Do Cyber Taoist Priests Dream of Mechanical Zombies?

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The book is really good, the plot is tense, and the setting is quite cybernetic. It's very interesting to read. Come on, please update more 🤭

Read the latest article and tell me your feelings Characters: The character creation is not natural, although the author seems to be trying his best to avoid this. For example, some characters' characteristics are deliberately highlighted, such as selfishness, jealousy, etc. For example, the portrayal of the "Tianlinggen Kendo Genius Son" (whose name I have forgotten) is too abnormal. It would be more convincing to say that he was brainwashed by the devil. In fact characters should be very complex. Perhaps the "cyber society" will amplify the dark side, but it will also make the glory of human nature more dazzling. There is no need to deliberately express these character characteristics. It is a good choice to leave appropriate blank space. As a reader, I don't really like to read with personal emotions because I'm not looking in the mirror. Lin Cola's feelings for the protagonist and the protagonist's ambivalence can also be portrayed more. I didn't pay much attention to it and it developed into a physical relationship... Oh my god, this quick glance is too unfriendly to me. Setting: It is interesting that the portrait of the Patriarch is used for surveillance. Although it is not original, it is the same as Big Brother is watching you in George Orwell's "1984", but it also quotes an ancient argument, which is quite interesting. Cities are layered one by one, as can be seen in many science fiction novels, such as "Beijing Folding", which uses a tangible layering to describe the invisible layering, but the description of the aspects is also summarized in one stroke, which affects the depth of the novel, that is, its thinking. It can be seen that the author deliberately controlled the rise of the protagonist's level, fearing that the data would collapse. However, in the setting, it is a bit exaggerated to say that a few fund-building pills can destroy the "Great Beauty Dynasty". Although there is no numerical collapse, the combat power has collapsed. It is strong, but it can no longer be described. There is a sense of distortion in Eternal City, not the kind of distortion that is deliberately described, but some contradictions in the setting. For example, why can zombie couriers enter and exit places with extremely poor security and remain unharmed? This involves a cost issue. Even if Eternal City can ensure that everyone who attacks express zombies will be severely punished, the cost of law enforcement will become extremely high, and "revenues are not as good as expenditures." In Eternal City, there are many situations of "making ends meet". This is a violation of the background setting. Writing style: Overall, it is rather depressing and dark. It makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I can only read the latest chapter because the setting is more interesting, and there are not many other aspects that stand out. The plot has no ups and downs, and it sounds like a straightforward story. The protagonist seems to have encountered many crises, but the reader has no trouble at all. Many plots can be optimized. To describe this novel, it can be said to be "transparent Coke" Everyone thought this thing was rare, so they drank it, but in the end they found that it was not as good as Sprite and could not quench their thirst. I will continue to watch it for now, but I won't be able to stand it if the style of painting is still so dark. I just like the taste of Coke and the novelty of clear Coke, but I don't like diabetes..

Some scenes of Eternal City.

I'm a noob, I'm speechless😓The comment section is full of praises and how good they thought it could be. Inexplicable emotional lines, inexplicable pointing of guns at people's heads. Go to the second floor and point a gun at the Talisman Master's head, and you can still escape intact. How? The higher the level, the more ignorant are people?

It was originally a blue ocean track, but I just wrote it in a different way, and the divine hacker clicked it and disappeared. How did I get through the outline? I wrote it slowly. I originally wanted to read a cool article. After the excitement at the beginning, it became slow and watery at the end. What do you think?

The beginning is at the end of the second level of Qi training, and there are more than 40 chapters in the early stages of the third level of Qi training. The author knows how to control the progress.

By the way, the cyber flavor is very strong. The protagonist is burdened by debt and can't breathe. He can only look at the sky occasionally to look forward to the future. It's so authentic.

Cyber ​​Zombie

This is the worst way to open a new book. All readers have ordered it. If you can't continue writing, please tell me. Saying nothing is a loss of character. It makes me no longer want to subscribe to authors who are not quite famous 🙂

Damn, starting point is full of eunuchs like this now🐶 I really don't want to spend money to support them anymore

The poor protagonist will never be able to obtain the Foundation Establishment Pill in his lifetime 😢

If I don't read it, I guess the author will most likely not be able to continue writing. The idea is very good, but there is a problem with the outline planning, which makes it difficult for people to follow it. And if the author is not identified, it is impossible to generate power for love. It is better to stop the loss in time. Slipped away

There are many bugs in this kind of mixed setting. What you see is a novelty, a kind of fast food article. The novelty disappears quickly. The first wave eats meat, the second wave drinks soup, and the third and fourth wave lick the basin.

In fact, I think cyber cultivation should not be exploitative but unfair. Using acquired spiritual roots is worse than innate. Physical training for 10,000 years is not as good as other people's ten-second whole-body replacement package. Being intelligent and hardworking for a hundred years is not as good as hanging up the fully automatic training program for one day. Etc. To create injustice. In a society with advanced technology, ordinary people cannot create value, and others cannot oppress you, just like a billionaire trying to rob a beggar of coins. Unless you add training, it cannot be fully automatic, but the setting that allows people to mine for repairs gives ordinary people the value of being exploited.

