Lord of the Mysteries: A Born Saint of Destiny

The writing is messy and foggy. Why is there an extra inexplicable organization or several sequence one and sequence two? Is there a wild sequence 12 in this path? ? It was restarted several times inexplicably at the beginning. Who restarted it? ? Then the protagonist is pushed around, but we can understand that after all, a person who knows nothing travels here. But why he keeps walking in circles and many places are anticlimactic. A certain character enters the scene wonderfully and reaches the climax of the plot. Then it ends immediately and ends abruptly. It is too childish. Or the author wants to express that "fate is an absurd comedy." I feel like I am writing about what I dreamed of. Does the author have an outline? The idea is very good and the concept is very good. My personal suggestion is to first sort out the ideas and organize the outline. Think about how to explain this wonderful organization. Think about what the protagonist is going to do. If possible, don't have everything start and end. The plot should not start too high and start too low. I hope this book will do the same.

The rules of the mysterious survival manual at the beginning are in contrast, and combined with the various yin and yang errors in the fate of the protagonist, it is very interesting, but it is a bit aesthetically tired to keep writing like this. The character of the protagonist who reaches the sea has some changes. I feel that the IQ has improved, and it is not completely passive. The arrangement of the plot has certain surprises. Not everyone likes the witch plot, but overall it is well written and interesting, and I have the desire to continue reading. This book is one of the few books among mystery fans that can be read and worth pursuing.

Let me talk about the plot speculation, my personal guesses about some of the foreshadowing of this book, and share my personal thoughts - personal thoughts, for reference only! (Look at the future, how many predictions can I, a prophet, get 🙂) ①The protagonist is the reincarnation of a big boss. Chen Yuzhe/Lorne Disenko/Joas, these should be the protagonists, just like the poker association. The person mentioned was probably the protagonist's previous life. He disappeared for some unknown reason, but everyone under his command thought that he was tricked by the night, and there might be something hidden! (It's not unusual for a boss to reincarnate. After all, how can you survive in the fifth era where classes are basically solidified without some background? This era is the Black Iron Age, and the characteristics are almost the same... But what many people may not like is that the protagonist of this book does not need to have so many backgrounds in his previous life. Even an ordinary mortal can reach the end according to the path of destiny) ② The protagonist has many arrangements for all parties, and he has left many back-ups. From the members of the association, it is obvious that they include the Demon Wolf siblings, the God of Beauty, and maybe even the Elf Queen. Maybe Pales can be counted before... This is not bad. Except for the lack of a true god above, it is basically no worse than any true god church! Although they seem to be a group of losers, hugging each other for warmth, just seeking help from each other. I don't deny this, but these people should have been intimidated by the protagonist. Jacob, Solomon, the Emperor of Hades, the Emperor of the Night... All fulfilled the fate mentioned by the protagonist. The group of people who survived probably have a high degree of trust in the protagonist. Not to mention the protagonist's control of destiny, the fact that the protagonist has allowed them to live until now is enough for them to obey the protagonist to a certain extent! (Theoretically wearing the cloak of fate, even if it is clear that he is tricking them, they may have to step on it with hesitation, and completely obey their own orders before they are completely sure that the protagonist is tricking them) After talking about the internal problems, let's talk about the external world. From their words, it was clear that the dark night had tricked the protagonist, but things cannot be calculated that way, and some things cannot be just taken at face value. For example, the dark night also participated in the battle to siege the ancient sun god, and also sealed the gentleman... All of these have profound meanings, and theoretically, the protagonist may also have them! ③The connection between the protagonist and the Key of Light, in the eyes of some insiders, is simply a famous brand... The protagonist is destined to choose his destiny, which in itself is a high sequence of destiny paths! I seriously suspect that the death of the protagonist is to reduce the revival of the Key of Light and to control oneself 😎 After all, in the world of the Lord of Mysteries, there is nothing that cannot be solved by death. After dying once, most of the problems can be solved! The Key of Light can be said to be the most special of the seven major sources of matter in the Western Continent. Although each of the seven major sources of origin is special in its own way, the Key of Light is the only one whose consciousness has not been shattered! And destiny itself is also special! In this case, it feels like the protagonist will be completely resurrected if he is not dead (after all, look at the card game, the three pillars invite the Key of Light, and the group of True God Sequence Zeros are not worthy at all, but they seem to be almost the same person as the protagonist. This connection is already very scary). It feels like another cooperation between the goddess and Adam, killing the protagonist together and cutting off the connection. ④ Various hidden lines should begin to appear after the four demigods in the sequence! It is expected to be revealed in the three stages of demigods, angels, and true gods... But I feel that the later the better for the protagonist! After all, Destiny Path is about destiny, not necessarily past lives. Although it is expected that the protagonist can come into contact with old acquaintances from the past life, the later the better, preferably the old time... The later the better, the better the isolation, the stronger the isolation, the more perfect one's own performance, and the better the future will be! (Fate has already marked a price. Inheriting the past life means that the earlier you pay, the later it proves that you have prepared more in the previous life and have already prepared the bargaining chip to pay off the debt, and the less you need to pay it back in this life) ⑤ The trap left deliberately at the beginning is most likely to trap the Key of Light. Choose an assassin, observe the stars, Leodro, Amon... They are all pitfalls! I always feel that the protagonist in the previous life should know the plot, so when the magic stick predicts many people, many people trust the protagonist; and then in this life, he deliberately leaves a trap, calculates his fate, let himself step on it, and deliberately consumes the Key of Light behind the scenes 😏 (The connection between the protagonist and the Key of Light is too deep. As its agent and puppet, it is impossible to abandon the protagonist, so it is normal for the protagonist to calculate his fate and continue to consume)

