Coaching in Tokyo

From the hazy skies in April to the heavy snowfall in December, the sky is vaguely thunderous. It's been a long time since I've read a complete light novel in a row, and I couldn't help but want to write down some of my feelings after reading it. First of all, we must express our admiration for the author's delicate and rich imagination. Without a sensitive heart, it would be difficult to write many vivid and vivid characters. Secondly, the author's emphasis on scene rendering and coordination with characters can also please readers. The vivid and immersive scene descriptions also make readers' empathy more comfortable. In addition, details such as the character's language style and the transition of the plot are also handled with great care. Readers can feel the author's sincerity and lack of deception. There are some other advantages that I won't go into detail here, but overall this is a high-quality light novel. However, readers are always picky and unwilling to be easily satisfied, and so is the author. The book review should not be too long. Here are two points that the author thinks are inappropriate: The essence of the theme of "harem" is also revealed in this work, which is "greed". Human desires are always difficult to satisfy in reality. We have various imaginations and desires for the opposite sex. They may not be compatible and can only be expressed through the form of multiple female protagonists. It can be seen that the author is trying to solve the rationality of multiple female protagonists. However, the author feels that this is precisely the failure of the book. In this world view that is close to reality, the discussion and explanation of human ethics topics can easily form an "uncanny valley" effect, leaving readers at a loss as to what to do. From a certain perspective, it is also a full burden on the characters. Secondly, multiple female protagonists pull at the male protagonist, and plots related to them coerce the male protagonist for a long time. These all make the male protagonist passive, and it is also a sacrifice of his subjectivity, which further leads to the "pattern" of the book being restricted. As the core character, the image of the male protagonist needs to be dug deeper and expressed more purely. His handsome appearance and "gentle and reliable" personality alone cannot eliminate his weak charm, but will instead appear "vulgar".

A very good Japanese light novel. The author's writing style is excellent, making it easy and comfortable to read, and the foreshadowing is also well connected. It would be better if more than two people speak to indicate who is speaking. This is the third Japanese light series that I can continue to watch. Come on. Chiyo No. 1!

The character Chiyo is currently just a stone in rice in my eyes. ●There is a saying, on vacation in a hot spring, there are only Suzune and the male protagonist. Before the plot between the male protagonist and Suzune begins, which reader doesn't want to see the relationship between the protagonist and Suzune heat up, or give out sweets and dog food? ●Before this plot started, the other female protagonists were deliberately separated, leaving only the male protagonist and Suzune. After all, they should be their rivals, right? The appearance of the main female protagonists is enough to pave the way. It's time to delve into the emotional plot, so they are separated. Do you think this is a normal development? ◆This kind of early foreshadowing has raised high expectations, but what is the result? ●The result is that the feelings are warming up, but it accounts for less than 10% What about the rest? ◆This is Chiyo's one-man show, Suzune and the protagonist are just her foil and stepping stone. A large-scale Chiyo drama, "Ah~Jealousy", "Ah~Leaving the family", "Ah~Dating", "Ah~Ringing tone" ●Is the character Chiyo likeable? At least there is nothing likable about this plot. The jealous Suzune at the beginning, targets Suzune throughout the entire chapter, pinches the male protagonist, and keeps pestering the male protagonist, like a bird in a canary cage, clamoring to leave the family, ◆The result is that there is an ending where Suzune misses and soaks in the hot spring with her aunt...◆Finally, there is one more I have to say that I still have to be a teacher to end... In other words, this unlikable character still has a lot of plots ●If it were a movie, I would wonder if Chiyo is a relative of the director, a role forcibly added by a relative. ●If this was an animation, I would think that in order to delay the completion and make more money, the animation team modified the original plot without authorization. ●This is a novel. I'm thinking, this can't be the heroine, right? Or does the author have some obsession with this character that the author wants to see?

Isn't it because you didn't put it on the shelves? Can I just set the fan value to 1 before I can comment? ? Forcing people to reward you? ? Why do you do this? Personally, I don't like forced rewards. If you put it on the shelf, I will subscribe, read the book, and comment normally. Are you forcing people to reward you before you can comment? ? Seriously? ?

