Naruto: Wait, I'm Not Telling Hatake to Be Fifty-Fifty!

I'll write the thesis in the front and geography in the back. There are a lot of opinions. In fact, there is no difference between the mentality of Kakashi in the original work, but the choices are different.

The garbage protagonist has no plug-ins, how can he kill Japan🇯🇵? How can he bind a dog to a donkey? How can he conquer a hopeless world? In the real world, he acts like a cow and a horse, but he still feels aggrieved after reading a novel.

After looking at the protagonist and not having any cheats, I just said that in the world of Naruto, if there are no cheats, then he is a shadow. In the later stage, those without blood will be cannon fodder.

After reading a few chapters, I got really impatient. There were a lot of points of view, and the plot never progressed. A White Fang death plus debriefing took four or five chapters. You really deserve it.

To be honest, I knew what was going to happen without reading it. I was full of resentment, and then I strengthened my strength. The plot developed according to the original work. After the death of the third generation, Danzo was killed before Pain attacked or before the start of the fourth station. This kind of plot, you really want to hate it, but you don't have to worry about it. In the case of death, if you really have to lurk until the fourth generation is dead and you become the Hokage, or until the third generation is dead and you become the fifth generation Hokage, you can kill Danzo, Asuma, Konohamaru, and I admire you for destroying the Yuan Fei family, but most of them just kill Danzo and be done with it.

There are no cheats and he joins ANBU as the enemy's dog.

Is it possible to obtain the Blood Snare in Naruto by fusing the seven attributes of chakra?

Time travel and become a little kid! Is it really disgusting, can't you write about capable adults? Or do you leave the plot and don't know how to improve the word count?

There was nothing wrong with Sakumo's views and opinions on the original characters after his death, and it also set the tone of the book, at least to get rid of the high-level officials and the derailed original plot. Just from a visual point of view, in fact, half the output is enough. The key point is how to show how Kakashi endured humiliation and became stronger in the early stage, and then pick it up when he grows up and has strength. Instead of a cycle of outputting, getting stronger while completing tasks, outputting, and getting stronger. No matter how much description is given of the fight, it seems empty.

I can't stand the first picture, the protagonist doesn't look like a time traveler at all

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When I read Chapter 20, I didn't see any difference from the original Kakashi's power. The original novel even knew how to give Kakashi a Sharingan to surprise him, but this fan has nothing. It's too different from expectations. The pace of the plot is also a bit slow, but it doesn't matter if it's slow. The main reason is that it's too long and boring. At least after reading Chapter 29, I feel it's a bit hard to chew. Come on, author, don't write a good subject too poorly.

Haha, it was White Fang's suicide that made the third generation feel a little pity for Kakashi. It was this little pity that made Kakashi become Minato's disciple. Otherwise, normally he wouldn't be able to pass the political examination, so why would you go to ANBU? White teeth are so white

The plot is too delayed, or maybe it's too slow. I wrote a battle scene for several days and didn't finish it.

Can the plot be less protracted, or be more detailed? If it advances too slowly, there will be fewer people waiting.

How can we seek justice if our father is dead? Funny. Blood debt must be paid with blood! This is not urban literature!

Let me ask you a question, the author, why is your category "Zhu Tian Zong Manhua" instead of light novel derivative fan fiction? You won't open up other worlds without blood later, right? You should have given up earlier and don't deceive people. Don't order dozens of dollars and you are giving this book to readers 😐

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Good news: Not on the shelves Bad news: Not on the shelves

I'll watch it if you keep Obito away from the tragic fate of the original. If you can't do it•••••😊😊😊😊