Adam's main goal: It doesn't matter if Qiao Sancheng doesn't become a god. Turning the war switch, the Loen royal family's overdraft, and the passive end of the Seven Gods are the fuel for the dreamer's ritual that Adam wants. For the trend of the times, my own ritual of becoming a god. But it should also have other purposes, such as conducting experiments to verify something and obtain some precious experimental data. With the second sacrilegious slate in his hand, Adam helped Lao Huang switch paths and recovered the characteristics of the Black Emperor. He knew better than anyone how much the resurrection mechanism of the "Black Emperor" public toilet path relied on the remnants of the previous order. Recommending a pseudo-emperor like Qiao San who "borrows Lao Huang's order shell + plug-in digestion" to rush to sequence 0 is equivalent to observation: ① The non-native black emperor relies on fantasy/psychological external force to jump the path, and is satisfied with the rituals. Will he be backlashed by Lao Huang's remaining concepts? ②If the new emperor succeeds, will Old Huang be completely covered, or will he wake up from Qiao San through the "remnants of order"? ③The mausoleum was not completely destroyed + the order was copied. Who has the right to resurrect? If Qiao San succeeds in these three points, it will be a living report; if Qiao San fails and loses control, Adam will only watch the show but not save it - Luen will pay for the cost of the experiment, and Adam will get the data. Qiao San was originally designed to be "enough to trigger the ceremony, but the anchor point is vain": Lao Huang's Black Emperor is the complete anchor of "industry + colonization + Caesar concept"; Qiao San's is "king title + wartime speech + haze" "Mausoleum" half-anchor; What Adam wants is this critical state of "it seems to be successful, but in fact the anchor is not real" - if it succeeds, it will be an unexpected gain (bury Lao Huang by the way), if it fails, it will be a planned branch (war escalation + verification that the Black Emperor's resurrection mechanism will get out of control with the fake emperor). Adam used simple test pieces that were reproduced in batches from the Old Yellow and Black Emperor templates, and relied on psychiatrists to skip classes and fantasy cover to force the ritual; Adam deliberately asked him to "inherit" Old Huang's order in a small way, like following the fakes copied by Old Huang, and using low-profile imitations to run through the fault tolerance/backlash/resurrection of the Black Emperor pathway on "non-natives" - it is a pathway experiment. He is also a reference for his own status and a simulation of coping methods in order to become the old man in the future 😏 Using Qiao San's "stitch monster black emperor" as a low-cost reference, he ran through the underlying logic of "old power inheritance/order override/concept engulfment" in advance. (This is also in line with Adam's behavior and is closer to the pattern of the fragments of the ancient sun god's divinity) Qiao San is like a miniature sandbox for the "transfer of power in the old days", and the Black Emperor's path happens to be the most intuitive living teaching material demonstrating "concept coverage" in the universe: The predecessor is immortal → the successor will always be unstable; Order remains → the predecessor can be resurrected; The new order must cover the old order in order to completely crowd out the predecessor. Qiao San's situation perfectly reproduces the simplified version of the old inheritance: When a being with "impure qualifications and illusory anchors" tries to occupy the authority of a person with "remnants of the previous order", how will the system respond? Will it collapse directly, will the predecessor resurrect through the corpse, or will the new god reluctantly take over but leave hidden dangers? (Can be regarded as a reference for the old state in the future) Old Japanese stitching, God will realize the next stage: 😜 First, Qiao San's "Black Emperor's Authority" is Luo Serge's shell; Two, his "digestion method" is a psychiatrist's plug-in; Third, his "promotion cover" is Adam's fantasy; Four, his "order framework" is a copy of Lao Huang's industrial/colonial concept. This is like a "pseudo-old past" put together with fragments from different pathways, which exactly corresponds to the complex state of "multi-channel characteristics splicing, old will remains, and anchor points are forcibly implanted" during the integration of the past in the future. Adam looked at Qiao San like a scientist looking at a spliced ​​cell in a petri dish—not to see the cell survive, but to observe under what pressure the spliced ​​structure would fall apart. And Qiao San's "too small and trivial" actually turned out to be an advantage: if the experimental product was too strong (for example, letting Russell come back to rush sequence 0 by himself), there were too many variables, and the rules would be unclear; Qiao San's "low-profile imitation" could just separate the basic rules of "authority override", "order backlash" and "anchor failure" and show them to Adam. Adam's attitude towards Klein can also be interpreted from another aspect 😎 Adam later said to Klein, "Do you accept this ending?" He has long known that Qiao San has a high probability of failure. What he wants is the "war situation" and "rules feedback" after the failure. These are his reference materials for the future when he visits the old days. It can even be said: George III is the first "wrong question book" prepared by Adam for the past - the title of the wrong question book is not "how to become a god", but "how to not overturn when inheriting an old power full of mess". (Adam has never been someone who only looks at the move in front of him. In his eyes, a "small character" like Qiao San is a miniature deduction model of the future and the past. He strives to create a ritual that can lead to the past safely. Even if it is definitely not possible, he must minimize the backlash of this step and maintain himself as much as possible, which is the best for the future.)

