nothing wrong with him, his combat power was greatly reduced, and his infinite soul 😅

This is a rare good book, good luck to the author!

This is called Gou. You tell others to mine the veins of spiritual stone. How careful and trustful do you have to be? I said before that I should be careful at all times, but now I have to leave my life and property to others.

The protagonist doesn't sell bait and no one uses nets to catch fish. The protagonist just starts selling bait and others immediately use nets? No logic at all

The novel is finished. Personally, I feel that Dahuangfang City is generally pretty good in the early stages. Gou Daoliu is popular recently, but the protagonist often does so unreasonably. When the protagonist discovers a medium-grade spiritual stone mine, he just asks his friends to mine it. The protagonist's financial resources and trump cards at the time are enough to arrange a formation and make a fortune quietly with his friends. It gives people the impression that they are just trying to survive, cherishing their own lives for big things, and forgetting their lives for small gains. I didn't like the weird plot of Dahuangfang City and skipped it. There is a good plot when the protagonist enters the Lingbao sect, but overall it is still unsatisfactory. Ascending to the Immortal Realm is also…

I didn't write without taking notes. After reading 400 chapters, I borrowed money from the sect and borrowed 9 out of 13 debts, which I still haven't repaid for hundreds of years. I also kept laying the groundwork for spiritual treasures and magic weapons. The magic treasures need to be fermented for a long time before using demon souls to become spiritual treasures. I also wrote dozens of articles about hunting monsters. In the end, I stopped writing about demon soul refining treasures and changed it to exploring secret realms, completing tasks to exchange for spiritual materials, and owing a lot of debt to practice spiritual treasures. The previous hundreds of articles were all in vain.