Ring of Fate

The Ring of Fate has now been updated to the second volume - Chapter 32. The paths of the outer gods currently appearing include but are not limited to the Ring of Fate, the Fallen Mother Goddess, and the Mother Tree of Desire - However, at least 4 of the known outer gods actually appeared in the first volume, either directly or indirectly! Appearances here refer to those that have clearly demonstrated the abilities of one or more Outer God paths, and these abilities can all correspond to the current content of the Circle of Fate. Next, I will show you several alien gods whose abilities can be glimpsed in more detail in the first part. Among them, "The Declined King" is one of the alien gods whose more specific abilities can be glimpsed before appearing directly in the second part. Once again, I am impressed by the meticulousness of Squid's settings. Finally: The main purpose of this post is to show all the suspected powers of the alien god that appeared in the first part, and will provide appropriate supporting evidence. If there are any deficiencies, the information provided by the squid shall prevail ——The Decline King: Although the Mother's Day event in this post is not directly related to this alien god, I decided to list it first. Because although the Decline King is still relatively unfamiliar to you, it has already shown specific abilities, and it will surely bring you a novel or new understanding. ① The Corpse Incident in Conston City: ——Involving abilities: creating living corpses (but possessing the characteristics of a corpse giant), restricting movement, suppressing extraordinary characteristics (making extraordinary abilities unusable) The content quoted first comes from Chapter 30 of the Hanged Man in Volume 7 of Mystery 1, a occult case that Xiaoke came into contact with after coming to Conston City during his period as a Miracle Master. To put it simply, the cause of the incident was that room 403 of an apartment was reported to have a foul smell, while room 303 downstairs reported that heavy footsteps could be heard from time to time. Red Glove Eric, who was promoted to Sequence 5 during the war, took over this case, leading his team and carrying a level 1 sealed artifact. Before that, this incident had been investigated by officials at two levels. First it was the police in the corresponding area. They went to Room 403, but unfortunately they never came out. Then they came to the two night watchmen, but they had the same result. When Eric the Red Glove came, he was very cautious as he had witnessed two generations of battles and deaths in the line of duty. He first used a natural spirit that could share his vision to conduct investigation, but at this moment his pupils were bloodshot and the door of Room 403 suddenly opened ——At this moment, what the Red Gloves team saw was At this time, the skillful and cautious Red Gloves captain was preparing to use the ability of "forcibly pulling people into dreams" to drag the living corpses in front of them into dreams, and the first ability of the Declined King was revealed. ——The Red Gloves team's other abilities such as falling into dreams are missing! In addition to suppressing extraordinary abilities, the second ability shown in the above article is the restriction of physical mobility, also due to "decline" In desperation, the Red Gloves team several Almost completely losing the ability to resist, Klein, who had become a Miracle Master at this time, stepped forward and slammed the door shut. After communicating with the team, he summoned the sealed object corresponding to the "Darkless One" and belonging to the vampire clan from the historical projection to purify the internal situation. ↑Kline's speculation on the effect of the internal situation as an angel, and the purification of Room 403 At the same time, based on these performances, we can deduce that the extraordinary abilities of the "Decaying King" involved in this incident most likely correspond to the saint level. This is a simple logical relationship. Spirit wizards belonging to Sequence 5 have no resistance at all in the face of this strange phenomenon. Complete crushing situations rarely occur between the same levels. Even if they control the thread of the spirit body, there is still room for the target to break free. When dealing with this matter, both the church and Xiao Ke's judgment was to choose the Level 1 Sun Path Sealed Artifact. The Level 1 Sealed Artifact usually corresponds to the Saint (Sequence 4-3) level. At the same time, Xiaoke, as an angel, can appear and close the door under the influence of internal conditions, so the answer is self-evident. Despite this, the Decline King's performance in this mysterious incident is not over yet. When Xiao Ke and the Red Gloves team went deep into the internal investigation, Xiao Ke found the astronomical telescope that belonged to the source of the incident and took a closer look. ——Thus, something that may be a symbol of the declining king suddenly appeared: ↑Klein's historical projection exploded after seeing the rotten eyes At the same time, we can also find that, with 40 The penetration power of the 3 rooms is different. The things seen through the astronomical telescope are of extremely high level, and can instantly eliminate the historical projections corresponding to the Miracle Master In a similar scene, when Amon faced the historical projections of many angels pulled by Klein, even this angel King, indeed used various extraordinary abilities to deal with it for a certain period of time ↑The whole incident and the celestial body training meeting Xiao Ke's self-report later is as follows: After the fall of the "God of War", the shaky original barrier lost one Partial support, and the "Night Goddess" has not yet fully grasped the corresponding "uniqueness". As for becoming the "Old Day", I don't know how long we have to wait. In this case, the erosion of the world by the outer gods will naturally deepen, which is combined with the war trauma that occurs to a large number of ordinary people. Klein suspects that during the period of post-war reconstruction, many cult organizations pointing to the "starry sky" and different outer gods have quietly appeared in various places in Loen. If they are allowed to develop followers and make various high-risk attempts, the end will definitely be brought forward. At the same time, in [Volume 8, Chapter 14 Tributary], Xiao Keyou mentioned this incident again in the narration, and clearly mentioned "outer gods" and "supernormal failure" ② The sealed object "Rotten Meteor" held by Hwin In Audrey's "promotion material", during the battle between a certain former Mr. "Arrogance" and Gehrman, he once showed a material that came from the "starry sky" and was an extremely dangerous sealed object From now on, due to the similarity in performance, it is not difficult for us to speculate that it is another manifestation of the extraordinary ability of the "Decaying King". At the same time, given that the negative effects of extraordinary items sometimes correspond to an extraordinary ability, the Declined King may also have the ability to partially establish contact with pollution (only speculation, taking into account that it exerts remote effects through telescopes), and the damage it causes can make spirits not immune. ↑The "Rotten Meteor" effect, from Chapter 106 of Volume 5, "Three Against One" ——Fallen Mother Goddess (Primordial Moon): Similar to the situation of the Declined King, the ability of the Fallen Mother Goddess actually appeared in the first volume. If we are based on the content of the Circle of Fate, it is not difficult to find that a certain part of "Mrs. Night's" ability involves the field of plants. In the first volume, plants such as wheat ears under the crib are one of the manifestations In Mystery 1, I can only characterize it as suspected, similar contents The appearance appeared in Windsor, the original moon believer whom Emlyn killed for the first time: ↑The appearance of Windsor, the original moon believer, and Emlyn was wary of the extraordinary properties extracted from him, and decided to let Russ Bathory be handed over to Bainis Other than that In addition, the appearance of the Fallen Mother Goddess's abilities in Mystery 1 can be considered numerous, the various visions on the island where Roselle's final mausoleum is located, and the other content involving "pregnancy". Judging from the current performance of the Ring of Fate, they all belong to some kind of reflection Because the similar content is numerous and complicated, we will not list it in a centralized manner. At the same time, it should be noted that there is a clear difference between "reproduction" and "desire". This is the difference between the two outer gods, the Fallen Mother Goddess and the Desire Mother Tree. Although the latter sometimes shows reproduction, according to Xiao Ke's guess, this may be a manifestation of the Desire Mother Tree also possessing part of the power of the moon. ——Mother Tree of Desire: Judging from the performance of a special weird creature in the latest chapter of Circle of Fate, one of the items in Mystery 1 is suspected to be an "extraordinary object", or an extraordinary item made from certain spiritual materials with a certain shelf life. It is very similar to the ability of this "weird creature" in the latest chapter of Circle of Fate. It comes from a chapter that is extremely familiar to many readers, that is, Xiao Ke disguised himself as Admiral Aimilius and encountered extraordinary events involving the anomaly of the "Mother Tree of Desire" that night. ↑Part of the effects of the "Reproduction Necklace". In addition, the leader of the Celestial Sect also admitted that the necklace can release pollution, so that men who have sex with the wearer and successfully conceive children will be polluted This will cause the target to become a believer and favored person of the "Mother Tree of Desire" At the same time, through the keyword "dust", we can also speculate that this effect may not be directly related to the devil's path (not Considering the exclusive abilities of different demons), it is very consistent with the performance of the "weird creature" in the plant field in the latest chapter ——Primal Hunger: Due to starting point restrictions, the number of pictures in one post cannot exceed ten chapters, so the following content will reduce the number of quotations from the original text and only briefly describe all aspects Compared with the three outer gods above, "Primal Hunger" embodies relatively less content. Specifically, this involves the "Box of the Old Days", the sealed item of the Abraham family that we are all familiar with. In Botis's first official appearance, the description of the squid mentioned this sentence. "After approaching Botis, Kesma's ears vaguely heard bursts of illusory chewing, gnawing, and digestion sounds from unknown sources, feeling some undisguised malice and hunger." According to the "raw materials" of the Box of the Past, the silent death of an Abrahamic angel who loved star travel, the characteristics of the sealed object itself, and even the tragic situation of Botis with only his eyes left in the end. We can speculate that this phenomenon may correspond to some characteristics of "primordial hunger". Considering that squids often mention certain core characteristics of the pathway in their ability descriptions, such as "chewing" and "hungry" in the above content, this guess should not be too far from reality. However, based on these descriptions, we are far from being able to know the corresponding abilities as clearly as the three outer gods mentioned before, so they can only be used as a reference. ——Uncertain Fog: The ability of the Uncertain Fog mainly appears in "Extra: The Daily Life of an Ordinary Person". Because this extra is longer than this post, there may be many details worth discussing, so I will not go into details. Anyone who is interested can read the corresponding content Here are only two similar expressions listed in the form of text to declare the end of this post ——Excerpt from "Extra: The Daily Life of an Ordinary Person" Just when Barton was about to propose calling the police again, Pacheco suddenly bent down and picked up a white, soft hair from the gap at the bottom of the door. No, these are not hairs, they are closer to the condensation of mist. With the touch of Pacheco's fingers, they spread and blended into the surrounding air. At the same time, Barton, whose inspiration was slightly different from ordinary people, vaguely heard a faint and faint male voice "Tamara... Tamara..." While speaking, Vernal threw out a glass bottle with a thin neck. This glass bottle seems to be very strong. Even if it fell to the ground and hit rocks, it was not damaged at all. And its interior is filled with pale, thin, almost illusory mist. After a moment, the pale gas shrank in one direction, smelling of blood, forming a silhouette. This figure's upper body is normal, with an iconic red nose. He is none other than the archaeologist Vernal. And his lower body was completely made of gas, like a monster drawn by smoke. ——High-dimensional Overlooker (Updated on April 9, 24): The ability of the High-dimensional Overlooker (contamination to be precise) is mainly reflected in the level 0 sealed object "Scroll of God" that appeared in Mystery 1. As one of Abraham's Level 0 Sealed Artifacts (taking into account the dangerous nature of planeswalker star travel itself), the Scroll of God clearly shows an ability that does not belong to the door path, that is, the content of the painting changes from two-dimensional to three-dimensional [Dimension Upgrade]. The original content is as follows: "If no one is watching this oil painting and no one appreciates it, then the people in it will Things will come alive, stretch out their hands from the oil painting, and enter the real world bit by bit. You must pay attention to this when sealing! "Once, when a branch of my family kept this 'Scroll of God', there was an error. No one appreciated it for a full minute. At that time, it showed a picture of angels surrounding a god. Then, the god became alive and walked out of the oil painting. " From the perspective of Mystery 1, this form of expression may also be understood as a way to seal certain things, and the so-called "walking out of the oil painting" actually corresponds to unsealing. But it is difficult to imagine a god in the painting (even if it is just an angel) It can be sealed for such a long time without losing control, and there is no countermeasures. On the contrary, there is a precedent for the "Box of the Old Days". It is indeed possible that the Scroll of God corresponds to the pollution of the high-dimensional overlooker, and its manifestation form of [Dimension Ascension] is indeed real. Can correspond to the high-dimensional overlooking person. At the same time, in the subsequent chapters of Suhuan involving the [high-dimensional overlooking person], Cuttlefish clearly asked Forsi to mention the picture scroll of God and the connection between them, which is an official statement, but the "god in the picture" The specific whereabouts are not yet clear (Note: In fact, when the "Secret Peeping Glasses", which is also an item in the path, first appeared, I had already sent a conjecture about the relationship between the God's Picture Scroll and the High-dimensional Overlooker in the corresponding chapter, and received hot comments. Follow-up. The guess that it belongs to a real squid hammer is correct) ——The Everlasting Rumblings (updated on April 9, 24, undetermined): Mystery 1 corresponds to the item "Revere's Desperate Scream" for the outer god, for the following reasons The following points: 1. This item is the product of a certain evil god's sacrifice, and the squid does not clearly indicate which evil god it belongs to (and the number of named evil gods in Mystery 1 is actually limited) 2. Under normal circumstances, the number of magical items Ability usually corresponds to an extraordinary path, and the specific effect of this item's ability is similar to [The Hanged Man Path], but there are obvious differences, and the characteristics of "infinite bullets" are actually consistent with the concept of "Unextinguished" 3. According to the world of Squid in Suhuan. Observation supplement, outer gods can actually exert influence on the barrier in the fourth era, and the timeline of the item "Evil God Sacrifice" is correct 4. This item belongs to Mystery 1 Qonas Kilgor (Sequence 4 Corrupted Earl), and it can also have an effect on saints. , It can be inferred that it belongs to at least the mid-sequence level. Original content: "Qonas Kilger also owns a strange pistol, which originated from a mutation in a certain evil god sacrifice event, called 'Revere's Scream of Despair'... It. It can be fired without bullets, and each shot has great power... It can fire continuously and rapidly, like a shrunken machine gun... The target hit by it will also endure Revere's desperate scream before death, and will appear in different states such as pain, dizziness, and confusion... "The biggest problem with this pistol is that its owner will also hear the desperate roar, just less frequently. (Note: However, because this conjecture does not have much solid evidence compared to other alien gods, it is only a guess for the time being. I would like to list it out. I also mentioned this speculation in the relevant chapter of Suhuan [Eternal Ramblings]) ——Epilogue: From Fateful Circle to now, Mystery 2 has appeared many abilities of the outer god path. According to the above These contents will surely give you a glimpse of the abilities that will appear in the future When Mystery 2 is completely over, as the author of the Lord of Mystery running group rule book, we will also promptly launch the new "gift" system about Mystery 2, as well as the Outer Gods Independent expansion of path content For book friends who want to actually enter the world of the Lord of Mysteries as a character and experience extraordinary stories like Klein or Lumian, you can see this account introduction for details, or check this account history Posted by history, join us after understanding the corresponding content The rules are written by myself alone, but I try to be the most comprehensive and complete as possible. I will also publish more popular science posts from time to time If there is any other relevant content If you want to know, you are welcome to provide suggestions or discussions. I will reply in time Thank you for reading I hope you can give me more support. It is not easy to create something twice, and it is not easy to write. As long as everyone can read it comfortably and experience it happily, it will be the greatest help.