I can't stand the male protagonist's hard work, and I don't feel guilty at all when I accept Suzune's rescue. The girl's dedication is just a matter of men and women. As an adult and a teacher, you should guide her well, whether it is forward or backward, instead of taking the initiative to control the relationship in an ambiguous way and being used to the other party. Originally, love with unequal status is a matter of deep thinking. In the original setting, I think there is still something that can be explored: the high and low of the savior and the saved can actually correspond to the person who teaches and the person who seeks knowledge. The emphasis on spiritual communication is the core of this pair of CPs. It is much better to look and feel than the current forced setting where the woman is desperate for the so-called love and the man is forced to eat soft rice.

The taste of this book is very suitable to my taste, and in my opinion, there is no difference between the writing style and details of the popular Japanese love books. It can be compared with "Seiyuu" and "Daily Love". It is completely high-quality, and there is hope that it can even be ordered for thousands of people. But this is only based on the taste of this book. So why can't it become a big hit? In my opinion, the structure, characters, and main line of a book are the factors that determine the lower limit of the book, while the writing style and whether it can create the kind of flavor are the factors that determine whether the book can reach a higher level. As far as this book is concerned, even though I am very resistant and a writer, I still struggled a lot after seeing the setting at the beginning. Then I continued to read, and then I got the feeling. 1. In terms of settings, the protagonist's starting identity is that of a dying person with a negative mentality. I think this is not very pleasing. The first female character who appears in this book is the protagonist's bad friend, which is also an unflattering point. This point is actually nothing in my opinion, but if it wants to attract more readers, it may be insufficient. 2. The eldest lady suddenly appears and cures the protagonist's disease. It feels like a deus ex machina and gives people the impression that the protagonist is useless. For those who intend to attract more readers, this will have a certain impact on readers who read through vicarious reading. 3. In general, if the author can carefully polish the characters, main line, plot, etc., He can definitely reach a higher level based on the author's writing power. The above are some of my current thoughts. I just saw the author saying that the book will be completed in September or October. This is just my personal feeling and does not represent others. I hope it can help the author. Really looking forward to the rest of this book, and the author's next book. Writing about monsters and monsters is also good, but it doesn't seem to be mainstream at the beginning. Personally, of course I hope that the author will continue writing about Niku's love story next time, because I think the author's story of Niku's romance is really touching and has the potential to become a hit.

Sayuri can't be said to have clearly stated that she likes the protagonist from the beginning to now, but she can always joke about "getting married". In my opinion, her favorability is not low. No matter how careless a person is, she will not make such a joke easily. If she later let the relationship take its course and fell in love with Lily, I wouldn't say anything. Even if they were ambiguous but ended up being drunk and crossing the line, it wouldn't matter. But it's very abrupt here. I didn't expect it to be so drunk. It crossed the line and turned into a lily line. Sayuri was originally in a one-sided situation of being liked. This matter had nothing to do with gender. It was just a person being fucked while drunk, which was quite unpleasant. I was very happy when I first read this novel. To me, it didn't have any bad points, and the writing was good, but this place really felt like a failure.

Being drunk and forcibly having sex is really poisonous. Don't comment after reading Chapter 111. This is clearly a patch made by the author to save it, because before this plot, there was not even the slightest hint that Sayuri was a lesbian. If you find it, I lose. Then in the so-called memory plot of Chapter 111, Sayuri suddenly becomes a true Lily, and the evaluation of the people around her suddenly becomes that she is closer to girls, haha. Then let's analyze the rationality of this plot. A teacher had a relationship with a female student whom he taught before, and the female student was also related to the underworld. If Sayuri's career as a teacher was exposed, it would basically be ruined. Since the lesbian likes Sayuri from the bottom of her heart, she should take this into consideration. She has been struggling in society for some years. Wouldn't she be dominated by her lower body without even considering this kind of thing? I wrote this in the middle of the night. The author had better find the audience clearly. The writing style of this book is okay, and the emotions are quite delicate. As a result, after I put it on the shelves and subscribed, I was suddenly hit in the face by a large section of Lily, which even took up several chapters. I still couldn't stand the scrutiny. I always felt like I had been cheated of my money, alas.

