Tokyo Affectionate Legend

After reading the author's remarks on the release, I found that the perception of Soul Traveler is indeed not as good as that of Reborn, because this will make readers more confused and depressed, that is, whether the maid and childhood sweetheart's love for the protagonist is towards the original person or the Soul Traveler. As for the author saying that the main plot in the early stage is unclear and requires an urgent crisis, I personally don't think it is necessary. I came to read the love story, which is the story of the protagonist falling in love. A lighter and more cheerful writing style is a plus for me. Also, I also like happy endings. ( ﹡ˆOˆ﹡ )

The author's writing style is really great. Good job. Come on.

If the male protagonist wants to have a harem, he still has to work hard in literature. If he becomes a great writer, he can have as many as he wants. Japanese society is very tolerant of these great writers.

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Crossroads appear every few chapters, and the red light turns green. If I were really asked to follow the reading comprehension, I can appreciate some of the artistic conception, but I really don't know what the meaning is of repeating it dozens of times.

The recent two pictures are completely Chinese-style family descriptions. The words and actions of the characters' parents gave me a strong sense of separation. It feels like chatting with the author. On the surface, it is a Japanese light novel, but in fact it is an authentic Chinese online novel with a Japanese background.

To sum up the comment in four words: as plain as water

It feels weird to read it. Although it is a harem, it is written very much like pure love. The protagonist does not feel like a harem now. He is a strict person (I can't say, he is a more serious kind). He has obviously met the parents and confirmed that the relationship between the unmarried couple is still related to another woman. (It's related.) The relationship is that the other female protagonists are currently not showing off, but Shiori already knows that she is pursuing the male protagonist. In this case, she should clearly refuse) It feels to me that it does not match the protagonist's setting (a special situation, Rinne's parents also know and agree, there is nothing to say about this) (Purely personal understanding and opinion, see Just watch it, don't comment if you don't like it) There is also Shiori, who knows that the protagonist has a fiancée and still pursues the protagonist (the background is modern, monogamy should not be a problem, the protagonist is modern, travels through the island country, and should have the concept of monogamy in his mind) (According to the author, Shiori is a person who does not bump into the wall. Looking back, the fact that the protagonist already has a fiancée can be regarded as telling you that there is no chance. He has already established a relationship with someone else, and it is almost time to stop or continue pursuing.) I don't know what to say about this. Some people will say that pursuing true love is right, just don't give up, but you can say that you are engaged and you have met your parents. Some people will say that this is a harem, and this is correct for the sake of plot development. (I said this because it felt a little wrong after watching it. The harem really doesn't feel that way. It's awkward. How about the author write pure love in a big way.) What I said above is that in a virtual world, the author can set it up how he likes, and write it how he wants. Treat it as if I didn't say it.

The overall story is relatively sweet, with no big ups and downs, no flashpoints, but there are obviously many problems, which is a pity 1. The heroines' personalities are not distinctive enough, or there are no important events to highlight their personalities. After watching it, I feel that the heroines are all based on the same template, and they are not very impressive. 2. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is too sketchy, and details such as love are too important. I think it's okay to jump in time, but every meeting between the important heroine and the hero cannot be skipped. This can directly reflect the progress of their relationship. This kind of portrayal is really important. 3. Too little pulling. This is also a manifestation of the second problem. They do look good together, but many times, they look best when pulled together. For example, Rinne, as Qingmei, originally had a lot of past memories to write about, but the setting of the time travel at the beginning made it not so easy to write, and it was easy to cause controversy. For example, Miao, Miao could actually write more about her grandmother. In the process of taking care of her, she used it as an emotional breakthrough, but in the end, no such person was found. Another example is the senior sister. The senior sister actually has a bit of personality, but she is not portrayed in more depth. 4. The male protagonist is poorly portrayed and not attractive enough, which is mainly reflected in the fact that the male protagonist has too few psychological activities. A good male protagonist determines the upper limit of a movie. This saying is really practical sometimes. I won't list other details one by one. The overall feeling is that it is a pity

The plot is a bit weird. . Toshiro Na's request for a meal is really strange because of a human accident. Normal people would not make such a request. It is too unreasonable and the plot arrangement is too weird. In fact, it is not impossible to add some plot, for example, a meal while bringing a thank-you gift, and another meal or two for other things to communicate more, and then the male protagonist sees that this person really does not take care of his own living and eating habits, which is a bit bad, and makes this suggestion. In short, Toshiro Nagashi is not a child. He was a drunkard when they first met. After eating a meal and finding it delicious, he asked to eat together. It is strange. Can people really be so shameless? . .

