Ximing Lihuo

I heard that a heroine came here specially to taste it~

This book is a rare documentary-like historical work with a grand narrative ability. Although it writes about some individuals in a somewhat superficial way, it is still a good book despite its shortcomings. It's a pity that Qidian didn't push it so that more readers could see it. All monthly votes have been given to this book, and I hope the author will hurry up.

Thanks to the author for paying tribute to the great man! My grandfather was the secretary of the township committee during the Mao Zedong era. During his tenure, he was upright and honest. During the flood season, he would wear coir raincoats and straw sandals to inspect villages and would not go home for more than ten days. At that time, he went to the commune canteen to eat at his own expense. The leader of a place went to the canteen to eat at his own expense. This is unimaginable today! My grandfather is most afraid of inspections by superior leaders, because although superior leaders pay for themselves, everyone must eat better than usual and spend more money. It feels distressing! Even though I work in one place, I still get a dead salary and have several children to support. The most important thing is that most cadres at that time were like this! At that time, serving the people was definitely not an empty talk! I didn't want to talk about it at first, but now I feel that I need to talk about it more, otherwise the younger generations will only stay in books about teachers and mentors, and have no idea of ​​their greatness and integrity. I have never seen a great man, but I understand the principle of a crooked beam that is not straight at the top!

Today I feel a little emotional, even a little touched, and I don't want to express my displeasure. If you have nothing to do, please scroll through the post. A book recommendation post pops up on the home page. Take a closer look at my book that you are not recommending? Hurry and take a look! After watching it, I was a little emotional, but more moved. For the first time, I saw that a book friend who really liked my book was silently helping me promote it. How could I not be moved? ! The date is two weeks ago, it was posted on July 10th. I only saw it today. Looking back, it's no wonder that the collection in those two days has increased more than usual, and more and more book friends like to post book reviews and paragraph reviews recently. What particularly moved the author was the reply from a book friend who complained about the short word count, saying that he was afraid the book would die if he didn't even read it. The author is so moved that he has nothing else to say. He can only give a briefing in advance to all the book friends who have been silently supporting Bamboo. In fact, this background was not intended to be discussed until the book is finished. I would like to say this first to reassure the book friends who silently supported Bamboo when the author was at his loneliest. For the topic of traveling through time and overturning the history of the Southern Ming Dynasty, the author has a complete writing plan. I will not talk about the specific number of words to be written today. Today I will only say that this plan will not be affected by data and income. In the end, I will definitely give you a complete explanation of the overturning of the history of the Southern Ming Dynasty. Because the history of the Southern Ming Dynasty has always been a concern of the author, the online articles writing this paragraph are too casual and sloppy for the author to understand, so I have to write it clearly. At the very least, I want my brothers and sisters who have read my book not to be depressed when they read about the history of the Southern Ming Dynasty, but to sneer: This is nothing. In another time and space, the XXX people (of course the characters in the author's book) have already beaten him. And after the entire writing plan for this section of the history of the Southern Ming Dynasty is completed, the author probably has no intention of writing a time travel article with a real historical background unless he writes about revolutionary historical themes. Because the author hates using a routine repeatedly, which only shows that you have narrow knowledge and no other abilities. So book friends who like the author, please rest assured that eunuchs, outline escape and the like have no connection with the author. Finally, I would like to thank all my book friends, my brothers and sisters who silently supported me when the author was lonely...

The late Ming Dynasty is really well written. What's especially rare is that the development is steady and steady, with no random cheating. The emotional scenes are also very interesting and the plot is well-organized. The disadvantage is that updates are a bit slow. The author needs to write quickly, I'm optimistic about you.

I prefer historical novels, especially anti-Qing novels about the beginning of the Nanming Dynasty. After reading anti-Qing novels for many years, I think this book is not in the top five fictional novels about the anti-Qing Dynasty beginning in the Nanming Dynasty. Except for the part about the false prince, which I personally feel is too dramatic, the dialect is quite friendly after reading it for a long time. I have been regretting the slow-burning and delicate "Mo Shang Xing" Eunuch for many years, and this article perfectly makes up for the regret.

