Moon Emperor

I came here to read it after reading Yijian. I don't dare to say that I am a regular reader, but I have read a few previous books to a certain extent. Let me talk about my personal feelings. First of all, I would like to say that the following comments are just my personal opinions. If you think it is wrong, you are right. Let's start with the advantages. In a sense, the books of Mystery Then let's talk about the shortcomings. In fact, they are not shortcomings. This also has something to do with my personal preferences. I feel that Mysterious Xuan's works are quite "light", which is what I feel every book by the author gives me. However, I can see the author's progress. I think Knights and Flowers is too light. To put it bluntly, it is a bit boring. I think it is much better after Yi Jian, but I still feel that Not enough. I think the author's emotional support is not enough. At least it's hard for me to get involved. I can't even accept the emotions of the protagonist that the text should convey. For example, when the protagonist wants to take revenge, I can't feel the sense of hatred. I don't know if it's my problem or the author's skill. I personally like novels with strong emotional collisions, so I always feel a little regretful when reading the author's novels, because I always feel that they are just a little bit to my taste.

Sorry, I took the title of the book to mean confinement

I hope the author will not use a sword again in this novel. I'm really surprised. How many people in ancient Chinese mythology used swords? Flying with a sword? Low exploded. With so many Taoist and magical powers, why do you write that 90% of Xianxia fights with swords? Too low.

Only then did I realize that the author is Mysterious Xuan 😂 I asked why I haven't published a new book for so long. It turns out he came here.

Mysterious Pavilion? If you want to write about immortals, just write about immortals. I feel like you are not very suitable for writing about harems.

This book is a mixed bag of good and bad. Let me start with the good points. The author's writing about the sage in front of others is good. The setting of the hunting fairy lord is also quite interesting. The plot rules are also clear and do not abuse the lord. But the shortcomings are also obvious. It is too bland and dry. Just a long paragraph of explanation can fill several chapters. I feel dizzy while watching it. There are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist, which makes it a headache. Also, the setting is very good, but the use is not good. Let's take the hunting tour of the fairy palace as an example. The protagonist really just looks at it, and it is a waste of good food. In addition, the author's plot is too small. He replaces the female emperor with a male, does not clean up his innocence, and drives out the male protagonist's family. The male protagonist goes down the mountain to cut off the dragon vein of the dynasty, slaughter all the royal family, and uses his destiny as the Moon Emperor to fight against the destiny of the royal family's real dragon. Isn't it much better than the ending that the author wrote about the happy ending of sons and daughters who love each other and grow up together?

After reading two hundred chapters, I want to say one thing. The protagonist's aura is too dazzling now, so I can only write higher and higher and never come back. After another hundred to two hundred chapters, it will be unfinished. The author was a bit hasty in writing

It looks pretty good and not too bad, but there are very few comments both inside and outside the book. Will the author stop updating it?

Brother, I have been reading online articles for a long time. What I want to say is that what you write is definitely not bad. Maybe this one, maybe the next one, will be a hit one day. Don't just be a eunuch or write randomly. This difficult period should be regarded as the grindstone for success.

It doesn't start out very amazing, but it looks very comfortable, so I'm fully booked.

It's really good. Why don't you find someone to py it? It's really a pity that no one will see it.

Let's add more 🙂

This method of advancing the plot makes me feel full of craftsmanship, and the book feels okay, but it is precisely because of this that it makes it even more uncomfortable. It is a little tasteless to eat, but it is a pity to abandon it.

I have been reading books here since I started the website. I must have read thousands of books. As a third party, I can provide some opinions for the author's reference. The writing style of this book is good, the reading fluency is also good, and the female characters are vividly described. But the sex change is definitely a failure. The Tianyuan treasure hunt in the middle period and the hell in the later period are too long-winded. It is recommended to read more books with high rankings. There must be best-selling elements in them; different readers have different favorite types, and the target group must be clear. Personally, I think many books ranked 50-100 are better, and the private dishes are of high quality. However, more people like to eat fast food because it is cheap and time-saving. The author has the qualifications to become a god. Maybe a book that just hits the trend will become popular. The same is true for the careers of many actors. This is true for works and movies, maybe 95% of them are street workers... The monthly income is not much 3,000, but it is considered a freelance job, I can spend time with my family, it is not a problem to have enough food and clothing, and there are opportunities to move up. What if I work in food delivery, Didi, or work in a factory to drive screws? It's just a waste of life to survive.

I read Yijian and believed in the author's character and writing style, so I automatically subscribed

The only shortcoming that makes me feel uncomfortable is the name of the empress. It's too weird. Her surname is a female, and her name is emperor. It would be better than this.

The writing is very good, although I haven't been able to read it as well as I have recently. But come on, author, I'm optimistic about you

It's pretty good. It's a fairy tale with multiple heroines. I haven't seen it in a long time.

It's well written, but the main character is too pretentious, has no resources, and doesn't know what to ask for reasonably, which makes me anxious.

I finished reading "The Demon King's Consort" today. In total, I have read three books written by the author. Of course, this book is not included. Is this one about to be finished? 😰 What I want to say is that the author's writing is really to my liking. I think it is well written. Whether it is plot logic or plot structure, at least they have been carefully thought out, especially the characters. In terms of creation, the characters are all well-established. For example, I really like Yutan Shixiu as the heroine, and for example, Rei Erluoyi burst into tears, which really made me cry Well... So having said so much, I am mainly grateful to the author for bringing me such a good-looking story that suits my taste. As for the serialized book, although I haven't read it yet, I still believe in its quality and believe that the author can finish it smoothly and perfectly.

I just saw it on the shelves. The subject matter is okay, but why are there so many inner monologues? Superfluous?

I have ordered both Yijian and this book. If there is another one, I will support it. Come on!

The writing is really good, mainly because it suits my taste. I think I have a collection of 20,000. Is it enough to keep me busy? I hope I can finish it well

Come on, author! I wish the author a great success with his next book!

I like Nianshang, I feel it just after I saw Yuzhen

What's going on? Why are all the books I've read recently updated once a day?

I am an old reader who followed Yijian until the end of the second volume and started to subscribe. The automatic subscription is always intermittent (forgetting to replenish the money). I only replenished the full subscription when I saw the notification that it was finished. I didn't follow up until the middle of Yijian was released, and I caught up in three days. The latest, I like it very much, including the foreshadowing with a sword at the end. Xia Nan, an acquaintance from the past life, was excited for more than an hour to find where to post the foreshadowing. I hope the author can stick to it, don't put too much pressure, and write in his own style. See you in the next book.

Although I don't subscribe to all chapters, as long as it's updated, I've basically read it, so don't leave it unfinished. Next time I give you a monthly pass, I always forget about it, and I don't give it away even if it's invalidated 😭

Too few pictures, not very attractive

Don't divide a paragraph into several paragraphs. If you must divide it into paragraphs, just use a set of double quotation marks. Don't use a set of double quotation marks for each paragraph.