Pirates: Starting from the Demon King of Uta

In the first chapter, I saw the author saying that the protagonist was mentally ill. I was curious and read a few more chapters. But as I continued reading, I felt that it was really difficult for ordinary readers to accept this type of story. Because the main character is pure wisdom. Generally speaking of protagonists with mental problems, DC Joker is the most classic, that is, there is a set of logic of his own under the crazy surface. Many classic characters have references, such as some mentally ill protagonists, Zhu Jue and Feng Bujue. Or he acts very extreme, feels stimulated, is yandere-loving, and various facial expressions such as classic Malick, Crazy Gambling, and Fire Fist are all contributions of this type of character. Although it is extreme, it is understandable. The protagonist of this book takes a different approach. This mental problem actually refers to mental retardation! That is, people who have no ability to think. The kind who can compete with Whitebeard II to become the leader of the Pirate King's Retarded Bar. It feels like the characters are not established at all. Maybe the author thinks this kind of protagonist is too cool, or there is some design in the plot, but I just think this setting is idiotic, and the protagonist is even more idiotic. I can only say that I really can't understand it.

When I saw in Chapter 137 that the three generals were planning to go out together to capture the protagonist, I had a black question mark on my face. If the three generals could go out together, why would there be four emperors? I don't want it.

I just read the first few chapters, and the protagonist said too many weird things. He doesn't communicate with others and doesn't describe his inner activities. He just talks to himself. It looks like he has a mental problem.

Halfway through the book, the subject matter is good, but the protagonist is too stupid. I don't know if the author is more stupid or crazy. The protagonist is currently a giant baby except for his combat power. Everything depends on Uta. So this book recommends that the narrative protagonist be given to Uta. After all, relying on a giant baby with powerful combat power to become the king of the world is not bad. But if you want to highlight the madness, let the protagonist have his own thinking. Don't write about a giant baby. I think many of the people who come to watch it are for the female protagonist. A stupid protagonist is boring. If you write it, I suggest you stick to the yandere side. Uta is the protagonist's only redeeming character. You can write the protagonist's mental illness as a character flaw and get closer to the yandere side. There are many types of yandere that can be written, and the way to write yandere is very popular in both male and female videos.

Author: What you wrote is not at all (Uta). Although Uta is a little arrogant, he is very kind at heart and has never looked down on anyone. Anyone who has watched the red-haired singer will not think that you are writing about Uta. Also, I don't know why you added Robin's mother. One archaeologist is enough. What's the point of two? Doctor Jarrow is the best, but a centenarian is included? Can't the crew choose?

The protagonist's madness is not well grasped. Sometimes he becomes Whitebeard II. Sometimes it feels like it would be better to kick the protagonist and replace him with a suitable protagonist to be with Uta. The protagonist's feelings for Uta are not well grasped by the author. Sometimes it makes people feel that the protagonist likes Uta because he does not have enough brain capacity. This love is too bad.

Every time he dies instantaneously, he may not even have time to feel pain. Isn't this crazy if he is not tortured? It's normal to be crazy, but you're so silly and so silly. Isn't this just silly? Is the protagonist a smooth, dull, drooling, giggling persona?

By the way, I suddenly like this male protagonist a little bit, maybe it's because I like him. Although this guy is mentally retarded, he has a conscience, is not lewd, and is loyal. The most important thing is that it has made a difference. I no longer have any interest in those unfaithful protagonists who are almost the author himself, looking for women everywhere, with crazy soaring combat power, invincible, having fun everywhere, and killing and killing. Doesn't anyone find this kind of thing boring?

Can you become the Pirate King by following the path that Luffy has walked? Please be patient, author! If you write like this, you might as well read the original work and ask the author to come up with something original and create some fresh island adventures, okay?

Protagonist=Whitebeard II, run away

It's good at the beginning, but the story behind it is boring. The protagonist has always been a rz. There is really nothing to see. Apart from fighting, he has no sense of existence. It is not worth spending money to order later.

One chapter a day is really not enough. How about two updates a day 😏

Like a fool, you don't think it's humorous to write like this, do you?

It's too toxic. After ten chapters, the protagonist is completely mentally retarded. It would be interesting if he was crazy, but it is completely written with a mental retard. Is there really a normal person who can read it?

The author doesn't want the protagonist to return to normal. If he returns to normal, the book will be useless. Now this feels good.

Was this written by someone?

Asking for more refinement

There is no humanity left in the writing. Remember that you are just an individual. You have always emphasized that we are pirates and not just navy. Can we help you establish your three views? Ah?

