Mystery: the Arrival of the New Black Emperor

The writing is too childish, even if it is to show the protagonist's kind character, it is not written like this. Isn't the original Klein a kind person? He also does good things, but never comes off as disgusting. There are also those few court cases that are so outrageous and ridiculous. Do you really think that medieval lawyers did not understand common sense and defense? The lawyer's opponent was designed to repeat the same two sentences over and over again, and the protagonist drew applause for whatever he said casually, which was extremely embarrassing to watch. The writing style is also very average, and the idioms come out of the mouth in the dialogue.

First of all, I have a tolerant attitude towards this book, because I can fully accept the poisonous points complained by book friends, but I am extremely biased in the emotional development of the book. I have read 613 chapters so far to take stock of the reappearance after the last chapter of 589 (the complaints about the previous chapter are in the previous post). I like to watch the Titanic series (here refers to the separation of life and death) Affectionate Confession) You can check it out🤣) Chapter 590: The specific operation is not limited to resurrection, my love. It is just a metaphor. A concrete abstract concept. Hobert and Audrey fell into the conspiracy of a certain child and wanted Hobert to hand over the original juice. After the two thought they were going to send it, there was an affectionate confession. And then someone jumped in even though they knew it was a conspiracy? 🤔 This paragraph can be understood as a peerless genius who will become an emperor without dying. During the trip down the mountain, a confidante who just confided in you is about to send her a letter and then resolutely give up her cultivation and abandon the sect to save her life. You even know that you may not be able to save her. 🤣 Your unnatural thoughts have become the same as those of the wife of a certain god king next door. What's the difference between abandoning everything and reincarnating her? Chapter 609: First of all, in the original work, Xianyu and Audrey are good friends. It was even Audrey's intervention that made Xianyu a member of the Tarot Club. However, because of some people's unnatural manipulations, the two of them even became inseparable. 😋 The Tarot Club instantly turned into a Shura field? Is this a palace fight drama? 🤔 There is no underlying logic at all. Collecting a harem for the sake of collecting a harem is purely offensive. If you like female competition so much, I suggest you go to the next door Zhen Huan Biography🤣🤣🤣 Chapter 611: I don't want to reveal my identity to Xiao Ke. Dare to talk about unity with Audrey? 🤔 (Audrey here is still a Sequence 7) Although there are hints from Xiaoke's heart, I don't know if the old Yinbi of the Alchemy Society in my heart will cause trouble. Anyone with a bit of intelligence knows what unity means. He is a person with a fully developed brain. Everyone knows that you want to found a country. If this operation is known to some high-ranking royal families in various countries, they will all understand that it represents some promotion rituals. Maybe some old Yinbi will guess that Hobert is the founder and go directly along the network cable. You won't send it? 🤣Can I understand this as some people's damn desire to conquer and want to show their charm and strength in front of the female they like?

This book is written by a fan and feels like a companion piece to the original work Advantages: The original main line is very powerful, and the interaction with the plot and tasks of the original work is very natural. It doesn't have the common shortcomings of cheaply copying the main plot of the original work, nor does it overly deviate from the original plot and pretend to be a dog-eat-dog, which is very rare. The characters are vivid and lovable. Not only is the protagonist likable, but the original social relationships that match the protagonist and the supporting roles are also very well created, with flesh and blood, and they are no longer just plot tools. Many original/secondary characters left a very deep impression on me. The setting of Goldfinger's source material "State of Disorder" is very interesting. The author has created a very attractive Goldfinger gameplay based on the style of the original work. The rhythm of the story is well grasped. In the rare Sequence 9, I started to act honestly as a mysterious fan who was promoted. Thanks to the excellent original main and branch plots, as well as the natural and interesting original plot interactions, the reading experience is perfectly grasped throughout, and it is quite enjoyable. Disadvantages: The protagonist's name lowers the reputation of the entire old club.

The author's protagonist's path to godhood evolves from the lawyer-the Black Emperor to the self-created clown-the Virgin Mary, which is really awesome 😎. It is reflected in debt collection, acceptance of commissions, and transactions. The author also often comments on self-pleasure. Interested friends can try out his poisonous nature. I can't read it anymore because of the limited exemption.

