A Lord's World Wants to Survive

In fact, to put it bluntly, the author still has fewer words. You should not spread out what you want to express. Instead, you should stand together and stick together because of the small number of words. I can only say a million words about this book before I understand the context. But I think this book is not very popular at the moment. I don't know how many words the author can write.

The book is not bad, at least it doesn't have any negative points for me, but there are a few problems: 1. In the early stage, the third column was originally thought to be of precious quality, but it turned out to be excellent, which felt a bit overwhelming. 2. The initial appearance of the main building in front seems to be excellent and does not match the background of the protagonist. Just like the protagonist can now give his sister the heart of the miniature nest, the family should also be able to give him some materials to at least upgrade them to precious. 3. The following buildings have not seen the effect of the "Qingtian Intent" feature. 4. The protagonist's talent seems to have never been used until now. 5. The lord should be a crazy violent soldier, but what is the upper limit of the main building? Even the ant nest type is only tens of thousands. The upper limit of the protagonist's first building is only more than 300, not to mention that some soldiers occupy several positions. It feels like the taste of this lord is not revealed. According to the identity of the protagonist, various resources should be fully equipped, but many of the previous things feel a little bit inferior, and the fun is gone.

It's a very good novel. Why isn't it popular? It's because it's too complicated, has too much nonsense, and the reading experience is too poor. Not many people have the patience to read it to you bit by bit.

Introduction smells like a domineering president

It looks very complicated. I wonder if the author can play this trick well.

It is recommended that you re-open the book, rationalize the previous chapters carefully, don't put too many elements into it at once, and then explain it more clearly. 🙂

This is another lord novel that puts pressure on the protagonist✍. In order to prevent the protagonist from developing too fast, the author really suppresses the protagonist with all your strength!

Write more about territory development. Writing about those things seems boring and a waste of time.

As the future head of your family, even if the main building is of a special grade, you don't need to suppress the three auxiliary buildings like this, especially the third main building. None of the three annexes are of precious grade. That's ridiculous.

I suggest you delete the second half of your introduction... XXX on the surface is actually XXX. This kind of introduction was still seen ten years ago and is still used in this way. It is a deduction 🤫. I want to know how many people were persuaded to quit by reading the introduction.