Azeroth: Elven Eternity

There are a lot of private goods and two designs. The most important thing is that the protagonist is an indigenous person. Okay, this book is half done.

Although Warcraft is a game, you are writing about a world. Don't add too many game terms in the book, especially if it appears in the mouths of the aborigines, otherwise it will look very inconsistent. Especially the battle scenes are written as if they are playing a game and fighting in a group. It's like xxx, quick play. Xxx. In addition, the mages in WoW are all arcane. Frost and fire are controlled by arcane. The talent points are just for the sake of game balance.

It feels like the continent you created is a toilet seat

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 190. If time travel can't change history, then why should I read you? I might as well not read the official chronicle of the novel!                                                                                                                                                                                                                     except for the dozens of chapters at the beginning that you can read, and the rest is just watering down, and the protagonist is just a decoration.

The content is okay, but there are a lot of typos, and the punctuation and sentence fragmentation are strange, which affects reading...

Also, I remember that the lifespan of a demigod is not eternal, right? Whether it is T0 demigod or T4 demigod. Then the problem comes, then the problem comes, the male protagonist has become a demigod. Why still give blessings?

The main character hasn't appeared in many chapters. One chapter a day is slower. I haven't seen the protagonist for more than half a month. Do you think we still remember the protagonist's name?

This name was obtained. Eternal elf? A spirit lives forever. Forever 😁

Is there a shaman among the elves? Since you want to use someone else's background, don't make it up. Are you planning to develop another 72 variant?

If your own territory is not well developed, why are you running around?