Pan-Dimensional Chat Group

In fact, usually I don't like to leave messages in the book review area, but the author's analysis of Zhang Cuishan in this novel touched my heart. There is a feeling of meeting a close friend, and I feel that the author has indeed read the original work, not a cloud audience. However, the author was very disappointed with the plot of Zhang Sanfeng's birthday. First, in the original work, when Zhang Sanfeng celebrated his birthday, the only people who went to Emei with surnames were Ji Xiaofu and Master Jingxuan, but they did not go. Second, the Emei sect came to celebrate his birthday sincerely (look at the gifts each person sent) Most of the birthday gifts were some birthday peach noodles and the like that were bought temporarily from Shanxia Town. They were purchased in a hurry. Not only did they not match the status of Zhang Sanfeng, the great master of martial arts, but they also did not match the imposing manner of the sect masters and leaders of each faction. Only E. What Mei sent was a truly important gift. In addition to the sixteen-color precious jade, there was also a bright red brocade Taoist robe, embroidered with a hundred different characters of "longevity" in gold thread. Master Jingxuan said to Zhang Sanfeng: "This is the Emei Gate. The next ten female disciples worked together to embroider it." Zhang Sanfeng was very happy and said with a smile: "The Emei heroine is famous all over the world for her boxing and sword skills, but today she came to embroider this birthday robe for the old Taoist. It is really precious.") Thirdly, although Emei went up the mountain with other sects, they were definitely not on the same road with them (these people went up the mountain hand in hand, except for the Emei sect, originally they did not hesitate to fight in order to find out the whereabouts of the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun, but the Wudang sect He is so prestigious that no one dares to make a quarrel with him alone. If hundreds of people swarm up, there will be no scruples, but no one wants to take advantage of him if he steps forward.) Fourthly, although Emei is here to pay homage to his birthday, he really wants to know the whereabouts of Xie Xun, but his attitude is that, although I want to know, if you don't answer, I can't continue to press him. (Everyone in the Emei faction finally stood up to leave. Ji Xiaofu saw that Yin Liting was crying sadly, and her eye circles were red. She walked closer and whispered. : "Sixth brother, I'm going. You... Take care of yourself." Yin Liting's eyes blurred with tears. She raised her head and choked: "You... Your Emei faction... Are also here to make things difficult for my fifth brother?" Ji Xiaofu said hurriedly: "No, the master just wants to ask senior brother Zhang to inform Xie Xun's whereabouts.") Fifth, Miejie has a blood feud with Xie Xun (Yu Lianzhou sighed: "The Emei sect has very strict sect rules, and most of the sects are female disciples. Master Jiejie has never allowed female disciples to walk freely in the world. This time, the Emei sect was also in trouble with the Tianying Sect. We were quite surprised at the time, and it was not until recently that we finally understood the reason. It turns out that the old hero of Jinguachuifang Jingfang in Lanfeng, Henan has He was suddenly killed one night, and the words "The murderer Hunyuan Pili Hand Cheng Kunye" were left on the wall. "Yin Susu asked, "Is that Fang Ping from the Emei sect?" Yu Lianzhou said, "No. The family name of the master is Fang, and the old hero Fang is the brother of the master." Zhang Cuishan and Yin Susu said "Oh" at the same time.) In fact, Mie Mie should respect Zhang Sanfeng very much. This can be seen from the gift given to Zhang Sanfeng on his birthday. This is the first point. The second point is that Yan Mie was not present at Zhang Sanfeng's birthday. Even if Miejie was present at Zhang Sanfeng's birthday to interrogate Zhang Cuishan about Xie Xun's whereabouts, who could blame her? Judging from the relationship network in the original work, even if Yan Yan did this, Zhang Sanfeng could not say anything. She, Yan Yan, had reason to be qualified to do so. But Mie Mie didn't. He just asked his disciples to prepare generous gifts. As for Xie Xun's whereabouts, he just said lightly, "Please inform Senior Brother Zhang about Xie Xun's whereabouts."

This book is actually very good at the beginning. Even those who have not read those works will find it interesting. However, later on it starts to suffer from the common problem of this kind of books, which is that it focuses too much on the portrayal of the original characters and strong personal preferences, while paying little attention to the actual protagonist. Not everyone likes those characters. They can be used as embellishments to the protagonist to extend the plot, but in recent chapters, these supporting characters have almost been treated as protagonists, which is putting the cart before the horse.

