When I Was Supposed to Be Slaying the Dragon, I Accidentally Started Cultivating Immortality

First of all, the plot: you can clearly feel that the plot is unfolding bit by bit between the lines, and the introduction to immortality is not written in an expository way. It is very comfortable to mix the plot. I think I am very good at writing about daily life, but I personally think it can be slowed down. This progress is too fast, and there will be no follow-up. It's easy to write, it would be good to add some main lines and add a little pressure Then there are the characters: The difficulty in writing about the fanfic is the characters. Changes are understandable. Concubine Ming's changes are very reflected, and the readers are not caught in the trap, making people can't help but smile. There is no problem in the portrayal. To sum it up piece by piece: It is a fan of the Immortal Dragon Clan with a little happiness in daily life. The world view and plot are stable. The character description is not very good, but it is definitely no problem. It is worth reading. (The above is purely a personal evaluation, please make your own diagnosis for specific situations) (Able, capable, no?)

I feel that this book is not following the same old path as before. The beginning is eye-catching and surprising, with a sweet but not greasy freshness. In the end, it becomes sugary, sugary, sugary, but it will make you tired if you eat too much sugar, and the plot completely deviates from the theme of the article. Recently, since Lu and Su established their relationship, it is better The loser who is easy to rise up has just lost his mind to the Kingdom of Java. He is either giving out candy or on the road to giving out candy. It is still the kind of plot that is purely about giving out candy. These days, it is no longer popular to make love for the love of making love. Forget about watery plots. There is also a trend of transitioning to short stories. What a subject, but it was written as high and low. 😩

I read it for a long time, and the author was completely limited by the Dragon Clan. The Dragon Tribe itself is a popular novel similar to online novels. It does not have the characteristics of a classic. I couldn't stand it at all when I read it. At least not to mention anything else, the organization in the original work didn't look like a decent one after I read it for a long time, and the sensational operation that followed was worse than starting from a random spiritual recovery article. Then the author created it again and completely became a pyramid scheme. First of all, the protagonist's parents left the company early and didn't care about the protagonist except for making money. If you are that kind of working class, forget it. Two big guys are paying this little money. How dare you say that your parents love you? Apart from anything else, I don't write letters or make phone calls. Is it possible that we are fighting 24 hours a day? Even border guards can send letters home. Are you so busy co-writing it? Then the recruitment operation of this broken organization is to first throw a highly contagious (poisoning) and highly lethal (intentional homicide) deadpool on the street, and then the protagonist kills it with all his strength, without even cleaning up the trash. I just laughed to death. If the blood is not clear, dogs can always kill it, right? If the body fell into the river, wouldn't it be clean to pick it up and just leave it unconscious? Just find those bad reasons and just ignore it? Wouldn't this be thrown into a life sentence? Then the original operation is even more beautiful. After I knew that Ming Fei had meritorious deeds, I completely ignored him and made him miserable. I didn't help him until I needed him. Then he entered that ghost school, which continued to suppress him and made him miserable in all kinds of ways. Was it his parents' intention to make him so miserable? Really, I take this dragon clan as a joke. He makes almost all the mistakes of this type of work, and the reverse masterpiece is okay.

How can I put it this way? The first part is very interesting, but the second part is relatively boring. The plot progress is a bit slow.

This book is an outlier among all the Dragon Clan fans. Just wearing a dragon background. It's not so compact in style, but more cozy. Daily. It's good that I didn't follow the plot exactly, but added my own secondary creation.

I haven't read Dragons before. It's very difficult to read. After thinking about it again and again, I decided not to bother. This kind of novel is really difficult for those who haven't read the original work.

This is my Word Spirit Word Spirit: Favor Special effects: It can summon green rainwater to heal creatures, and it can also summon blue rainwater to heal spirits Effect: It speeds up the healing of creatures, and can also restore spirits and spirits. When used in advanced realms, it can restore dark wounds.

The elements of cultivating immortals and dragons are well combined, and there is no sense of disharmony. But be sure not to add the element of the urban warrior king, which is definitely not compatible with the dragon clan (for example, the previous bartending plot felt not only inconsistent with the main plot but also in conflict with the main plot, and writing more about refining medicine is better than bartending). Also, don't follow Jiangnan's example and pretend to be cool for the sake of showing off. No matter which plane you are in, if you dare to play storm torpedoes in the Three Gorges, I'm afraid you haven't suffered the iron fist of the dictatorship. It's too outrageous. If I continue writing according to the current main line, the results will be very good.