It's pretty good. Judging from the free chapters so far, multiple female protagonists are not a bad idea, and the disease and novelist senses are okay🤔

There are many female protagonists, and she slipped away without saying anything.

The core of comedy is tragedy. If it hadn't happened, the Lord of Mysteries would be a tragedy in nature, and any time traveler would be unlucky if he passed through it. They would basically be containers for those high-ranking beings 😢 Don't think it's alarmist, what happened to the K-meows of the Ring of Fate? ! It's obviously the Heavenly Lord wearing Klein's skin! (After Fate, Klein's reputation was not good, but essentially there was something wrong with the roots of this world, and the cruel side was completely revealed... In fact, it had been expected before, but the writing was very obscure. Normally, how could there be no hidden dangers if it was replaced bit by bit? In the first part, it was just that the plot advancement was not shown, and the meow time was suppressed. It's too short, and you haven't clearly shown that you are not like yourself) If you drink the magic potion, you will be replaced by others little by little; if you don't drink the magic potion, others can easily control you. If you have a lifespan of a hundred years, you will immediately become a plaything 😭 The essence of the system of the Lord of Mysteries is comparable to the cesspool of Warhammer. Only the mortals who don't know are the happiest lives! Seeing myself becoming a different person bit by bit, becoming less and less like myself, and even taking it for granted... How desperate! Among the Lord of Mysteries, there is no eternity, no once and for all, even a pillar must face the threat of the original creator. Normally, for mortals, if you can persist for hundreds of years without wavering, it is considered a victory; if you can persist for a thousand years, you have already made a lot of money; and if you can persist for tens of thousands of years, it is enough... The problem has never been solved, it is just enjoying the hardships 😢 (In the Lord of Mysteries, you must have this awareness. Enlightenment... If you want to write the Lord of Mysteries well, you must also clarify this awareness, otherwise you will not be able to write that flavor) In fact, our protagonist is quite pitiful, it seems to be funny, but it is essentially similar to the puppet of the Key of Light. To put it nicely, it is called the agent, but to put it badly, all the fates are chosen for the protagonist! 😭 In case the protagonist does not comply with the plan, immediately restart the protagonist and let the protagonist make new choices. He can only act according to the plan! Perhaps it is a kind of luck for the protagonist to become the old man. The protagonist can clearly express himself. After all, destiny is here, and he naturally becomes the old man (the protagonist is basically not stitched, and still retains himself); but the protagonist is the most unlucky. It seems to retain himself, but in fact the choices he makes are all the choices of the Key of Light, similar to an unconscious puppet 😫 (This is basically the sadness of being sent to the old days) In fact, it depends on what the protagonist thinks next 🙏 If you obey: The protagonist really has the mentality of living a happy life as an ordinary person. After being sent to the old days, he can basically live happily for many years. Except for the choice at the critical moment, it is controlled by the key of light, which is not too satisfying. Just like Da Liu Universe's Devouring Empire, the life of breeding is so attached that the protagonist can basically live a life far beyond that of a normal person very happily, which is definitely enough. Under this choice, the protagonist and the Key of Light have the best cooperation, and they are on the same front. If you resist: At this time, the protagonist must resist the Key of Light's plan for his own destiny and resist fate, but the path to destiny is inseparable from destiny. After the protagonist realizes it, he will be very painful, resist bit by bit, and sometimes even be smart and choose the difficult path. Perhaps... Isn't this planned by fate? Maybe everything is going according to plan. (This road is very difficult. It is the path of promotion chosen by most people in the Lord of True Mysteries. It is the path of resistance... But in the end, there may be a sentence: The Lord does not care 😭 everything is actually meaningless) Come on, come on!

