An Old Enemy Cannot Become a Wife!

I like your writing very much. It has a natural aura and is very suitable for the world of fairy tales. The subtle sense of daily life also makes the world described naturally have a pyrotechnic flavor. I believe many people will like this style of writing, and I look forward to you describing the world in your mind. So, from the perspective of writing style, this book can attract readers and give people a bright feeling among the fairy tales that start mechanically. However, the inherent thinness of the text is really disappointing. Character description is not only about people but also about things. No matter how perfect a person is, he must write in the contrast of things. Why can't more events be designed to hint at and describe Mingyu's behavioral motivations and thinking logic? The fishing appointment that spans a hundred years is actually the only place where people can expect to show off the author's pen power. Why can't we gather our strength and foreshadow more elaborate events before the climax of being expelled from the master's sect? The male and female protagonists practice martial arts in the cave alone. The plot in the middle is too boring. Therefore, apart from being portrayed as a beautiful master and adding some paranoid love, Mingyu doesn't have anything more to write about? In contrast, the interaction between Haitang and Qingqing seems much more flesh-and-blood because of the setting of the adventure plot. Emotions, the emotions originating from both parties, naturally refer directly to the self-cognition of both parties and transcend realms and backgrounds. The author should not be misled by the author's advantages when designing. Only by arranging more interactive events for Mingyu can he describe it better. Secondly, the polishing of the plot is really a bit weak. The plots are plots, the chapters are chapters, and the lines are slightly dull. For example, the transitional plot between leaving Mingyu and joining Qinglian is the low point of the two climaxes. The force should not be too strong. It is a good time to foreshadow and build a bridge for reversal. The reader's advantage should be the dual perspectives of Mingyu and Chu Xuan, enriching cognition and expectations. But because of Mingyu's congenital disability in the previous plot, Mingyu has nothing to do except peeping, and there is no foreshadowing or reversal. The persistence of seeking truth is the skeleton and logic of this plot, but other than that it is too thin. The difficulty of chasing your husband in the crematorium lies in the destruction and restoration of self-esteem, the loss and growth of self. If it's well written, it's full of tension, but if it's not well written, it's a slap in the face. Therefore, compared with ordinary love stories, Husband's Crematorium naturally has two backgrounds of disillusionment and loss, and should be handled with caution. Characters such as Ming Yu and Chu Xuan should have more interactions with the world, otherwise these characters will always act with the author's orders instead of truly living to find their selves. Slow coding? Mingyu and Chu Xuan, who have found their souls, will write their own stories with their pens.

Let me summarize first: the book is still very good. If you like watching harem romance dramas without thinking, it will be fine. Let's talk about the shortcomings of "I think": How do I put it, it's a little uncomfortable to look at the back. What the first sister on the list did is quite excessive, but you suppress it like this is a bit too much. Otherwise, you should completely break it off and let her go. I still feel a little uncomfortable when she is always picking on PUA. My husband is not chasing after her like this, I over-suppressed her (maybe I am just speculating with some malicious intent, the author would not want to take advantage of this, I advise you not to do this, it is a bit more than worth the gain. I originally had expectations for the character of the first sister on the list, but now this expectation is almost shattered). Also, the further I read, the more I feel that the male protagonist is a bit pretentious. The most taboo in harem novels is someone like you setting up a memorial arch. Byd is a bit disgusting. To be honest, I sympathized with Lao Chu, but the further I read, the weirder it felt to me. Also, I feel that the female character in this book is all about love, and nothing else is the same except love. Emmm, maybe the requirements for the author are a bit high, but if you just write it like this, the image of the heroine will not be established at all. The first character was okay when she first appeared, but the later the character appeared, the more the image became homogeneous. Haitang and Qingqing were quite distinctive when they first appeared, but after writing, enmmm It gradually becomes unlikable😕. The plot setting is a bit unreasonable, but it's not a big problem if you don't study it carefully. This book has caught up with the big army, and the writing is quite good. The flaws are not to be concealed. The author is worse than those great gods, but he is better than 90% of the harem novels on the market👍 I am going to take a look at the author's last book, which breaks the road of life and death with one sword. I hope you won't be disappointed. 😋

