Green Plum Quartet of Snow Country

The five people were the tightest small group at first. However, the relationship between the five people was only maintained by Harumi. When he left, the contact and relationship between the four people obviously collapsed. Even Kazuha, who had the best relationship with Haixing and cared most about Haixing's thoughts, was still aloof from Haixing before Harumi came back. On the one hand, Haixing joins the hot girl team, and on the other hand, Haixing makes up for tutoring. He has never found Yiye, and Yiye will not take the initiative. If this is the case, it is impossible for Chunhai to successfully start a group in the future, because the relationship between several people is not as good as this. However, when Harumi came back, Hikaru took action. Although she accepted Harumi's commission, she quickly pulled Haixing out of the hot girls, and at the same time began to use the opportunity of tutoring to reunite the five people. If the five people have been in a broken relationship, then only Naoko will be highlighted around Harumi. And her carefree character is the best disguise. Hikaru will use the intimate gestures she made towards Harumi when she was a child, but in fact they are no longer children, and Hikaru cannot be unclear about the meaning of these gestures, because her character is fundamentally a representative of high emotional intelligence. I think the most important purpose of doing this is to bring back the starting line. Since I alone cannot affect Chunhai's feelings for Naoko, then I will use the advantage of many people to let Chunhai have more influence on his feelings. This will slowly return the four people to a balance of power and gradually eliminate the emotional advantage Shangzi has accumulated over the past few years. As long as the five of them are together, Shangzi will not always be the most conspicuous one in Harumi's eyes. As long as he helps other girls when they are in trouble and avoids Shangzi once, there will be countless times in the future. As for Guang, he can continue to use his closest and best "brother" relationship as a child to return to this competition. Hikaru's action gave Kazuyo a chance. Normally Kazuyo's sense of presence should be the same as when they were introduced when they were children. He is the least advantageous among the four and is invisible. However, Kazuyo was caught by Harumi when he was rewarding himself. This became the key for Kazuyo to be "unscrupulous", such as the crazy attacks in the last two chapters, stepping on his feet and sticking up. And Harumi's response is also very interesting. After the reward incident, he was particularly tolerant of Kazuha, and often noticed Kazuha's feelings. When soaking his feet, Haixing was not noticed, and he would even allow Kazuha's behavior to continue. . Does this mean that this child has Brother Cheng's tendencies? If there are no reward events, Kazuyo can only rely on Haixing and buying books to gradually increase her relationship with Harumi, and she most likely knows what happened to Haise and Harumi when they were young. From the fact that she will continue to flee to Harumi and restore their relationship with Haise, it can be predicted that Kazuye will be the staunchest supporter of many female protagonists. Because among the four, her relationship with Harumi is the weakest. When Harumi recalls his childhood, he will feel strange to Kazuyo. The other three people have their own distinctive characteristics and have more memories with Harumi. Kazuyo only has hard study and is a dispensable "accomplice" to Harumi. The feeling this book gives me so far (see chapter 134) is that Naoko and Harumi are the same people. They are both afraid of losing, so they chose the most conservative way. However, Hikaru and Kazuha will not be satisfied with the status quo and will continue to catalyze the plot. There is also the possibility of the two joining forces, and the starfish is a weapon that both of them know can have a substantial impact on Naoko's status. Recently, Naoko will gradually realize that she is one against three (Haixing's IQ is probably pushed away, but she is also very brave. After discovering that Kazuya is stealing, she may use the most free way to let Harumi experience the beauty of multiple heroines), and in the end, Naoko will definitely compromise and assimilate under the siege, but this process is cruel to Naoko. Summary: Shangzi's advantage lies in me. Not only is he arrogant, but his scheming is obviously not as good as Mitsuru Kazuyo's, so he will definitely lose. The one who disguises himself best is the most likely to be the first to capture Chunhai by surprise. Ichiyo Tie Tie is fine, but it's very difficult to get closer, and you need to continue to improve your relationship with Harumi. Haixing is the opponent that Shangzi pays most attention to, and apart from being able to fight for free, his IQ is worrying, so he most likely has to pick up the leftovers.

This is the second book I have ordered from Qidian. The previous one was "Love Travel". The main thing that makes me interested in reading is Haixing, stepsister, blond, and my first love. She is so cute, so cute that people fall in love with her. She has received so many buffs and is not arrogant. Who doesn't like such a sister, and who doesn't want to possess her. According to this configuration, Starfish is actually a script for the first or second female lead. In the ending speech, the author did give the second female lead at the beginning, but later she became a "group favorite" or pet. From the first few articles, the starfish has always been hurting me, which makes people feel distressed. After being hurt several times, there is really no comfort afterward. In fact, I have been looking forward to the plot of chasing my wife in the crematorium. Especially the last attack, "I won't like you anymore." There should be a growth here, the growth of two people. But no, Haixing is just an idiot. After a few chapters, he becomes like a normal person. A normal person wants it in his heart💥. Shangzi's golden finger is too big. The first two chapters have already killed the game. They say that companionship is the longest confession, but the content of companionship is mentioned in a cursory way, without a sense of substitution. As a result, the heroine's charm has not increased, she has not grown, and she has directly taken the position of the main palace. This is very unpleasant and even disgusting, so much so that there are many comments about books or Zhang saying that they hate Shangzi. There is no growth of Haru, nor is it written about the four years that disappeared in the past. These four years should actually play a big role in Haru's growth or Naoko's companionship. The author only occasionally shows Naoko in the plot or in front of other heroines. This is very disturbing to other people's mentality, and also to the readers' mentality. After all, everyone likes different characters. This makes Shangzi and the other heroines incompatible. I felt that this book was a pseudo harem until the last two articles. In the end, after a few if lines, I couldn't help but feel strange. Everyone can win alone, and I can't see the ending of the harem. I can only rely on constant damage. Ichiyo and Hikari are indifferent and feel that they are just a tool to advance the plot. There are too many heroines, and everyone needs to have their own uniqueness, so everyone loses their charm. I don't hate anyone, I just like starfish. In fact, according to the plot, Haixing should have as many psychological problems as the male and female protagonists. After all, a ghost brother comes to the single-parent family and has sex with her during the day and at night. He doesn't want her anymore and disappears for four years without any contact. It is really unreasonable and the arrangement is too pitiful. If you were a kid when you were a kid, you wouldn't be that stupid when you grow up. A kid king must have characteristics that can attract people, such as cheerfulness, intelligence, and energy? Leadership, or having money, or being able to create novel things, Haixing does not have, and the author did not write about it. He did not write down the characteristics that attract spring, and the characteristics are insufficient. Other harems that have exploded several times have scenes of Haru comforting them alone, but Haixing does not have them. They are all fragmentary plots that make people feel heartbroken every time. The ending was a bit disappointing, too bland and too short. The starfish written by the author should be the one who has no psychological problems among several people, and is also the stupidest, alas. Foolish people are blessed? I don't like such stupid blessings. Charity is pitiful and disgusting. My favorite starfish, stupid starfish, if I were smarter, I wouldn't be hurt by the male protagonist all the time. From winning to losing, ugh. After reading this, the author has just published a new book in the past few days, but it doesn't seem to be this type. It is a type that I don't like very much. But in the end, I wish the author's new book a bestseller!