Because I wanted to gain weight + I heard that Suhuan had a bad reputation, I put off watching Suhuan. A few days ago, I finished the audio version 3 of Secret 1 and I couldn't hold it in anymore. I watched Suhuan in the past two days. I have just finished watching the second part. The experience is very good and it feels as exciting as ever. But I also saw the quarrels and chaos in the book review section at the end of the second part, which is comparable to the review section of Mijia Games I can only say: when reading a novel, you only need to read what the author shows. Try to follow the author's ideas instead of expecting the author to show what you want to see It's like making an appointment with an artist. You can only hope that the artist's drawings will be worth the money. And you cannot expect the painter to completely draw the picture in your mind. This is not a matter of unrealism, it is impossible Creation, whether it is words, drawings or anything else, can only show what the author thought of, what he felt good at the moment of creation. As a reader and viewer, you should only look at what is shown, and you can only speculate on the author's thoughts. But I see that too many people read novels with other mentality, and I feel very disappointed. After all, I like to listen to books while working because of my work. I haven't heard a hundred of them. Mysterious One can beat 99% of the novels I have read. Suhuan may not be as good as Mysterious One, so let's give it 98%. I am very satisfied.

The second part of The Secret is finally here! After reading the title and introduction of the new book, everyone is wondering, is there any information? Urgent, urgent, urgent! ! ! So I looked through Secret 1 and the following is the relevant known information! Praise the Fool! 🧐🧐🧐🧐 The origin of the title of the new book "The Circle of Destiny"! The setting of Secret No. 1 In 1368!

