Swallowed Star: The Lone Bamboo Stands Tall

After reading Chapter 24, are you serious? Not to mention that in the early stages of the genetic mutation, which was only a few months old, your base with less than a thousand people actually produced more than 60 quasi-warriors? Even in Luo Feng's era 40 years later, the ratio was not so high. Not to mention the secondary mutation caused by Babata's action. Also, can a group of quasi-warriors who require equipment but no equipment and no secret techniques kill an intermediate beast general? Putting aside whether you can break through the defense, can you, a warrior, keep up with their speed?

The upgrade of warriors is written too casually. The Gods of War in the original book first said that those with extraordinary talents have to go through more than ten years of hard training and actual combat, perseverance in gene energy cultivation, and some dragon blood and the spirit of plants and trees in the process to reach that state. Even someone as strong as Luo Feng only reached the level of God of War in just a few years because of his top talent as a spiritual master, Dragon Blood and Millennium Willow Heart. Not everyone has that speed. Even low-level war gods like Lu Gang are very rare scattered everywhere. But in this book, the high-level gods of war disappeared all over the place in the early stage, which was really inconsistent. Secondly, the warrior hierarchy system was originally figured out step by step by warriors, so how could it be so complete from the beginning. Also, writing the secret book is too outrageous. In the original work, Hong and Lei Shen fully understood traditional martial arts, and with a little extraterrestrial civilization information they obtained, they wrote the ultimate secret book of 6 times and 7 times the power. At this point, everyone can claim to have 5-6 times the secret book. They obviously don't have much martial arts training and experience. It is as outrageous as high school students solving Goldbach's conjecture.

It's just nonsense. In the original book, Luo Feng's era, there was a complete training system, and everyone practiced martial arts. Only one out of thousands of people could become a warrior, so warriors had a high status. In this book, the last three or four years, there are only a bunch of gods of war and a bunch of warriors. It's completely mindless writing.

The protagonist has to be gifted but not gifted, and he needs golden fingers but not golden fingers. He is a person of the same era as Hong Lei Shen, but decades later, he cannot take on Hong's moves. It's so useless. He traveled so early. It seems that he has to rely on Luo Feng to get out of the earth.

I really don't understand why He Meng and those people wrote this. The fanfic also has multiple protagonists who are drunk.

I have to say that this book was extremely toxic in the early stages, and I was confused until it became normal in the middle stage. It is recommended that you read this book to reduce your intelligence and reduce your anger.

Do you want to write the later stages of Devouring like Traveler? That feels like it would be better to write about indigenous people. Because it is traveling from Earth to Earth, the only plot advantage of traveling is gone. The knowledge of the time traveler itself is available in the swallowed earth. What is the difference between you and the indigenous people? Is your time travel still meaningful? You have no right to speak, and no one believes what you say. If you want to avoid Luo Feng, you can write about the first two generations of Earth, Origin Star and Mountain and Sea Realm. In the end, the earth's lineage is not bad at all, including the true gods and masters of the universe. Do you think any other ethnic groups can achieve this on one planet? The Lord of Chaos City has only one disciple, Luo Feng, who surpasses the Lord of the Universe.

Chapter 10, the protagonist has no sense of existence and has not entered the main topic. In the previous chapters, I don't know the so-called past life. You are more slow to warm up than slow to warm up. It's really not okay.

Golden Chapter Three... I felt lonely after reading it

... I believed your evil deeds, and if the comments didn't criticize me, I felt free to come in and watch it. As a result, the corner of my mouth kept twitching when I saw the second grade organization. If I can't make up a good plot, I just follow the original work and speed up the time...