*First of all, what I said are my personal opinions and thoughts. I am not denying other opinions. I am mainly elaborating on my own thoughts; I personally really like Yu Hai's writing style. I calm down and read it slowly, and with a little thinking, I can have the feeling of watching a good TV series. Then I have the same problem. I see many people saying that there are problems with the characters written by Yu Hai. Let me tell you my opinion: I feel that it is because It's really strange to read Yu Hai's books with a sense of immersion, because the best reading experience is to be immersed in it, just like watching a TV series. Some plots just pass by in vain, some details need to be slowed down and scrutinized, and in many places, instead of taking on the role, it is better to watch from a God's perspective. , Maybe it's because of this lens-like writing method, so it's a bit stream-of-consciousness. If it can match the airwaves, it will look very comfortable. If it doesn't, the perception will be incomprehensible. And because of the text, the overall reading rhythm is not as fast as reading the series, such as Shen Hidden in my mind, the plot of the first three episodes where Tsukiko is beaten up should be the plot of the first three episodes, which corresponds to nearly fifty chapters of the novel. If it is updated twice a day, it will be nearly a month, so I think Yu Hai's book is the most suitable to save enough for one volume. *Then there is the current plot of this book. I feel that the current plot is very comfortable. Mitsumi and Kazuha are on the same front, while Harumi and Shangzi hug each other for warmth. Shangzi's only warmth is Harumi, so she will hold on tightly, saying that Shangzi always wins and returns the show. When they were young, many people actually forgot that Harumi was the one with the most serious psychological problems among the five, because after being separated from the four little ones, only Naoko kept comforting herself, so subconsciously she didn't want to let Naoko down. Every time she felt compassion for Haixing, felt for Kazuyo, and felt helpless for Hikaru, she would feel It reminded him of the harm his mother had done to him through several divorces, so he would treat Naoko better every time. In fact, he was comforting himself in this way. Therefore, in the current description of the battle line, first the three of them were bent on turning Haruhai into a scumbag, and then led to Naoko's explosion, and finally Haruka's problem It is completely exposed. Another point is that from Takino to Soya, there is no need to worry about material conditions after the ending, that is, there is no shortage of money, so now Harumi's mess should become positive as he becomes a scumbag and reconciles his happy knot, such as everyone going to Tokyo University together, My personal guess is that Naoko is obsessed with happiness and ignores the lack of security in Harumi's heart. Unless everyone is completely separated from the other three, of course that belongs to the pure love IF line. The later stage of the harem main line should be when Harumi heals the four little ones, and the four little ones become Harumi's warm backing. Harumi also needs to turn his guilt towards Naoko, support for Hikari, care for Haixing and care for Kazuyo into love; Then let's talk about the protagonist Harumi. Unlike Takino Soya, Harumi is a real child. He doesn't have the maturity of Takino's two lives and Soya's heart of a journey, so it is normal to be immature sometimes. Then there is the problem of the protagonist's harem line. In fact, the protagonists of the three books did not even think about accepting them all at first, Taki Ye is because there are two top assistants, Chiyo and Haruka, and Soya is because Anko followed him desperately when he re-entered the underworld. Soya had a foreshadowing of returning to the light spirit in the early stage, so I think Chiaki's several divorces were not just to make Harumi reasonable without a father, but should be very important for the change of the harem line. *The three books all have some descriptions of explaining things to their parents, so I'm still looking forward to the confrontation between the five little ones and their parents. In fact, if you think about it carefully, these problems will subtly become less intense in the plot. The biggest problem for Shangzi is that he can actually leave a note and run away. , Haixing's words confess certain things, I'm afraid Harumi was "fat-beaten" by Maki and then agreed to Haixing's matter. Kazuha's parents didn't pay much attention to it. It should be the main plot of the confrontation period with the parents. Chiaki's mother is probably the best to talk to. All of a sudden, several beautiful girls have become his own daughters, which is probably a beautiful thing. I have said a lot, some points I thought of before, but forgot when I was writing, and things I didn't think of before came to mind when I was writing. It seems that I can't write novels, and I can't even write short essays. Let me express some of my inner thoughts. After all, I also suffer from poor wages and can't act like a rich brother. I can only support Hakai in this way, because I really like the books about Tokyo Coaching the Quartet, and Hakai who wrote these.

In these chapters from the test scores to the outing, Morimi's troubles are a main thread. In my opinion, one of Morimi's main problems is that she can see people very well, but not herself. As early as around Chapter 10, when Naruse first met Morimi, Morimi's characteristic of being very accurate in seeing people was evident. She could guess Naruse's thoughts very accurately. Moreover, in the cultural festival chapter, she can quickly see what Naoko, Haixing and others are thinking. In the chapter on hiking, the author gives the reason: Morimi has been a marginal OB in Naruse's circle of friends since she was a child. Because she was timid and afraid of talking to people, she developed the ability to "read minds". There is actually a question here, and that is what supports Morimi to stay in this circle. Since Morimi did not explain the reason personally, it is difficult to say whether she clearly knows the reason; however, this also leads to a problem that Morimi has always had, that is, she cannot see her own thoughts so clearly. Early before Naruse entered school, readers could see that Morimi had a deep understanding and concern for starfish. When Haixing took the first make-up exam, she made a special hint, hoping that Haixing would come to her for tutoring; when the hot girl opened a house incident, she became the embodiment of dastardly mobility, stalking the family for a week. It is easy to see that Morimi cares very much about Haisei, her childhood friend, and wants to get closer to her through actions. However, Mori didn't seem to think so. She thought that there was still a serious gap between herself and Haixing, and she expressed the thought "Haixing and I are not the same person" many times in her inner monologue. In the cultural festival reading room, she even approached Naruse to express her bitterness, accusing "I did it because Naruse asked me to do it." But it's obvious that if she doesn't want to, it's impossible for others to ask her to do this. Therefore, her behavior can only be explained by Morimi turning a blind eye to her desire to get close to Haixing. There are many similar examples. Morimi often judges Naruse, pointing out various problems with him, such as his lack of candor, bothering others with things he doesn't want to do, and his excessive self-awareness in the previous chapters. However, these comments were all very appropriate for her, and onlookers might even think that Morimi was pointing at Naruse and scolding herself. However, Morimi doesn't seem to have this awareness, which also shows that she cannot see her own thoughts clearly. Looking from this angle, now Morimi is holding on to Naruse, and everything Naruse does seems to be showing off his achievements and laughing at himself. Is it really because he is unhappy with Naruse? Maybe, as Naruse said, he doesn't want to be embarrassed in front of the people he cares about and wants to prove himself. Of course, Morimi hasn't seen through this yet. What's interesting is that Naruse and Morimi have similar problems. They are both accurate in judging people but blind in themselves - they guessed their motives correctly, but they guessed wrong who they care about. I have to say that they are a good match in a sense (laughs)

First of all, the author's writing style is absolutely recognized. It is a pity to see that the author no longer writes about Riqing. Secondly, this is a very good book, if not as a harem novel. Because it was too depressing, from beginning to end, I couldn't really make dumplings until the finale. Of course, this is very realistic, but for a harem seeking to make dumplings, my perspective is not satisfactory. Until the end, Shangzi's status was absolutely suppressive to others, which made readers who like other characters very uncomfortable. (My butt is Kazuha, it is very uncomfortable, I believe other people have it to some extent) Until the extra chapter, Kazuha was still alone in Kyoto. The plot was that Harumi didn't see him for more than a month because he was busy. I remember it was agreed to be once a week. It was really uncomfortable to be tortured in the extra episode, and it made me feel very empty, because only Naoko became his wife, and Kazuyo would never have a status in her future, even though it was her choice. I always have a withdrawal reaction when I read a good book until the end, but this time I felt more regretful and unwilling. The story is not complete yet, but everything has been frozen. Finally, I suddenly realized that more than 20 years had passed before I knew it, and my youth was so dull. {"TopicId":"1180545856018579456","TopicName":"Morimi Kazuha"}

It's really hard to write a harem HE for a non-scumbag, and even harder to write a harem HE with a growth path Normally speaking, Harumi and Shoko go in both directions, but the behavioral logic of Hikari and Haiseong is normal, and they have no choice but to live out their high school life with a secret love. Shangzi himself is dazzling, with impeccable appearance, ability, and character. He also likes Chunhai. Not only does Chunhai like Shangzi enough, he also has high moral standards, abides by modern love ethics, and is very loyal in behavior. Only Kazuyo's current behavior of poaching, which is completely inconsistent with the love ethics of modern society, forcibly destroying Haruka Naoko's love relationship, directly hurting Naoko and making Harumi feel troubled and troubled can the harem story be continued reluctantly. But even so, opening the harem in this book ultimately requires the main palace to be humble to the extreme. The opportunity to open the harem should be one of the three women who has been cheated on by Harumi. So what can Naoko do? She couldn't bear the consequences of losing Chun Hai, so she had no choice but to share Chun Hai with others. And as Haruhai, who cares most about Naoko's mood, seeing Naoko pretending to smile all day long, she is probably full of guilt and unhappy. In Kazuyo's own plan, he is going to Kyoto University in a year and a half. This means that after opening the harem, she may have enjoyed 10% of the joy of love, and then left here, leaving behind Harumi who had cheating experience and Naoko who had cheating experience with her boyfriend. This is certainly not a HE ending. If Harunami's succubus attribute points are full and Kazuyo no longer wants to dream of Kyoto University, but Harunami is the dream and stays in his hometown to study at Jinda University and continue the harem, then Naoko will have to worry for the rest of his life, and Haruka will also have headaches for the rest of his life. This is probably not HE. So, the harem line will originally make some fans of the female protagonist difficult to get over. If the male protagonist is a scumbag or indecisive (Zhang Wuji) type, it's okay. But if you want the two-way love line between the male protagonist and the main palace (Shangzi) to reach the harem line, it's really difficult.

