A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Han Li and I Are Evenly Matched

The worst cheat among mortals! Why do you say that? Because it is completely a piece of junk given by Goldfinger in exchange for the energy of creation. Think about it: Is it easier to obtain the energy of creation, or is it easier to obtain pills that enhance ordinary cultivation? This comparison: This golden finger is poisonous! In the world of cultivating immortals, what would you do instead of ordinary elixirs? Your head was squeezed by the door!

Sure enough, you still fed us poison and stepped on thunder. You clearly wrote about Han Li and Nangong Wanchun Palace, but Han Daozu only blinded the protagonist's sight and made him faint. He was able to cast spells across the world without killing the protagonist. Since he could cast spells across the world, why didn't he kill the protagonist as a variable from the beginning. . A group of poisonous people who dared to write about casting spells from across the world. They actually didn't kill the variable of the protagonist. They also took Han Li's opportunity in the future, which was Nangong Wan's box. He confidently said that Han Li and Nangong Wan were having sex. Wouldn't it be nice to run to get the box? This thunder step is really awesome, basically full of toxicity

This is the most verbose novel I have ever read

For me, the out-of-sync names are the biggest poisonous point in rebirth novels. I can tolerate them even if they are a little watery, but I can't tolerate different names.

Writing like this through constant explanation is tiring to read.

The plot is all copied from the original work, and a protagonist was forcibly added to Han Li's side. Is this one planning to follow Han Li to ascend to the spiritual world and the fairy world? Furthermore, a large section or even a whole chapter is dedicated to Han Li alone. That's all. Most of our fellow mortals are at this level. However, it is also set that the protagonist does not remember the plot. Whenever he can take advantage of being familiar with the plot, the protagonist selectively cannot remember it, but has a vague impression. Then he hesitates, talks to himself, and explains a lot, and ultimately relies on Han Li to promote the plot. This makes the protagonist feel very useless, which is very uncomfortable to watch.

How can I say that your golden finger is a copy? Doctor Mo will leave the God's Hand Valley for a period of time, and Han Li has not discovered the effect of the little green bottle at this time. Zhang Tie has also disappeared. At this time, sneak into the God's Hand Valley at night and stun Han Li. Then you can basically get it, and you can also get it with the skills. You don't need to do it forcefully. Every time I see something like "Golden Finger", it takes a lot of effort to get the little green bottle, but the written logic is very confusing and I feel uncomfortable watching it.

I don't have any objections to Goldfinger, but can you be more decisive and stop hesitating for a long time? If you can't remember the plot, just write it down and review it slowly. Don't tell me that all the worlds use simplified Chinese characters.

This is the most frustrating movie I've ever seen, bar none.

What kind of book are you writing? It's a lot of procrastinating nonsense at this level.