I accidentally read it today, I wanted to kill time, but I got very interested after 10 chapters. I read it for a long time (from about 7 a. M. To about 3 p. M.) And reached around 120 chapters. Advantages: The writing is good, the writing is smooth, there are gimmicks, and it is very engaging to read. Use the author In other words, that's the flavor. The author seems to have a wide range of interests. The chats of daily characters are full of laughter and humor (I have to mention one 🤡character. Anyone who has seen it will know). He occasionally writes a little bit, which is very enjoyable to read. He can write about people and scenes, and he can also be gentle and guard against thunder. The protagonist is a bit The process of mental growth, sometimes the small story theater with chapters is quite good. Generally speaking, it has everything from the daily life of the characters, to discussing Taoism and practice, to experiences on the road. Each chapter is basically very little water, but has quality. Next 😡😡[fn=47 ] Let's talk about why this is the case Disadvantages: Damn it, the author is really short 😡 The biggest disadvantage can be said that it has been updated, only one update every day (5,000 words). The one who beats the author is the author himself. Although the quality is guaranteed, he still has to complain.

I feel like I've finished reading the book after reading the introduction. I've already thought about the rest of the book.

The author is definitely a woman, this is a different kind of tyrant chasing his wife!

By the way, is there really no one in the book review section who complains about the introduction? I just saw you saying that the content is good, but the level of this introduction is very average, especially the second half.

I lost my bookshelf. When did I get the introduction? When did I kick me to death? It has nothing to do with me.

Damn it, you dare to destroy my cultivation, you already have a way to die!

This is the longest regret novel I have ever read The main reason is that his foreshadowing is divided into several layers. The first layer is about the background and the development of the protagonist. The second layer is about foreshadowing and digging holes that can be understood at a glance. The third layer is about meeting several female protagonists. I've been writing and talking about it, it's already been a hundred chapters, don't say I regret chasing my husband, the standard backstabbing feels like it's still far away (then I directly flipped through the post, it's chapter 155 before I get to chasing my husband) Oh my God, I co-wrote this novel, and it took me almost half a year to get to the introduction (I wrote it) The author said at the beginning that his pace is slow. I thought about how slow it could be. The more I read, the more something is wrong. Chapter 30 is foreshadowing. Chapter 50 is foreshadowing. Chapter 70 is still foreshadowing. It's time to read chapter 100. Oh, there are secrets and inside stories, but it's still foreshadowing. I can't stand it anymore. ), Personal experience, after more than 100 chapters to more than 140 chapters, you can jump to read, with the previous accumulation, these will have no impact even if you just read the title without reading the content (of course, you still need to read if you want to see the three people tugging and growing), let me complain, it is difficult to hold on.

I vaguely remember that the author's last book was okay, although I didn't read it. Why is the introduction to this book so scary? It's the same as short video platform ads

I suddenly feel that the author can write it as a traditional fairy. In fact, I have no other feelings about the master when the protagonist is deposed by the master, because if it were not for her, the protagonist would have been deeply involved in the Hehuan Sect. This skill originally came from her. But I am afraid that the protagonist, who is constantly in trouble and looking for life and death, looks pretentious. What he seeks in cultivating immortality is longevity and freedom and happiness, not this kind of deep and continuous love, constant cutting and chaos. Even if you are really qualified to ask the master why in the future, it is not called chasing your husband, it is called licking a dog. On the contrary, the protagonist's love leads to hatred, and the hatred of cutting off my path to immortality and the incomprehension of leaving me a chance of survival are intertwined in the hero's heart, resulting in a kind of bone-eroding torture of loving and hating, hating and loving the master, which feels a little more sour and refreshing.

One thing to say, although the backstabbing plot of the first few heroines is a bit rough, the clown-like appearance of the heroines in the crematorium of chasing their husbands in the back gave me great joy. In particular, the transformation of the first heroine from the initial confidence to the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles is so funny. It's rare to have fun with the heroine in such a romantic and bloody plot.

If you want to live, you have to write fast and write often 😏. Especially for this kind of regret flow, the early suppression not only needs to look reasonable, but also makes the subsequent regrets reasonable. You can't push the protagonist too hard. But as long as you go faster, large quantities are fine 😏

Betrayal, shouldn't there be countless heroes in the world? How could there be such an idea that one should not betray?

