Begin Liver Proficiency with Alchemy

The writing is not bad, but the level is downgraded, and the leveling up becomes more and more obvious later, and the skill proficiency is also downgraded! A talisman-making technique that I learned in the early days has never been used since then, and the level has always been that of a beginner! The function of the golden finger is to help the protagonist overcome the initial difficulties, and then help the protagonist improve his skill proficiency, become a master in the same realm, and become a genius in the eyes of others! In the early days, I was very careful, but later on, when I was either fighting or on the way to fight, my writing style changed! I felt uncomfortable even watching it, so I withdrew.

The content is smooth but lacks highlights of the plot The excessive plot likes routines, but I am very cautious and end the plot immediately The skill tree of the protagonist begins to be barren in the upper and lower stages of the Nascent Soul, and I slowly lose expectations for the subsequent plots To be honest, there is no free chapter part that gives a good experience

It's the end, let's talk about my impressions. In recent years, few books have reached the finale. Most of them are because the characters' IQs are not online. This is an unbearable point. This aspect of this book is relatively good. There are not many mentally retarded plots and the story is okay. There are also shortcomings, that is, there is no sense of pleasure. The protagonist upgrades too quickly, which wipes out a lot of the sense of pleasure. Most of the pleasure of watching Xianxia should come from cultivation. You work hard to cultivate a magic weapon and then kill everyone. You work hard to practice a skill to surpass the same level, but these books are not available. The skills and magic weapons are constantly changed during the rapid upgrading of the protagonist. This should be a problem that affects the popularity.

As a hardcore bookworm for 20 years, to be honest, this book is quite good. I hope to continue to maintain the current level.

Don't stress the level so much, the rest of the writing is pretty good.

Let's put some armor first, my personal thoughts. The title of the book is quite good, because except for the alchemy technique in the early stage, I basically never used it later. The protagonist's resources are all provided by Jie Xiu. Those who want to see how to make elixirs and get rich can leave. The whole article talks about being stubborn, but there is only one point of being stubborn, that is, the sect's arena and rankings are not improved. But soon after being discovered by the sect leader, the protagonist was blamed for everything. I can only say that Han Paopao would have left the sect long ago. (Actually, my personal opinion is that if you deprive the protagonist of the qualification to enter the inner peak or forcefully recruit the protagonist, you can run away. After all, you have been blacklisted. Without exposing your talent, no quota will be given to you) I don't know why the alchemist is so faux in this book. Normally, the alchemist must have a few thugs. After all, you need evil-proof pills for Qi training in this book 😅. Then the alchemy sect was beaten and I really wanted to laugh. Are you really going to make alchemy without you? And why didn't I see the sect's top elixirs? Shouldn't there be a few unique elixirs that only the sect can refine? You keep saying that alchemists are not good at using force, why don't you mention wealth? It seems like there is no kryptonite in a fight. What a joke. Why I am posting this at this point is because I saw the Blood Sea Sect coming back and being attacked by the Peak Foundation Establishment Sect. I couldn't stand it anymore. If I had any brains, I would have brought a golden elixir, and they were not dead yet. So many people went back to make the leader of the Foundation Establishment team laugh to death. I have tried my best to be robbed and killed. Others bully the weak when they are stubborn, but you are hunted down every day. It's hard to go a day without jumping through the challenges. The protagonist seems to have never fought anyone in the same small realm. I don't even bother to scold you for killing someone who will be exposed, and who will be traced to such a poisonous point. From my personal point of view, it's okay before building the foundation. After that, it's no different from other novels. He was still being pushed away by others, which seemed even more uncomfortable.