This introduction will most likely describe the protagonist as a stupid pig. If you pretend to be stupid, you will never discover the truth of these spoof tips. Forcibly written into a happy article 😰😰

As mentioned, this is my biggest impression after reading Chapter 39 so far. I don't know how many readers this chapter has to dissuade. I really didn't expect that the only bad thing about a new book by a new author would be the setting. 1. The setting of past lives and present life has been overused, especially in the mysterious fandom. Readers have become tired of aesthetics and even feel disgusted when they see it. This setting itself is not good and is thankless. 2. The previous article has always said that the protagonist is so lucky and lucky, and he still takes the path of destiny. This is what readers want to see, but now you tell me that it is the second episode? A lucky person becomes a caged bird? Do real lucky people need two rounds of games? You can't speed through Wheel of Fortune in one round. Are you worthy of being the protagonist of a Path of Destiny fanfic? 3. What fanfic readers are looking at is a setting and their own understanding of the plot. As a result, your association has smashed the audience's perspective of God to pieces, and even written it in a foggy way for readers to guess? So do you think I will continue to read it? Do you think I will subscribe to it? Guess how many people have to be persuaded to retreat in Chapter 39? Except for the association, this book is very satisfying to me, and my writing skills are also outstanding. Come on, author, I suggest you delete all the association content, and leave the unreasonable arrangements to fate. Don't worry, readers are very receptive to fate's arrangements. It's okay to be unreasonable. They are all strong luck. This is how the wheel of fortune should be played!

Big snake and little snake, I didn't expect that Mother Destiny's favorite cub would be me, Lorne, if it wasn't you! ! !

What do you think about occult aristocrats and gangsters?

