I Forge My Way to the Dao in the Cultivation Realm

I feel that the suppression of the protagonist is a bit harsh, and the suppression of the blessing entries is increased by multiples, which scares me to death. In the future, I will not be able to perform the blessing once in several years, and it is equal to nothing.

This book gave me a different feeling, it started anticlimactically, or it ended like a dog's tail. I have read 173 chapters so far, and I will know the general content by looking at the chapter names. When I looked at the previous article, I thought it would be a fairy tale with a system and a preference for traditional fairy tales. It would have its own setting in the world of Kai Ling and Ten Thousand Spirits. In the future, the protagonist would slowly upgrade and then improve the strength of the weapon refining, mainly leaning towards tradition. But later the author told me that this is not the case. After the protagonist reaches the middle stage of Qi training, his weapon-refining strength begins to improve by leaps and bounds. Moreover, the improvement of the weapon-refining strength has nothing to do with the system. This is obviously biased towards Shuangwen. The key is that the weapon-refining strength is biased towards Shuangwen, itself. His qi training strength is still slow, which is a bit like Gou Dao style. In addition, the protagonist has not been told that his understanding is good, but the protagonist is good at refining weapons, seals, and formations. This tends to be a genius style. In short, the protagonist is like a genius style + Gou Dao style before forming an elixir. When the protagonist is waiting for the elixir to be formed, the author will perform a time tribulation, isn't it just to forcibly enhance the protagonist's strength? The protagonist also has various avenues of understanding, especially time, space and cause and effect. These three avenues are rarely understood in the world of spirits. This is equivalent to the protagonist coming out of that secret realm and being invincible under the gods. Those above the gods may not dare to attack the protagonist for fear of cause and effect. Then isn't it just a matter of pushing and then ascending? Isn't this just a cool article? In this case, what are you doing in front of you? You can just write a cool article from beginning to end. This is just an anticlimax, or a tail end. In addition, the title of your book is about weapon refining, and the system is mainly about weapon refining, but I don't understand your experience of that system very well. I suggest you read novels about data flow. This is not important. What is important is that I feel that after the protagonist comes out of that secret realm, he will know so many great ways, so weapon refining is not important. Moreover, the protagonist can refine weapons, make talismans, alchemy, and formations. It gives the impression that the protagonist is all-powerful, and refining weapons is not important. This way of writing does not highlight how good the protagonist is at refining weapons. This makes me feel that this system is not dispensable, and it does not necessarily have to be a weapon refining system. You can just create a system that can open entries for magical weapons, talismans, elixirs, and formation disks. Then changing the title of the book to "Four Arts to Become an Immortal" is better than yours. Anyway, this book gave me the feeling of inconsistency. As for whether it starts at the beginning but ends at the beginning, or ends at the end of the day, that is your own opinion.

Personally, I think this novel on the art of cultivating immortals is very well written. Many novels on cultivating immortals nowadays are just a pile of resources without any understanding, and are purely materialistic. Some people cultivate immortality in the underworld way and engage in all kinds of evil behaviors. There are also systems that cultivate immortality, and the protagonist becomes a support. These three categories have no celestial spirit at all. If you don't want to save sentient beings, you should at least do good to the world.

Although it cannot be said to be a fairy grass, from the immature writing style, it can be seen that the author has worked hard on the same system of cultivating immortals in Shuangwen. Many settings have been carefully thought out and are already very powerful! And as the chapters increase and the plot becomes more and more fleshed-out, maybe if more people read it in the future, some people will say something like the poisonous point, but we have to admit that the author is not following the crowd but trying to write something of his own. This is something that many system writers from Qidian are missing. After all, they are either making fun of jokes or cool text templates.

Was there a change of characters in this book? As soon as Zhao Huo'er came out in the early stage, the protagonist's character changed from a slut to a wild one, and then until the senior sister was given away for free, he completely felt like a disciple. I didn't see the fairy spirit at all, but the urban spirit became more and more intense, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. After looking at the table of contents, I found that the article has become more interesting. Why was it so depressing in the early stage? The sect was slapped in the face and the daughter was given away. It was hard for people to hold back.

I prefer the genre of reasoning themes, but the dispute between book and art that the author added is too unreasonable, and it is too blunt in order to increase the conflict. This is fundamentally different from the dispute over sword energy. The two factions, Ben and Yi, may have different ideas, but cultivating immortality is very personal. Where is the conflict of interest between the two? Is it so sharp? The most outrageous thing is that art represents a producer. In theory, it will be richer and more able to create wealth, and wealth can overtake others in corners and cultivate faster. You may not like to study your skills and concentrate on your practice, but if you hate others studying their skills, you won't be able to stand up. Those who have no hope of breaking through in spiritual practice, don't they delve into their craft? So which faction are they? Moreover, this sect is still a sect based on skills. The two sects of this art are not so incompatible with each other.

The novel was well written and I read it in one sitting. However, I always felt that there was something wrong with the pace. During the foundation building period, I wanted to cram everything into the protagonist. New things, new world views, and new characters appeared one after another. The foundation building and golden elixir even involved the Immortal Lord. , After the golden elixir, I can't write anything and just speed up with one hand. Are those Taoist things really possible with foundation building? The protagonist understands them in one click, and he can use them after he understands them. It's so much that it's a bit funny. It feels like he can't stop writing and can't stop the car.

Since the appearance of Zhen'er, the character logic and plot rhythm of this book have gradually lost control. The cool writing makes people feel awkward but not happy.

It dug a lot of obvious pitfalls, and the writing was very rough. The level of Qi training worried Yuanying's heart. Looking at the early stage, it felt like a eunuch novel, giving people a feeling of rushing to the street.

Do you think I won't recognize you after you put on a new vest? You old eunuch.