Originally, the writing style was quite pleasant, but something went wrong after the real mountain plot. Not to mention her fascination with Sayuri, her introduction of the heroine to sing in an underground bar was a big problem. The bigger problem was that the protagonist actually thought it was okay. I don't know if the author has some fantasy about black people or if they have low experience and don't understand the impact of the environment on people. Time will change everything. They will be assimilated into the colorful world without forcing them.

The management asked me to comment. I don't know how to comment. I'll perform a hip-hop dance for you. ጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈ Thank you all

Damn author, why don't you accept Sayuri and Mayama! If you don't accept it, I'll feel good writing it myself

Teacher Takino in the Rain

Translate it into Japanese, refine it, delete it, and submit it to Nikkei Bunko to try. Maybe it will become popular? (Funny)

I remember there was news some time ago. The man and the woman made an agreement that the man would pay for all the expenses while the woman was studying. The woman would marry the man after graduation. However, the woman regretted it after graduation and could not pay back the money. There was no way to say that the man paid voluntarily, and the law would not recognize this agreement. Although I don't know if this is what it means, when I look at the male protagonist, I always have a sense of déjà vu as the female protagonist in the news.

This book is really amazing in the early stage. The indifferent atmosphere is great. Unfortunately, it gradually loses the temperament and atmosphere in the early stage.

I was a hard-working kid in high school who had no money and could only read pirated copies. Now that I am in college and have enough money to pay for a full subscription to the author, I read it again during this period. I recalled the time when I was in high school and secretly read novels with mp3s. I burst into tears 😭😭😭

I heard that the heroine is suddenly Lily. Is it possible that some people really think that homosexuality is not cheating? Alas

After seeing the plot of the cold war between the male protagonist and Chiyo, I would like to briefly express my thoughts. The previous description is very good and the logic is reasonable. Only for the character of Chiyo, the main question is why the male protagonist likes her. If the male protagonist likes adults, and Chiyo is a child, and if he likes the body, can this be considered liking? Still in heat when the male protagonist already knows that he likes Ihara, this plot is really unacceptable, and the harem also requires logic. There are no other problems. Yueshui and Lingyin both wrote very well.

I don't know how many times it has been done. This book is really suitable for reading slowly and immersively when you have time. If you think it doesn't work, it's because your pace is too fast. Try to slow down. Different scripts, same strangers.

Harem, the illness is cured and the ending is normal

Book club group: 910570293 🌹Welcome everyone

Come on, author, I don't have the financial conditions to reward, so I can only decide while reading and express my respect! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

After seeing the ex-fiancée scene, I can understand the protagonist's logic of action, gentleness, tolerance, and sense of responsibility as a teacher. That's why I especially found that I am not suitable to be a teacher. I absolutely hate the behavior of causing trouble to others, and I also hate others who cause trouble to me.

Dear tall and handsome book friends, this book will be released on May 1st. Thank you for your continued support.

The other two

I probably figured out why I felt a sense of disobedience when I read it. As the male protagonist of the harem, the protagonist's role is too small. Except for the teacher's instinct left over from his predecessor, it is basically a normal person's configuration. If it is pure love, it would be normal. But the harem story seems very unworthy, especially the two students. This is largely due to the convenience brought by the status of a teacher. . If it weren't for Hua Ben's preference, which made the protagonist eat the soft rice, I don't know how to keep this harem going. The female colleague line can also see the efforts made by the protagonist. The other four routes are taken individually by Hua Ben, and each takes what he needs. Two students are considered scum. If you look at the five harems together, it will be quite csgo.

Yysy, Suzune is so good. I feel like her fighting ability is not as good as Yami. She almost died suddenly at the start of the tailwind and there is no one else (ಥ_ಥ)

So few people read it, it's so well written, it's such a pity

Yao?

Is this book finished normally? I was a little scared because I didn't see the ending speech🤔