I used to think that the Wheel of Fortune path only required being lucky enough, but now the protagonist really needs to be reborn 😎 However, try not to use it in the previous life, preferably in this life, because the reason for rebirth must be hidden dangers, and the transition is connected with the previous life, making it easier for hidden dangers to appear in the now that has been cleansed. One more thing: 😎 Many rituals are not ready for immediate use, as long as they are at this stage in your life. Maybe if you use them for many years, the effect may be slightly worse, but it is still effective! (For example, 300 years of Ke Miao, several years have passed since it came down. Although it has exceeded 300 years in ancient times, it can still be used) The ritual of the winner of the sequence five, to put it bluntly, is to be unlucky first! In a month-long period, if you put yourself in a state of bad luck, you will never be lucky once. Actually, I think we can give the protagonist good luck first, which consumes too much luck, and then becomes particularly unlucky for a period of time later 🤓 As for the protagonist's good luck: 1. The weapon is approved, and it happens to be reused by the kingdom, the protagonist's shares become valuable again, and the family industry regains its vitality. Second, open a soda factory and call it Coca-Cola, using the wheel of fortune as a symbol (Coca-Cola will be a big seller in the future, what a great luck! And it also solves its own anchor problem). Third, because of the soda symbol, the Angel of Destiny Ouroleus escaped from the gaze... Which directly drained the protagonist's luck and started a month of misfortune for the protagonist! (Different people have different definitions of unlucky. Some people are unlucky and die, not even the scum is left. Some people are unlucky, maybe everything is not going well and it takes a lot of effort.) This time unlucky can be set as the protagonist, this one The moon is about to explode, and the love fortune has turned into a love disaster 😜 Xianyu and Xiu have to play two roles to fall in love, which exhausts their brains; at the same time, in order to cooperate, they have to constantly communicate with Miss Hazel, and they are about to send someone to her. The door's self-recommendation; Tracy was about to leave the pirate ship, and the protagonist happened to be met; together with Miss Doll, he was basically hunted down by the Rose School's key forces... All kinds of things came together. He had to protect his increasingly twisted emotional line and not hurt his female friends. He also had to protect himself from the pursuit of many cultists (Aurora Society, Witch Cult, Rose School), and he couldn't leave the city. He found that leaving the city was more dangerous. Afterwards, in the midst of danger, in this battle royale, I was chased for more than a month, and was rescued by Huang Jiajia. Then the card of destiny was given, and he helped crush the characteristics and became the winner! I feel that this month, I don't drink it immediately after a month, but as long as it is completed, not immediately! In life, as long as there is such a month 😏 (However, if it is a reborn boss, he should have completed the ritual long ago. If you put it before, you can let the protagonist continue to eat it alive... But normally, it is best for the reborn boss to complete the ritual again, because before borrowing Your own will be connected with the previous life, and will also be affected by the problems of the previous life) If you don't want the protagonist to upgrade too quickly, as long as the protagonist can go through this month, it is completely okay to be unlucky to the limit. Faced with the Witch Cult's haze massacre, Betrace captured it back. After completing the ritual of sequence four, sequence five and sequence four, it is directly regarded as completion 🤭 (I want to watch the plot of the little black room 😠) Sequence 4 Doom Mage, because the winner's entrance is If you are looking for a Sequence 4 person, it is recommended that you face this big smog, the Quasi-Black Emperor, Chic, the Night, the True Creator, and a Death Archon... It seems that the scene only contains a Sequence 4 demigod witch, but in fact there is much more behind it. Because I have just experienced the most unlucky month, I was not prepared to face the smog head-on! Facing this disaster with the protagonist's physique, he may become seriously ill, but surviving will not be a problem. This ceremony can be considered completed ahead of schedule. Sequence 3: Chaos Walker. Regarding auxiliary materials, Jiufen's written thanks can be sent by the association. Ritual: Determine a node, or target, that you will inevitably reach for your destiny in the next ten years. This one has long been destined 😎 to become the wheel of fortune and the key to light. If he cannot do it, the protagonist's current special identity will most likely die, and he can definitely afford it! (This can even be the simplest) Sequence 2: Prophet. I feel like this should be the easiest for time travellers! An important revelation that has been fulfilled (recorded on a stone tablet or paper before it was fulfilled), I feel that this may not be my own, but if I really look into it, it should be my own revelation, and I can mix it with the ritual - that is, Emperor Loen was assassinated, starting a world war! (If you feel it is inappropriate, use the Fool prepared in your previous life to appear) The blessing of one of the seven lights in the spiritual world, this is not difficult. Accumulating more than a hundred years of luck... This is a bit difficult for the protagonist. It may have to come into contact with the previous life (but I still recommend not to have too much contact with the previous life. It is better to provide