Generally speaking, this is the best chat group novel I've ever seen. It has an online IQ, and the personality of each character is preserved while being ridiculous. There will be no NT operations such as forcing the protagonist to laugh, kneel, and lick the protagonist. The most comfortable among the boss group leaders. He is decisive and pretends to be his true self but does not care about anything. He is friendly and persecutes the group members, but does not hurt others. He chooses to guide the group members to grow, but does not stand on the moral high ground to criticize him. He is quite mature, unlike the Abolition group leader who pretends to be persecuting the group members. The female group members accept every one they see, and the male group members are all dog slaves. The original heroine is not embarrassed, maybe because she is happy without seeing criticism, so the existence of the original heroine under the elements of comprehensive comics is very comfortable. The combat power is properly handled. There is no other novel that boasts about the combat power of the Demon Forbidden City. The setting is more carefully checked (the author Lao Te took the mystery~). The addition of our emperor is really eye-catching (the incarnation of Guangming Dao unshackles is outrageous) Of course, in the early stage, I really felt that there were too many dragon fan stories, but Lu Li is good at it, the little monster and the dead boy should be happy! (Satisfied). If there is a character to fight with in the future (the following is personal), I hope that no matter what, you will not step on Shidao. Anyone who has carefully watched the fight will know what kind of person Shi Lao is. Grandpa Shi has never been anti-human. He just saves things in his own way. Malice is like a snowball in the battle. Nothing can be solved with force. Grandpa Shi uses love and tenderness. Rou rescued the dying princess and brought him to the autistic Zodiac. Is he really a useless male protagonist? (Grandpa Shi's fighting ability is due to Grandpa Shi's busy "after-sales service". He serves more than ten people a day, studies homework, and usually requires psychological counseling when the elf is unhappy. Grandpa Shi is really just "just a passing high school student, remember it for me!") It's a rare good book. I hope the author won't be a eunuch, come on!

I gave up, I have no motivation to pursue it anymore 😐 From the previous update once a day to now every 3-4 days, I am really speechless😥 Rather than chasing the author eunuch or unable to continue writing, it is better to give up now, the update every 3-4 days is not much better than the eunuch

I have read quite a few chat group novels, and I think the one written by the author can be said to be one of the best. People are poor, so they can only subscribe to all of them to show their support. I hope the author can write better and better. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Hey, I was persuaded to quit by Dragon Clan. It was a good book, but it ended up being basically written about Dragon Clan, and the protagonist no longer has any sense of existence.

The author should go write a fanfic. It feels like the entire chat group boss and protagonist are just tools to make up for the regrets of the fanfic. This main plot should obviously be from the perspective of the protagonist, but it turns out that it is all from the perspective of each world. What is the use of this protagonist.

To be honest, a kind and righteous person cannot write death randomly. You can't be too like Luo Zhixiang in life, and you can't imitate Jiangnan in writing books😃

The author begged to see it, and strongly requested to add Darwin game, and other anime such as Honkai Impact, this is a game. . . . There are also other characters in anime. . Thanks here, no matter what you add, it's fine. You just want to change their tragedy. There are other novels, such as Lin Dong in Wu Dong. I want to see him pretending to be cool, and then hook up with Ling Qingzhu and destroy the Demon King's ascension to the great master. Hahaha, please write.

First, let me give you a sincere suggestion. Why don't the author change the title of the book and say it's a pan-dimensional chat group? I've seen more than 70 chapters but haven't seen the chat group come out a few times? What about the protagonist? The protagonist doesn't appear a few times. When I read the book, I saw that it's basically about Academy City and the Dragon Clan! ! ! Maybe the author likes Dragon Clan, but you can't lose the essence because of copyright issues. This is a dimensional chat group, not a Dragon Clan chat group, okay? Moreover, the novel "Dragon" is too niche. Nowadays, people basically read novels at a glance. They rarely search for novels they have never seen before, and they keep downplaying the plot of the protagonist. Otherwise, they just say a few words and then stop? What about the main plot? Maybe it will be better after it is put on the shelves, but it will dissuade a lot of readers in the early stage.

Luoxue's Promise

The writing is really good. Unlike other chat groups, someone finally writes other people's stories, which is very comfortable to read. When I put it on the shelves later, I will consider the cosplay of the little monster based on the situation, and use it as a support letter Two posts were swallowed It slipped away, Gu Gu Gu Gu Gu

