Uzumaki's Avengers

I can finally comment. I feel that the writing style of this book is the same as that of Namikaze Naruto next door. Especially, Menma's fight against Naruto is the same as that of Naruto next door's fight against Asuma.

Naruto's upper limit won't be too high without the Nine-Tails. Naruto's very talented multiple shadow clones will be enough after watching it a few times! Raised as the son of the Fourth Hokage The template is Namikaze Minato + the physique of the Uzumaki clan. Who has Asura's chakra in him? The upper limit of Menma's talent is equivalent to the original version of Naruto's smart version and he learns some weird ninjutsu.

I would like to call you the king of water. You are so good at water.

This protagonist is simply a stinky chess piece, one stinky chess move after another.

So far, I quite like this book. To be honest, the author's writing style is average. There are many well-written paragraphs that are a bit out of character later on, but I don't deny that the author's control of strength is similar to my previous YY. I agree with it. Most of the Hokages, as long as I don't use my brain, I beat Obito at the age of 3 and beat him at the age of 5. Although it is an exaggeration, it is about the same. There are also some small bugs in the article, such as the scroll for chakra training. You don't know Japanese, and there is no description of chakra. There are no attributes either. Kyuubi has been alive for thousands of years and he is considered a veteran. You are really brave in a fist fight. Although there is a seal, the fist fight can definitely attack you. But in the end, it is still okay to call him by his real name. I want to criticize the psychological description of the protagonists of Konoha. , As for Naruto, my personal opinion is that I am a Jinchuuriki. According to the author's description of him, he goes his way and I go mine. After he defected, I dared to break his legs without hurting his life. My favorite among Naruto is Hinata. It's a pity.

You can take a look, but I don't recommend ordering it all. It's too watery. Where can I see the lizard? Is this lizard useful? Why don't you find Orochimaru in exchange for the Dragon Earth Cave Psychic Contract? What's the use of a lizard with Jonin level combat power? There are so many pictures.

The book is okay, but it's really weak. The protagonist's emotions change too much. It's understandable that the author wants to create a character through the psychological growth of the protagonist, but the connection between the emotions is very average, which left me feeling inexplicable. The protagonist is angry at one moment and sneers at the other. Personally, I haven't watched Naruto, but I understand some of it. I only read the fan fiction and I think it's okay. However, I've seen many people comment that the plot is no different from the original.

Naruto without a beard

Earlier, the protagonist kept repeating that he wanted revenge and that he was a realist. Why did he mention the ideal of unifying the ninja world several times later? The protagonist himself was persecuted in a rigid political system, but benefited from the confrontation between different countries. As soon as he regained freedom, he began to take stock of the significance of unifying the ninja world? They kept saying that this was the best solution? Inexplicably, zzzq has come into my head Having read half of the book, I hope the author will stop writing this way in the future. If the protagonist wants to be unified, just write directly and clearly that it is for greater freedom or desire for power. Don't write something that feels like a political slogan. The quality of life never depends on the number of countries. It is like writing that the protagonist expresses that unification is for the ninja world to become a better place. It feels like a fig leaf. It's quite bad.

Time travelers, don't talk about brotherhood, okay?

How should I put it? It can't be considered a bad book, but it's not much better. The author may want to pursue authenticity, but there are too many unnecessary foreshadowings, especially some narrations and psychological activities. The last two books, including the eunuch one, have the same flaws. Sick, cumulatively, the most straightforward problem is the lack of pleasure. The most important thing for a fandom is to have a climax to feel pleasure, torture F4, beat up other ninja villages, or pretend to be a b or whatever. Not to mention that you are still Uzumaki Menma, you should be more rough!

As an old bookworm, I read a lot of Naruto stories, because the structure of Naruto itself is not very logical, so I often ignore the general loopholes. I would like to ask the author, in your setting, Naruto was raised as the son of Naruto, and knowing that his mother's surname was Uzumaki, wouldn't he be curious about the only person in the village named Uzumaki? After all, the world of Naruto is still a world where large and small ninja clans form ninja villages.

It's too watery, there's no conflict at all, and none of the main characters appear. It stands to reason that at this time, I would go to Tsunade for a round of my pain is above yours. At the same time, I would encounter the assassination of the roots and Jiraiya at the same time, and let him make a choice. Encounter people from other ninja villages and Konoha ninjas on the same stage, and kill several important characters. This kind of plot conflict is much better than the water plot of collecting lizards and going to Taki Ninja Village.

The biggest difference in this work is that there are more characters than in the original work 🤔

Not enough kills. Really can't kill enough. Now that you have decided to break up as an adult. Come here. Time traveler. Kill as many as you can. Why are you keeping your hands?

The first dozen or so chapters seemed okay, but starting with the Mizuki plot, the protagonist went crazy as if he had been struck by another god.

I tipped 500 just to scold the author for saying "Kill me, Goddess Terumi Mei". When Mei Terumi first came out, her beauty was described in such detail. The description of Terumi Mei was so beautiful and attractive. I thought she was going to be included in the harem, but I backhanded you and stabbed me to death. Come on, C, she was offline at the speed of light as soon as she appeared 😭

The four-man team of Team 7 is the biggest failure of this book. It's cliche, you can't write it if you don't follow the plot?

Faster, faster, more, I can already think of it Naruto said to Menma: "If you want to break his legs, you have to take him back." Then Menma revealed that he had known it since his birth. He had always known that his father was the fourth generation and that Naruto was his younger brother, but because of the jinchūriki and his younger brother, they were in completely different situations. He had been spurned since he was a child and even had to fake his emotions, but Naruto was loved by everyone. Then Menma said to Naruto: "Only you, only you are not qualified to question me. The more you appear in front of me, the more I can remember our differences, and the more I hate this Konoha that is rotten from the foundation. I did this to you just a second ago The Yondaime Sons looked at me with ferocious faces in the next second. Ha, they are such a ridiculous group of people! So if you really want everyone to be well, don't show up in front of me."

I saw the small team of four and withdrew. I really couldn't accept it.

Is it okay to stop talking about it? If you have nothing to write, just go to the original timeline and write it? Why don't you just go back to the beginning and start from the beginning?

Suddenly I feel like I can't even read the book anymore. This book will probably cost a hundred yuan less after reading it.

I feel a little too watery and not too refreshed.

Does anyone think that the title is too difficult to describe in one sentence?••Anyway, I always feel that it is a bit, um...

I had a dream that the protagonist of this book was replaced by Yuu, who was not the original protagonist. I don't know why~

Forget about the lackluster writing, now you still start to owe updates from time to time? Author, you are so awesome

I have liked 100 chapters. Does the author plan to write a Boruto biography?

This is almost the end, and Naruto's problems should be solved.