There is nothing wrong with starting a resource war between the two sects at the beginning. After all, the plot needs to develop. However, the pattern is not big enough, and most situations are simply taken for granted.                                                                                                                                                                                              by Xuandan Sect. The disciples of the Xuan Dan Sect generally have low combat power. When low-level disciples fight, actual combat experience is important, but magic weapons are equally important. At about the same level, even if the disciples of the Xuan Dan Sect cannot completely counterattack, but with a large number of magic weapons, talismans, and elixirs, the Xuan Dan Sect will not be beaten into a loser.        ，， Even if the Xuandan Sect elders in the Jindan realm are not good at fighting, after hundreds of years, the overall gap in magic weapons, financial resources, and heritage at this level will be even greater, and this will not be the case if they cannot defeat them.                                                                       seems to have been awakened, the senior management seems to have suddenly realized the importance of combat power, and then spent a lot of resources to cultivate fighting skills experience for the disciples. This description is even more unnecessary. As mentioned before, when there is not much difference in actual combat experience, Xuan Dan Sect disciples do not need to be afraid of Blood God Sect disciples. Practical experience can be gained, but the realm of immortality, magical treasures and financial resources are things that many disciples are unable to do, and there is no place to improve if they want to improve. Therefore, if the senior leaders of the sect can really see the problem clearly and have a vision of the situation, they will not do it like this. The wind roared, the cranes roared, and the grass and trees were all in disarray. They were like headless flies running around, showing fear in front of the enemy. It also released a signal to the outside world that the Xuan Dan Sect's overall strength was weak. This is probably the more terrifying thing. Compared to the disciples of the Blood God Sect, what the disciples of the Xuandan Sect lack is just a lack of actual combat experience, so there is no need to worry about this at all. However, compared to the Xuandan Sect, the disciples of the Blood God Sect lacked many factors of the Rich Couple Dharma Land, and there was no place to make up for it. The overall description direction is wrong, and the pattern is naturally not enough.

That's outrageous. It's only Chapter 151 that builds the foundation, Chapter 216 with the golden elixir, and chapter 280+ with the Nascent Soul. It's not as difficult as building the foundation if you co-author the golden elixir and the Nascent Soul together, right?

The elixir is not as efficient as the spirit stone, so the elixir is waste, and there are so-called future troubles. Then what is the meaning of the existence of the Lingdan Sect? No wonder a sect that produces 1/3 of the cultivation materials is attacked, and there is no one to talk about the scene. It turns out that it is producing waste that has future troubles. Since there are future troubles, the protagonist has no pill to build the foundation. What kind of foundation building pill should he make?

The most amazing thing about this book is that the alchemist himself does not take any elixirs.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, the settings are in a mess, and I hate it. The first few dozen chapters are okay, but why are they so bad in the later chapters? Besides, the other sects are all awesome and unique, but your alchemy rubbish is mediocre? Don't know what it means

The leveling process was very tough. Three years later, I entered the fourth level to the fifth level, and three years later, I was still on the fifth level. Even with sufficient resources, it was so slow. In the first year, I was on the second level to the fourth level.

It's really interesting. One blow from 30 foundation builders can knock Jindan to death 666

After reading seventy chapters, I spent money to subscribe to the comments. So if a large sect doesn't have a library, do sect disciples have to go out and buy everything to broaden their horizons and buy exercises and so on? For example, doesn't the sect of alchemy, weapon refining, immortality and hundreds of arts have a library? Do you rely entirely on the disciples of the sect to cultivate themselves? Are there any other techniques that are passed down to such a large sect but only have such basic techniques? What is the difference between what you write and that of casual cultivators? The difference is that the sect has free residence without spending any money?

Prices are sky-high. A mid-grade magic weapon in the Qi training stage can cost tens of thousands of spiritual stones, while a pill can be sold for only tens or hundreds of dollars. If you can't write down prices well, you can learn from them. It's hard to stand writing like this.

I have deleted my previous comments. This plot is either being hunted and then killing you, or it is laying the groundwork for how to be hunted down later, and then you are hunted down.

