The National Teacher Does Not Practice

The traces of the driver's license are a little heavy, and I feel like I haven't got my driver's license, so don't force yourself to drive 😥 A rare good book, I almost spent all the Qidian coins I had never used on this book. The story has depth, the opening is eye-catching, and a good story must have a reasonable plot. This book feels like it has the potential to become a hit. Just keep this progress and don't crash. Finally, I would like to say that the traces of a few characteristic characters are quite obvious. I hope to write better and better in the future😜😜

The creativity is quite good, the writing is quite imitative, and some plots are well written. Disadvantages: 1. The most common anticlimax for young authors.          2，，，，，， 3, the same as 2. Putting the cart before the horse, the plot of the novel is the key point. The writing style imitates the master, and the plot is really like a paste. The sense of fragmentation is too severe. I selected a certain paragraph and it seemed that the writing was a little bit masterful. When I looked at the plot, it was a composition written by a primary school student.

The more I read, the more exciting it becomes. The author's writing style is very good. I haven't seen such smooth work in a long time.

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😅The protagonist has only been away for thirteen years, but the brothers and sisters who have been together for decades have been fighting so fiercely. Is it because of the lack of character or the lack of vision of the protagonist? This Qintianjian morning and evening pill

A good book is a good book, why does it have to be a harem The Stallion Failed

Is this plot serious? I rebelled, and although you didn't help the court beat me, you didn't help me in the rebellion, so afterwards I killed all your men, women, and children. How could I still be reasonable? Is the court unethical? Then who knows if you rebels have any moral integrity? Can this be explained by bullying?

Actually, I am a little disappointed with you. The recommendation vote I gave you was at a higher level than when you updated. I hope that after joining, you can work hard and grow up quickly. At this level, it's not just about getting things done. You need to have the ability to think systematically. What is the value of what you do? Have you created barriers and formed core competitiveness? What is the difference between the novels you write and other teams within Qidian? Do your articles precipitate a set of reusable physical data and methodologies? Why can't others write them when you write them? You need to use your own judgment, not just do whatever I say. In the follow-up, I will put your thoughts into ten chapters of daily updates. I hope to see your thoughts, not just the progress. Just a reminder, your output is a bit meager compared with authors at the same level. It's almost the end of the year, so work harder. Look at the person on our monthly voting list. Before he was banned from the list last year, he could have been playing in front of the keyboard for a whole year. Growth must be accompanied by pain. When you are in the most pain, you actually grow the fastest.

Mo Nu, it's abominable if you don't want to create a special group of characters

After reading some chapters, what can I say? I think the author should focus on the protagonist's "present" rather than the "past". For example, the protagonist's "message" to his former disciples, and the entire memory killing, are all carved out of the same mold. Once or twice is fine, but more often becomes quite pretentious and deliberate, and completely boring. If you can't write in different ways and you can't write well, then write less. You can use your previous background to pretend, but you can't be so lazy.

After reading the introduction, I don't want to read anymore. It's okay to reincarnate myself. I want to reincarnate my enemies and friends together.

Let me talk about my views on this kind of novels about the infinite rebirth of the same world: 1. First, I will look at the world view, or the history of world development. The best world view is that the world is developing dynamically and new things emerge. The middle world view is that the world develops slowly, but generally there is still some development. The lowest one is that there is no step forward and no change. The change and development mentioned here can be science and technology, it can be an institutional system, it can be a way to increase power. I have read a few of this novel Ten chapters can only be classified as inferior at present, because the protagonist of this book has spent thousands of years in this world in two lives. He has also made great achievements or has become a world-class star, the top one, but he has only done two things. One is to help create a country with a traditional system and maintain its rule for hundreds of years. The dynasty system can be said to be unchanged. The other is to create the so-called star palace system. But looking at the root, this is just one part of the existing cultivation system. It is more perfect, not subversive and innovative. To sum up, the world has developed, but very little; 2. It is the protagonist's thoughts and practices. A tree grows for hundreds of years, and it will undergo earth-shaking changes. What remains unchanged is the desire to become bigger and stronger, let alone a person. Therefore, to evaluate this type of protagonist, what needs to be seen is whether his thoughts have changed, whether he can uphold his original intention, or give up on himself, or become more in line with the so-called Tao , carefree and comfortable, or become paranoid, longing for detachment. The way he behaves depends on whether he is calm enough, insidious enough, and has enough back tricks. In short, whether he is a sixth man or not. The protagonist in this novel can only be rated as average. His thoughts have developed, but not much, just a little vicissitude. The above is my impression after reading dozens of chapters. If there is anything wrong, please criticize and correct me. Thank you.