The male protagonist is very rational and a perfect gentleman. The female protagonists take the initiative to pursue the male protagonist. The male protagonist has no emotion at all. It is purely destiny and coincidence that passively attracts the female protagonists. If he does not actively pursue the heroine, it seems that it does not matter if the female protagonist runs away, but destiny designs various coincidences to prevent the female protagonists from running away. Is Shirou Emiya a completely unemotional and perfectly rational tool?

The writing is good, but the plot is too typical. You can already tell the ending just by looking at the beginning, and

I haven't seen this kind of fairy grass for a long time 🌹

How should I describe my feelings about this book... [Like sitting in front of a birch table in a winter afternoon, staring at the white steam rising from the hot coffee] [Like thinking about something in front of the orange lamp in a dark room in the moderate rain] [Like cicadas chirping melodiously in the middle of the night, walking casually on the green avenue and humming casually] [No need to bother, no need to get entangled] [Just keep walking] [Just keep walking]

I came across this book by accident. I just finished reading Chapter 126 after reading it for a day. Overall, I give it a thumbs up! 1 As for the writer's confusion at the beginning, I don't think so. The negative impact of time travel is that we cannot describe too many stories about our childhood because the characters are split. Coming back after rebirth implies that these young ladies once had other paths, besides being maids. According to the writer's style of writing, this would have a huge impact. From my personal point of view, the current way of writing is better and more comfortable to read. 2 Since the activation of various skills is triggered by real events. When you are sure that two or more people are girlfriends, trigger Neptune. In this way, when Neptune reaches lv7, it feels like 6 is not 6. 3 By describing traffic lights many times, does it mean that choice is important? As for the final ending, if the harem didn't live together, where would they go to sleep every day, and the direction of accommodation would be decided by the traffic lights at the intersection, wouldn't it be a mistake? ! !

I saw more than 120 chapters. The protagonist went to make music and copied books for so long. The treatment given by the boss of the library at that time was really in vain. At least he wrote two subplots of copying books😱

It's okay. It's quite bland and suitable for a specific two-dimensional world. Others may not be very interested in this book.

It's a masterpiece on the same subject, but there's still a long way to go. The advantage is that the writing is not a drag, and the character development is okay. The shortcomings are also obvious. The plot is too formulaic, and many of them are completely the same routines commonly used in ancient idol dramas... Also, sometimes the dialogue styles of some characters feel a bit inappropriate. For example, when the Beiyuan couple speak, some of their words are completely different from those of their grade... It would be better if there were less dialogue, but if there are more dialogues, it will be very dramatic...

Several of them are so similar that they are often confused.

This book is really good. It should be the best love harem novel I've read this year. It's a bit bland at the beginning, but once the fiancée takes the initiative, it starts to get interesting. She keeps sending out sweets. It's great. It has a kind of plain, soothing feeling.

Going to the beach, shouldn't the male protagonist's figure be a highlight? Why didn't it say, look at the male model's figure in reality.

What suddenly occurred to me was that the author was coming to an end. Recently, I saw several authors that I have read before. The previous books were all about Japanese youth or about modern cities. The Shura field part is regarded as writing practice. The next book will have a martial arts or fantasy skin, and there won't be too many battle descriptions. As a result, the heroine's effects are good, and the results are acceptable. So, try not to write two books in the same genre in a row, as it is easy to get lost. Just personal advice, I won't be held responsible for anything that goes wrong.

Where are the fan fictions written by the author in the past? I want to go read it. 🙂

Great~

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It's great. I've already ordered all of it. Good luck to the author.

Don't end it so soon, please

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