I spent a lot of time reading this book slowly, and I had mixed feelings watching Hobert grow from a small lawyer to a real founder. I really like Lord of Mysteries, and I'm glad that there are many authors willing to write mysterious fanfics. But unfortunately, not many can write brilliantly. The writing is smooth, the setting is rigorous, the plot is not boring, and it can write the flavor of a mysterious world without being too dramatic. Currently, I only see Paradox, The Reader, and this Black Emperor. Before it was put on the shelf, I saw many comments criticizing this book, which I can understand. The author did not grasp the rhythm of Sequence 9 and Sequence 8 well. Staying in the low sequence for too long can easily make people feel that the protagonist has no strength and is wandering around outside, which is very unstable. The author's honorific name for the founder is indeed not very stylish. Fortunately, this honorary name does not appear many times in the future. My suggestion is that the author writes the honorary name and reads it himself. See if there is a sense of rhythm; some of the protagonist's actions in low sequences are not very shrewd. Regarding this, my idea is that Hobert was indeed not a mature black emperor at the time, but more like a chivalrous man who valued justice over profit in his interactions with others. Later, after becoming a baron, he gradually started to use the tactics of power and became more and more proficient. I can't tell which Hobert is better, I can only say that the latter one is more like the Black Emperor. After it was put on the shelves, it can be seen that the author is constantly improving, becoming more proficient in controlling the rhythm, knowing when to advance, when to hold a Tarot session, and how to show off in a Tarot session. In terms of plot, I rarely acted with Klein, and only acted together when making up for a few regrets. I really blazed a unique path of the Black Emperor (but it's a pity that I didn't see the Hall of Honesty) I hope the author can write better in the next book!

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In fact, it doesn't matter if it's the Virgin, most people always yearn for beauty, but the protagonist's performance seriously goes against the fairness and justice in my heart. Allowing others to observe when the protagonist is trading occult knowledge is simply disrespectful to the buyer. The buyer pays to listen, but two people who have never met several times do not have to pay to listen. The part where the protagonist was collecting debts made me even more angry. The two gamblers were cheated of their money and the protagonist complained about it. In the end, the protagonist even licked his face and returned half of the money. The plot in the rural area is even more poisonous. How come the woman hid it from the man for so many years and wasted so much of other people's youth? It was a formal procedure for the man to propose marriage, but the woman's parents also concealed this in order to find a successor. The man was a clown🤡taken advantage of, but in the end, he sympathized with the woman because she was not as powerful as the man? Moreover, the man wanted to give the woman an industry out of guilt. This was made clear to the protagonist at the beginning of the commission. As a result, the protagonist acted as the woman's lobbyist even though he knew that the man was not at fault. I just want to ask the protagonist about your professional ethics? Are you worthy of your identity as a lawyer?

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Holy Mother, going to Tingen to save Dunn really disgusted me. I am a novice and risked my life to save a stranger, but I almost died in Tingen.

After reading seventy or eighty chapters, this book is full of major poisonous points and small poisonous points. It can be seen that the author really can't control the mysterious text. Just to give a few simple examples: 1. The author thinks that the original = the beginning 2. The protagonist does not mind others listening when he trades information. Doesn't the author even know how to communicate alone? The spectators did not pay. This poisonous spot appeared twice. One was a trade to kill his former self, and the other was the Hanged Man's purchase of elf intelligence. 3. The protagonist reminds Old Neil that things are too deliberate. Should he just remind him directly? You can just give a hint in the fake diary. 4. The protagonist is too kind, the Holy Mother (because she does not harm the interests of others, she is not a bitch, but the Holy Mother is not lovable either). For example, after working hard for a long time, you still get less money. 5. The performance in Sequence Nine is too slow. You take on all kinds of things. Are you playing a lawyer or a detective? Are each of the cases annoying? Do you think I like watching you play the role of a detective? One sequence nine dragged on for a hundred chapters and it was still a waste of time.

This introduction was written, and I knew before I even read it that unless the author got the outline of Mystery 2, the Djinn and the Uncertain Mist would definitely be slapped in the face And saving Roselle, let's not talk about saving a ghost in the same way. It's not difficult at all if you really want to save Roselle. The problem of Roselle cannot be solved by the true god. The source of matter can solve it casually. Once the old contamination on his body is gone, whether it is the Kingdom of Time that twists and puts the Knowledge Emperor back on him one after another, or the Source Castle fools history and directly wipes out the history of Roselle's promotion to the Black Emperor, or even the Key of Light's old day level is restarted, allowing him to continue to fall in love and kill with the Steam Queen, it is all without suspense, and there is no need to write it in the introduction.

The introduction is poorly written, and those with high sequence in the same path are all enemies, so don't think about not hurting Roselle.

The protagonist should be a fool, not a black emperor. He has a halo of wisdom throughout the whole process. The original character's IQ will automatically drop when he encounters him.