I have been fighting across levels and won every time. The most important thing is that those who are higher than the protagonist have no tricks. They start to be shocked every time without doing anything! ! ! Then he was stabbed. To be honest, some authors write exciting articles that highlight emotions, describe the environment, and show the protagonist's awesomeness from the side. But you write so directly, how awesome and powerful it is, it simply prevents readers from being immersed in the situation, and it feels so boring!

You can't stand it anymore, and you are still being stared at by the sect leader. He will tell you what you are doing no matter what, and you will know what magic weapon you are selling more than once. The protagonist who was assigned the task to arrange this would have died long ago, and the subsequent cultivation resources are all obtained through experience and killing.

After building the foundation, you are looking for death in various ways, and the more you look at it, the stupider you get!

I was under too much pressure in the early stage, and I'm not a great person, so my results were too poor.

The author deliberately suppresses levels and proficiency, which is very serious It took more than 20 years to reach the eighth level of Qi Refining. If you increase the speed a little, I won't feel so uncomfortable.

The first part is really good, but the second part starts to write randomly, I can't stand it at all, breakthroughs in battle, various ways of writing to reduce intelligence.

The emotional line is too abrupt! It always feels like I am looking for a Taoist companion for the sake of finding a Taoist companion. There are not many words in which Yanru appears. For some reason, she is the leading actor? Just like "It feels like you're old enough to get married." The author wouldn't be an uncle over 50 years old urging his children to get married 😥😥😥

The story is messy and gives viewers a headache

You've already written over one million words, so why do you feel like you're still making little progress? The writing is still very raw, especially what is chapter 298 about? After the protagonist is promoted to Nascent Soul, the entire sect has become mentally retarded, especially Zhuge Wuyou. He was already set up to be a highly resourceful person, but look what has become of him now? When he heard that the Ruin Realm was coming, he panicked and looked like he had no idea. Look at the descriptions of his conversations with the protagonist. Isn't this a mentally retarded person with no independent opinions? Also, take a look at the description of the dialogue and interaction between the two of them. It is stiff, immature, messy and not smooth. Even the better primary school students' compositions are more comfortable to read than this chapter. Have you been stuck during this period? If you get a batch of water and talk about Che Luglun, if you can't guarantee the quality by taking one chapter a day, then you can't blame anyone for the poor results.

Every time the mana is exhausted in a fighting battle, it will take several years to recover. That's a pointless fight.

After reading for several days, I finally finished it (Chapter 439), which took 2477 minutes. Overall, this book is logically rigorous and refreshingly compact, and I couldn't stop reading it. The power of each level is clearly distinguished, and the narrative logic is in order. Except for a few typos that are a bit annoying, the overall reading experience is really good. The author digs holes and buries them, and his ability to control the overall rhythm is also solid, adding chicken legs🍗🍗🍗

At first I was put off by the title, but I kept reading and found that it became more and more exciting. I feel that the author's description of the layout needs to be improved, but the description of the protagonist's various encounters is still very good. I recommend that friends who are in a book shortage can read it together. I read the book in a total of 4 days from the latest chapter 😃

After ordering it, the writing is still very good. At the beginning, I thought it was ordinary, with some places being stiff and there were a lot of typos. It feels better and better from now on, the author's writing skills have obviously improved, the characters are distinctive, the background is grand, and the plot is fascinating with twists and turns!

I read it all in one go. The writing was a bit immature at the beginning, but it is undeniable that the author's writing skills are still very good. The plot setting is unconventional and the concept is very good. The most attractive thing about cultivation novels is the grand world view, the wonderful fighting process, the fantastic adventure process, and the magical cultivation process. Many authors have more or less problems in these aspects, but this article has achieved a detailed and appropriate world setting without being perfunctory. It has also tried its best to describe the fighting process in a very exciting way (of course some of the content is a bit embarrassing, such as fast, very fast, quite fast...). The same is true for the adventure and cultivation process, at least it always makes people feel unexpected. I hope the author can stick with it. This is an excellent cultivation novel worth reading.