Personally, I think the biggest structural problem is that Squid is too deliberate in throwing out puzzles and solving puzzles, destroying the independence and integrity of the story. The most obvious one is the 16 questions raised in the report chapter. I personally don't like this model. The good thing about the first volume of Secret is that the puzzles are hidden in the daily plot. When watching Xiaoke's daily life, we don't know where the pitfalls are, nor are we full of expectations to know how to fill them. It seems to be a complete daily story. Each story independently has at least a result, and they finally form another story with a completely different perspective, which further enhances the reading experience. But Ring of Fate and The Last Fire both gave me the same feeling: the pit dug was too obvious and too flat. For example, "The Long Night" does not have the plot of mystery that is revealed layer by layer. The structure is flat. Basically there is only one puzzle from beginning to end. Occasionally, suspense is created out of chapter. One volume ends with "Surprise". I can understand the impact that Squid wants to express, but in fact it is still talking about the puzzle at the beginning: how this wasteland world was formed. So when I read it, I felt like I had no emotions in my heart. Take the current Ring of Fate for example. From the beginning, readers know that the puzzle is "what happened in this village." However, at the end, the puzzle is still here. We only know that this is a puzzle that will run through the whole book. Although some facts are clearly revealed, there is still no pleasure of "that's how it is." I know that Squid is the god of war in the outline, and I can understand that I want to write foreshadowing throughout the book on the premise of knowing the outline clearly. However, I always believe that the completeness of the story is higher than solving the puzzle. Back to Mystery, apart from the two main plots of going home and revenge, there are so many daily routines, Sherlock's cat-hunting, Hermann's sea adventures, and all kinds of impressive supporting characters. These are written with flesh and blood, and I think they are an important factor in the success of Mystery. For me, although the revelation of 008, the feast of betrayal, and the earth are all shocking, they are not the most attractive parts. The premise for me to be immersed in and be shocked by these mysteries is that I have already developed feelings for the mysterious world created. Such feelings are not generated by rigidly throwing out puzzles. If I hadn't been attracted by Old Neil's impressive reimbursement skills, if I hadn't written about Xiao Ke's swishing look, if I hadn't written about Leonard's stupid middle school disease, if I hadn't written about the captain's amnesia, and the Hanged Man's crazy brainstorming, without these fragments, I wouldn't be curious about the subsequent development of the plot, and I wouldn't be interested in the puzzles set by the author. So I think the current writing style of Chang Ye and Su Huan, which emphasizes the main line but neglects the story, is not good. It will obviously feel that the story is serving the main line, making it difficult for people to have a sense of involvement. Thinking of the mysterious extra "In Modern Times", I feel that this is an excellent positive example. The independent story is interesting and well written, and at the same time, the reader slowly discovers that there is a main line buried. I hope that starting from the second volume, the characters and stories will be more attractive

Gram and Noodles Some people use their childhood to heal their whole life, Some people use their whole life to heal their childhood. I re-read the story about the mysterious lead-white female worker and the smog, and thought about the difference between it and Suhuan. Looking at plots such as Mystery, the emotions are actually angry and unwilling. The plot shapes the resonance of the readers, which is "it shouldn't be like this" and "I don't accept it." Through Xiaoke's running, readers have anger and hope after sadness and sympathy. Suhuan is different. If the mysterious and sad thing is that people who pursue a better life die on the eve of happiness, and the young shoots are strangled in the mud, Suhuan gives people the feeling of a delayed death. They were already dead, before they died. An old and terminally ill person would have died long before he fell. The lead-white female workers, the girl who died under the bridge in Bayam, the laundry workers and their daughters, and even the families that were torn apart during the war, these dead are young and promising. The most painful thing for everyone is that they should have had a better life. Even Kohler Sr. Was "not meant to be." ——If it weren't for the mystical poisonous mist that caused such a rapid onset, an ordinary serious illness could only last a few days. After Xiao Ke learned about it, he could have solved it by seeking Emlyn's medicine. He "should" have been able to spend his remaining years in peace. But the current deceased in Suhuan are different. It's too late - that's my deepest feeling. And Lumian and Xiao Ke are also different. Every time he sees death, he will be sad, angry, and want to do something. He knows what he should do. His long journey after that lies in this sense of responsibility: What should I do. The first thing I felt was shake. He will doubt the meaning of what he is doing. He is different from Xiao Ke. Xiao Ke has an unbreakable value system. Lu Mian is different. He does not have it. His moral values ​​are imposed on him by Auroer. Xiao Ke knows what he is doing and what he is going to do. He will doubt his failure, but he will not doubt his belief. So even in the most desperate moments, he can adjust himself and get back on his feet. He is a guardian and a savior. Even though the Tingen cow cat was not mature enough at the beginning, he has always had a sound personality. He is an educated college student in modern society, the only son beloved by his parents. He is loved so he is always willing to love. This kind of love allows him to piece himself together again and again in desperate situations, and is always willing to believe in the meaning of courage and sacrifice. Of course you can argue that Ke's spirit was still shaky in the late stages, but that's different. The grammatical self is performing a subtraction of his own choosing. He loses what he gives up in the scale of value. He is a skeleton whose "useless" flesh and blood has been shaved off, but still stands tall in the heavy rain. But Lo Mein is not, he is part of this mess. His own mental state was shaky. He is a pure aborigine who was born into this world. Unlike modern survivors like Xiao Ke, he does not know that there is another kind of life in the world. His lack started from within. He originally had a hole. Aurore once filled the hole. He thought the hole had been filled, but no, he was still the homeless wanderer. The civilization revealed by the remnants of the past made him instinctively yearn for it, just like his filter for Aurore. But he actually doesn't really understand the nature of those ideologies. He only knew what to do, not why. The biggest difference between him and Xiaoke is that when he is hit, he will doubt the moral system itself. The current tone of Suhuan is the same. Lu Mian can't see a way out, and readers can't see a way out either. The guidance of the plot only allows readers to witness these things with Lu Mian, and Lu Mian basically can't change anything. He is not like Xiao Ke, he is confused. After Xiaoke's efforts failed, he would only feel that his methods needed to be improved, but perhaps Lu Mian would doubt the meaning of this effort itself. Lu Mian still doesn't really understand: What am I? This kind of self-questioning may accompany him for a long, long time, until he truly finds his own answer to life and life. He is much easier to knock down than Xiao Ke. He is much more fragile than Xiao Ke. But maybe he can also get his own little redemption in the long journey. Come on, Lumian, you still have a long, long way to go.

Happy birthday Xiaoke!

See some thoughts on Ring of Destiny now. There are many negative reviews, so if you don't like it, don't enter. Seeing that it is already the third volume, I feel very disappointed with the whole book. I played the second game of Lord of Mysteries at the same time, and the difference I felt was very strong. Whether it is the richness of daily plots, the handling of key nodes, or the overall character creation, 2 is obviously much worse than 1. The slightly lengthy plot of the first volume can be summarized as the background is too complicated. However, the handling of the ending and the initial expression of fate are still good. But by the second and third volumes, the quality has obviously declined. To sum up the protagonist in one sentence, his strength is unknown and he becomes stronger when he is strong. The entire fighting process did not reflect the protagonist's advantages or the actual strength of the other forces. It's no wonder that some people always talk about occult smelling salts. The overall feeling is that the author is obviously not in the mood and has been writing in a muddled state. The sense of fate at the end of the second volume is almost non-existent. After watching it, all I could think about was Lu Mian, Jian Na, and Franka taking turns. I don't have any special feelings about any of the three people. After two volumes of shaping them, it's like shaping a few passers-by. It's not as distinct as the Nighthawks at that time. The impression left on me by the third volume is that Lu Mian works a job, earns three wages, and is lenient with resources. Let's not mention the cultivation of the Tarot Society, the Aurora Society, and the Iron-Blooded Cross Society. With so many resources, how come the work is so poor? The strength of the enemy is still unknown, taunt, fire crow, fist. It's really much different than the magicians' performances at that time. It is true that the hunter path is mainly about head-on confrontation, but the excitement should still be comparable. Up to now, most of Suhuan's portrayal of Trier comes from literature. Well, this is indeed specific and true, but I would rather see an original mysterious world. After all, Trier is not Paris, and Suhuan is not a café. What more people want to see is actually the foreshadowing left by the first part. What are the sources of pollution in Binxi Town? What is the Red Angel's plan? What did the Seven Gods do in ten years? What happened to Amon when he went to the starry sky? I do believe that Squid can write these in the next few books, but the book is almost halfway through, and these mysteries are not even ready to be solved. The part of Trier in the Fourth Age that is now exposed is really too little. I have said all this not to attack the author or to discourage readers. I myself really like the work Mystery even now. I just hope that even if there is only one ten thousandth chance, the author will reflect on the bottleneck of creation and write this work seriously. Suhuan is number one in the monthly voting list, and there is a lot of support from all aspects. Therefore, the work should be more worthy of readers' expectations, and it should more vividly reflect the author's writing strength. Thank you 🙏

Scold me, scold me. The sixth volume is also written based on the defense

Come to the book review area and take a look and find that it has been deleted This thing can be regarded as a certificate of honor for Squid as a writer It is not an exaggeration to say it is a confession letter

Seeing now, I see that some book friends hope that Cui Cui will describe more about the Tarot Society and Xiao Ke's deeds. I feel that it is unnecessary, because... This is how the third young master of the Tang family destroyed Douluo.