It has been almost a month since I finished reading the whole book "Green Plum". I always felt that I should say something in the middle. It was only after reading "Dongzhi" that I became clear about my feelings. From a character point of view, the male protagonist Harumi is a complete scumbag, weak and irresponsible, especially after being pushed back by Morimi and accepting her harem idea. The so-called "method" is to use Naoko's love to force her to compromise, and the method to target Hikari is to use her to control herself. His love for himself and his friendship with his friends "please put him in the urn". Knowing that his lover's psychological problems have never taken any action to open up Naoko's heart, in the end it was actually solved by his mother Matsu Qianqiu (but it is quite fascinating that many years of psychological problems can be solved by just a few words. ); My favorite of the four female protagonists in the full text is Takigawa Hikaru, who cherishes friendship (to be honest, only Hikaru of the five protagonists really values small group friendships) has a cheerful and generous personality, has principles and bottom lines; the one who feels the most distressed and compromises the most is Naoko, whose personality is gentle but tense. As a girlfriend, she is impeccable in both housework and taking care of her boyfriend. Judging from the club and achievements, she is also very capable of working and studying. The disadvantage is just because of family psychological problems, she is too dependent on the male protagonist, and loves the male protagonist too much, which makes her too soft. Weak, to be honest, the biggest regret after reading the whole book is that Shangzi is not a pure love heroine (as for some rz chapters, the comments about sneaking away are simply unreasonable); the most innocent and simple starfish has nothing to comment on, she will win the player, fools have stupid blessings, let her continue to be stupid; The heroine Morimi Kazuha, who is the driving force of the plot of the whole book, even in the harem story, my personal feelings are very complicated. I should look at Morimi in two nodes. Before the inversion (let's call it inversion, in fact, it is not an exaggeration to say pj), her character performance is pretty good, whether it is studying or She has a clear goal in life, and the male protagonist's repeated rejection of her is a bit pitiful. She hopes that she will find a good way to "join". After extrapolation, her thoughts and "bewitchment" of the male protagonist may be dark and make me ex. This is one of the most twisted female protagonists I have ever seen. Some of her The behavior made me think about giving up the book several times, such as "Shangzi can no longer tolerate me" to "There is no need for starfish" and other actions that are both serious and straightforward, including her use of starfish and light. In my opinion, she is just a dark woman dominated by physical desires. Throughout the book, the most prominent thing I feel is the "desperateness" of the two people. One of them is Shangzi's "desperation" because of her love for the male protagonist and her resolute decision to leave everyone and even commit suicide after discovering all the facts. This kind of "desperation" is The other "desperate" person is Morimi, who tried every means to get the male protagonist. Faced with the encirclement of Naoko, Harumi and Matsu Qianqiu, she chose to be equal to pj. At this point, Pandora's box was opened, and her "desperate at all costs" was an unscrupulous use of methods against others. Another obvious shortcoming of the book is that Naoko's departure and final compromise return are too fast. This should be the last climax of the plot conflict in the book, but compared with the previous conflict points, it is slightly dull. Coincidentally, I started to read "Tōzhi" after reading "Green Plum". Comparatively, the impression of "Tōzhi" is much better. The two books actually have many similarities in the character settings. The "main palace" Rika has psychological problems, Chiyo is also a supporter of the harem, and the little doormat Ami, the male Main Yingyu is responsible and capable of action, and the little vixen Chiyo has a much better personality than Morimi. She has a lively and principled personality, has a sentiment towards life, knows how to unite without taking advantage, and can compromise without hurting others. After watching "East Zhi", the distortion caused by "Green Plum" has been greatly restored. The author's two books are very good, and I look forward to the author's next Japanese light novel. Above.

The author's writing style is very good, the description is delicate, and the characters are vividly drawn. However, although it is a Qingmei Quartet, what runs through the whole text is not the sunshine and sweetness of youth, but the indelible gray floating on the conflicts and cracks. It may be that the author's story only revolves around the daily life of high school students. The story is relatively thin and needs to shape and promote the plot through contradictions and scars. This writing style strengthens the impact of contradictions and conflicts on the tone of the entire text. Readers feel like they have been walking on ice covered with cracks, unable to experience the warm story. Instead, they experience the coldness and depression of gray tones. This is especially evident in the middle of the novel. Of course, if it can make readers feel emotionally, it is already an excellent work. If the author could enrich the story and expand it beyond the daily life of high school students, it might be more exciting.

The author's writing style is really outstanding, there is a sense of desolation, and the style of writing has been formed. It's really nice(//∇//) Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Does anyone else watch Lianqing and see Qingmei they like but they dare not buy stocks (although this is not about stock trading)? Does anyone else want to see Qingmei always being persecuted? Does anyone still want to see Qingmei who is obviously Qingmei but is frequently crushed by the sky? Check out this book "A Romantic Comedy in which Childhood Sweethearts Will Never Lose" (No), which will allow you to re-see the feeling of childhood sweethearts who must win, and let the childhood sweethearts who have been persecuted for a long time return to their peak.

I feel that Hikaru will be the first one. If I don't have any direction, I just want to target Naruse. At present, apart from Naoko, Hikaru has the closest relationship with Naruse, and he has a straight personality. I will wait for Sister Yue to recognize her sister's feelings from the third perspective and give Hikaru some extra points, twist the brotherhood, and directly hit the audience with infinite straightness. The character creation is also sunny, and he is more receptive to the idea of ​​​​"all wings" in the later period, because Naoko must have felt guilty for robbing Naruse, and maybe Haixing will have to be pulled by Hikari in the end. Shangzi is delaying herself. The relationship between the two parties is not radical and requires external stimulation. It is estimated that other people will need to take the position to give her a strong force. The key is that Naruse is inseparable. No matter how much she invests now, she will be rewarded later, but she will definitely not be the first. The main reason is that Naoko and Naruse have the most compatible personalities, the deepest feelings, and are very protective. The radar operates at high load 24 hours a day. How can others grab this position? Md, I think of Lin Shen. Stomach pain. Kazuha... To be honest, my favorite character is a bit cold but still warm. She is excellent and hard-working. She resonates so much with a high school senior. However, there is the factor of "being naked", which Naruse definitely can't get rid of. There are sufficient conditions for being the first or the second to last. Success and failure are also perverted, and there are also plot factors. Assuming that he is the first, if he really does "I want it all", I will probably divide it first, and then drag on dozens of chapters. In the end, he is still not the main palace. C She has a terrible stomachache, and Kazuha doesn't have Hikari to talk to. Her first reaction was so big when Naruse robbed her. Someone robbed Naruse's unfinished little bitch. Emmm, Ichiba Monk should be the main force in the Shura field. Hikari and Haixing will most likely be fucked if they are tied up. Broken Haixingha, blond, arrogant, "misunderstood", "just stepsister", "Naoko" and "Kazuyo" are far away from their partners. The author of the undefeated dog is Iron Manipulator, Naoko Kazuba takes the opportunity to steal the house and so on. The above is just my personal opinion, Haixing→Yiye/Shangzi→→Haixing Yiye and Shangzi will definitely not help Haixing emotionally, and there is no chance of winning even if he doesn't pull his scalp and pick it apart I dare not say anything else, Haixing loses the dog Believe me, the left side is full, the villa is close to the sea

I feel that the author's writing style is relatively light and very recognizable, and the protagonist is very distinctive. After reading three books, I feel that he doesn't like to talk very much. He is a yandere man, and the writing style does not have a passionate or passionate feeling, which makes people lift their pants all the time 🙂. This is good. Even in special paragraphs, the cheerful girl gives people a dull feeling. I hope 404 will stay away from you 😁. I wonder if other readers feel the same way?

Coming, coming! I really love the author's writing style. After reading what the author wrote, I found everything else boring. Please give it a try, we support you!

