A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Have a Portable Immortal Abode

You can't tell the difference between a woman and a cultivator. Your Taoist heart is unstable. Immortals who cultivate farts should become mortals! Just marry a wife and have children for the rest of your life.

Set it up too, and see who among the mortals will watch your journey of water, martial arts, and water.

Do you want to write millions of words about a mortal gang? ? ?

Not much to say, rubbish among rubbish! What a waste of time! Even Shennong couldn't bear it, so he left! ! !

The poison is real poison, it's stretched to the limit, and it keeps pushing for dozens of chapters. One moment I'm a waste, the next I want to become an immortal, and the next I can't give up my wife but I have to prepare for becoming an immortal. What have you prepared? The green bottle can be left to eat the ashes. You are really awesome. In the mortal world, people will kill people and set fire to the century-old medicinal herbs. You have all kinds of preparations in hand. I just can't let go of my wife and wait for it to eat the ashes. I almost poisoned myself to death. Immortal cultivators can increase their cultivation level after eating it. You, a warrior, don't know how many months you can stay peacefully and use the green bottle to get pearls and the best medicinal materials to achieve great martial arts? And then go out to find immortality? Changchun Kung is only about two to five spirit stones, and the Five Elements Kung Fu is about the same price. If you are afraid of being killed, just find a plot character, like Wan Xiaoshan, who should be able to exchange medicinal materials for the Kung Fu. You can also try his skills. You have to spend some spiritual stones to buy other skills! I almost smashed my phone after reading dozens of chapters. More than ten chapters were about sex with women. You are the best at Qidian.

I've read more than a dozen chapters and I'm tired! ! This book is destined to hit the streets. Regardless of how well written it is, the character of the main character is not likable.

Chapter 10: Abandon the Pit. It can be seen that the author wanted to write a realistic story, but I just want to say that it is too literary. Reading online texts is a pleasure, let alone fan fiction in online texts. You are not required to come up to kill decisively and have a clear goal. At least don't drag it out so much. You'll be done with the transition in half a chapter. You have to spend several chapters babbling and babbling. There are so many girls who are impressive among mortals. Even if you want to marry a mortal, you would still go after the three sisters of the Mo family. Why is the daughter of an original uncle doing something with big white legs and big breasts? You might as well stop traveling through time and just marry a wife in this world and go to work.

Suddenly I thought of a mortal fanfic that I forgot the name of, even Golden Finger. I only remember that the main character is a bulldozer. Later, he went to the Chaotic Star Sea to help an old clam girl in the late stage of forming pills transform into a human form, and then took a two-day break. There seemed to be some water swordfish, baby carp beasts, etc. In the back. After a long time of searching, I couldn't find him, so he must have been removed from the shelves.

For a novel about cultivating immortals, you are still practicing martial arts in the martial arts world. You might as well write that Zhu Tianliu starts from martial arts, and the main world is a mortal. I'm speechless

The writing is too watery. The little green bottle wants to grab it or not, but also wants to hug the thigh, and still wants to seize the opportunity. The indecisiveness is far different from the character of Han Laomo.