🦑，，，，，，         ，，，，： ： 1 Anthony is understandable, after all, he is the audience channel, and he is not a girl like Audrey, but an uncle suffering from the sequelae of war trauma. But the character creation of Xiaolu and Lugano is indeed not enough, which even has an impact on the role of Lu Mian. 2. Albus, the first part is okay, but the subsequent plot is missing 3. Amanysis, a very important character, but the description lacks too much. (Maybe it was hidden) 4. Amandine, there should be more development Acceptable characters: 1. Zhou Mingrui and the Tarot Society have a very low presence, only Xianyu is very busy. (This is a necessary sacrifice in order to make way for the protagonist of the second part.) 2. Adam, continues the strategic level of the previous work. Except for the resurrection match at the end that must be replayed, the whole book is carried. Compared with the previous work, although the plot length is increased and the strategy is more detailed, there is no breakthrough in character creation. 3. The two witches, according to the length of the story, should actually be positioned as the real heroine, but they turned out to be female supporting characters, which can only be said to be acceptable. Fortunately, from passers-by at the beginning, to attention in the middle, to true love at the end, it is still a happy ending, although one is still a fragment and has to be slowly resurrected. 4. Aurore, who exists in a dream at the beginning, exists in a dream at the end, and becomes invisible in the middle of the game. She is the real heroine in name, but she is actually the real heroine. Her problem is the lack of an adoption plot, but perhaps that was a necessary sacrifice. 5. Supporting characters in Trier, Iron Cross, Kordu Village, Morola, Curly Baboon Research Society, etc., Such as Charles, Martin, Philip, Priest, Madam, Valentine, April Fools' Day members, Hela, etc. 6. Bernadette 7. Naples, Steam, Sun, Lilith Outstanding characters: 1. Chic, Tudor, not much space, but the creation of epilepsy is very successful. 2. Lumian, his brilliance lies not in success but in failure. Anyone can write the protagonist of a cool novel or a sad novel. Everyone daydreams sometimes and imagines that he is the protagonist who saves the world. It is not easy to write about a loser. Lumian is not a full-fledged character. His experience determines that he cannot be full-fledged. He is also not a natural hunter (witch). Whether he is an iron-blooded knight, a war bishop, a weather warlock or a conqueror, he basically has no role. Pain, despair, agelessness and even all are arrangements or bugs, but he is a real well-deserved disaster. He struggled to achieve partial, small success amid overall, doomed failure. The article did not reveal Lumian's original name or life experience. According to the article, it may be "unimportant." 3. Amon (Pineapple Silk), compared with the previous work, Amon studied abroad under the stars and truly understood courage and sacrifice. Compared with the previous work, Amon's fun and personality charm have not diminished, but there are many places that shine in the apocalypse. 4. Xiaohong has made a breakthrough compared to the previous work. The final scene with Lumian is wonderful, showing the sacrifice he understands. 5. Compared with the characters in the hotel, such as Old Kohler and the laundry lady in the previous work, the characters are all vividly depicted in a shorter length. Of course, this also means that the knife is still as painful as the previous work. 6. Mr. K, who has high performance and piety, has never been upgraded. I don't really approve of Adam. 7. The Devil Wizard Boorman 8. Russell (Roselle in the Mirror), compared to the previous work, is no longer just the spokesperson of the witch. 2. The rationality of the plot and logic Disadvantages: 1. The messenger Bayinfer seemed to be a character with a lot of story when he appeared on the scene. There should be development later, but there is no follow-up. 2. Xia Zuotu's previous description hinted that it would have a certain plot role later on, but it was ultimately discovered that it did not. 3. The ending of the first Dream Festival dungeon laid the foundation for the second Dream Festival dungeon, but there is no description later. There are more than a few places like this. It is obvious that this article ends too early and what should be written has not been finished. It can be seen that the author has more than he wants but lacks ability. The author himself admits in his own summary that his ability is insufficient. In fact, Circle of Fate has more stories and more characters than Lord of Mysteries, so theoretically the length should be greatly increased. 4. The lack of the western continent. The similar lack of plots mentioned above is a small problem, but the lack of plots in the Western Continent is a big problem, which directly leads to the cognitive separation between the author and the readers. (If the extra chapter is not added, then this book will be cut off from the main artery) 5. The symbolic battle in the last volume uses too many symbols and too many occult similarities, which will lead to logic problems. It all depends on the author's nonsense. Although it is interesting, the article is not rigorous. However, some mysterious writing similarities that were established in the previous chapters with a lot of space do not have such problems. For example, severely damaging the Roselle Djinn is equivalent to severely damaging the Uncertain Mist. Although it is still illogical, readers accept it. 6. The intertwined dream plot of Tianzun and Xiao Zhou features many characters, but the development is insufficient. Acceptable plot: 1. The three-person romance scene. I don't know how many people can accept the gender-fluidity of the male protagonist and female counterpart, the three-person sadomasochism, the male and female twins, multiple bosses watching the love process, and the abortion themselves. But we can put aside the fact and don't count this as a shortcoming. 2. There are too many fake plots in the first volume of Dreamland, and the author deliberately deceives readers. Although the author thinks that the writing is good, I don't want to admit that it is brilliant. I think a top writer does not create suspense by hiding key plot points or deliberately writing false plots. A top writer can write suspense even if he describes the story sequentially without any hiding. The author's doing this shows that his skill is still not enough. 3. Underground Trier dungeon 4. Hostel incident, Susanna dungeon 5. Dream Festival dungeon 6. Morola dungeon 7. Temporary truce, an ending without an ending. On the surface, it is a happy ending, but in the long run, it will lead to death. It can be considered an ending, but not brilliant. Outstanding plots: 1. Little people in the Golden Rooster Hotel 2. Sea prayer ritual 3. Hunting devil wizards 4. Whirlpool plan, the highlight of Amon's novel 5. Encountering the deaths of Chic and Jenna Three , Summary 1. The author himself said that the sequel has too many characters, is too difficult, is not capable enough, and cannot be controlled. However, I think that if the author does not have the pressure to update, he should be able to complete the unfinished parts by writing slowly. It is a pity that this is a serialized web article. I hope that I can make up for it in the future. 2. There are not many knives, but they are all painful. Compared with the previous game, there are no more concessions. X. The overall shortcomings are not concealed. According to online articles, Ring of Fate is considered to be the first echelon, and Lord of Mysteries may be considered to be at the top level. If we look at the Hall of Elegance (a world famous book), the Lord of Mysteries can enter, but the Ring of Fate cannot.

In fact, the character creation and plots in the first five volumes are very, very good. The first five volumes of Ring of Fate are absolutely top-notch... I loved Lumian very much when I read it. In the first five volumes, he was really vivid and three-dimensional in my heart. Including the relationship between Lu Jianfu and the trio, I also think it is very delicate and real. . Let's talk about the plot. It feels really good to see the branches of the first five volumes intertwined and finally wrapped up. There is almost no useless plot... Even in the sixth volume, it can be said that the character creation is okay, but the plot is not so good. The branch plots are chopped randomly, and the logic of the main plot is not presented very well In the last two volumes (or the last three volumes), I can really feel that Squid has been scolded all the time, and his mentality has really become bad. Just because the readers have been scolded, Squid has lost that mentality and writing power to write. In terms of characterization, it is obvious that the shaping of the three protagonists has dropped sharply, and the details of the first five volumes have almost completely disappeared. The distinctive characters of Lu Jianfu have also been gradually diluted later on. (Only Lumian's character traits of wanting to self-destruct but being arranged to die, and having to fall infinitely in the abyss, and being hit for relief, are still intact (the sense of the abyss where he wants to die, but is pulled by the threads of fate and cannot die) And there are no longer the distinctive supporting characters in the first five volumes (Charlie Anthony, the tenant of the Golden Rooster Hotel, etc.). The protagonist creation in the last three volumes has declined, and the complete lack of supporting character creation is particularly obvious. Let's talk about the plots of the last three volumes. Many branches have been cut. There is no plot control that the branches in the first five volumes have diverged and finally converged. Many places that should have been foreshadowed and should have branch lines have been cut (such as the Western Continent, such as the Lumian Messenger, such as Loki Chawu, such as the Amandine branch, such as the underworld bird egg, such as Lugano, such as Ludwig... Many, many more. I personally think that The Ring of Fate is at least much longer than The Mysterious Master. However, Squid's selection of the last three volumes is equivalent to just giving a general outline of the plot and almost no details about the characters... This is something that I can't accept. On the surface, Squid said that despite the bad reviews from readers, it was actually very affected.