I've read about ten chapters, what can I say? A more emotionally intelligent statement: This novel would have been popular more than ten years ago, and the author could have become a god in one book. I won't talk about those with low emotional intelligence, so as not to hurt the friendship.

If you live for 1,000 years and you get tired, then you can't commit suicide after living for hundreds of millions of years. What's more, most of the protagonists can achieve immortality in the end. How terrifying this is. There is no difference between hundreds of millions of years and one year in front of eternity Feel free to say anything

If I were still a college student, I would still like to watch it, but for elementary school students, this is a bit too pretentious.

I always feel that the author is organizing something beyond his ability.

At first, I was chasing it from Millions of Possibles, but the more I watched it in the beginning, the more I felt that I had an indescribable literary youth disease. Now that I see this kind of two-level comment, I understand. I did grow up in a way. To paraphrase a book friend's comment, if I were a college student, I would think this is a magical book, but now that I am in the sixth grade of elementary school, I only feel very childish. I hope the more I write, the better. After all, I really like it.

I feel that the description is too deliberate. I personally feel that the old Yinbi who have lived for hundreds of years are the kind of people who are extremely stable and can only help the Yin people behind their backs to achieve their own goals. It is impossible to say that I am standing in the spotlight. Using one's body as bait is not the behavioral logic of a high-ranking person

First, why is the protagonist able to reincarnate continuously? This is a bug. The existence that opposes him must also know this. So up to now, I have not seen the protagonist have any sense of crisis (not to mention his low strength, so what does the existence of the dark network do.) Second, the protagonist is an immortal, even if the God Emperor knows this, he will covet him. So why do you always have to be in the limelight and show off? Third, in the dark web, because the national master does not appear to the public as a leader, over time everyone will forget the significance of the protagonist to the dark web. If faith is gone, rebellion is necessary. Fourth, there is internal fighting in the Qin Tian Prison. You must know that the imperial power is greater than anything else. The death of the imperial master in the Qin Tian Prison is equivalent to cutting off one's arm. At this time, there is no fear of being liquidated by the emperor due to internal fighting.

It started well, but some of the routines were too old and awkward. It's like eating rat excrement at a Manchu banquet, and suddenly I lose my appetite.

Liyang I, there are Wei Huayang, Liuli, Mu Jiuyao Guoshi I, there are Xiao Xu, Xue Ji Ji Ping'an I, currently none If Xu Xiurong is not accepted, that's it The most irritating person may be Huayang, but the most difficult to appease may be Xiao Xu Xue Ji is used to being submissive, and there will be no problem if she is not provoked. Liuli hasn't been exposed in this life, Mu's words haven't officially entered the game, and the relationship between the two is more like confidants. Looking at how to deal with Shura Field 😁, I hope to burn the protagonist

When I saw the character list, there was only one protagonist, so I thought it was a story without a female protagonist, so I planned to leave. After reading the comment section, I found that someone complained that it was a harem story, so I came back again. Sure enough, boasting that it is a harem novel may be just to make you fall for it too. However, if it is a harem novel, then this book must be a harem novel. 🙂

Keep reminiscing, keep writing about the past, it would be great to re-open a book, the endless memories are pretentious, the first part was okay, but the more you read it, the more you read it it will make you sick.

The millions of possibilities back then once again allowed me to see the unbridled charm of online literature, but the work of the past few years has brought me back to the heaviness of reality. I seem to be looking for the feeling I had at the beginning, the time when I found a new world, trembled for it, and cheered for it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   " So, if you have any good works, can you recommend them?

It was okay for the first few dozen chapters, but then it fell into a tacky mood. There are too many women, forget it. Those pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots are really too awkward and trivial. I heard that there is a secret realm behind it, but I really can't complain about it.

Before the starry sky returns: Weird pretense, no one knows anything After the starry sky returns: It gets better and better

I just read this book. I voted for the monthly vote and read it in one day. I will come back in half a year with this update speed.

To put it simply, the theme setting is very good and very innovative. Even if the book is really not in line with your own ideas, as long as you can control it well, you can actually write it. But in Rebirth + Harem with multiple female protagonists, I had the impression that the previous book was called Tianyu Cangqiong, and he just stopped here from his first book. This is not a setting problem, but the overall world view setting of the novel, which is constantly evolving. The return of the King of Soldiers and the descent of the miracle doctor are no different now, right? Especially since the pace of this book is slow, readers generally read it very carefully, and any problem will be magnified. Even if it is a simple adjustment, it would be much better to just rejuvenate the protagonist's physical body, so that the focus will return to the star setting, although it is difficult to write the enemy in this way. Of course, I haven't read the later stages yet, so I don't know if there are any additional settings. But I still hope the author can take the time to reset it, it will be much better.

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I would be really sad after saving for half a month to do this 😢