indirect help). Accumulating a hundred years of luck, the protagonist may be as good as someone else for a hundred years in just a few years [fn=2 6] (Being selected by the Key of Light is a great luck in itself. This luck is as good as one's accumulated luck for hundreds of years) Ritual: Pry into the long river of destiny, find important revelations related to at least one country, and ensure that this revelation is finally presented in the way you "see" it. This ritual can be combined with the previous auxiliary materials, naturally using the Death of the Black Emperor and World War 😏 Sequence 1: Mercury Snake. Except for the auxiliary materials, the umbilical cord is a bit difficult, but I feel that if I had been prepared, I would have collected it long ago! Others are probably not too difficult for the protagonist! But during the ceremony, the protagonist should be able to remember all the memories, including the memories of the previous association! 😎 Or being born again and remembering the previous life, does it count as completing the ceremony? (Just like the master of the same life cuts off the past and connects to the previous life, it should actually be regarded as his present life. Awakening all the cognitions buried deep in his soul and heart, he should also be able to realize the layout of his previous life, otherwise it is not all at all) I always feel that the protagonist's current state, if there is a previous life, is very much like completing the sequence one ceremony! Sequence 0: Wheel of Fortune. Supplementary materials: The nine landmarks in the long river of destiny (any of the past, present or future are acceptable) have been connected with the previous life, and the means can be inherited! Ritual: Find the right opportunity in the torrent of fate, that is when the Fool is born, the Fool becomes a god, and the Lord of Mystery reappears! The fool becomes a god, I become a god 😜 Note: Accommodating the uniqueness and taking the magic potion need to be performed separately, which means that two rituals are required. The protagonist can jump all at once and complete it once! Finally, I would like to mention some thoughts, because the three sequences of this sequence have been divided up early, so the protagonist can basically jump from sequence two to sequence zero in one step, and become a true god in one fell swoop 😎 Therefore, the training one ritual and sequence 0 ritual, as well as many auxiliary materials, must be completed together! I thought about it and found that there is no conflict. We can complete the two stages of the ceremony together and break through level 2 at one time. As for indigestion, I am in a bad state. I have the seal of the Lord of Mysteries and there is still some time for digestion to stabilize. If the protagonist is really the reincarnation of a big boss, the sequence one ritual can basically be completed as long as he remembers his previous life! And this kind of restart has digested a lot 😏 Whether it is covering up the destiny under the empty shell of Tianzun (Kimiao, I want you to help me practice), restarting, or repositioning the belief, the protagonist's sequence is exactly the same, it should be melted in the mouth, even if it is not, it will be digested almost 😡 (Although I think the number reshuffle is to try not to have too many views with the previous life, otherwise hidden dangers will follow, but the protagonist jumps directly from sequence two to sequence 0, which is itself We have to face it head-on. In the ritual of sequence one, we have to remember all the memories. This is not right. You become a god in one fell swoop. After becoming a god, you have to face a decisive battle. Remembering those memories is something you have to face, and because you have sequence zero, you have to face hidden dangers. , There is no need to worry about those hidden dangers) My idea is that it is best to negotiate it later. The big snake and the protagonist will fight for that opportunity together. There are only three of them. Outsiders can only watch and stabilize the situation when the wheel of fate is finally born! And after becoming a god, save the lives of the two losers and don't let the two losers die. It can also be regarded as clearing up the field and reducing losses 😏 (A Wheel of Fortune itself is sent directly to the old days. This is needed to welcome the battle at the end of the world. As long as you promise not to participate in any party in the future and choose neutrality, I believe everyone will do it as three people compete... Or Maybe it is not the best choice for everyone, but it is acceptable. Even if the true creator cannot help Ouro Leus after becoming a god, it is still acceptable) 🙏🙏🙏 And after becoming a god, he will become the same old man, and then he will still love the double fight between the Ring of Fate and the Weaver of Destiny 😰 9 old Under normal circumstances, I have to fight one against two, and I need the help of two pillars. If I follow the original work, basically the firepower will be concentrated on myself (I have to fight one against two, and it is a real fight, how can I say it is miserable) In fact, I feel that after the protagonist becomes a true god, he can continue to write, and write about the final battle 😜 With the help of a destiny, in the battle with Utopia If everyone cooperates, it may not be impossible to allow the Nine Old Days to be born. If you really don't want to become the old days, you can restart after the war and let others take over 😏 (Except for the two pillars, I feel that the Key to the Wheel of Fortune can change the situation to the greatest extent! It is the most suitable for development 😎 Dreamers can make people adapt quickly and become stronger through psychological counseling, and the same is true for destiny)