"Friends who have never met before, I send you a small miracle, although it is only a temporary projection. The moon in my hometown is no longer bright, I hope it can dispel some of your hesitation." Happy birthday to Xiao Ke! And the second book of Mystery is open! ٩(๑^O^๑)۶ After sending lof, send it here too

This is also a helpless point. Cuttlefish's self-challenge is indeed a bit difficult, in various senses. First of all, the speed of upgrading the noodles, the growth of knowledge, the value of the adventure, the progress of the investigation, etc. Actually affect the speed of the story development... Is it still slow? Why don't you watch the landing sequence 1, where Amon and the Pollution Gate are eaten in seconds, the Heavenly Lord gathered in Source Castle and reborn in an instant kills the Mother Goddess with a backhand, the old days explode in a matter of seconds, and they immediately merge into the original and then crack on the spot? I can write and finish the book in 1,000 words. Who will read this story? Even cool articles have to be done step by step, right? Secondly, without joking, Xiao Ke is in a relatively peaceful period. Under the slow but effective mobilization of the mastermind behind the scenes, he slowly describes all the beauties of life, and slowly upgrades, through his own learning. Unveiling the veil of the world is also very slow, and upgrading is even slower... This kind of slow and slow scenery, and it is a large-scale pattern of multi-party interaction and multiple perspectives, is written at a slower pace, and it makes the crisis come so slowly that it is so confusing, shocking, and impactful. What about braised noodles? Starting with the old party, The background of the investigation team that is about to be destroyed, The scene is limited to an Intis village, The background that can be introduced cannot be too much, too much will affect the primary and secondary senses (although it has been affected), The characters that can be introduced cannot be too many ( I really can't remember any more... Although everyone is a heavyweight now), the time is very limited (it seems as if the salted fish is just here to watch the tragic ending)... Although he is obviously so nervous, he still makes jokes and makes jokes from time to time. Doesn't this make him a little confused? Is this pace of development too rapid? But Lu Mian seems to be in no hurry. Is his mentality changing too slowly? Why so contradictory? Actually, looking back at the braised noodles, he has already worked very hard, right? You seem to have misunderstood something? Lu Mian was once a homeless man who was in danger of not waking up the next day. Now he has just returned to that cold hunting ground. Has he not changed? Even if he will die in the next second, Lu Mian will try his best to survive, but before that: let me laugh at all of you. Life and death? Is there any difference? Do you think I care? There are many differences between Lu Mian and Xiao Ke. This should be the most different: attitude towards life. Xiao Ke is like a house cat. He slowly explores and comes into contact with interesting things. Although there is danger, it is not that exaggerated. In the end, it is too late... Regret, growth, revenge, and return home. There are obvious future arrangements, and Xiao Ke cannot survive without hope. What about braised noodles? A wild dog on the black street, arrogantly and dangerously facing the fate of death at any time, facing everything with a mocking smile, whether it is malice or death, being completely indifferent to the future is the attitude that a street child should have... Aurore can actually make him look like a normal person now, giving him hope... What's wrong with those two long words in Lu Mian? When there is really no hope... Either to take revenge for destroying Lu Mian's hope, or to take everything and bury Auroer with him. Lu Mian: Do you think there is anyone in this world worthy of my care? Of course, it's possible that Trier will show off his fallen life first, and then give up everything to take revenge on everyone... It's possible Lo Mian doesn't plan to think about the future. Aurore is still alive today, which is very good. There's no point in being anxious. (Isn't Lo Mian anxious when facing Salted Fish? The problem is that being anxious when facing the Riddler will only make yourself angry.) Then I won't be anxious and face everyone with a smile. And is he really not anxious? ——(Frequently looking for salted fish, radical improvement, almost ignoring the damage caused by pollution, feeling that it is really dangerous, and immediately running to take a look when he notices a change) Why are you not in a hurry? But is it useful to be anxious? If it doesn't work, then don't worry. If you really can't save Aurore, then this period of time will be the last. Are the memories with Aurore before your death together a beautiful gag or a more serious one... You must choose the former when it comes to braised noodles? I'm dead, why can't I smile? Alas, the biggest problem is that there are too few updates, not enough to read. If you dislike the slowness, I will look back and read it again at the pace of 5 updates a day. Let's talk about whether the progress of the story is slow or not Typing in the middle of the night, it's a bit messy and I don't know what to say. Let me give you a split I fell asleep₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Isn't it just that breaking into a room scares an ordinary person? What's the point? Isn't the biggest problem of the dormitory manager boring? 730,000 Words is still boring. How many published books do not have this word count? Even if it is slow to gain popularity, it cannot be so slow to gain popularity. Even among online articles, this is outrageous. The first few hundred thousand words are boring for mortals, but the full text is very long. Several hundred thousand words only account for a small amount of space. Your book has more than three million words, which is already one-fifth. Also, Squid is not good at writing a protagonist who is a little bit epileptic or nervous. You will know it after reading The Long Night. With the blessing of my best friend, I only ordered 50,000 yuan. If other authors had 50,000 yuan and got a major appointment, there would be no problem. But The Long Night was written after my best friend finished serializing it, so 50,000 yuan is not considered a good result. The echo of Lao Shizi makes you never forget it, but does it really have a miraculous effect? I've been using it for a long time, and I've also used it on the hostel, but is there any improvement in the look and feel? There are too many transliterations in the dictionary. It's true that the prototype of Intis is France, but you can't just use the content of French-related books for everything, right? What about your own stuff? Shang Jianyao is not mentally ill at all. The whole book "Long Night" can be said to be trial and error. So many mistakes do not make you remember. The 730,000 words are dry when read, with no taste or chew. On the one hand, the plot is dry, and on the other hand, the writing is dry. The reason for the dryness of the plot is that there are no explosive points in the hundreds of thousands of words, and the dryness of the writing is due to blind canonization.

1. I am a practicalist, so I believe that "for novels, people can only evaluate the parts they have read." This is why I ordered it all: I wanted to see if there would be any foreshadowing revealed later, I wanted to see if there were any patches to complete the characters, and I wanted to see where the plot would eventually develop. 2. Regarding this book, my criticism has always been: characterization and plot. The protagonist's image is chaotic and collapsed. What kind of person is Lu Mian? His growth shows obvious stages, but I can't see the reason, and sometimes he is crazy, sometimes casual, and sometimes thoughtful. Without carefully distinguishing the inner and outer performance of his character, people will feel that this character has collapsed. The plot is also the same. Many foreshadowings and hidden clues are not recycled. Even if the occult smelling salt is patched, it is still a kind of deus ex machina. The protagonist's life is arranged, so it lacks enough highlights and rationality. Everything can be explained by "this is the arrangement of the mother goddess/Xiao Ke/Adam". 3. I gave the examples of Xiaoke, the captain's image creation and Xiaoke's highlight plot in Secret 1 because I wanted to compare it with this book casually. Some people said that I was a filial son. Even if I don't use 1 to compare, I will use the book "Fights Break the Sphere" written 10 years ago to compare. It can also be seen that Su Huan failed. The growth of Xiao Yan, Yao Lao, and Xun'er have distinct images, and they also have their own thoughts and inner activities. In contrast, the images of Lu Mian and his sister are chaotic and collapsed; Thirty Years of Hedong and Yao Lao's death, these highlight plots left a deep impression on people, but Su Huan did not leave a shocking highlight for me at all. So the core problem is not that I am not happy or unhappy, or that the plot makes me dissatisfied, but that this book is a failure from a literary point of view (even if it is a web novel). I think online articles are really picky. I think online articles should also have basic literary qualities. For example, characters' actions should have sufficient motivations, and their personalities should not be inconsistent. 4. Qidian has thousands of new books every day. Why should I read Cuttlefish's books? Isn't it just because his previous performance was good that I expect his next work to also reach the passing mark? But this work is not even up to the passing mark. The purpose of posting these comments and book reviews is to point this out, and then to see if there are readers with as picky tastes as me who care about these contents. Many people say: I don't care, I just want to see what happens, and I'm very satisfied. But I also want to say: It doesn't matter, you are satisfied, I support your right to be satisfied, but you cannot deprive me of my right to express dissatisfaction. I care, so I want to express my own care and see if anyone else cares.