The author greatly hopes not to lick Lu Mingfei's first love, otherwise he will give you a recommendation vote every day.

Come on, author, even though I have never seen Dragon Clan, I think it's pretty good (it's all thanks to fellow fans). As long as the level doesn't drop later, I will definitely order it all (student party, this is the only way to support) 😡😡

Word Spirit: The Demon of Desire Special Effects: Black flames float around him Effect: People have seven emotions and six desires, which can cause them to burn. You can trap people in your own desires and lose yourself. When burning desires, it will cause great pain Small story: At night, he sat on the table, looking at the lying on the ground indifferently, The two men were wailing bitterly. There was nothing on the man's body and he died wailing. In his eyes, he could see the black flames on the man's body slowly dissipating. He stood up and left the table and walked outside. Only two corpses were left in the villa. When he walked out of Wuhan, his face was no longer indifferent, with sadness and happiness. What he recalled after revenge

This is my Word Spirit Word Spirit·Thunder Sound Special effects: A cow-like head is formed behind the body to make a sound Effect: The resonance of air and magnetism can interfere with other Word Spirits and also cause great damage to electrical appliances. It has a series of effects on people, depending on the body's constitution

I feel like the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

This is my Word Spirit Word Spirit: Earth Binding Special effects: Earth pillars or lumps of soil appear from the ground Effect: The earth element is the main element and can control the actions of others. It mainly targets entities and also affects spirits. However, the controlled person must be in contact with the ground or not far from the ground. It has no effect on high altitudes.

This is my Word Spirit Word Spirit: Remnant Dream Source: Bai Wang Jiaoguo: It can invade other people's dreams, break them and cause mental damage to them. After skillful use, dreams can affect the spirit to produce effects such as hypnosis.

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It's well written It's well combined The only drawback is that I haven't read the original Dragon Clan Hehe But who are we? It doesn't matter if I haven't read the original work. After all, I am a man who has completed the full version of Naruto and the full and extra chapters of One Piece by reading the fanfic! Hahaha

Everything was just Lu Mingfei's fantasy before he went crazy. Kassel College is actually Kassel Park. The so-called train is just a green train during the smuggling process. The scene where the students in the entrance test classroom are dancing wildly is the collective emotional collapse of the colleagues after learning that they were deceived into Myanmar. Nono is the team leader of Piggy, and a group of professors are the trainers. Caesar is a European stowaway who loves to brag about being a noble. Fingel is Lu Mingfei's roommate. He has been tortured for several years and is often beaten for failing to meet the standards of his business. Chu Zihang is Lu Mingfei's fantasy. The eldest son of his own school was also imprisoned like him to comfort himself. On the first day of freedom, someone ran away and was shot dead by the security guard. The Dragon King was beaten several times later because he was trying to escape and was finally discovered. He was locked up in a small dark room and tortured. Therefore, Lu Mingfei's fantasy scenes were all dark and closed places such as underwater tombs and abandoned subway stations. The subsequent trip to Japan was about the transfer of personnel in the Kassel Park. The bumps in the plane were the jeep with the windows covered. The Japanese branch was also Lu Mingfei's fantasy in the new park. The diving was about a few people who had just arrived in the new park and were unskilled in business and were imprisoned in a water prison. There was a fire in the back and they were all scenes of various people escaping and being shot. Cowherd There are Lu Mingfei and several people in the shop. They were spotted by the boss because of their beauty and were forced to serve high-ranking officials. Uesugi Eri is a mute girl who was imprisoned. Herzog is the park manager. When he raped Eri, Lu Mingfei caught him. Lu Mingfei accidentally kidnapped the manager and started to run away. Therefore, there will be an abstract scene of two people fighting and traveling throughout Japan. In the end, he was rescued and returned to China, but he was already crazy. The only conscious part was in the mental hospital. Because he was treated with drugs, Chu Zihang disappeared because he was the only character imagined in his experience in Myanmar, but he started a new delusion, that is, the Nibelungen and subsequent experiences.

How could you write Dragon Clan without Uesugi Eri?

