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If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just don't write them, okay? A girl likes the protagonist for no reason, and then comes to him whenever she has nothing to do! It's really embarrassing to watch! There is no emotional foreshadowing! Even people you meet for the first time! Is the protagonist a humanoid aphrodisiac? Why do you blush when you see it for the first time? It's really a mouthful that makes me want to vomit!

If you change the plug-in and title to modify common sense, your collection will at least double

I was passing by and saw that the author's third book had been released. I was really moved. I am an old bookworm. I have read the author's first two books. Every time I read the author's writing, I feel very comfortable (except for the part where he is rushing to finish work). At that time, I just read the beginning of Pan Dimension and read it without realizing it. The following Dragon Clan of Immortality was also the first Dragon Clan fan I followed. I have always felt that the author is the kind of person who is rewarded by God. He describes the environment, dialogue, characters and emotions very naturally and to just the right degree, and his language style is also very unified. There are no old problems like the half-white, half-text, and blunt emotional transitions in most of Qidian's articles. In terms of connecting words in a small part of the plot, it can be said to be very smooth, and there is no abrupt change in the plot and scenes. Especially, this has been the case since the first book on Pan Dimension, and it has been the same since the second book on Cultivation of Immortals. Today I saw the third book and read it for a while, and it is still the same. There is no doubt that this is his instinctive writing style, rather than the explosive level of one chapter or two. But the author is still not popular, maybe because of the update speed, maybe because of the overall control of the plot. In short, every book encounters various things, which is really a pity. I sincerely wish this book will have good results. I have learned a lot from the author's articles.

Don't accept any strange tasks randomly. What the hell is this slave organization? You dare to mess around without knowing anything about it. I really don't know how to write the word "death".

The heroine and her sister are twins. Why are they different in age? Is the heroine Nezha?

The advantages are as obvious as the disadvantages. The advantage is that the male host does things quickly, without procrastination, and is measured. The golden finger is not very strong, but it has full functions. It has a simple and powerful beauty, which is very good. The disadvantage is that the emotional line is too naive (maybe because I am just a single person?) The heroine is given away too quickly, the portrayal is not smooth enough, it feels like there are some missing descriptions or situations, and the turning point is a bit stiff. My personal suggestion is to polish the description of the emotional line carefully, or try not to write it, otherwise I will be sorry for such a good hero like you.

Captain? Sanhua said, eunuchs are not allowed (fake)

The writing is okay. It's just getting more and more uncomfortable to watch, one thing after another. It didn't stop at all. Just after the killing here, there was another one there, and just after this one was finished, there was another one there.

Steal the author's pictures directly

Why does it feel like the author has opened a small account to write other books? This update makes no sense.

What was going on before this? Can we please stop writing that bad relationship drama? How come I forgot about the last book at the end? It's really hard to make steel, there's a lot of criticism, no one in the comment section said that the emotional scene was good, and they just wrote it, and there are still people here who are still trying to criticize it? ? ?

The plot suddenly came out. I just met a rich woman and suddenly encountered danger.

Suddenly, he became a slave in a weird way, and he also gave the protagonist a male character. If you don't have it, don't write it. Do you write it to screen readers before putting it on the shelves?

Apply the real world to the rules of the game, write a really stupid thing, and even give a pill to restore health to 500 points. Who in the real world can explain the effect of pills to you like this?

I just felt embarrassed when I read it😓, the characters are quite poisonous, it feels like an urban novel from ten years ago😄

So the question is, since they are twin sisters, how come there is an age difference?

Everything is good, so why do you always like to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger?

I update eight pictures a month, and I won't tell you the details. I'm really convinced by the hard dragging.

It's hard for me to support you for the next book. We can understand that the author wants to support his family and make money, so he cuts out books with poor performance. We also hope that the author understands that we don't want to read a book that may be cut off. Now I just won't click on the book if it doesn't have 1 million words. I add it to the bookshelf and wait until I think about it and am reading more than 1 million words. I started reading your first book after it reached over 1 million words. It's quite good, but it's a pity that it's too eunuch. Okay, it's understandable for a novice practicing pen writing. I'll update the second book. The second book was pretty good. The author said he would start a third book. In my opinion, the second book was unfinished. There were many things that were not explained clearly. Now the original third book is pretty good, and then the 300,000-word mark will be cut. Your first book, The Eunuch, was unfinished, and your second book was unfinished. Now, your third book is 300,000 words, Eunuch. I broke my defense, and your credibility, the author, was ruined. I ordered all three of your books. I can only say goodbye after the next one is 1 million words long. I hope I can still think of you when the time comes.

I can't stand it anymore 😢 Another eunuch. To be honest, I still think the first book is more amazing.

Why are the works that can be viewed not updated?

Updates have been too busy during this period. Is the author planning to stop writing and come out to say something?

You are not allowed to enter the palace. Man, be patient.

You are such a little bitch, you have updated two more times, right?

Although the reward is not much, it's not too much to add more 😏

Independent creativity = learn from 99 + change 1 = equal to your own? It is not recommended that the author be independent. Those who have a certain fan base will still follow the book even if the writing is a bit strange but the writing is good. However, for new readers, the first impression of being independent is to abandon the book. There is a good saying, strange animals will be protected and strange people will be isolated. When you have no ability to change an era and create a genre, it is best to follow the trend, at least this is the public aesthetic.

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Hurry up and resume daily updates. It's not easy to find a book you can read.

Chao Yu was a good man, and his good character was rewarded by God. As soon as Chao Yan opened his eyes, he found himself sitting in a dense old forest, with a bowl in his left hand and a handful of dates in his right hand. There is wine in the bowl. Take a sip. It's sweet and has a hint of malt. I have a date in my hand. Eat one. It is crunchy and the flesh is huge and plump. "Don't drink it, there is sweat medicine in this wine!" What? But I just drank it! Asshole! Why didn't you tell me earlier? Chao Yan scratched his throat and retched, but that didn't work. He tried to induce vomiting by instilling 30ml of olive oil, 10ml of coconut oil, and 10ml of flaxseed oil, but he didn't have the conditions! "Oh, brother is joking. You see, he is fine even if he drinks. We are not afraid." "Yes, we like to drink this wine. Do it well and sell it to us!" "Yes, brother, this is the five dollars we collected, take it. . " "Haha, you bought this voluntarily, don't blame me if you drink it!" "No, no. It's so hot, we just like to drink to quench our thirst!" What the hell, it turned out to be a misunderstanding, I was shocked. Chao Yao let out a long sigh of relief. "It's pouring, it's pouring!" The drinking crowd fell in response. What? ! Chao Yao's frightened fingers were about to go into his throat again. "Brother Tianwang, what a great acting skill!" The man selling wine and several brothers came over and praised him. "Play, play... It's good, I'm the one who acted!" Chao Yu held back the words he was about to scold, but when he saw everyone carrying ten loads of gold and silver, he changed his mind. "It's down, it's down!" Chao Yu fell down in response. A black-faced man stepped out and said: In addition, I happened to be the gathering of seven stars, and Brother Heavenly King escaped in a white light. It is destiny! ---------------------- "Ah!" Chao Yu woke up from his dream with a loud cry, "No, shouldn't I be the protagonist?"

You don't know how to be a eunuch anymore, don't do it 😭