I think it is much better than the top ten books on the monthly ticket list and bestseller list. It's a pity that Qidian doesn't provide resources, which ruins such a good book by the author. Recommend a book by the way

The writing is good ~ the protagonist has no golden fingers and no system, arming himself with the thoughts of a teacher ~ the setting is very interesting, I have never seen such a late Ming Dynasty novel that follows the people's line

Xiancao, it's a pity that the starting point does not provide traffic

I have read almost fifty chapters of this book, and it is truly an amazing work! Whether it is the characterization of the protagonist and the protagonist group, or the insightful observation of historical trends, it is unique among historical novels, and it dwarfs many novice novels. Especially the localization of the protagonist is even more outstanding. There are no cheats, no tricks to read history books, and keep the time points in mind; no small inventions and creations are made at every turn; the preparation is also in accordance with the mainstream arrangements of the society at that time. The difficulty of arranging the plot in this way will definitely increase exponentially, which also shows the author's skill. But there is one thing that makes it difficult for me to read it. I don't know if I am the only one who feels this way (Chinese 140 in the College Entrance Examination, maybe it's not a problem with my reading comprehension). That is, when the author is writing, there are always sentences that seem to be forcibly expanded. To give a few examples: "The local civil and military figures appointed by the imperial governors and governors were left here alone." "Those powerful men were just afraid of losing the city and the wealth they had finally regained from Zhang Xianzhong." "Nan Li stopped and took a look at the whipped head. The old man who was kneeling on the ground and crying turned his head calmly. Regardless of Zhang Yingxing's continued scolding and persuasion, he walked past as if he didn't pay attention. As he strode forward, his eyes looked into the distance but already contained murderous intent." Like these three sentences, I think most people may read them over and over again quickly, but they may not be able to understand them. I think the problem is that they are all long and difficult sentences. For example, if you change it to: "The local civil and military figures appointed by the imperial governors and senior officials are left here alone." "Those powerful people are just afraid of being taken away from the city. The wealth that was finally regained from Zhang Xianzhong" " Nan Li stopped and looked at the old man who was kneeling on the ground crying with his head in his hands, and turned his head calmly, regardless of Zhang Yingxing's continued scolding and persuasion. , As if he didn't care, he passed by and strode forward, looking into the distance but already implying murderous intent." The change in the first and second sentences is to use more comma clauses and make reasonable use of word clauses such as "that" (which can be understood as "that" in clauses in English) The third sentence is to remove the meaningless conjunctions "que", "jiu" and "ye" that even interfere with reading, and adjust the word order. In this way, the character's movements are continuous and natural, rather than like a model concave shape. And the author may have been in the army or have an official status. I always feel that the writing has an inescapable sense of old-fashionedness and a sense of teaching readers how to read. There are many places like this, which makes this novel very difficult to read. Many words even need to be read twice to understand. I think the fluency of an article is far superior to its beauty. First, it must be smooth, and then it must express more meaning. Not only the sentences, but also the paragraphs in the text are open to question. Many times, it is clear that time or space has been transformed, but the author fails to explain it reasonably. I often realize after reading a few paragraphs that they are not talking about things that happened at the same time. I think the author must express clearly when the time and space changes in the story, such as "a few hours later", "waiting for Nanli and his party to enter the city" and so on. It would be better to divide it into paragraphs, or even into chapters, etc. My humble opinion, I hope to discuss it with the author and readers. Because I very much agree with the idea of ​​​​this book and the author's potential as a newcomer, I hope that the author can pay attention to some expression problems and put some effort into the article itself.

The comment section is a bit outrageous, the book is indeed good, but not to the point where it surpasses 99% of historical novels. In addition, it's not that you can't use dialects. Just use a few common words to increase the recognition. As a person from the border area of ​​Hubei and Chongqing, I can barely understand it, but my head hurts. Stop doing thankless things.

The author should not forget that after the Central Plains was restored, officials would eventually have to be purged. There were not many good officials in the late Ming Dynasty.

Looking for a novel about opposing the Ming Dynasty and the Qing Dynasty, being red, and not stalling. Other dynasties are also acceptable. They do not engage in constitutional monarchy or capitalism. All pure red novels will do.

I can't stand the dialect anymore. Could the author consider people from other places? If this book is written for people in Sichuan and Chongqing, then I didn't say it.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the writing of the heroine is so outrageous 😰 and coupled with the inexplicable Sichuan dialect, it makes people feel that the heroine is not attractive at all.

I have seen a quarter of the places so far, and overall they are OK, but some places are more idealistic. Currently, I see that civil servants can gather around the crown prince and compete with Nanli on military and political issues, and the protagonist thinks that it is a good thing to have different opinions. The first thing here is a temporary objective fact, but the protagonist seems naive and doesn't know if it will change later. Opposition to the military and political leaders cannot be achieved by supporting the opinions of the second-in-command. This will create inertia, induce division, and also shield the villains. Then I saw that Feimi suggested that the gentry join the Sanyi League. It depends on how you write it. If it is only used as a temporary tool or a tool of governance, it does not matter. But if it is a long-term organization, you must not join it. The advanced nature of an organization is maintained by purity. Unity is unity and cannot be confused. The other thing is a private matter. I feel that Nanli has a problem with his ideas and allows the princess to mess around. If you have been a political commissar and still cannot win over others in theory, then I will criticize your professional ability. There are also other descriptions that do not reflect the modern idea of ​​equality between men and women, but rather machismo or bad ears without knowing it, and insufficient ideological awareness.