Ah, support the single heroine, brothers from the Sulu faction, please stand up! ! Although the little monster is also very good, it would be better to raise it as a daughter! Support Su Xiaoqiang's rise to power🙂🙂🙂

Like, the author's writing is good, and Lu Mingfei's character is extremely restored. The bad boy with a mean spirit and bad words, and his low self-esteem because of being dependent on others, moved towards a new, beautiful and self-chosen future after obtaining the Book of Heaven. Rather than being arranged step by step in the so-called script of the little devil, being one step slow in choosing at the critical moment brings heart-breaking regret. Every one of us has this bad boy, so I don't want to regret it, and I don't like to see regrets.

The anecdote about Tianxing and the black dragon is very suitable for the concubine who cultivates immortality

"Dragon I: Morning of Fire": Lu Mingfei entered Kassel because he fell in love with Nuonuo (Chen Motong), and then entered the dragon world. Jiude Yaji and Ye Sheng encountered dragon death in the Three Gorges Bronze City; But they brought back Constantine's bone implant bottle. Lu Mingfei and Nono teamed up to enter the Bronze City. During the ascent, they met Norton. Nono was stabbed by Norton's fang. In order to save Nono, Lu Mingfei and Lu Mingze signed a contract in exchange for the first 1/4 life, and hacked Norton to death. Two people were rescued. But Nono thought that the person who killed Norton and rescued her was Caesar. "Dragon II Eyes of the Dead": Lu Mingfei and Chu Zihang went on a mission together and met the lovely "Little Dragon Girl" Xia Mi in Chicago. The principal took Lu Mingfei to the auction, and Lu Mingfei borrowed 100 million to buy the Seven Deadly Sins using "Show me the money". [Cheat code given by Lu Mingze] After that, the principal, Lu Mingfei, Chu Zihang, and Xia Mi encountered an accident while riding the Atrium Snake in the amusement park. Chu Zihang showed violent blood skills. The Hunter Network broke the news that the king of the earth and mountain had awakened, so Chu Zihang, Lu Mingfei, and Fengel teamed up and arrived in Beijing. At the same time, Nono agreed to Caesar's proposal. On the Nibelungen - subway platform, Chu Zihang seriously injured Fenrir, the king of the earth and mountains, but then Xia Mi transformed into the Dragon King and told Chu Zihang that he approached him because he carried the brand of Odin. Chu Zihang already liked Xia Mi, and Xia Mi also had some sympathy for him (maybe love) Jörmungandr was Gameover by Chu Zihang because of hesitation; But the earth and mountains King Fenrir is not dead. Chu Zihang was defeated even after four violent attacks and almost became a deadpool. Lu Mingfei read Nuonuo's birthday blessing text message and in order to save Chu Zihang, he used somethingfornothing to perform a 60% fusion with Lu Mingze. He used a full set of seven deadly sins to activate the Crime and Punishment Domain to kill Fenrir, the King of Earth and Mountain, with 50% of his life remaining. In the end, Brother Fingal, the "appearing loser", drove the last subway with a KFC balaclava and rescued them. Finally, Chu Zihang took Xia Mi's key and saw everything Xia Mi left behind. Dragon Tribe III Black Moon Tide": Caesar's stallion father donated the Diriaste to Kassel College. The trio discovered dragon relics deep in the Japanese Trench. Kassel's ace commissioner team Caesar, Chu Zihang, and Lu Mingfei were attacked by dragons during their deep dive. They struggled to escape the danger and tried to contact the headquarters, but found that they were betrayed and hunted by the entire Japanese branch. On the streets of Chizuru Town, the three of them met on a narrow road with the bosozoku Chibei, setting off a crazy showdown. After escaping death, the three of them lived in Takamagahara, a famous cowherd shop in Kabukicho, and started their career as cowherds. In order to take revenge and find out the secrets of the eight Sheqi families, they decided to visit Genji Heavy Industries at night! There were many crises in the building, including the pursuit of the Japanese branch and the attack of Deadpool. The trio finally broke into the secret room and saw a large number of mysterious murals. After withdrawing from Genji Heavy Industries, the trio of Serge fell into the undercurrent of Tokyo again. Lu Mingfei met the white king container Uesugi Eriyi. Lu Mingfei and Eriyi hid in a love hotel to avoid being hunted by the Sheqi family. Eriyi is one of the keys to unlocking the White King's treasure. Caesar and Chu Zihang hope that Lu Mingfei can take Eriyi away from Japan. But Lu Mingfei was very cowardly, which eventually led to Eliyi's death. (Reply if the content is not enough) Excerpted from Sogou

So beautiful

Regarding Lu Mingfei's time traveling to the Witch's Night Banquet and becoming a witch knight. Do you think this idea of ​​mine has come to fruition? It just so happens that the four forms of the witch knight correspond to the four dragon kings, and the white king corresponds to the diamond king and the fifth king. If you think this is a good idea, reply 1 and I'll write it up.

