Battle Through the Heavens: Super Enhancement

Protagonist: Niang Xipi! Huo Huo's incompetence has caused the family to suffer disaster. It seems that I must go out!

Queen Queen, Gu Xun'er, Little Medical Fairy

It's a bit embarrassing to write about it. I use a gun, but I didn't write about the gun skills. My turtle, the Buddha's Furious Lotus! ! ! ! You are just copying homework. Even if you copy it, you still need to pay attention -_-||. At least the spear skills are arranged, starting a prairie fire with hundreds of blows. Spear skills, since you want to absorb the fire of hundreds of beasts, create one, fist and kick skills, ferocious beast fighting and killing methods, and physical training skills called "Hundred Beasts Body". Farewell to Old Buddha Angry Lotus, I always feel like I am looking at Xiao Yan. Since you don't want to go the Burning Jue route, then don't show someone with the same fighting skills as Xiao Yan. Otherwise, the character design will feel like it has the shadow of Xiao Yan. It's best not to use the word "jue" in the exercise. You can't name it. Just say it and we'll help you think about it.

Little Doctor

Your surname is not Xiao, why do you always write about persecutory delusions?

I hope the protagonist and Xiao Yan are friends. Xiao Yan has a good character and is good to his friends.

Yunyun

Selling elixirs at cabbage prices is really awesome.

The pace is too fast, and the whole book looks like it was written on an assembly line. The dialogues, battles, daily alchemy, etc. Are just like writing a diary, and nothing stands out. The protagonist is too young and too strong. It would be more comfortable to either increase his age by five years or lower his strength a little. As for his alchemy strength, he is okay. Written like this, Xiao Yan's three-year contract has not yet ended and the protagonist is already a fighting saint. Well, he is a fighting saint in his early twenties.

If you don't grab the opportunity, girls can always grab it. Otherwise, your book may not be successful. Because you don't have any of the cool points that readers need, so it's unreasonable for you not to do so!