It can be seen that the author has a good foundation, but I can't remember who is who from more than 60 chapters, and the secondary and key characters are not as three-dimensional as the humorous characters. As for the portrayal of the princess and heroine, which was interesting at first but was just like that later, I think the other heroine is too pretentious. As a female, I personally feel that this person is very uncomfortable, but I can't put it into words. What's wrong? The other one is that there are too many dialects, and it's too difficult to read and understand. I always feel that language expression is to highlight the character's personality, but blindly pursuing realism in dialects to the point of affecting reading is not worth the gain In general, the only thing that impressed me more deeply among these sixty chapters was the life-and-death fight in which the male protagonist killed three fake monks at the beginning. As for the other plots, I have basically no impression of them. I read from other people's book reviews that this book was well written. The first three chapters were really good when I first read them. This directly filled up the realms I was looking forward to. In the end, I didn't get it later. It was almost boring, but it was not interesting. Then it's just me. The poisonous point is that I take it for granted. Some plot twists are too taken for granted. There is no foreshadowing and no development. It is just natural. Emmm, there is a feeling that I don't want you to feel, I want me to feel. There is a feeling of being forced on me. I often see this type of writing. It just feels hard to explain. It's very uncomfortable to say The above opinions are only my personal feelings

Throughout the late Ming and early Qing dynasties, the two most unrivaled people were Huang Taiji and Sun Kewang. One turned a khanate that fought for rice and cannibalism into an empire that temporarily made slaves; the other turned Yunnan and Guizhou, the poorest provinces in the Ming Dynasty, into a paradise in troubled times, mobilizing a force that could shake half of the country.

Why are so few people reading such an excellent book?

I am new to the game and have only read Chapter 39. There is actually nothing wrong with the previous plot, and there is nothing wrong with the logic and continuity, but I am just a little tired of watching it. After thinking about it, I feel that there is something wrong with the author's sentence structure. It's not that it's wrong, but that the broken sentences are not in line with the habits of Internet articles. A sentence in an Internet article must be short, and each short sentence should be as complete as possible, so that it is easy to understand quickly. For example, long sentence: I had a delicious and hearty meal with some friends at Tom's house yesterday; short sentence: Yesterday at Tom's house, I had a delicious and hearty meal with some friends. Take a passage in Chapter 39 as an example: [At this time, Ouyang carefully reminded Zhao Nanli: "xxx" in a tone of his own family]. There is nothing wrong with the structure and grammar of this sentence itself, but there is a problem with rapid understanding for online articles: the main structure of the sentence is separated by commas, and the adverbials are mixedly arranged in the sentence. The first thing we have to do is to extract the sentence components. The subject, predicate and object of the backbone are Ouyang reminded Zhao Nanli, so we need to put the backbone together, and then arrange the adverbials and complements around the sentence in an appropriate way. So the above sentence can be changed to: [At this point, Ouyang carefully reminded Zhao Nanli and said in a family tone:] Internet sentences and paragraphs are often short and fragmented, but it is not just about chopping up, but each paragraph must organize the language around a center, and each language unit must express a complete meaning. For short and quick articles, one is to quickly reveal the subject of the sentence, such as: [John is the one sleeping behind Jack with a book covering his face] and [The person sleeping behind Jack with a book covering his face is John]. The former puts the sentence subject John in a more prominent position. The other is that the sentence should be divided into small units with complete meanings, such as: [My eyes were so hungry that I jumped on the rich food in front of me to eat] and [My eyes were so hungry that I jumped on the rich food in front of me to eat]. The former sentence is obviously easier to read. As a commercial consumer product that is different from traditional literature, online articles often have to give way to readability and ease of expression in terms of depth of expression.

In the history of the Southern Ming Dynasty, absolute blood pressure reached its peak, and it was more effective in treating hypotension than any Chinese or Western medicine.

It feels better than some of the works on the rankings, and subscriptions and monthly passes should increase in the future.

It can be seen that the author has a profound background in history and strong writing skills. I pray that the book can be completed smoothly 🙂

I feel like I can be in the first echelon of history literature

Will it end when Hanzhong is defeated? In this case, it is a bit similar to the late Ming Dynasty which ended when Liaodong was liberated. It would be better if the author could briefly explain the scene after unification in the last few chapters before finishing.

Come on author, this is a very comfortable historical article. I will recommend more people to read it. Keep the quality up and it will definitely become popular.

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2 Million words are still in Sichuan, alas!

It's rare to write about Nanming as well as you, come on