I don't understand what the protagonist wants to do If the "Perfect First-Level Talisman" is something that is both safe and profitable, why not draw the talisman first until you have money to exchange for spiritual roots, knowledge, magic weapons, and zombies and then take the good spiritual roots and powerful magic weapon zombies to the wilderness to practice a few times and go directly to the exam Or not Does anyone want to join the Huangquan Sect? Just skip the exam and make money by drawing talismans and slowly exchange spiritual roots, learn knowledge, and improve combat power A perfect talisman has 3 spiritual stones. After deducting the cost, you can also make money based on the spiritual stones. Before this, the protagonist earned a thousand to one spiritual money Why don't you hurry up and wait? The protagonist's golden finger is proficiency. He sells talisman knowledge. The more you practice, the higher the level. The second level is already a "master" or mid-level. Basically, most stores will accept it. It is pure hard currency. You golden finger, because you can't keep practicing with garbage spiritual roots, you can always draw talismans.

Although it is said to be a cybernetic cultivation of immortality, it is not cybernetic enough. It is similar to the cultivation of immortality under the darkness, which is a bit different. You're already a cyberpunk, so why do you still need to practice? If you just get a digital soul and add a base vehicle, wouldn't it be an artificial earthly immortal, an artificial heavenly immortal like Skynet? What's the use of the legs? The lower body is replaced by a motorcycle and the hands are replaced by Gatling. Earn merit by practicing Buddhism in the electronic world. There is a poisonous point. After completing it, you can make robots, zombies, or mechanized zombies. As for illusion, everyone is a member of the Hehuan sect. Colorful advertisements flood the screen, directly connecting the senses, and even eminent monks can't stand it.

They think it's not good, but I think it's good. The author doesn't need to pay attention to them and just continue writing according to his own ideas. Novel is a thing that has too many audiences, and for those who cannot satisfy it, the best thing is to be able to write about the world in your heart. Those who can resonate are readers, not passers-by.

Again, if you don't want to read it, please leave quietly, and don't give a speech in the comment area before leaving The comment area is full of chaos. This is not a rational and objective evaluation of this book. It is clearly intended to make this book eunuch Cyber novels were originally relatively bleak, but now the comment section of this book is full of negative reviews, which makes it even more unattractive to readers. People who vent their emotions have completely vented their anger, but what should the author do? I'm afraid it's just the eunuchs. What should people who are still reading this book seriously do? I'm afraid I've lost another book I can read. A trainee is forced to do this here, and other people who have paid to subscribe have not said much, but you are talking nonsense here, your sense of superiority is too strong (sweating) And, it does not mean that a book has shortcomings and cannot be said, but in short, you have to read the book as a whole. It is undeniable that there are indeed places in the front of this book that are not good enough and not perfect enough. If there is a problem with a previous section, evaluate that there is no problem with the previous section. But there is something behind that you haven't seen, so you are not qualified to evaluate the content behind it. To enlarge the situation and raise it from a small area to the whole is a selfish act that should be criticized. Everyone says that getting better gradually does not mean getting better in the 100 free chapters. But in the stage from the first 100 chapters to the latest chapter, the writing becomes smoother. If you only read those free chapters and feel that they are not well written and are dissatisfied, then just leave and come to the comment area to say something? Those free contents don't cost you money, so they don't bother you in any way. I took the initiative to click in. After reading it, I felt unhappy and wanted to vent my anger in the comment area. I blamed the author for poor writing? Almost effective (sweating)

It's such a pity It was a little lively at first, but gradually it became a trap. The more you chewed it, the drier it became, making it difficult to swallow and it slipped away.

While saying that upgrading to the third level of Qi training will solve all the troubles, he keeps running around for small profits and small favors without cultivating. I really don't understand. This is the same as seeing a hundred-meter-thick light beam in the dark. It's okay to walk over, but no, you have to run around in the dark, fall down, and only after pain do you know how to take the bright road. Wisdom!

I drove to death, and then pressed to death. It made my head feel big.

What I wrote before is indeed okay. If you don't have money, tell the truth. The beginning of the book may not be better than this one, but the later stage is very confusing, with no outline and no main line. It feels like I write wherever I want, and the author himself doesn't know what he wants to write. Without an anchor point, it belongs to yes. The writing style in the front is that the world is a messed up world. The protagonist or everyone is struggling to survive. The protagonist is still a very flexible protagonist, with no morals and no bottom line. Just hope to live and live better. The hang is too small, or Xin is depressed. Then if you put it into the perspective of the protagonist, I will be very sympathetic, and I feel that the subsequent plot is completely inappropriate. When the undercover starts to show off, take the easy route. Not the same person at all. In other words, I have been suppressed for too long and can't think of a way to break the situation. Let's not talk about it since I was a child. In the situation where one person's force is crushing the world, every sect is still so bad, and the upward path is blocked. Cultivation, spiritual roots, and talents can all be resold. And there is no sense at all that the upper-class monks treat people as human beings. The world weaved is like I am playing DNF, and paying players will always experience it as ordinary players. And dnf is better than this world, at least you can roll and play. But this world feels like despair. In fact, it's the same as the one without money. It's possible to open a bigger link and write less despair. The story can go on and on. It won't end badly.

The novel is good. What happened to the eunuch?

This feels a bit like cultivating an immortal without money.