Happy birthday to my gentle sister, Aurora Lee! 🎂🎊 It was quite sad to see Aurore send it at first. From the moment I saw her missing her hometown while looking up at the stars intently on the roof, she changed from her usual liveliness. Her usual gentleness towards Lumian, her own set of principles for dealing with things in life, coupled with her mature and steady character, and some detailed descriptions make the character of Aurore vivid and have her own three-dimensional sense. This role of sister is a relatively perfect image in my heart. Regarding Aurore, she represents light. I didn't know the meaning of this name at first, but it wasn't until I saw the end that I discovered that my sister is the most important and precious light in Lu Mian's life. This light brings him hope, warmth and future. So I believe that my sister will come back, right? Happy birthday ٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و

(The barbarians are here to promote their own path and provide reference for all curly baboons~) "Our disguised identity is a lawyer, and our true identity is also a 'lawyer'. We are good at discovering loopholes in the rules and the weaknesses of our opponents, and we are also good at using the power of order." This is Squid's introduction to the lawyer path before the Lord of Mystery starts updating. The Lawyer/Black Emperor path represents the shadow of order and the dark side of rules. The characteristic of this path is the use of rules to gradually evolve into the shadow of order. Originally it was a path belonging to the Children of Chaos, the Outer God, but was later attracted to the Earth by the original. The Son of Chaos is suspected to be the genie in the wishing lamp and was sealed by the Heavenly Lord. Adjacent Path: Arbitrator/Judge Path. Corresponding Tarot card: Emperor. Sequence 9·Lawyer: Good at discovering and exploiting loopholes in the rules and weaknesses of opponents, and good at attacking opponents with order. He also has extraordinary abilities in eloquence and persuasion, and can distort or guide the target's thinking to a certain extent, making people feel friendly and willing to believe. ------------------Related Interesting Facts------------------ According to statistics, more than 70% of the Extraordinaries who are lawyers in the Black Emperor Path Sequence 9 are eager to continue their promotion. They admitted that the legal profession faces too many threats, both from their own side when they lose a case and from the other side when they win a case. Becoming a barbarian is the only way out. ------------------------------------------------ Sequence 8·Barbarian: Terrible strength, strong physique, and outstanding resistance. If you cannot rely on the law, use force to solve the problem. Magic potion recipe: Main materials: A Kuanghua grass, the solid single horn crystal of the earth rhinoceros. Auxiliary materials: a deep-grained walnut, a lemon balm plant, 10 ml of hydrosol soaked in poplar bark, and 100 ml of spirits. Sequence 7·The Briber: The core ability is "bribery". There are four types of bribes: --Weakening: The premise of using this ability is to give the target something, and then it can significantly weaken the target's attack, defense or control over itself within a certain period of time; --Charm: By giving actual or symbolic "bribery", the target will have a strong favorable impression, making it difficult for hostile intentions to emerge, or even Unwilling to fight the target, if the conditions are right, the bribed person has a very small probability of attacking his companions; -- Arrogance: By giving actual or symbolic bribes, the target will be proud, arrogant, mentally lowered, and misjudged; --Relationship: By giving actual or symbolic bribes, the two parties will be related and establish a connection. Potion recipe: Main ingredients: One "Cry Baby" flower, strange-faced marijuana crystals. Auxiliary materials: 5 drops of golden datura juice, 5 drops of black datura juice, 4 drops of psychedelic grass essential oil, 80 ml of red wine. Sequence 6·The Corrupted Baron: It seems to be following the rules, but in fact it is distorting it and constantly absorbing the power of order to serve itself. Distortion: By distorting the meaning of the target's language, actions and intentions, a certain order is constructed that is beneficial to oneself, thereby achieving the purpose of restricting or influencing the opponent. Can distort the direction and target of the opponent's attack. For example: it can distort the meaning of the action of "closing the door" to close a certain area and isolate it from the outside world. Corrosion: It can make the hearts of people within ten meters gradually darken, become greedy, and easily make irrational choices. Sequence 5·Chaos Tutor: Enhance majesty and physique, making the surrounding creatures lower themselves unconsciously and want to surrender. Confusion: Causes confusion in the locked target or a certain area around it, making it difficult for attacks to fall on you and making it easy for the enemy to make wrong choices. The measurement of distance seems to be confused, and it only takes seven or eight steps to cover a long distance. Distortion: Corrupted Baron ability at Sequence 5 level. In addition to the enhanced ability to distort the target's language, actions, and intentions, it can also distort the concepts of itself and the target, making both parties bear half of the damage, curses, diseases, etc. Sequence 4·The Fallen Earl: Everything has rules and follows certain laws, and the demigods of the Black Emperor path are good at finding their loopholes and allowing them to be exploited. He can mark out an area, tamper with, add or use certain rules to create a combat environment that is favorable to him, so that nothing in that area can escape his induction. Can do things that can only be done by the judge path to a certain extent. Gift: A certain negative state can be directly 'gifted' to the target, making him either passive and lazy, greedy and eager, lose fighting spirit, or can only focus on money. Utilization: You can keep a certain state longer or end it early to make the rules more beneficial to you. For example, after jumping into the air, you can extend the state of leaving the earth to achieve the effect of floating. Amplification: The function is to enhance the effect or influence of certain actions of oneself. It can turn an ordinary blow into an "execution", and can turn an air hug at a distance into a restraint, but it can only amplify one at a time. It can also amplify the negative effects of magical items. In addition, it also has an enhanced version of the ability of the Black Emperor path in the middle and low sequences: Chaos: The chaos mentor ability at the sequence 4 level. It will affect the structure of things, the standards of scale and the accuracy of attacks, causing seemingly huge buildings to collapse, shortening apparently far distances to a few steps, and deflecting attacks aimed at oneself to one side. Distortion: Corrupted Baron ability at Sequence 4 level. Distort the target's words, actions, intentions, and attack effects, turning fatal wounds into serious injuries, blows into pushing away, advancement into retreat, and escape into a charge. ------------------Mythical Creature Form---------------- Squid: "Actually, I initially set it to be a human-like mythical creature form, but then since you all have turned to curly baboons. Curly baboons are also quite human-like, and then it becameCurly. Baboon" ------------------------------------------------ Sequence 3·Frenzy Mage Sequence 2·Duke of Entropy: Can jump directly from the ground to the red moon. Sequence 1·Prince Killer Sequence 0·Black Emperor: It can cause distortion and chaos in the underlying rules of the world. Be able to use the corresponding authority to rebuild a complete order for human survival in a desolate and dead place. Potion recipe: Main materials: Three copies of the extraordinary characteristics of Prince Murder, the uniqueness of the Black Emperor Promotion ceremony: Have your own country, let your name be associated with the title of emperor, and become common sense among the people. In addition, you need to establish a set of strict and complex rules that are contrary to normal conditions, including architectural style. Then, the people were driven to secretly build nine pyramid-like mausoleums. Then, they entered one of them and took the Sequence 0 potion in the corresponding sacrificial ceremony scattered in different cities in which most of the people participated. Once the promotion is successful, the "Black Emperor" will not really die until all nine secret mausoleums are destroyed. Even if he dies, he can wake up from one of the mausoleums. What is even more frightening is that even if he successfully kills the god and destroys all nine mausoleums, as long as there is still a certain amount of order established by the god, he may also be resurrected strangely. This seems to be a loophole in death. The process of the resurrection of the "Black Emperor" has three stages. One is that the "uniqueness" is separated from the owner and the concept is abstracted. The second is that the subjects of the "Black Emperor" hear the majestic voice of the god again. The third is that the "Black Emperor" that incorporates the "uniqueness" reappears in the "star realm". Three Sequence 1 extraordinary properties automatically return to their emperor's hands. This is an order that no other true god can reverse and cannot stop. Corresponds to the Sefirot: The Kingdom of Disorder Corresponds to the Old Ones: The Disordered One, Shadow of Order Representative Figures: Russell Gustav, Black Emperor Solomon, "King of the Five Seas" Solomon Nast.

The reason why this work failed was not because the world view and characters were difficult to control as the author said. In Front Seat "Lord of Mystery", mystery is rooted in society and reality. Xiao Ke's growth is not only the upgrade of the sequence, but also the deepening of social cognition. In fact, Xiao Ke has already had the germination of anti-colonialism and anti-exploitation ideas. Unfortunately, in this work, this sprout did not grow. Cthulhu and the class conflict in society are two sides of the same coin. Because it is divorced from a deep understanding of social relationships, this work becomes a mystery for the sake of writing mystery, lacking depth. I have been saying before the author wrote "The Ring of Fate" that if the sequel to "The Lord of Mysteries" can be closely integrated with the wave of anti-colonialism and the anti-exploitation revolution, then "The Ring of Fate" can definitely surpass "The Lord of the Mysteries". Kishimoto doesn't understand Naruto, and Squid doesn't understand why "Lord of the Mysteries" is successful. The failure of "Circle of Destiny" is that it breaks away from the masses.