Introduction to Xiaobai Shuangwen, normal fantasy rhythm, you are so difficult to handle

Now I'm reading Chapter 154. To be honest, this book is quite interesting if you just read the plot summary, but after writing it down in detail, I feel that the author didn't handle it well enough. It looks weird and doesn't have the sense of satisfaction I imagined.

I felt that except for the first betrayal, which made me feel sorry for the male protagonist, the other two times were a bit far-fetched. Only when the female protagonist betrayed her hard enough, chasing her husband to the crematorium was very satisfying. However, it was difficult to control and it was easy to become depressed. The part about my fiancée is a fairy and the empress thought she liked it. I love Qingdi, but in fact I just admire him. Qingdi is about to die, so he asked the male protagonist to give him half of his heart. This part is cruel enough, so the chase after it makes people feel happy. The writing is quite good, and the sweet part is very sweet. I don't know how the author writes about chasing her husband in the crematorium later. Come on.

Why should I start from the beginning? Fast forward to the point where I regret it!

The plot is not bad at all, but I just don't understand why there are so many female protagonists and only a hundred chapters. If there are too many, it would be boring. Why not focus on just a few?

No, buddy, your book still has a big problem As a slow-burn fairy tale novel with the husband-chasing crematorium as the selling point, is there too little emotional foreshadowing between you and the first heroine? It feels like it only took 20 chapters of the plot, and then there were no waves. The heroine's emotional changes did not feel very natural or too plain and too common.                                                                                                 but just after being together for a few years, it seemed that we had fallen in love with each other. As a result, the plot of you being kicked out for the first time was not explosive. I don't have that feeling of excruciating pain. I don't feel so happy if I chase my husband to the crematorium after you write this. If you say that using dreams to remember past lives and then patching it up is not very good, I think it still lacks an emotional change from acquaintance to falling in love to chasing a husband. The love stage is not well written. What's wrong with this Damn, I've been banned 4 or 5 times. I'm so annoyed.

When will you kick me six hundred years from now?

It has to be the one that breaks the path between life and death with one sword. Some of the behaviors that were intact at the beginning made people feel creepy, and the plot treatment made the comment section very funny (this person is the mother). I personally think that the behavior of Master and Qingqing and the psychology of the protagonist are a bit strange, and the processing of the characters' memories is a bit far-fetched, but as a happy work, there is no problem. (I read the Yijian book a few years ago, maybe my taste has changed now)

The next one should be longer. It can be a traditional fairy tale. What I like is your writing style and emotional drama. I don't have to regret it.

The title of the author's new book is "The Fairy Master Regrets His Return as a Peerless Sword Immortal". Needless to say about the platform, there are only two online websites of any size left.

I would rate this book an 8 out of 10. It is a very good book with no poisonous points. Readers who are interested in harem literature can read it with confidence. Let's talk about the advantages first The writing is smooth and the author's writing power is sufficient. Both the emotional description and the character setting are very good. Although the combat description is not so good, the author also managed to avoid the important and minimize the light, and did not spend too much text on the battle and the secret realm. Then let's talk about the shortcomings Although the title and introduction of this book are all about regret flow, are there any regrets? Yes, there are regrets, but the regret comes too slowly, so in the early stage, it is basically read as a fairy tale novel, and for example, the part about Begonia is indeed not easy for readers to empathize with. The regret flow on the market either does not accept it directly, or wants to read it. Why is it that the heroine immediately regrets it at the beginning (similar to the disclosure of memories) But then again, I don't want to read this kind of book (the same thing). In my opinion, this book is just right. I hope the author can continue to do so. Don't be too obsessed with regret in the next book, but lose something of your own

I think we can write another book based on this outline 🙂

💔💔💔💔💔💔I felt like there was a lot of content in the early stage. I thought it would take a long time to write. I put it aside when I saw chapter 185, but I didn't expect that it was all finished I hope the author's next book will be good too, come on

The Chinese New Year is almost here, yet you haven't published a new book yet 🙂? ?

I have one of the few books that I have fully ordered, and the whole process is non-toxic. If it had been ten years earlier, the position of Mr. Guan would have been yours.

The writing and characterization are okay, but the plot is too awkward. I'm chovy. Please think about your backstabbing plot carefully before writing it. Isn't the big plot worth thinking about for a while? When I saw the wedding scene, I was poisoned twice. It can be seen that I wrote it directly. It was too blunt. I really need to think about it carefully.