My Wife's Best Friend Won't Let Me Go

This is a magical book. I wanted to read it as a fairy tale at first, but the copy was not satisfactory, and the foreshadowing and reasoning could be improved (as a novice author, it was okay, but for an old bookworm, it was still a bit immature). Later, I wanted to read it as a love story, but I picked up the girl too quickly and the emotional description was not enough. It's delicate and the twists are a bit abrupt (I recommend the author to learn from "I Have a Sword Fairy Wife", which is also about a fairy harem. This book handles the copy and emotional lines better). In the end, I found that it is just right for a romantic comedy. The tone is relaxed and happy, with a little bit of refreshing writing, 👍

I want two things, one is for follow-up reading, and the other is also for follow-up reading. Ah... I will die without readers!

I feel like the plot and writing are pretty good. It's not too much to guarantee a fan base of 10,000 or 20,000, right? Why are there only a dozen fans when I look at the fan list here? Is there something wrong?

It is a book with a novel subject matter, but its only advantage is the subject matter. The plot direction is still not very exciting, sometimes fast and sometimes slow. The big framework is obvious, but the small content is somewhat lacking. The most important thing is the characterization and lack of presence. The two heroines are somewhat unrealistic. You can learn more from the books of great gods such as Rong Xiaorong, Ji Cha, Guan Guanzi, and Yang Xiaorong.

While reading this book, more than a dozen movies and TV series have passed through my mind

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I accidentally got it, can the author be faster? Urgent, urgent, urgent

I came in after seeing Tiger Girl, Cat Girl, Dragon Girl, and Aunt Fox, but it turned out that they were just tool beasts to bring the male and female protagonists together?

The writing is pretty good, but the update is too slow.

I can still watch each scene individually, but when connected as a whole, I have no idea what it is about. . .

This princess should be given a destiny that cannot be fulfilled if she asks for it.

After watching part of it, I just felt that judging from the protagonist's experience, the protagonist is not bad enough or crazy enough.

Ye Linlang: Sister, brother-in-law is awesome!

The author has good writing skills, but the story is weird. If you read too much, your expectations will decrease. Looking forward to the next serious novel with a little humor

Faster and faster. It's so good. After reading it in one sitting, I feel like the author is worth platinum money.

One thing to say is that the author has a great sense of humor and knows how to make jokes. It is obvious that he is an old netizen. But the plot feels a bit awkward, and the characterization always feels a little lacking, so it's weird to watch.

Bad news: This novel is a suture monster Good news: The suture is pretty good

In some places, the plot suddenly transitions too fast. It seems that one second is here and the next second is another place. It requires brainstorming to connect the plot. The pace is also very fast. It feels like it will be over after at most 300 chapters without opening the map.

It looks good, but can some common details be written more clearly? It feels like a big part is broken, and it's not a foreshadowing or the end.