It doesn't feel as good as..."Country Love Story: Tokyo Returns Neptune Chapter"

Let me mention it. The author's writing is very good, but the writing is very boring. There are many female protagonists in the daily series, and the writing is neither a light novel nor a fairy tale. On the contrary, there are too many stomachaches. The author's writing style is very good, and the whole text does have a sense of material sadness in the book. But the plot is really a mess. As a pure daily life without any supernatural elements, can you believe that the plot is so dull? The protagonists have gone through several trips and only eaten and soaked in hot springs. The rest is a little stomachache, and then No more, there are neither sweets nor any outstanding interactions or interesting scenes. The only chapters that impressed me in the whole novel were the handicraft department and the girl with glasses. The only outstanding character was the little crying starfish, and then Not only did the description of the male protagonist lack a sense of empathy, he even seemed particularly childish (md after all, I want to see good writing, so why don't I read the classics? Even light novels about toilet paper are more interesting than the author's writing. At least it was actually written by Taijun)

As much as I liked Shangzi in the past, I hated Shangzi later. Why? Because I came here for the Crystal Palace, this is also the most fundamental long-term expectation given to me by the title introduction, which is the ending of the Crystal Palace. Shangzi is the first character to be accepted (although she is not in the role, she has established a relationship, and there are too many interactions and chatter between the two. I personally am very, very tired of Shangzi's plot and have no expectations). She has been actively or passively hindering the progress of the other three players, and she is becoming more and more aggressive. From a practical point of view, I can understand Shangzi's behavior and actions. I agree and think it is reasonable. This is what a real girlfriend and a girl-loving person should do. From a reader's perspective, I can't understand it. I didn't come to see the heroine who was fighting for her role in the party, I came to see Crystal Palace. I don't think there is any problem with Shangzi's strong character of 2,304,500,000 words. It fits the character very well and is real! The writing is great. Design a plot to make her accept the Crystal Palace and let it go. It's someone else's turn, and I want to watch someone else! This is also the way to write the emotional line of mainstream harem novels. Two or three characters are introduced to raise expectations, and then a strategy is chosen to satisfy expectations, and an introduction to the Crystal Palace is left. Then the other heroines are cross-staged to prevent a certain heroine from being too advanced and affecting the performance of the other heroines, and gradually reaching the Crystal Palace. (Crow, Willow Bank, Changing Yu, Chicken Fork, Selling Newspapers, Guanguan, etc. Anyone who has read a lot of harem novels should be able to see that they are all written in this way. Even current articles about party disputes and stock speculation are written in this way. No matter what the protagonist and heroine are, there will be no problem with this set) But at 1.25 Million words, it's very, very hard for me to accept that Naoko is still an obstacle to the Crystal Palace. It's just like watching the party squabbles in the old days. She has been teased and blocked all the time. Many places where she was giving sugar to other female protagonists suddenly mentioned Naoko again, just like taking insulin to forcefully lower her blood sugar. Sweet but not completely sweet. I'm very curious whether the author didn't think of this when making the outline and plot design, and forgot to give Shangzi a stage ending, but he still wrote it happily and didn't stop Shangzi's progress. In short, for the role of Shangzi: I understand it rationally, but I hate it emotionally.