Is this book finally broken? I have been following this book a long time ago. Of course, it is a small version and not a large version. It is difficult to explain a lot, but it is true. When the author asked questions on Zhihu, I was one of the first people to reply. I haven't finished it yet But I really like the dragon plot I really like it even though the main character is not, and it doesn't explain what I mean by Lu Mingfei But I still like it very much Although I haven't seen many plots since then, I've been keeping it up, but I've always kept it full and auto-subscribed. Now I see this happen more often. It's a bit of a pity The author is very talented, talented and capable I've seen many real geniuses who can become masterpieces with just one book. They are both talented and can grasp the gay points of the masses and can write accordingly It's like this author But many of them slowly start to lag behind in the second and third books. But I can rush directly from the 2nd and 3rd books to Wanding and to the well-known author I don't like it, and I really don't want the author to sink like this 0 My boss has been talking to you a lot before, maybe you have forgotten me, but it doesn't matter But as a college student, I hope that I really look forward to you writing online. Is thriving again, I hope you can become my goal and my idol My only idol before The Undersea Walker is also an ordinary person with no high education, no outstanding insights, no deep experience But still very powerful Of course there was an author named Lai Bed a long time ago But it's a pity The outline is gone, I can't accept this at all. Although he may have opened a new account now and written a new book, his performance is better than before, becoming Wanbingzuo, just one of your best of the year But I really, really don't like it. Although I ordered his new book before, I still didn't read it I drank some wine today, and between words Please be considerate if it is a bit inappropriate But,,,, maybe there is some relationship between the author's family. I seemed to have heard about lawsuits and the like before, so I didn't ask much on Zhihu, but I still hope to see you back again You can travel through the Dragon Clan fandom's comprehensive comic world I hope to see you back I have read a Naruto fan novel before... It's a pity that one of the authors is also a eunuch and I can't read it anymore. He created the world of Naruto. This book really made me love it, but my love disappeared in the end, . There is also a book about Naruto. I am really not the Uzumaki Naruto. It should be that name. It is pretty good. However, the author opened a new book and ended up with a eunuch, which made me very disappointed and sad. . . I am a reader and a semi-high-quality reader for the author. I will not make mindless comments or make boring comments. I can talk a little about life, talk about the author's heart, build relationships, and help the author find recommendations. I'm not bragging. I can really find a lot of recommendations now. But he is an author who can really be recognized by me . I have also written online novels, customized articles, buyout articles and even about gunmen My writing is not very good. I am a rubbish online novel author But as a reader I passed the test I said it very seriously I am very optimistic about the author's novels I hope Luoxue, you can cheer up quickly and come back soon I joined the group but haven't chatted for a long time I've been swimming in it for a long time But,,,, I don't know what I'm talking about anymore, but I hope you can come back. I hope I'm looking forward to seeing you in a novel. Whether it's Kirito from the dragon clan or What is it Blessings on this I hope you have a safe life, I hope your family is happy, I hope everything is fine, I hope you come back quickly... Thank you

An ideal situation

The building outside the Qingshan Tower outside the mountain, one update every day makes people sad, talking about evolving into more beasts, is pure nonsense! 😏 Good poetry, good poetry✌️

I took a look at the introduction and said nothing more - Jiangnan Old Thief! ! ! Give me back my little monster! ! !

I would like to make a suggestion, don't downplay the existence of the chat group too much. Things that happen in different worlds can be interspersed with writing. If you put things together for more than ten chapters at a time, it will give people the feeling that you are not writing about a chat group but about fan fiction. You can see from the comment area that this aspect is still a big problem. Others are very good. The Dragon Clan has brought back the feeling of not wanting to sleep after watching it in the middle of the night. ps: I want to be the first to be refined.

To be honest, Dragons is the novel I least want to read. It's more like trash than a protagonist.

Many people quit the Dragons movie because it was too long and the protagonist and chat group appeared too few times. I will give a unified reply to this question. It can only be said that the author is also very helpless. Because Dragon Clan does not have the copyright, it can only be written before it is put on the shelves, as the author has said. If I write it normally (the protagonist, the daily life of the chat group, and the member plots are interspersed, other books are basically written like this, and this book was also like this at the beginning.) I will make the length of the book too long, pushing the release time back, and I can only compress other content, and finish the dragon family first. After all, the author also needs to be careful, so please be more considerate. At least the author's writing is good, and the quality has not deteriorated because of the plot. Finally, the author added some details for me. I have never experienced the joy of being cummed.

I heard that women's clothing can help increase popularity... You know

Let's play Idiom Solitaire! Let me go first: the author is so short

I admit that Eri attracted me to it.

Unless some irresistible surprises occur, this book will be on the shelves this Friday 🌹🌹🌹 If you enjoy reading this book, please don't forget to vote for this book with your monthly votes. After all, newcomers with new books, what they need most is everyone's support. I believe that as long as everyone is willing to support the author, the author will repay everyone with the same high-quality works. Children's shoes who want to pursue investment, hurry up

When I saw the chapter where Dugu Qiu was defeated and forced Emperor Shitian to retreat, I didn't want to read it. It exaggerated Jin Yong's martial arts style too much. Fengyun and Jin Yong were completely the difference between immortals and martial arts. As Fengyun's mini-boss, how could Emperor Shitian be defeated by Dugu Qiu and become such a coward?

Your introduction is very familiar - Zhang Sanfeng transformed into a celestial being, his snowy hair turned into black hair...

I should probably be able to submit an Easter egg chapter

To be honest, the plot of the other book "Golden Finger Will Come When I Become Emperor" is basically the same. Does the author know?

Liuxing

To be honest, the author, you can make the protagonist a little stronger. You first praise the magic forbidden setting and then infinitely improve your own protagonist's setting. It's forced. Others at the multiverse level have full strength when they go to other universes, but when they go to yours, they gain world authority. Moreover, becoming a demon god is not something that can be achieved simply. Humans who meet special conditions must go through an astronomical amount of preparation work to accomplish this great deed. It is not possible to become a demon god by learning all the magic. Instead, those who will inevitably become demon gods must be demon gods. Those who cannot become demon gods will never become demon gods.

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