Douluo Dalu: A Thousand Miles of Cultivation

None of the three idiots in Wuhun Palace are worthy of pity! Bibi Dong: A white-eyed wolf, the Wuhun Palace awakened the Wuhun for her and made her a saint, one person inferior to ten thousand people. And what about her? He leaked the secrets of Wuhun Palace to Yu Xiaogang for his own love, and also wanted to betray Wuhun Palace. Licking a dog. When he met Yu Xiaogang, he drank tea that Yu Xiaogang had drunk and licked the teacup that Yu Xiaogang had used. Hu Liena: She is the white-eyed wolf again, leaking Wuhun Palace's plan to Tang San, crying and falling twice when Tang San was injured, worrying about Tang San. Qian Renxue: She is mentally ill and wastes her best training time to be an undercover agent. She is cold-hearted towards her subordinates. In order to recruit Tang San, she can give her subordinates to Tang San to deal with at his will, including titled Douluo. The Wuhun Palace has such a leader and deserves to be destroyed.

The saddest thing about Douluo Continent is Bibi Dong, and the most hateful one is Bibi Dong. In terms of loyalty, she is less human than Tang San. Although her life was miserable and she died with nothing, it was not her fault. Wuhun Palace trained her, but she could even think of running away with Yu Xiaogang, a loser. Tang San secretly learned the secrets of the Tang Clan and even established a Tang Clan himself to give birth to a child for Qian Xunji. Qian Xunji took several titled Douluo to capture A Yin and prepare a hundred thousand year soul ring for her. Did he treat her badly? She swallowed it with her backhand. The funniest thing is that he was beaten to death by Tang San while still thinking about Yu Xiaogang. He also threatened to destroy Douluo Continent. Giving Tang San an excuse to kill her, she deserves to die, not worthy of pity. The Wuhun Palace has suffered eight lifetimes of bloody misfortunes like this. If placed in a high-end fantasy world, this kind of woman would be the first to be killed by the family elder, which would be a pure disaster. Keeping it will only ruin the family's luck and discredit the family.

The plot is not bad, but the character of the protagonist is actually a bit sophisticated. While maintaining the indifferent and kind-hearted appearance of the Blue Star people, he also criticizes Douluo's style wantonly, everyone is drunk and I am sober. Although he is said to be indifferent to the world, in fact, the arrogance and prejudice of the time traveler is almost overflowing. The protagonist is probably very unpleasant! The protagonist's understanding of the cultivation system feels a bit vague, there is nothing refreshing in terms of macro thinking, and the description of the battle is not good! The emotional scenes are very awkward and a bit boring! Overall, it is a good book, not a good story.

First: the protagonist has not graduated from the second grade of secondary school. Second: Too much inner monologue. Third: What makes you feel confident in front of Bibi Dong, just because you are superior to others as a time traveler? He is indeed a homebody. Fourth: Judging a person from the perspective of the original work. I felt that Hu Liena was disgusting from the beginning. The original work is the original work. There is something wrong with the third master's three views in writing the book. It does not give you a basis for characterizing a person. At least you can cause changes by standing on the side of Wuhun Palace. Is it reasonable for you to have such preconceptions? Conclusion: The protagonist is incompatible with the world of Douluo. As a fanfic, this book can only reach the pass level, which is not considered excellent.

The writing and plot are quite good, and there is no stallion to follow. The following words will focus on one point. But I've watched half of it, and I feel that the protagonist intends to promote the idea of ​​​​Ming Zhu and everyone being equal in the world of Douluo. Personally I feel very childish. Douluo's productivity targets the Middle Ages. The productivity is not developed to begin with, and there is no underlying foundation to support this kind of thinking. The world is inherently unequal. Even today in the 21st century, there is a high probability that many things will not exist after they were born. What's more, Douluo is a world with martial arts inheritance. It doesn't matter that the protagonist himself has this kind of thinking, but he always uses this kind of thinking to ask others, which is not happy. I've always seen this phenomenon in other articles I've read recently.

I still reluctantly accept the low number, but don't be too awkward. The singing one is deducted from two bedrooms and one living room. I feel very discouraged.

Why does the soul martial soul use agility attack? What is the difference between your behavior and the shark bee behavior of Blue Silver Grass absorbing the Man-Faced Demon Spider? The first soul ring is the ghost civet. The soul martial soul returns to this soul ring, right? It is purely a waste of your talent and strengthens your mental power. Whether you use the quality and quantity advantage of mental power to crush the opponent's mental power. Special attack, or control like Hu Liena, Huo Yuhao, or understand the rules with Guang Tongchen, isn't this better than the ghost civet?

The first seven chapters are well written, but I can't stand it anymore, especially since your soul is also a spiritual type. It has auxiliary control and attack methods, but you choose agility attack. I really don't understand it. Also, the name of the second martial soul is mentioned as covering the sky. Isn't it better to use a fantasy magic, heaven, elephant, and earth than Yuanshen?

How should I put it? It feels quite strange. The author's writing is obviously not bad, but this book just makes people unable to read on. The emotions are written very delicately, to the point of being disgusting, and there are too many emotional scenes. Emotions are not only the love between men and women, but also things like anger, There are a lot of emotions such as violence, sympathy, etc. It feels like this book has been filled with the protagonist's various emotions. The whole book has always been like a catharsis of emotions, and the messy emotions have been vented. It is too messy, too complicated, and a little watery, which makes it difficult to read.

I'm speechless. I can't stand the comment section of this novel. I can't even read the novel. They are all weird comments This comment is only for paragraph comments and has nothing to do with the book. After all, I was dismissed from the comment section before reading a few pages.