Shangzi

Note: The book review is long, about 5,000 words, and contains a lot of spoilers. Friends who have not read about 150 chapters are advised not to read it first. [Introduction] Recently, in order to seek evidence of "how flat are starfishes?" (Although, but, the starting point is really this...), I read the entire text so far (up to Chapter 194) again. During this period, I became more and more aware that Morimi's line runs through the whole story - the "Morimi is observing" and "Morimi feels that he is smarter than others" and "Morimi is executing his own plan" mentioned in the previous book review are all clearly confirmed... Of course, these are not important. Because today's topic is about Kazuyo Morimi, who best meets the definition of "perfect girlfriend" in this book under the general argument, what exactly is perfect. In other words, this time, I want to read about the growth journey of Morimi Kazuyo, the only water magician in this book. Before elaborating on all this, we need to take a look at the timeline and the ages of the boys and girls (the word count is related to a separate post). This will help us understand some of the details in the plot that seem like "where did the damn Asasi come from" but are actually fully foreshadowed, including the male protagonist's uncertainty about the relationship and a series of questions related to these "history". A long word here, cool articles usually don't require too much thinking, and you can have a good reading experience if you read them with a little bit of coolness (or even straightforwardly say XP). However, the more realistic background settings and less novice plot developments often make the reading a bit dull when you read it for the first time (especially if you read it slowly...). As the opposite of the shortcomings, I can guarantee that when the plot of this work crosses a certain threshold (such as... Right now?) Or even is completed, the overall reading experience will be quite great. From my personal perspective, this may be one of the reasons why fans of this book and its author are "higher in purity", but it is relatively difficult to promote it. Morimi Kazuyo's Plan A Kazuyo's first plan has been around for a long time. To be precise, it was no later than the age of 12 (that is, around the time Harumi left Aomori), and he had already started planning and putting it into practice. Unlike the two leading elder brothers and sisters, Harumi and Hikaru, who have strong rhythmic abilities, Kazuha's presence in the five-person gang as a child was firmly at the bottom. The starfish who protects her is also more lively than she is, and Naoko is unshakable with Sada Harumi. In addition, Naoko basically lives at Naruse's house because her adoptive parents are away from home for a long time. Later, starfish becomes Harumi's step-sister. Yiye, who lives far away and is not outstanding (a skinny, little yellow-haired girl), must be the one on the fringe. But like the other three, she all likes Naruse Harumi very much - "In other words, in that distant time, there was no girl who didn't like him" (Chapter 49 - Aquarium, this sentence is speculated to be Haixing's inner OS). But for a little transparent person, how to "hug the beauty back"? ——Reading! Morimi Kazuyo is the daughter of a bookstore owner. Like Naruse Harumi, who was influenced by her father and likes to read, she is far better than the others in reading (Haixing uses mobile phones, Naoko does handicrafts, and is just a sportsman). I don't know which romances she has read. In short, Morimi Kazuyo's first little plan was to make a decisive move when she was 12 years old. She dedicated her first kiss to Harumi who was about to leave, and had a romantic exchange of each other's first kiss full of girlish hearts. ——As for later discovering that the prelude to his grand plan had no possibility of being established (the starfish was Harumi's first kiss and first love), that was another story that made Kazuye extremely angry. As we all know, this little plan was aborted naturally, and the timid Kazuha didn't even appear in Harumi's melancholy vision when he was leaving. Perhaps from that time on, Morimi Kazuha began to make more detailed plans. Plan in planning A, is a 6-year-long plan, from the age of 12 to 18 - Kazuyo probably did not learn the idiom "working behind closed doors", and started the implementation of this plan without having any grasp of Harumi's developments, including but not limited to: 1. Improving grades in order to obtain enough information when choosing a university. Autonomy ——This is easy to understand. If your grades are good enough, you will be relatively free to choose any school. Then I will take whatever Harumi wants to take. 2. Improve your understanding of literary and artistic works and dramas. This is one of the positive influences left by Naruse Harumi's biological father who admires him. He will adapt to his preferences and be prepared. Suffering ——The increase in reading volume is obvious. In terms of drama, it can be seen from Kazuha's role as the screenwriter of the class film at the school festival that she has accumulated experience in this. In any case, being able to piece together such a long film is definitely not as simple as just talking 3. Ensure the originality in terms of habits and appearance. Ecological, high-quality self, women want to please their own appearance, foundation is very important -the habit of going to bed early and getting up early, never dyeing hair or wearing earrings, in short, to maintain a beautiful and positive Morimi Kazuha It must be said that before the age of 16, Morimi Kazuha was indeed a ruthless person who could pursue love rationally. Unlike Starfish's instinctive courtship that is almost self-destructive (yes, it is beyond sensibility! In addition to eating and sleeping, love is more important than anything else), she is really executing her plan meticulously. For this reason, Yiye was so busy that he flew into the air. What made her happy was that by the time Chunhai returned in the summer of 16, there seemed to be almost no flaws in this plan, and it fit perfectly with Plan B. [Plan B by Kazuyo Morimi] If Plan A is a rational plan driven by the emotional element of a girl's emotions, then Plan B is a disguise of Plan A based on rational considerations. Plan B is essentially the same as Plan A, but there is a slight difference: she studies hard, reads a lot, and doesn't get involved in messy things, all in order to get into a better school and become a better person - for the reason of chasing a man, it is really inconvenient and inappropriate to confide in others. In other words, even if there is no Naruse Harumi, doing this will make her become an excellent person step by step. Who can say no to this? She almost became "someone else's child." In order to cover up Plan A, and not to have too much information to interfere with myself - throughout the entire text, Kazuye is actually not a ruthless or cruel person. Just like many people including me, their mouths may not be hard but their hearts are definitely soft. There is no way to put some ideological seal on yourself and create some isolation. Therefore, from the age of 12, she hardly interacted with other childhood playmates. But this is only the surface. Without exposing her target, she was still very concerned about Harumi - after Harumi came back, Morimi's father still called Matsu Chiaki Asahina, but Kazuha paused and said, "She has now returned to her real name and is active." This is obviously the result of searching after a period of time. Five people became four, and each one became independent again. The five-person group of childhood sweethearts completed their solo careers almost as soon as Chunhai left. [Morimi Kazuyo's Plan A. And several subsequent improved versions] Plan A and B were ruined the moment Naruse Harumi returned - "What are you thinking about coming back at this time." - Morimi Kazuyo was not informed of Harumi's return, but was greatly shocked after a sudden encounter. ——Now is not the time to panic, Morimi Kazuha! Although unexpected factors may intervene, we cannot mess up. ——What should we do, Corporal Morimi? ——... Anyway, study hard first and show your best side. You can definitely do it if you are so good... Right? But under the author's evil manipulation of the world line, the improved version of Morimi Kazuyo's plan is really difficult to cope with the series of changes that followed: Harumi and Naoko are almost living together, and Hikaru's endless pull and pull have put her originally stable three-point-one-line life of private school-school-home/bookstore in jeopardy. In this regard, Yiye, who has "black" and "just over the shoulders" hair, became increasingly anxious. After washing, the beautiful long black hair began to go their separate ways - she lost her hair. In fact, she has always been under a lot of pressure - before Harumi came back, Kazuha had comforted herself more than once: no one can talk to her, no one can understand her, and coupled with her obsession with results, the intensity of the accumulated pressure is obvious. The real trigger that completely messed up the plan was undoubtedly "tutoring for Haixing". The academic impact of this incident was far less than the emotional impact of a little finger - Harumi thought so too - teaching a stupid sister should be a piece of cake for a top student: but in the end, Kazuha, who seemed rational but was actually very emotional, was finally shaken - people who like to read various miscellaneous books are unlikely to be purely rational creatures - the memory of her childhood has never faded, and she began to long for Harumi more and more. This time, it is no longer the desire to use electricity to help relieve stress, but the desire to have a specific picture of the person I love. What followed was the 9th place result and Harumi's crushing performance to the top. Facing Naruse, she said, "It's all because I want to tutor your sister." In fact, she didn't realize that there wasn't much of a show of force in this rhetoric, but more of a coquettishness to the person she liked. She fell too quickly. Harumi has changed a lot. If Naoko hadn't been there when they met again for the first time, she almost didn't recognize him. Fortunately, she still recognized Naoko even though they barely communicated with each other. She herself has also changed a lot - "He probably feels the same way about me" - which also includes a little pride in her "yellow-haired girl has become slim" (16-year-old Kazuyo is 167cm tall, which is considered tall in Japan); but Harumi is taller than her. The prince charming in her dreams was even better. He easily achieved the first place that he had worked so hard for but could not maintain stably (in fact, in the second semester of his freshman year of high school, he immediately encountered a ruthless backstab from the sky. The first semester in Japan starts in April and ends in July, followed by the second semester after the summer, and the third semester from January to March). He was handsome in a mess, and even his unconcealable pride affected every cell in her body. While pointing out that Harumi "clearly cares but can't let go and is a little proud of herself", it also revealed her eyes that are paying attention to every move of her sweetheart almost all the time. An aside. In high school, it is actually relatively difficult for girls to fall in love and do well in their studies at the same time. On the contrary, in the cases where the performance of women fell off a cliff as soon as they fell in love, the proportion of girls was relatively higher. This is probably a disadvantage of women who tend to think more rationally. Subsequently, all development began to derail, and rationality began to collapse. [Morimi Kazuyo, disguise or not] With countless delusions such as whether Naoko and Harumi will live together, and what will happen next, and the reality of trying to adjust their mentality and fight again but still coming in second place, Morimi Kazuyo's plan slowly evolved from "a small setback for the king" to "just like this". She still followed her habit and studied hard, but occasionally slept in, and no longer resisted hanging out with her childhood sweethearts. Before Chunhai came back, Kazuyo was a lonely guy who read a lot of miscellaneous books. If you have read a lot and have a lot of ideas but no one tells you because of the character, environment and other factors, I think that when you meet every guy who "may have the same interests as you", you will become " You also like me as a single man too much, right?" (Nagigi Eko's light novel "おらおひとりののこときすぎだろ.") Rena Hatori can't stop like a machine gun. This point is made clear many times in the article: When he is alone with Harumi, Kazuyo can chat with him for half an hour or even longer. We even have reason to believe that if neither of us dares to forget Naoko (sometimes it is because we have to miss Haixing, but Hikaru is definitely forgotten...), If we chat for twice as long, it will not be a big problem. It was born this way, or it was mixed with four years of "preparation work". In short, they were highly consistent in their interests and hobbies. After Morimi's version of the "Watergate Incident" (there was water, there was a push door, the name was very reasonable), Kazuye even removed the seal on his mouth. He said whatever he thought of, and simply attacked with venomous tongues when he didn't expect to say anything. Not only was Naruse not annoyed by this, he was even "helpless on the surface, but already resigned to it in his heart." As for physical contact, Harumi didn't make a move, but Kazuha's bare feet stepped on it. When there was no one around, Naoko was able to cosplay and lean on Naruse's shoulder, which was even easier. Morijian Kazuyo still pretends to be a follower of Plan B and be a good student in front of others. She is so skilled in this role. The past four years are not only a golden period of growth and development, but also a critical moment of personality shaping. Although her acting range is wide ("I told you, I don't want to hear that kind of bed plot, why do I still keep..."), But the role of a good student is played half-heartedly, which is not a problem at all; but when faced with Naruse Harumi alone, she has already behaved like a little girl in love towards her sweetheart or even a lover who has established a relationship. Rational courtship is a kind of process that "scares you" only for a moment, but the preparation process is as painful as an ascetic. There is actually no equivalence between the pain of investment and the pleasure of achievement. It is not incomprehensible to be leveraged and given up by others during the preparation period (rather, it is very realistic. On the way to becoming excellent, the main person has not yet realized how good you are, but bystanders know it clearly). It is not difficult to imagine that in the parallel universe where Harumi did not suddenly return, Kazuyo would be very tired, and he would be getting more and more tired with the pressure of studies and competition. But the leaf that broke out from the shackles of reason and transformed into a butterfly is now super cute and extremely dazzling. [Perfect Girlfriend and Childhood Sweetheart] In my eyes, Naoko and Harumi's mutual love and affection have long been integrated because of their family experiences. This kind of emotion is so strong that it overflows and cannot be dissolved. This childhood sweetheart relationship and abundant family affection include infinite compromise and tolerance for each other. Therefore, neither Naoko nor Harumi is willing to "cause trouble" to each other. For this reason, they will even unconsciously hide some of the past and current conflicts that they need to face: in many works that I find boring or even hateful, but contain a lot of cruel truth, misunderstandings breed and suspicions spread. The childhood sweethearts are repeatedly "naturally" stolen by the Goddess family, which is also an old script. But childhood sweethearts are omnipotent, not to mention there are five of us this time. For Naruse Harumi, in both study and life, if a true childhood sweetheart like Kazuha Arimami, who has a similar odor with him (crossed out, is a like-minded person), has no scruples in communicating with him, and has been seen through by accident, it must be a lie if he can be unmoved and careless. To put it more radically, if it is a game or a light novel about stock trading, if there are no coincidences or even off-site factors, this sense of love coming naturally is almost impossible to escape. This is also the source of my opinion about "Kazuha Morimi is the perfect girlfriend". Shangzi's overly heavy burden, Haixing's sadomasochism, and Hikaru's loneliness will all be resolved together with her lover and friends. [Boys and girls...] ——Yes, I think it is a solution. Human life is a process of losing something and gaining something, alternately making active or passive choices. Since you can't do it again, embrace change and face it bravely. I admit that it is undoubtedly refreshing that the unwillingness to look back at the past can be annihilated or even sublimated (in human terms: time-travel flow, rebirth flow), but that has nothing to do with the future we are facing now. You can't admonish those who have gone by, but you can still chase those who have come. Wouldn't it be nice to be able to solve it now instead of regretting it in another life? In order to achieve this goal, whether the process is joyful, sad, mixed with guilt or even subversive of morality and general theory, I think boys and girls will enjoy it, pain and happiness. After all, this is the story we've come to expect. Rather, this is the starting point of my preference for this type of works. (Full text completed)

Although I have already replied to someone else's post, I would like to open another post to express my personal views. Likewise, discussion is welcome, but don't comment if you don't like it.

