Immortal Armor

I borrowed some settings from the God of Death. The settings and ideas in the book are very good. The characterization and plot are extremely exciting. The protagonist is a hot-blooded anime protagonist. The plot can be said to be the same as it was twenty years ago.

Why does this kind of mess have to be titled as a cultivator?

Passers-by, please read the comments section first and then read the book. Advantages, as mentioned in the comment area, the setting is indeed very novel and imaginative, and it incorporates many other elements.        ，，，18， I felt like I had no beginning and no end. I jumped in midway and picked a few random pictures to read. The characters talked to each other all the time. In summary, it was poor readability, not smooth, and incoherent.               ，，，， I feel this way in many ways. I talk half of it but not half of it, and I force myself to hold back my panic. Then I can't put it together because I only say half of it, so the readability becomes worse, incoherent, and fluent.               ，，，，，，，，，， There is a difference, I hope you can understand

The protagonist is new to cultivating immortals, and he kills enemies across two realms as soon as he starts practicing? , I don't want to be a person who has just practiced Qi and killed a Jindan-level boss head-on. This is bullshit, and the protagonist has been gambling with his life, and a weakling has been running into dangers that he cannot bear.

As soon as I read the introduction, I knew it was a random fabrication by a young man who was severely beaten by society and blamed others.

A wave of support, and I wish fellow Taoists to realize the Tao as soon as possible! I recommend "Tao Heart Eternal", and I hope all fellow Taoists can give me some advice!

I didn't expect it. I thought I just started writing it at first. Now there are more than dozens of chapters. I feel pretty good after reading the beginning. I don't know what the rest of the writing will be like. I'll save it first.

Hahaha, come on, I am also pursuing reading in single digits. The book was released on the same day as you, and I insist on getting it in full.

Please give me some pointers to my book. The updates are super strong and I don't want to be irritated.

Please support me if you come from Tieba 😏

I was disappointed after reading Chapter 10. Do you have to write about a woman? This middle-aged Taoist is better than a woman. He is still a little kid. Is it going to be written as a heroine later? I don't understand.