As a very standard sequel, Cuttlefish has completely failed to learn from the experience and lessons of its predecessors in online sequels, and has almost stepped on all the pitfalls in writing a sequel. 1. Lack of time span. Whether it is the most classic Douluo series or the Dou Qi series, or even Chen Dong's trilogy, they all have a time span, minimizing the contact between the protagonists of the new work and the old characters of the previous work, so as not to cause psychological discomfort to the readers. This at least eliminates the possibility of conflict between the works, and at most it is the difference between which one is more beautiful and which one is worse in writing. 2. Conflict between old and new characters. Taking stock of most sequels in the history of online literature, when characters from the previous work and characters from the new work appear at the same time, it is easy to use the old characters to supplement the new ones. At this point, Squid obviously has not studied the highlights of other authors' works, and is completely behind closed doors on his first sequel. It is common in Suhuan to forcibly cut the plots of old characters and add new characters to the screen. 3. The disadvantages of pseudo-group portraits. As a sequel with a very short time span, it is better to directly write about the West Road completely isolated from the mysterious world, and then reunite to participate in the decisive battle later, or directly take group portraits. It is a better choice to abandon the use of a protagonist group to advance the plot. However, Squid is neither willing to make a bold breakthrough nor reopen the perspective, so he chooses a compromise method of protagonist group➕pseudo group portrait. As a result, the whole book not only lacks new ideas but also lacks feelings for the old characters. 4. Reasonability>Story line. In order to flaunt the rationality of the story told in the work, a large amount of readability is sacrificed, and the image of the characters in the previous work is even sacrificed to promote the logic of the story. Writing a narrative essay as an argumentative essay deviates from the fundamental principles of online writing. Readers come to see you telling stories, not to listen to your analysis. If the story is well written and everyone is comfortable with it, they will naturally ignore your logical problems. 5. Frequently ends up making readers angry. As an author, if the work is well written, people will naturally like it. Long explanations will not only fail to eliminate the problem, but will also deepen readers' distrust of the author. In the later period, the character plot of the previous work was obviously cut off, and the behavior of trying to cut off from the past self was simply unreasonable. When an author repeatedly tries to prove to readers his level of skill, he will never be able to compare with his past self. 6. The writing rhythm is full of malice. An important reason why the whole book feels so bad is the writing rhythm of a lot of fake subscriptions. Whenever the readers think that something big is coming, there is an immediate meaningless transition to stop the readers' rising emotions. After subscribing to the next chapter, they find that the perspective has changed and started talking about other branches. This behavior does increase the number of subscriptions for some readers, but it makes the whole book look bad. It's very, very bad (especially when catching up on updates). There are also a lot of old characters appearing, which makes readers think that there will be ups and downs in the plot. It ends abruptly. A classic old character only has a two-sentence description in a whole chapter, and then it is completely reduced to a background and soy sauce (named Suhuan Azik for the plot). It is difficult not to think that it is the author's own malice. In summary, if the mysterious sequel is a pure multi-perspective group portrait without a protagonist or a new protagonist on Xiandalu, the look and feel of this book and its achievements will be much higher than that of Su Huan.

I personally think that "The Ring" is a work that has been delayed and underestimated by public opinion. On Cthulhu, "Lord of the Mysteries" is actually not very good. The tone of the Mysteries is warmth, justice, and hope, which is consistent with the persistence of Klein and many characters. This is also the most charming part of Xiao Ke; while the tone of Suhuan is destruction and madness. , Abstract, this is consistent with the character and destiny of the protagonist Lu Mian, and the second is because the earth has become a big battlefield for the outer gods. Every path of the outer gods is full of extreme Cthulhu elements. Compared with the outer gods, the evil gods in the ball seem righteous. So if you are looking at the mystery of Cthulhu, I think you will only like Suhuan more. As for character performance, the character of Lu Mian, the protagonist of Su Huan, has been criticized. People compare him with Ke Miao and think he is not good. I also like Ke Miao better. He is the ceiling for male protagonists in online novels in recent years. But I want to say that when evaluating character performance, should we only look at whether the protagonist is likable? Lu Mian's character has been set from the tone of Su Huan's storyline. He is destined to be full of self-destruction and madness. His nonsensical pranks stem from his self-destructive tendencies. For such a character, he is difficult to like and will only make people pity him. Moreover, a book is not just about the protagonist, but the intertwined network of various protagonists and supporting characters is the key point. The characters created by Su Huan such as Franka, Janna, Eternal Sun, Adam, and the original witch are all very exciting. The storyline after they landed, as well as the return of the most anticipated characters from the Tarot Club and the revelation of the Western Continent are all included in these accommodation rings. Each of them has his own character and highlights, and there is also some small humor to make people smile. That's enough, isn't it? As for the plot, I admit that there are always some chapters where the storyline is a bit bland and boring, but I would like to ask if Mystery has been on the altar for so long that everyone has forgotten it - Mystery has also had many bland and boring chapters! When I am secretive, my friends will ask me: How many chapters do I need to read to look good? Mystery has become a masterpiece, not because it has never been dull, but because of the narrative of the sepia grass gray snake line. All the boringness in the front will be fed back to you with a grand climax in the back. You will feel "fuck tmd is so worth it, so it is like this! How can it be written like this! Awesome!" If that is the case, why do you think Su Huan does not have this ability? Suhuan is so rich! I don't want to spoil it, just go and watch it yourself. As for the world view, if the world view in Secret is expanded by 30%, then the remaining 70% is in Suhuan. Because Mystery is the first part, the world view is slowly shaped. As readers, we can slowly sort out, dig out and say "Wow". As a sequel, Su Huan has too many things to take on and express. It is obviously inappropriate to introduce it in such a slow manner. Its world view is a blowout, exploding in front of you all at once. The amount of information is too much, what a fallen mother. God, the Mother Tree of Desire, the Ring of Fate and other ways of external gods, as well as secret organizations such as the Witch Sect and the Iron-Blooded Knights, Adam personally arranges the battle plan with the external gods. There are no admission qualifications for angels and below. The protagonist group is as helpless as weak ants. The Tarot Club works diligently to help the Lord of Mysteries wake up. The world lifts eternal night and disasters are born. Finally, they are qualified to fight against the external gods, but It's just a qualification... For me who just came out of the mystery, it's like dew after a long drought. I really like studying these, especially discussing with the book friends in the comment area, what is the metaphor here, what thread is buried there, it is really interesting~ Finally, I want to say something to those who are watching Xiao Ke and the first generation members of the Tarot Society, Xiao Ke Wake up, Kegui is back, everyone has grown up in their own way, but the warmth remains. The Emperor Society died but there is hope for resurrection. The last part is all the highlight scenes of Kegui (Yi Manli). I suggest changing the name to "Lord of Secrets", just kidding. After reading it, everyone will know why it is called "Eternal Tribulation". It is very interesting. After all, everyone still protects Mother Earth. Compare your heart ♥

Putting aside how the plot unfolds, almost all of the protagonist's personal ruptures and conflicts come from this empty "sister" role. When reading the book, skipping all the Aurore complex can improve the perception of the book by at least one level.

If I were to use three words to describe the second-generation main group, I think using a concept that is very relevant now is that the second-generation god is particularly suitable. The protagonist group lacks a core driving force, like the flowers in a greenhouse, everything is arranged and everything is fate. For Lu Mian, having a tragic life experience, making jokes and occasionally going crazy, and having the inner drive to resurrect his sister may be okay from a character level, but it is not good for readers. It lacks character arcs and character levels, and it is difficult for readers to be moved and resonate with it. In contrast, Xiao Ke has the drive to go home, loves money, is budget-conscious, has a nagging heart, and has people and places he wants to protect, etc., Which makes him very three-dimensional. The other supporting characters, especially the two witches, felt to me like they were just accessories to the protagonist. Franca gave me a particularly bad feeling. The characters did not stand up, and many of the characters did not develop their narratives. The group portraits were not well created. There is also Bernadette, the second generation god. My mother is Russell in the Mirror, my father is the Black Emperor, and my uncle is the Lord of Mysteries. So no matter what you do, there will always be someone to wipe your ass, who will do something or not. But ordinary people make one mistake and lose everything. Also, I like the mysterious world view of the first Lord of Mysteries very much. This concept of fighting against madness and making sacrifices at a price is not brought out much in the second part, or only a part is retained. Many of the supporting characters are not well-characterized and often just die for the sake of dying. The protagonist Tuan Wei is a demigod and wants to be a demigod. Regardless of the cost of sacrifice, many realms are also guaranteed. It lacks a sense of respect for the world, and the main theme of the first film, which laid out so much about the path of God and the confrontation with madness, is not reflected in the protagonist. Many battle descriptions also lack passion and have a weak sense of logic. There is also the gift system. The gift path lacks uniqueness and is not significantly different from the sequence path. The lack of the gift system is just that it is easy to get out of control. Is this a problem for believers in foreign gods? As for being at the mercy of God, this sequence path also exists. The gift system does not require magic potions or preparation of materials. It only requires sacrifices and gifts. To put it bluntly, it can be said in just one sentence. Moreover, many of the gift pathways are terrifyingly strong, and the fusion sequence and cross-sequence are also terrifyingly stronger than a single pathway. It feels like one generation of versions is a god, and the next generation is a mecha. Many of the Outer God pathways are created to serve the plot and the protagonist. For example, if you can't get a small glove, you can just sign a contract and so on... The twenty-two pathways in the first part are already very complete, and adding a new gift system has no uniqueness or novelty, and the homogeneity is serious. The protagonist group is not likeable and lacks a sense of substitution. The same goes for "The Last Fire". It lacks the description of the character's inner world, so it should focus more on the description of the environment and events. This is very difficult for Rigeng. Com. This is a standard way of writing literary works, and it has high requirements for both authors and readers. This is not good for Internet articles. Writing Internet articles is Internet articles. Don't read too much and write with the ideas of classics. Many plots have caused a lot of discussion and controversy. When I wrote them, I was very clear that they might cause controversy. In fact, there are many ways to avoid them, such as unexpected developments and having to do it, which will make the viewing experience much better. Also, I personally feel that it is not very good to promote the plot by subduing the intelligence of decent characters. It feels like watching a very stupid soap opera. Although people are indeed prone to making this kind of mistake in reality, they are not here to experience high blood pressure in novels. It is best if the opponent is strong and I am also strong. The opponent will not give you time to prepare and fight against the strong. Many people enjoy reading online articles, and it is normal to be scolded. But the author's end is not very suitable. If all the time is spent on online explanation, the energy and ideas of writing the work will be wasted. Good readers of the work will help you explain. Also, when I was going to write the second part, I thought it would be difficult to write about the Eastern Continent, because the relative power structure of the Dongda Road System is complete, Xiao Ke became the Lord of Mysteries, one of the pillars, and the Tarot Society is the top force. But the second-generation protagonist needs to be treated like a protagonist, so I think this is a difficult balance. If Tarot Society and Xiao Ke have done something, what will the protagonist do? Therefore, in the early stage, people feel that Tarot will be very frustrating, and there is often an enemy who has already done everything before coming. There are many things that I don't know and I can't help. When the Fool wakes up, his strength and strength are not matched. Because in order to serve the second generation of protagonists, the Tarot Society and Xiaoke must make certain sacrifices. On the contrary, it would be much better to write about the Western Continent. Everything is new, and the Tarot will be a bit more powerful at critical moments, which is very suitable. Moreover, most readers of the Western Continent will have a more immersive feeling. This is also the reason why many novels have to change worlds and regions to a certain extent. But Squid is proud. He thinks he can master this difficult writing method, but the answer sheet he submitted is barely qualified. If it were an ordinary online novel, I would be willing to give it a pass or above, but as a sequel to Lord of Mysteries, I can only give it a barely pass. Lord of Mysteries is probably my favorite novel, so I love it deeply. As a poor student, the novels I read were all study editions, and Lord of Mysteries was also a study edition. Later, I paid for it, and Lord of Mysteries was also a novel that I supported with real money from the bottom of my heart. Despite all these, I am still very happy to see Xiao Ke in the Ring of Fate, and I praise the Fool.