Hahahahaha, your introduction is amazing~

The protagonist had been followed and ambushed before, and had a huge reaction. Before, he even spent a lot of money to find a detective. Why did Audrey react so poorly when she sent a dog to follow her? It's too fragmented. Then this Audrey is also disgusting, and she is not satisfied with stalking others. The previous congressman's daughter is almost the same. Then the protagonist handles it gently, and still feels like he has become bad... Is the protagonist a congenital aristocratic woman who is a dog licker? Can you stop having such double standards and show off the situation where Leonard and Daniels were staring at you and shoot directly?

Not bad, but has a strong sense of awkwardness. The protagonist's time progression is awkward - the author fills in the gaps by describing the original characters/events when the protagonist has nothing to do, but the process is not done well, resulting in the feeling that the Tingen volume ends before the protagonist has done anything. It's confusing. Is this period of time long or short? The protagonist's extraordinary life is very ethereal - the author uses original characters/events to fill the boring gaps in the protagonist's daily life. As a result, the protagonist has not been able to take root, integrate or lurk into this world during this unknown length of time. The feeling is no different from when he first traveled through the world. This also makes it awkward to throw out some common sense information in the original work - should the protagonist know? Why do you know? How much should you know? The charming atmosphere of the mysterious world is not highlighted - because the protagonist has not taken root in a bad environment and has not experienced the undercurrents of a peaceful life in Loen City, he has never understood the cruelty of the mysterious world. This makes some of the protagonist's motivations that should be based on this enlightened choice and cognition awkward - should we be cautious? Why be cautious? What to be cautious about and what to trust? Forward or backward? The scene transition is awkward - because there is no description of calm daily life, the stealth and depression of Loen's wild extraordinarys are not brought out. Because there is no sneakiness and repression, the wantonness and indulgence of the extraordinary power of the sea are not brought out. The awkward change of perspective - the author did not understand the core advantage of web articles that distinguishes them from dramas - an unparalleled sense of immersion based on the perspective of the protagonist. The stinking problem is that the perspective always switches to other characters, and there is even a situation where Xiao Ke is written entirely about Xiao Ke for four consecutive chapters, which is still a plot that is not directly related to the protagonist. If readers want to read Xiao Ke's perspective alone, why not read the original work again? If the author wants to write about the charm of Xiao Ke alone, why not write a fanfic in which Xiao Ke is the protagonist? Don't follow the old rules of dividing shots and cutting scenes in dramas. Many recent authors have this bad habit. Before the protagonist can stand still, they will cut into unnecessary angles and throw in unnecessary information and settings. Don't know where you learned it? ! Summary: It's pretty good, you can take a look.

Is it really fun to have a confused low-sequence protagonist and all kinds of inexplicable high-sequence chess pieces? Isn't the protagonist who splits the road between life and death with both hands as hot as you?

I really want to laugh when I see the protagonist trying to die. This is fate~

It's too unlucky for people who are on the destiny path to drink the magic potion of this path step by step. In the original book, there are only a few strong men at the top of this path who were promoted step by step. You shouldn't just follow any path. When you reach a certain fixed node, it will inevitably become the first sequence of your destiny.

I feel so disgusted that Klein pretends to be the protagonist and does this with Tracy. Will I die if I don't write this? If you can't write well, don't fucking write it. I'm using your face to flirt with your girlfriend, and I hope you can accept it.

I feel like the description of the protagonist is too stupid. He knows the coincidence but doesn't think about himself. There is also a time travel guide, which is speechless. It can be believed.

This book is so tiring to read, 118 chapters in, and I still feel like the protagonist is like an NPC, with no thoughts or initiative of his own. Doing things seems to have no intention of its own and is very empty. Lack of enthusiasm for life and things.

The most attractive thing about Lord of Mysteries is actually the gathering at 3pm every Monday. Some people also concluded that the essence of best friends is Tarot Club, but you have completely abandoned this and added many inexplicable elements. To be honest, it feels like it is wearing the skin of a best friend, but in fact there is no connection at all. It is not inconsistent at all to change the names of the original characters such as Klein and turn it into a fantasy sequence.

In order to make a joke, the protagonist is too idiotic. If there is a problem in the guide, I advise the author to let the protagonist discover it as soon as possible, otherwise it will be difficult to get off later, and it will be a mess later.

Some of the details in the text are truly unflattering. Magic potion cannot be stored. If you do not drink it in time after it is prepared, it will merge with the container and become an extraordinary item. Drinking the magic potion requires meditating to restrain your spirituality, and a lot of external information will be poured into your brain, instead of acting like nothing is wrong. The spirituality of extraordinary people is limited. An afternoon of divination is really unbearable.

There are many scolds and praises in the comment section. I have read 408 chapters. The combat power is due to the destiny. Cuttlefish fans must know that there is no combat ability in the early and middle stages of the destiny. The protagonist's intelligence is also at the level of ordinary people, so there is nothing to write about in the drama. Ordinary people's IQs don't expect to have any wits. They rely on the destiny to win. Everything written by the author is reasonable and not obtrusive, but the ideological stamp is really poisonous. It has no effect except disgusting readers. There are no problems in the plot and logic, so it is good in the mysterious fandom, but I have abandoned this ideological stamp. Readers who don't care about this can read it.

In fact, I find it difficult to bring a female protagonist into a mysterious world, let alone multiple female protagonists.