Put the long review written in the book list into the book review area. The overall plot and rhythm are okay, the middle sequence is well written, and I have the desire to watch it. The politics and the game between gods in the later period are also excellent. However, the author is not very good at foreshadowing, which often leads to deus ex machina or very abrupt plots, and other shortcomings are also very obvious. 1. The emotional drama is terrible - Forsi and Fors were already quite stiff, and Audrey almost made me give up the book. I have never read such a terrible emotional drama. 2. The first one hundred chapters are quite awkward - the male protagonist does not care much about profit-seeking in the early stage, he treats others according to his own standards, and imparts some knowledge for free in tarot meetings and offline. This is understandable, but this type of protagonist is relatively rare at the beginning. But when everyone is Sequence 9, the male protagonist directly tells Xianyu that the full moon curse she received is a cry for help. Isn't this too outrageous? Has the author considered any factors and influences other than the incident itself? 3. The characters in the original work have been reshaped - the moon has always been as impulsive and irritable as a curly-haired baboon, and does not allow anyone to speak ill of the vampires and Lilith. The hermit was also startled. He had no thoughts and calculations of his own. He was not the thoughtful pirate general in the original work at all. All plots involving the Tarot Society are the protagonist's personal show, and the most critical Fool seems to be invisible. Everyone is there to set off the protagonist and use the information gap to make money. If you look at the protagonist alone, this book is okay as a whole, but don't expect the original characters to be as brilliant. The author's own characters are all more fleshed-out than the original characters. 4. The ending is too fast and gradually outrageous - the protagonist is basically invincible after 1+1+1, and then the author starts to push the outline as if there is nothing to write. In the final battle, I was dumbfounded that Amon could reversely replace the high-dimensional Overlooker through the Outer God's Beloved and become an Outer God. The entire ending is pretty good for the initial setting and description. Besides, the extras are pretty good! The research room before the Mysterious Three Kingdoms and the First Age, as well as the Extraordinary Games, impressed me deeply. They were much better than the ending level. Overall: Liangcao-, you can read as appropriate.

The main character's name is so low, and all the reviews are saying it, but they won't change it. The first time he showed off his holy uniform, he just said he hadn't looked at the human world for a long time, and immediately asked if he knew his father. It really made me laugh. I can only say that the author doesn't know what being cool is.

That is, the protagonists are all stingy and fussy about the supporting actors like Alger, and they don't give away anything for free. The three women Xio, Audrey and Forsi are always extremely generous, always giving free information or help. Obvious treatment of men and women. If possible, I really hope that the protagonist can treat them equally, either not to be too stingy with men like Alger and Little Sun, or not to be so generous to Xio and the others Otherwise, it will be really disconnected, and there will be a feeling that the protagonist sacrifices his own interests to please the beauty.

Let's talk about what I think is a bit poisonous. The protagonist plays a lawyer but does not behave like a lawyer at all. The first case: the scammer's fraud case. The protagonist personally investigated and went to the East District to ask gangsters to help find the person. In the process, he used methods such as torture and murder to find the address of one of the fraudsters, and then broke into the home and searched for the jewelry in the safe. And sold through its own channels. Then return the recovered stolen money to the client. This is the "lawyer" played by the protagonist The second case: divorce proceedings The protagonist found the client and asked about the situation. He felt that his wife did not love him, so he wanted a divorce. Then he went to talk to the client's wife who returned to her natal family and learned that the woman had left a son before marriage. The marriage situation of the two people is special, so the protagonist helps them resolve their misunderstanding and divorce peacefully. The protagonist is almost catching up with Super Wings The third case: giant dog disturbing people involves extraordinary people, so the protagonist comes to investigate twice, finally finds the cause, and solves the incident with the officials. Then the money is recovered from the estate and the plaintiff is compensated for the loss. There is nothing a lawyer should do. And it's nearly eighty chapters now, and it's still sequence nine

A holy mother still wants to be the emperor 😅

Photographed at Comic Con

I have now read 40 chapters, which are full of little poisonous points. Taking them out alone is nothing, but together they are almost poisoned to death, so I would like to ask first whether the back of this book is really as good as the book review section says.

Don't blame the emperor, the author should write his own way to the Holy Mother 😅 He is still a novice running to save people, which makes people speechless. If he is not the protagonist, he can only survive two chapters. There are various Holy Mother operations in the front, like being a lawyer and doing detective work. Why are there so many good reviews? Is it poisonous to trick people into it?

I think this is good, it seems to be in line with Audrey, at least it is the Audrey Hall in my heart

The writing is still okay, there are no obvious flaws, and it has some exciting climaxes. I don't know where the so many scoldings come from.

A bit rubbish, not as good a reader as The Good Witch. It also takes too much of the supporting role of the original work.

Emmmm, the Iron Throne makes me unable to complain, this thing's B level is a bit low

Tell a cold joke: Klein said that he is a proletarian 🙂

One of the mysterious books in the series, worth reading.

I feel like I've taken too much of Ke's role, and some things are no longer reasonable.

Through the window, I saw a mosaic-clad naked man standing on the opposite balcony. He had one hand on his hips and a mobile phone in the other. He was very relaxed and looking at something. He was chanting loudly: "The needle is good, the needle is good, this novel is good." I curiously stuck my head out and shouted, "Eggplant, what are you looking at?" Hum, hum, hum, hum, goose, goose, goose, I laughed out loud like a pig. When talking about this incident afterwards, the embarrassed eggplant would always say, "The Mysterious New Black Emperor Arrives" is a good novel, and it is more interesting when read naked.

At first it looked like a story without a female protagonist, but I started to get bored of it halfway through. The description and perception of the emotional line are really average. I suggest you write less.