The following is my personal review of this book, based on your feelings. I think Suhuan is pretty good. I personally feel that I can give it about 60 to 70 points out of 100. Judging from the completion party, I personally feel that the completeness is okay. Generally speaking, the main plot is foreshadowed and recycled, and I have some of my own ideas. Whether I like it or not is another matter. Personally, I feel that the sequel is pretty good, because it didn't last long after the end of Mystery, and Mystery's high-end characters are set to live for a long time. As a result, some of his early layouts made it easy to guess who it is and reduced the experience. The introduction of new villains will compress or even reduce the original villain's personality, which makes the current external gods' forces not strong enough, but It cannot be too strong, which is very contradictory. Because of Adam's existence, all the villains are downgraded as soon as they appear. Because of Adam's setting, as long as he is on earth and as long as he is still there, it is impossible for him to know almost all the plans of the villain. It is difficult for him to collapse. The new villain does not have that sense of oppression as soon as he appears. In the end, it is an inevitable choice for rationality to use the friendly Adam to supplement. Then there is the problem of Tarot Club. In terms of rationality, it is already extraordinary. It is already very impressive to be able to achieve this level without the foundation accumulated over time. However, some readers do not care about rationality. Emotions play a large role in the perception. As for the setting of the protagonist, it's okay, but the setting of the sister was a drawback in the early stage. Because she is an idealized sister, the character is unusually single. As a result, the readers basically cannot understand why the protagonist's obsession comes from, which is very uncomfortable. As for the squid, it was said that hunter is written like a hunter, and a fortune teller is written like a fortune teller. I personally felt that it was very awkward when I read it. It was written like a hunter, but it also sounded like a fortune teller. It is somewhere in between. I personally think The core of a hunter is to dare to love and hate, it is decisiveness, courage and war. The early stage of the game is too rational. The hunter needs to be careful, but it is more bloody. This is not very comfortable for me to watch, and I personally think that the twisted love triangle is okay. It is very suitable for the witch and fits the setting of Lo Mein. It is not decisive enough emotionally and has a sense of cowardice. This is what I see from Lo Mein. As for the roles of the old and new characters, it's a matter of opinion. I also read the closing remarks, and I can personally understand his own admission that he currently doesn't have the ability. As for the issue of showing off cuttlefish, it's more of a matter of opinion. I personally think it's okay and showing off is normal. Again, the above opinions are purely personal and may differ. Some thoughts and opinions can be discussed actively and rationally. The specific opinions are mainly based on your own feelings.

I have 8 points for Mystery and only 4 points for Suhuan. What I felt about Suhuan was that the details were delayed and the whole thing was too rushed. All in all, there are too few exciting places. I think it might be better to use someone from the assassin path as the protagonist. At least I think the early battle scenes will look better. The battles before Lumian Sequence 5 were teleportation + backstab, and if it succeeded, it would be basically over; but most of the time it didn't succeed, it just used a turret to blast people with no change, and it was finally ended by the high-ranking person. It's so boring. The setting of gifts is also very problematic. Those dual-path villains are not much stronger than single-path villains or do not reflect the specialness of their abilities. The biggest impression on me of Lumian's second path is teleportation, and other times it has no sense of existence. The biggest improvement in this book is the final battle. Compared with the final concept battle of Mystery, the symbolic battle of Suhuan is much better. The final battle in Suhuan allows me to have a sense of pictures and room for imagination. It's not like the mysterious final battle where the two of them stood still and Amon lost. Finally, I can only say that sequels are thankless most of the time. Squid also said in his speech after finishing the book that he would never write a sequel 🤭 and he said this two or three times!

Being too obsessed with beautifully crafted plots, I unconsciously fell into the trap of a mindless "protagonist relationship" and lost the quality of the novel. Originally, I bought the whole book out of love for the first part and planned to read it slowly. But after seeing the fourth part, I decided to abandon it. The plot is as bland as water. Although it sets up a lot of foreshadowing and questions, it does not bring people the feeling of curious reading, nor the feeling of careful thinking and fear. I either don't care about what you wrote or I can guess it at a glance. Therefore, I can only give a "low" rating.

First, he likes to read twisted character relationships Second, he read it in one sitting Third, I told him in advance that there were problems with the book, and he was mentally prepared Fourth, he did not participate in the community debate Fifth, he expressed reconciliation with some parts of the plot With the superposition of the above buffs, his personal rating is 7.8/10 If there are any weird friends who have not read Suhuan, you can refer to it to decide whether to read it or not.

Warnings from people who abandoned the book halfway: 1. People with Adam PTSD please be careful when entering this trap. This book completely reproduces the plot of Adam in "Lord of Mysteries", even "Do you accept this ending?" Is perfectly reproduced one to one There is a story about Yi Mi. The first time I saw this routine, I still felt a little bit. It's novel and amazing. The second book made me feel a little sick after reading it. It's originally a plot about abusing the protagonist, and the whole routine is exactly the same. It's a matter of opinion, but I couldn't adapt to it 2. There is a male protagonist's sex change (TS) in this book. The male protagonist will be forced to change gender and become a female protagonist. If you are not used to this kind of plot, please be careful! (Book friends who are more receptive or enjoy hearing about it will think I didn't say anything)

(Warning for long and confusing sentences) I am a person who lives in my imagination. Currently, I am a high school student who talks a lot. My understanding of the world is always vague, so when I read novels that build my own worldview, I will unconsciously take the world as real. It is not that I can't distinguish between reality and fiction. It means that when I read it, I look at it with a mentality that I completely believe that the world exists. Of course, its logic needs to be self-consistent, because these worldviews cannot be practiced and explored, and everyone relies on them. I discuss the rationality based on my own experience, but no one knows if there is such a world. It will definitely develop like this. My creation of those characters does not make me feel unreal, because when I watched the mystery, I already believed in the existence of this world. Why these characters exist and why they do what they do is because they exist and want to do this. Of course, we can evaluate and analyze their actions, but it will not affect their behavior. To me, Squid is more like a recorder

After reading Chapter 66 of Volume 2, I felt sleepy and stopped reading. As an old book friend of Squid, I have read all the other books twice except this one and that dog food book. As far as this book is concerned, the narrative is too slow and boring. In fact, this trend has already begun in Mystery, but the plot rhythm and design of Mystery are so good that they can make up for those minor flaws. But this book was completely exposed and I couldn't stand it. I hope the author will work hard and write this book. I really hope the author can look back on his concise and lively writing style in his life and tell good stories.