Outer gods are not a good thing, and sefirot is not a good thing either, especially the kind that still retains consciousness, it is even less good! (The ones that are conscious on earth include the Source Castle, the Sea of ​​Chaos, and a Key of Light) I have an idea, whether to let the protagonist participate in some invasions by the Destiny Weaver and the Circle of Fate, and then inadvertently swallow the characteristics of the two paths alive to maintain the balance 😎 It seems to be looking for trouble, but it is actually pulling chestnuts from the fire! The protagonist seems to be free, but in fact he is almost penetrated by the Key of Light. It is even possible that the divine side is the Key of Light. At this time, it is necessary to introduce external forces. As the Destiny Weaver and the Fateful Circle in adjacent paths, it is another good choice. After the protagonist becomes a demigod, swallowing the low-sequences of these two pathways will not make him lose control. As for the pollution problem, he will naturally let the Key of Light fight against these two to maintain his balance! (And I feel that if these two are involved, whether it is ritual or digestion, it can be operated)

Author, I have an idea. When the protagonist is about to complete the ritual of Sequence 5, but has not yet completed it, let the protagonist experience a catastrophe. As the end of this ritual, it can also add some drama and plot tension. By the way, the ritual of Sequence 4 can also be completed. In addition, the protagonist is 100% the winner in every sense. He can completely digest the winner's potion as soon as he swallows it, and it will melt in the mouth. Not only has it become Sequence 5, but it is only one step away from Sequence 4. It only takes a bottle of potion. After that, you can directly start working on the Sequence 4 potion. I am not saying that, in fact, the ascending to Sequence 5 has been stuck for too long. The steps to ascend to Sequence 4 can be accelerated, otherwise the middle will be weak. In fact, the ascending to Sequence 5 has been stuck for so long, which is considered a weak middle. When it happens to ascend to Sequence 4, speed up a bit to solve the problem of weak mid-stage.

My level is average, but I didn't expect that there would be so many readers, so thank you all. Unfortunately, my Sleepless One promotion failed. It will take some time to try to get promoted again. As for the reason... You can guess why Lorne is afraid of failing the exam. Anyway, thank you for your support. I will try my best to update it stably. I won't be very busy after May Day, and things will be much better by then. Thank you all. 🙏🙏🙏

Big snakes and small snakes are what the protagonist must face on the road to the Wheel of Fortune. Both characters are not annoying, they are both pretty good. They are not as full of intrigues and pitfalls as other paths 😁 According to the particularity of the destiny path, my suggestion is actually that it is best to reach an agreement before the end and have a peaceful and fair competition with each other (for example, there is a real creator behind the big snake). How to compete? Three people participated together, but only three people participated. Not counting other external forces, it can only be regarded as an internal competition in this path. Try to clear the field, only the small snake 1+0, the big snake 2+0, and the protagonist, the king of angels with the key of light in sequence two (even at most only the archangel due to the seal). It's best to control the situation to just the three of them, It can not only reduce the backstage, but also narrow the scope, and can prevent people like Amon who want to win all 😏 It's really not me to say, whether it will be beneficial to have one more person in the past when the end is approaching, or it is a cheating thing according to the path of destiny, it can be said that sometimes in life, there must be an end, If fate doesn't give you this opportunity, you won't be able to become a god. If you are given a chance to become a god, the condition is that only three people can compete with each other, which is beneficial to everyone... This kind of fair competition can also leave a dignity, the winner will become the old days, the loser will be an angel, and a life will be left! (It is difficult for normal people to create the opportunity of the Destiny Path to God Ceremony, but as the spokesperson of the Key of Light, the protagonist should feel this rare opportunity. If fair competition is negotiated, it should not be difficult) The protagonist strives to become the Wheel of Fortune before the Fool becomes a god. Otherwise, according to the protagonist's current deep integration with the Key of Light, after becoming the Wheel of Fortune, he can immediately step into the old days, but there is no guarantee who this old days will be! After the protagonist becomes a god, the seal will protect the protagonist. As long as the protagonist has time to completely master the path, he will still have the power to resist even in the face of the powerful will of the Key of Light that has never dissipated. So it is okay to negotiate with the big snake and the little snake. Try to cut through the mess quickly and become a true god as quickly as possible, leaving time for facing the Key of Light after unlocking the seal. At the same time, it also brings the big snake and the little snake into the situation, creating more variables, so as to muddy the waters of fate😜