It's time to give Qidian Day a little more shock

Chunhai's sense of responsibility and morality in love should stem from the breakdown of her family in childhood, which is a manifestation of a lack of security. The inner paranoia about responsibility made him unable to accept Kazuyo's idea of ​​a harem, although Harumi could not help but care about Kazuyo at this time. Shangzi also lacks a sense of security due to family reasons. Chunhai is her only salvation and the motivation to continue living. Naoko's love is heavy, a love accumulated over many years, a bit suffocating love. It can be said that she has completely entrusted her life to Chunhai. Naoko played an undeniable important role in helping Harumi get out of her heart, and also made the progress of the two of them ahead of others. In order to ease her uneasiness, Chunhai chose to show up, and the two officially started dating. However, the ambiguous relationship with the green plums has not yet been completely cleared up, which has increased Harumi's moral burden, formed a concept in his head, and kept a distance from other green plums. But he didn't expect that everyone wouldn't want to let go, including himself (byd's mouth is really tough). Kazuyo blurs the boundary with Chunhai in the constant ambiguity, but when it comes to breaking his concept, he will deliberately keep a distance. Although Kazuyo knows that he is in the wrong, it also lays the groundwork for Kazuyo's subsequent explosion. Kazuyo's personality is strong, which can be seen from details such as her attention to exam rankings. At the same time, Kazuyo's love is humble. She had no sense of presence in front of the person she liked when she was a child. Now she has put aside all shame and face, just to be with the person she likes. Harumi's alienation caused her grievances to accumulate. Under the stimulation of Song Qianqiu, all her emotions burst out at once. After taking the first blood, no matter what considerations he had, Harumi would probably not pretend that he could not see his emotions with Kazuha, but the two might have been in a cold war for a while because of this matter. The plot that follows is probably the rivalry between Naoko and Kazuyo. Let's see how Kazuyo, who got the first blood, can manipulate others to face Naoko the big devil and break Naoko's monopoly. Yu Bao, you write well, you write well! Twist me hard! I want to see blood flowing into rivers, blood flowing into estuaries and teeth!

The prototype is Asakura Tooru

Diandiandian

As a fundamental youth love story - this word is made up by me, it is insulated from elements such as time travel, different worlds, systems, etc. Generally speaking, this kind of love story is possible for humans. According to this statement, "Air", "Kanon" and "Clannad" will also be expelled... But I think it is good to talk about ordinary people occasionally. In fact, we are all ordinary people. Ordinary people have things they are good at and things they are not good at, and at the same time, they also have things that others think are slightly unique or "fuck you, bro". Thousands of ordinary people with thousands of faces make up the daily life as warm and moist as water, while below the water level there are undercurrents. When I was a child, I hated TV dramas about love dramas and stories about parents, which made me laugh out loud. As I get older, I gradually understand that what I hate is the triviality that is so real and terrifying, as if it indicates that no one can escape these trivial tortures and the pain of not being understood. Yes, when I was a child, I longed for the extraordinary, but I have long understood that I am still very ordinary. The same is probably true for Naruse Harumi, who is surrounded by a certain halo and past. [Chunhai] After a period of emotional ups and downs, we were able to get a glimpse of Chunhai's "top-level design": missing the perfect family and pure friendship. But he, who no longer has all this since he was 7 years old, has obviously drifted away from this expectation. What will his obsession be? I can't tell. The boy seems to have a lot, but in fact he can't even reach out too far, and he doesn't dare to touch others easily, for fear that if he establishes a close relationship, it will end up broken. I am cautious and feel aggrieved. In my opinion, Naruse Harumi may be the only protagonist besides Hikaru who does not have "subjective initiative". Here we define the so-called "subjective initiative" - ​​in addition to eating, sleeping and studying, which are the normal things that high school students have to do, what they want to do most and what goals they want to achieve, we think they have subjective initiative. [Shangzi] Shangzi's subjective initiative is very clear: together with Chunhai, monopolizing Chunhai, and being monopolized by Chunhai. This priority even exceeds life. Even if she does not say the radical line "Unless I die" like a starfish, it is not difficult for us to imagine her state of mind. Before Naoko lost her parents, in layman's terms, she was Harumi's crush. This kind of behavior is not uncommon among children (in the snowball fight in the dream, she was not on the same side as Harumi but still followed Harumi without wavering); but after losing her parents, she took a big step forward-living nearby , and also lost her father, Harumi became her comfort and partner who covered each other's wounds (not licking each other's wounds, but not allowing others to touch this taboo. There are many times in the article where Harumi and Naoko try their best to avoid others mentioning each other's sad things, sometimes even being overly nervous). After encountering the accident, the two shaped each other's personalities. Harumi was affected to a considerable extent, while Naoko was affected... Almost completely. What comforts us onlookers is that they succeeded, completely succeeded - because they did not want the other party to worry about themselves, they were able to face the misfortunes of the past calmly in public. What they care more about is whether the other party will be embarrassed and embarrassed. Subtly, the seemingly ferocious wounds on their hearts are scabbing. Nearly 10 years after losing her loved ones, her adoptive parents raised Shangzi, and her concern and love for Chunhai shaped her character: Is Shangzi born to favor daughters, so she loves daughters heavily, or does Shangzi love without distraction, so she becomes a favored daughter? It's not important to talk about this anymore. Who's youth doesn't have some pain and pleasure? Starfish The initiative of Starfish is "I only love Harumi, what the hell is face and throw it away? I didn't have it back then" (here refer to Suzune's words after taking the initiative to die and being eaten up: Hanamoto's face has been lost to Suzune) This point has been fully explained in the previous article, here it is only done Additional details: 1. When they were stepbrothers and sisters between the ages of 9 and 11, Chunhai often had injuries on his face. At that time, we could understand them as traces of fighting (a hole dug by the author). Now we can guess further: the abnormal love between the two of them back then was caused by half-understanding physical injuries, which were caused by the lack of development time. Points, in the absence of sufficient hormones, the pleasure brought by physical injury "effectively" makes up for the physiological needs that have nowhere to be released; 2. The two of them gnawed at each other a lot in the past, and the initial starting point was already a bad debt. Combined with other vicious women who instilled bad things about Harunami's mother to Haixing (Haixing's father can be Harunami's mother) Umi's mother must be handsome, and looking at Haixing's extremely beautiful appearance, you can also deduce something. Women who can control blond hair are monsters.) Harumi cherishes her mother's reputation very much, misses her father, etc. Their relationship is not chaotic. Who can tell if they proceed with understanding or confusion? 3. "The children's inability to get along is the reason for the breakdown of the family" is a public statement, and Harumi's mother also knows that the children are hiding something from her, and makes it clear that she does not know what it is (mentioned in the chapter about soaking in hot springs). Similarly, if Haixing's father had known that his former stepson had eaten his daughter to a point of intoxication, he would never have been so generous and kind to Harumi (attended the conversation with the teacher? Chop you into pieces!). At first, I wondered if the parents broke up because they knew the children were playing too much. Later, I reread the previous chapters and thought about it, and found that it was probably not the case, because Harumi left Aomori a year after he and Haisei stopped being step-siblings. If this was the case, Haisei's father must have wanted Harumi and his mother to leave the country as soon as possible, or at least cut off contact. To sum up, I think the two of them will never admit their secrets to a third person. Even if they are caught by Yiye, they will only recognize their current behavior at most. How you guess is up to you, but they will never admit it. Nothing else, this involves adults on both sides. [Yiye] Yiye's subjective initiative is "I want to prove my sense of existence, then, 'If you want to resolve the dispute, you must first intervene in the dispute'" (a line from an angel). When I was a child, Kazuyo was inconspicuous, a follower, and was not noticed. This kind of role was actually "carrying the camera." What does it mean to carry a camera? It means that you always act as a bystander - Duan Yu is the one who carries the camera in Tian Long Ba Bu - this kind of role must be given subjective initiative by the author, otherwise it will be a supporting role. But carrying a camera is also a job. When you are abandoned by everyone, you don't even have the chance to watch, right? How can you carry the camera all the time and film the entire process? Become an actor. Become the protagonist. What was Kazuyo's original plan? I guess it was "putting aside the previous transparent state", "having the ability to get into a good school" and then "finding Harumi to go to the same school as him" and "showing the wisdom and beauty of my 18-year-old girl" - because Kazuyo's muttering was "What are you thinking about coming back at this time?" It can be understood like the boss in the chapter: leaving the original childhood sweetheart relationship and becoming an independent individual. Although I miss it very much, I am finally independent and outstanding. However, you are back... I prefer to believe that Kazuye wants to become outstanding to prove something. The reason for this speculation is that "the character has stronger emotions and purposes as support, which will be more helpful for the development and rationality of the story" rather than saying that other possibilities are not realistic enough. It is possible and necessary for art to be higher than reality. As time goes by, Yiye becomes outstanding and mature. But in the process, the long-standing obsession collided with the black hole-like charm of the returning male protagonist, and the two formed a wonderful chemical reaction. Chemical reactions are hormonal events, and you can't fight against a brain controlled by hormones! (Why is the little head commanding the big head...) So, Kazuyo's fall was actually doomed before the beginning of the chapter, but the subsequent development greatly exceeded the little girl's plan: I originally planned to show you how good I am, but I didn't expect that you came back first and that you and Naoko have always maintained a relationship. Contact... My mentality is broken... It's not that Kazuha has better grades than the male protagonist, but "fuck, Harumi is so much better than me, then will I just go back to being just one of the (many) girls chasing him?". Of course she is happy to see a good male protagonist (Umehara: Ah, I am not the third oldest in ten thousand years, I am the second best this time), but the gap between them in her eyes is so big that she falls into self-doubt. "It is understandable that the photographer decided to become a director. But since this is a love story, the director finally chose to become an actor himself." A mentioned the relationship between Haixing and Kazuyo, that is, when Haixing protected Kazuyo, he protected Kazuyo now. The wonderful reversal of this. I feel very sympathetic to this. When I was in the first year of junior high school, my grades were not very good, so I was thrown into the last row (I was not very good at that time, and being last was like telling you not to influence others, give up on you), I was small, young (I went to school half a year early...), And I was not popular. As a result, in the first and second years of junior high, the person who had the best relationship with me happened to be the first in the class in the first year of junior high. With the two boys who were the first in the grade in the next two years, they not only played together, but also cared about my studies ( It's not that they took the initiative to teach me, but I just answered when I asked), I am very grateful to someone who helped me when I was in trouble. Later, in some things, my family and I gave them great rewards (the kind that is not suitable to be said), but I think this is just a little care. After all, when the world doesn't pay much attention to you, the care of having peers who always accompany you and light up the environment around you can really affect a person's life. At least I still remember it... 25 Years later. The author writes reasonably. That's reasonable. [Light] On the surface, what Light wants is for "everyone to be as close as before", but this is too abstract. It is tantamount to declaring that a person has not grown up in the social circle of his childhood sweethearts. All signs indicate that Guang is not a person who can be pushed forward by others, let alone the kind of person who is very dependent on being needed by others (on the contrary, I personally tend to live in response to the expectations of others). She wants to push everyone - a group of childhood sweethearts and relatives who are close and do not allow others to interfere - to move forward together. This may not be inertia, but more likely caused by some other reasons that I have not yet understood. At the beginning of the article, she expressed that she was troubled by the pressure of expectations: whether it was basketball or her expectations for college, they were all vague and unwilling to talk in depth. This shows that she doesn't care about other people's expectations at all, and it also shows that her youth is extremely confused. Sister Yue is about to graduate and leave Aomori. She has no one to take care of - judging from the recent chapters, maybe Sister Yue is actually the one who protects her? When the time comes, facing the long journey of relatives and the emotional drama of childhood sweethearts turning into a mess, will Guang fall into deeper confusion? [Because it's a novel] As the latest episode of Hamono Tsuki's work, "I'll accept it if it's the protagonist", "I won't accept it if it's not the protagonist", and "I never thought she would become the protagonist, wasn't that the original plan?", It's obvious that all four heroines of this work will end up in the clutches of the devil. After all, the author never supervises. At most, he just ended the online game part with the girl with a smile and became Illidan, which is very reputable. This also leads to the embarrassment of a behavior that is equivalent to being spoiled at the end, which is not too big or too small. Maybe the discussion is not high and it is considered too bland (I am not convinced that this bloody Shura field with guns and sticks is bland) is related to this point. After all, stock trading, quarrels, etc. Are also very topical and communication methods. In other words, it can be used in almost Under the premise of knowing the happy ending, write the story well, with foreshadowing but not too deep (after all, it is an online novel), with twists and turns but not blunt... In any case, while making it more difficult for yourself, it also reduces the possibility that your book could have done better. This is one of the reasons why everyone can read it with peace of mind (book friends: this is it!), So it can only be like this. Having said that, if you don't want Hikaru to become the next victim of my opinion that "the neon girls in the nanny, Haruka and Aimi in the coaching, and the girls in the supernatural line in Shenyin are all a bit redundant", the follow-up plot still needs to give Hikaru a lot. (Just a personal opinion! My personal opinion is that compared to other characters, these characters have less roles, or they are not necessary enough compared to other characters. In fact, I like the previous works and the heroines including "Bringing Sisters") For this work, I am even more confident~ One last comment Me: (Compared to others) Where is Haruka Yami's agency? This is a soul torture. Is there any reason for Yueshui to give him other than the girl's heartbeat? (I mean that as a protagonist, it is a bit insufficient and necessary) Guy A: Forget about Yami, Yami gave it to you by charging your phone bill Me: ... Yami is the compensation that China Telecom owes you for the installation fee discount (woo woo woo, Yami is crying, I'm crying)