Let me talk about my personal opinion. I have never read Dragon Clan, and I have only read a few Dragon Clan fan novels. Basically, I can read the first part, but at the end, I am confused because I have not read Dragon Clan, or I am confused. This book that combines the elements of cultivating immortals is my favorite, and it is a masterpiece for me! Finally, I wish this book will become a big hit and continue to grow in popularity! Full order now!

So many people used to call Lu Hui, but if you don't change it, they say it's a single female lead, Lu Hui is gone, and you have an affair with Eri Yi, which disgusts the rest, you have to change it as soon as possible.

Word Spirit: Little Dark Room Special Effect: A small dark room will appear and the designated person will be summoned Effect: After activating this Word Spirit, an indestructible little black room will appear. You can shout the opponent's name (including pen name) loudly to lock him or her in. It can only be opened after 10,000 words have been coded in the room.

Fans             Book of Heaven The world is about to collapse Despair continues to spread, and rays of light shoot straight into the sky. Upon closer inspection, they are basically powers that were rarely seen in the past. Endless power is wrapped around them. At this moment, a man wearing a dragon robe is standing with his hands behind his back. His face is always confused for some reason. It was hard to see clearly. He looked at the people running in panic on the ground and said: Is it our turn for the world? Is today the day of destruction? An old man wearing a Taoist robe said: It is indeed a catastrophe of the era. There is no hope of life at all. Even we cannot survive. Our methods are of no use in the face of this catastrophe. The fire plan was started A man with a sword behind his back waved with one hand, and saw several sword lights coming. This is the foundation of my sword sect, and I don't know how many swords can hold up The dragon-robed emperor opened his hand, and a golden ball kept turning, with several golden dragons hovering in it. I don't know who can get my national treasure. If it is an emperor The king is even better, the man in the dragon robe whispered At this time, the old man in the Taoist robe stretched out his hand and took out a bundle of emerald green jade slips from a large hall. A trace of surprise flashed in the emperor's eyes: The Heavenly Book? Yes, if you want to completely pass on the inheritance of your Taoist sect, the Heavenly Book is indeed the best choice. Anyway, we are all going to fall, so it is better to just do it. After saying that, a ray of golden light flew from the center of the emperor's eyebrows and fell into the Taoist Jade Slip . The old Taoist looked at the emperor and said doubtfully: Are you willing to give it up? It's no wonder that I suddenly realized it. After all, why am I reluctant to give up when I am about to die? In this case, are you also willing to send your inheritance into the Book of Heaven? Everyone present nodded, we are about to die, how can we have such a sectarian view? I just hope that the Book of Heaven can survive, and our inheritance can have more hope of restarting The old Taoist took a deep look at the people present and bowed slightly : Then I'll leave it to you all It doesn't have to be like this, we are not without any selfishness, so we asked the Taoist Master to stand up, and then a stream of divine light flew out from everyone's hands and fell into the jade slip, and the brilliance of the jade slip became more and more brilliant Everyone, let's do it! Okay! In an instant, a series of powerful attacks hit the sky, and the space was torn open. From a distance, it looked like the sky was torn open by a huge force, and the space was turbulent and moving Some people in the crowd stared at the sky. His eyes flickered, but the man carrying the sword said as if unintentionally: We carry the cause and effect of this world. Even if we leave forcibly, we will be killed by the catastrophe in the turbulence of time and space. The only thing we can do is to send our inheritance away. If the inheritance is not destroyed, we will live in another direction forever! The old Taoist stretched out his hand and pushed many inherited objects into the turbulent flow. Everyone watched the inherited objects leave until the cracks closed.

From the 1st floor to the 50th floor, settlement is 10 cents on the first floor. (5 Yuan) Floors 51 to 100, settlement is 20 cents on the first floor. (10 Yuan) Floors 101 to 150, settlement is 30 cents on the first floor. (15 Yuan) Every 50 floors + 1 cent base price. One knot every 50 floors. For example: For floors 451~500, the settlement will be 50 yuan to Luoxue. This book has a deadline of 400,000 words. Let me see your love for the author?