To be honest, this opening is very amazing. The protagonist has the fruits of time that are rarely written about in fan fiction. Because Uta went berserk and was killed countless times, his soul collapsed. In the end, he ended up with Uta again. It can be said to be sad and sweet at the same time. But after walking for a while, I found that the protagonist's brain is really troublesome, but it is understandable. When I saw the protagonist regaining his sanity briefly, I really looked forward to the protagonist's complete recovery later. I thought I would have to wait until Shishi's fruit awakened. As a result, after waiting and waiting, the protagonist has become the Five Emperors, and the fruit has not yet awakened. I don't even know if the protagonist can return to normal after the fruit awakens (after all, this is my guess). Looking at it now, I feel really tired. I used to order every chapter, but now I'm jumping in to order it. Summary (save): The protagonist is currently Whitebeard II, and Uta is Ba Jin. Just watch it if you can accept it.

The most ideal pirate crew: Ace Enero (thunder fire) Golden Lion Fujitora (light and heavy) Barrett Waldo (destruction) Black Carbon Orochi Katrin (phantom beast species Yamata no Orochi Kyuubi, this qualification is really weakened) Golden Emperor (finance) Red Earl (butler) baby5 (maid) Kong Ming (strategist) Shiliu (swordsman) Zuoyina Daski (Twin swordsmen are optional) Vegapunk (researcher) Uta (musician) Captain Cavendish (the most handsome pirate) It's not too much to give a twin fruit, such as an angel... A fallen angel or an angel... A demon, corresponding to the first and second personalities) From the crew to the captain, there is no one weak (high potential) As for White Star (vase is optional) If you don't build a ship, go directly to Pluto. The main story line is to see the scenery. Recruiting crew members (by the way, One Piece's map is really big and the scenery is not so good), but not many authors have this kind of artistic conception (either when fighting monsters or on the way to fight monsters). It ruins the scenery... It's not good to sit down and take a rest once in a while.

It feels like there is no purpose! There is no substitution at all. The protagonist has always been a fool with no personal thoughts. It was nothing at first, but it got really boring if it kept like this. It slipped away.

Luffy is usually as stupid as a fool, but when fighting in a team fight or in a crisis, he is as wise as a fool. The protagonist in this book is equal to a retarded

What other novels are there about the heroine Uta, dear adoptive fathers?

To be honest, it's a pretty good book. Except for the evil general, this one is really good. There is also a fan of a beautiful swordsman who eats meat, which is also good

The protagonist still feels that he has not grown much and is still stupid and has no independent opinion. When I read it, I always feel that the protagonist, the Pirates, is the preferred one, but the plot always proves that it is not the case. Is this positioning too repetitive? If you want to write a dark style, it seems wrong, I can only say that it is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it.

Where is the report? I reported him and it looked uncomfortable.

To be honest, I regret booking it. But the last monthly ticket is encouraging. Actually it's well written

"One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks" If you are short on books, you can read this book. It is a very interesting and novel pirate fanfic. This book stretches the timeline to before Rocks attacks the Valley of the Gods. The protagonist Li Yuan has his own domineering body-tempering secret "Sword God Body Tempering Art". Rise up in the Rocks Pirates, become a cadre, and plunder the property of the Celestial Dragons in the Valley of Gods. After the Battle of the Valley of the Gods, participate in the New World Hegemony and occupy Wano Country. Become the world's greatest swordsman and dominate the new world with Whitebeard and others. The protagonist has four children, Stephens-Gane, Wei Zhuang, Esdeath, and Chi Tong. They are all great swordsmen, competing with Hawkeye and Red Hair...

A joyful and heart-warming story that ends with flowers

The ending doesn't feel very good. The protagonist keeps reincarnating in order to be with Uta for "eternity", and his sanity has been distorted and worn out. The ending still continues to reincarnate. It feels really bad like this. Problems have to be solved. Since Uta can't bear the wear and tear of cognition and reason brought by longevity, and since the protagonist wants to be with Uta all the time, then he might as well turn the pirate world into a fantasy world. The devil fruits in this book are so interesting. A fruit of time can make the protagonist develop into a god of time, and a rubber fruit can make Nika develop into a sun god. They have become "natural" that cannot die. So it is okay for the protagonist to do something in reincarnation. In countless reincarnations, he can always find a way to go on without restarting the world. It feels like the protagonist never changes anything, but simply restarts the world to achieve the achievement of being together with Uta forever, which will eventually turn the protagonist into a monster. Ordinary people cannot bear the power of time, so make Uta no longer ordinary; the world between two people is too monotonous, then make the world wonderful. After all, the protagonist has that ability, and the world has that potential, right? The author will add a wonderful extra story about getting rid of reincarnation, breaking destiny, allowing everyone to achieve happiness and achieve "eternity"!