I have read more than 400 chapters, and the more I read, the less I like Shangzi. Then my rationality told me that Shangzi did the right thing! But I am very emotional and dislike Naoko more and more! I obviously liked Shangzi at first,,,,, No! How could you not like a beautiful girl who thinks of everything for you and has been with you silently for four years? ! So, in a fit of anger, I combined my rationality and sensibility: "It's all thanks to Chunhai, Chunhai, you really deserve to die!" I felt much more comfortable instantly. Sure enough, instead of internalizing myself, it would be better to slander Chun Hai.

Let's make a key point first: during the serialization period of this book, select a book review or fanfic every week and receive a red envelope worth 2,000 starting coins. I feel like there are already a lot of people reading books, but not many people posting about them. When everyone had ideas, they either kept them in their hearts or discussed them in book club groups. It was a pity that many interesting viewpoints and insights into detailed descriptions were not preserved. So today I went to Yubao and the operations officer to apply and wanted to hold an event. Next, every week, I will select the one article with the best quality and the most popularity from the book reviews or fan works, and send the author a red envelope worth 2000 starting coins. The content of the book review can be an appreciation of the book as a whole or a specific chapter or paragraph; an analysis and prediction of the plot; an analysis of the personality and image of the main characters... Fan fiction because I am not capable enough to identify AI works, so I will only choose fan fiction for the time being. Of course, it's okay if you can make videos or comics, but I feel like there aren't such powerful people among book friends yet. PS. Face slaps are welcome. The reward amount is not high, but it should be enough to add an extra dish when ordering takeout. To grab monthly ticket red envelopes, you have to grab four to get that much. I am not a wealthy person. I pay for it myself and it is purely for charity. No matter how much I spend, it will be useless. Hope everyone can understand. If you can't understand, please v me 50 first to see my strength.

When I saw the starfish scene, a bunch of people shouted that starfish was pitiful. I thought, isn't this the right thing to do? When I was young, I insulted the hero's mother and broke up the couple. Haixing started the fight first, and the hero fought back and was called cs. Now I feel a little disgusted with Haixing. The comments are still too depressing😆

I read more than 300 chapters in one go, and in the middle I went directly to read Shenyin, then read part of Coaching, and then came back to read the latest chapters - I can only say that the author's progress is really obvious. In my opinion, the emotional part of Qingmei is the smoothest among the three novels. Looking at it now, my favorite female character is undoubtedly Shangzi. It is obvious that Shangzi lacks a sense of security, or in other words, all of Shangzi's sense of security is tied to Chunhai. And Harumi, to a certain extent, also lacks a sense of security. So he wanted to integrate into the group in Tokyo, so he was unwilling to enter a new stage with Shangzi without external force, because change meant the unknown, and the unknown would lead to a lack of security. But Harumi's lack of security and Monk's lack of security, I think are completely different in nature. Shangzi lost his parents and the sense of security brought by the "natural love" that his parents could give him. She is grateful to her adoptive parents, but she always feels that she owes them a debt. In this case, why can she rely on Harumi with confidence? In my opinion, from Naoko's perspective, Harumi did not give her that sense of security. Her sense of security comes from the five little ones she once had. The other three either actively or passively gave up on Chunhai back then, and she was the only one who always stayed with Chunhai. Of course, the feeling of liking is also very important, but considering Naoko's situation, this feeling of "sympathy" with Chunhai may also be the reason why she can rely on Chunhai. In my opinion, this is partly why she is wary of other people. Of course, there is the jealousy factor of the palace, but more importantly, it may be that she has someone else to accompany Harumi, so she loses the legitimate reason to ask for Harumi's companionship, and Harumi is not the person she can rely on. And what about Chunhai? Although Harumi lost his father when he was young, Matsuchiko undoubtedly loved him. In other words, compared to Naoko, Harumi had quite a lot of room. Then, Harumi's lack of security will mainly come from the departure of friends caused by moving and changing schools - this may be due to my subjective inference, because I personally have been in a similar situation and have no friends for a long time. Of course, the entanglement with Haixing should also be a major reason. But the result is the same, it leads to separation. So Chunhai is unwilling to let Shangzi enter a new stage, because in Chunhai's subconscious, the result of every change is the end of the relationship, which leads to him becoming a "sword of darkness" and equipping a "barrier of the heart". This is also the root of his scumbag operation. Chunhai could only say that she didn't want it, but she was very honest about her physical condition. The important status of the five little ones made him subconsciously not really want to lose anyone. Therefore, although he will try his best to restrain himself with disciplined morality, he will still become soft-hearted again and again. Of course, the reason for this is that Chunhai has plenty of time, Chunhai has Matsuchiko's natural love, and Chunhai also has Naoko's whole-hearted love. So he can be soft-hearted, but Naoko has no spare time, and Naoko only has Harumi. If Chunhai can face his own psychology earlier, face his dark side earlier, and talk to Naozi, I think Naozi is very likely to accept everything about Chunhai, and even this behavior is a kind of recognition for Naozi. Maybe this way Shangzi's knot in his mind could be resolved earlier. But Chunhai thought a lot in his heart, and Heshangzi said very little. In his mind, he and Shangzi were not a complete whole. And Naoko couldn't ask for it. As long as she still relied on Harumi, she would be completely passive in her relationship with Harumi. And Naoko is not the kind of character who forces Harumi to do anything, she is tolerant. But Shangzi's tolerance will only make Chunhai stay in the safe zone, and Chunhai's own problems will not be solved, and his relationship with her will not develop. As mentioned before, Harumi is unwilling to change, he has to be pushed. Shangzi couldn't do this. In this case, Naoko is bound to be suppressed. Only by relying on the highlights of other characters can Chunhai be pushed to change, and then Naoko. Whether this character is Ichiyo or Haixing, it cannot be Naoko. It's just that the later Harumi's confession comes, the bigger Naoko's wounds will become. Woohoo, my Shangzi. As for other characters, Kazuyo's plot status is currently No. 1, And I also like Kazuyo very much. I personally don't like Haiseo very much. In fact, the relationship between Harumi and Haiseong is more of a background in my opinion. I actually can't understand the entanglement in childhood. Of course, I don't understand it but I can accept it. Haiseo also obviously has a plot to exert force. In a sense, Hikari is very similar to Chunhai. Because of the confusion caused by my sister's further education and the changes in the relationship between the five children, I hope that everyone can still be happy together and have a relatively high sense of morality. The plot of Hikaru has just begun, and so far I don't like Hikaru very much. Finally, I hope the author will update 100,000 words a day, thank you.

"... Can you please stop hugging me so tightly? I'm almost sweating." Naruse Harumi felt that his patience with his former sister-in-law had once again reached the breaking point. "..." The lovely girl behind him almost rubbed her little face into her lover's back, and her hands tightened a little. As for what she was mumbling, I'm afraid even she herself couldn't understand it. Naruse sighed, gently raised his body, and turned over to face Haixing, "I won't run. Kazuha has already said that she won't make trouble today... Well!" In the darkness, a precise and deep kiss interrupted the top student's babble. After a while of commotion, the two sat back in the bathtub again. The starfish leaned weakly and stubbornly on her boyfriend's chest, with a few strands of beautiful blond hair escaping from the shower cap, becoming a delicate plaything on the man's fingertips. "Don't touch it..." "I think your hair color seems a bit... Well, it's time to dye it again." "... Are you fooling me?" The genes of the famous actress were at full strength at this moment. Naruse looked at the pouty girl with a blank expression, his lips moved slightly, "... What are you talking about, I was observing your hair." He gave up the entanglement with the hair color and held his girlfriend with both hands. He hugged her tightly from behind, "I'm thinking, maybe I can try dyeing my hair black?" Haixing's little face turned red, "If you like it, I won't dye my hair in the future." As if remembering some important link, the girl tried to break away from the embrace. When Naruse let go of his hands, she stood up regardless of the pain all over her body, "This can save money!" A pure and proud voice echoed in the bathroom, and Naruse got a splash of water on his face. He shook his head and responded with a smile, "It's pretty good." "... Ah, you..." My girlfriend seemed to be more considerate than he expected, "... You can just watch it if you want. My figure is not good anyway." "My face is the only one that's pretty good-looking. It's okay if you look at it for a while." As he spoke, Haixing lowered his head. He bowed his head and said, "As long as Harumi likes me." After a brief silence, more explosive speeches came one after another, "I just want to be your little fool, and I am willing to do whatever you want to me." "I have been yours since seventeen years ago." Feeling the heavy feelings approaching Naoko, Naruse closed his mouth and let time flow in the mist. The girlfriend in front of me is not Yiye. If he complains to her about the year they met or even the year they were born, he will just burn the piano and boil the crane. ...... "Did you make a bet with them?" Early the next morning, Haixing, who was sitting at the dining table, suddenly spoke. "...?" The boyfriend opposite tilted his head. "..." Is it just an accident? Looking at Naruse's innocent expression, the blond beauty was struck again. Probably because she was satisfied with the fact that she was being held and served today, getting up, washing up, and only being fed, Haixing's CPU stopped working again after a short startup and began to eat. Naruse Harumi picked up the phone and took a look, adding a slightly strenuous step to tonight's itinerary. Did you unite your childhood sweethearts by bullying Haixing... My dear second young lady of the Takigawa family? Isn't it just that I didn't carry you downstairs last time... With my legs so long, I don't have to worry about them getting broken on the stairs. If you don't feel sorry for me, I still can't bear to part with you! Naruse swallowed the bread and thought bitterly, but a look of happiness appeared on his face involuntarily. The starfish opposite is very satisfied. Today's brother is also the most handsome and gentle. My girlfriend's proposal before going out was a bit sudden. "Are you sure you want to go to the beauty salon today?" Naruse Harumi was a little surprised. "Not to mention that you don't need to go to the beauty salon at all. Hair dyeing is quite time-consuming." Haixing's voice became less and less confident as he spoke, "I think you will prefer the look of my black hair... I dreamed about it in my dream last night..." Naruse Harumi swallowed her saliva and almost choked herself. How did you know? "... Okay, I will listen to you today." His genetic genes allowed him to make a perfect disguise. The two of them stepped out of the room hand in hand. ... ... "Hey... Why didn't I see Naoko?" Naruse didn't panic at all and answered fluently, "Naoko went to meet her parents yesterday afternoon, and I sent her to the station. You were video chatting with my mother at that time, so I didn't tell you." "My mother knows it. , Don't worry." Haixing loosened his grip and said in a panic, "... Why didn't you tell me, you should have gone with Naoko! It's all my fault..." Naruse took her little hand again, with a hint of relief in his voice, "It was Naoko who wanted to go. I also hope she can spend more time with her parents... I think it's time to pick up some of the companionship I've missed in the past." "…Really, that's great." Haixing's voice became smoother, and she nodded heavily, very happy, "Then, you are mine alone during the day." As if to increase her confidence, she repeated, "Only you and me. " ... ... "... Harumi, I understand now, I understand everything..." Haixing leaned on the pillow and launched a verbal attack, "You are so bad! You just know how to lie to me!" Being repeatedly slandered by many girlfriends greatly strengthened Naruse Harumi's tolerance for shame, and he remained silent. "... You have wanted me to dye it back for a long time, haven't you... Woo..." The black-haired beauty's voice was small but firm, "I like you the most." "Anything is fine. Harumi, I love you." ... After dinner, Naruse Harumi, who was possessed by a childish ghost, was planning revenge against Hikari, but his cell phone rang. "Naruse Harumi! Should you explain what you went to the hotel for this afternoon?" "How do I know? Let's talk about it when you can stop swiping your mother's credit card!" "Also, who did you go with?" (fin)

Systemless Daily Harem, I read more than a dozen books but couldn't find a meal replacement