Qianyuan Tongtian

Why don't you write fanfics? Tsuchikage's book looks very comfortable. It has no system, no vest, and the pace is not fast. The protagonist's timeline is also very well stuck. I feel that the author is still very talented in writing fanfics, such as Douluo, Dou Po, Naruto, Pirates, etc. 😭😭😭

Come on, keep an eye on you and just follow your own pace. This book is obviously a logical flow, not a brainless invincible flow. Although it is less exciting at the beginning, it will be much better in terms of rationality. Come on!

Generating electricity for love is so awesome. This is true love.

The writing is good, it's not brainless. Keep writing. Come on, believe in yourself.

Come on and update, boy!

After finishing this book, I will write a One Piece fanfic. According to the writing style of the author of the previous Naruto book, it is quite exciting. It will definitely occupy a place among pirate fans!

It's too immature, almost like a high school student's journal.

Let time leave the results, come on!

Write a Naruto or Pirates fan fiction, I really can't stand the current fan fiction.

I feel it is well written and the author is capable. It doesn't have to be a poor list of authors. Keep up the good work and look forward to your new book. Of course, this book also needs more updates. Come on, come on, come on

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Come on ʚ♡⃛ɞ(ू•ᴗ•ू❁), the foundation is still good, but it feels a bit flat. I hope it can have more suspense and more eye-catching highlights.

I don't have much money, so I want to express my support with one hundred points. I'm trying my best to help you, but I hope you won't find it objectionable.

The author should go back to writing fan fiction. I have ordered all the last books for you. There are still people who like to read about the lives of mortals in light novels. If it were fantasy, it would be a group of people who like to read cool novels. Your writing style cannot be popular.

Is there a female protagonist 🤓

The protagonist in this introduction has a very low error tolerance rate and it is extremely difficult to survive.

How did this book fare? Can the author make a living from this book?

Author, please write a fanfic. Your Naruto fanfic is quite comfortable to watch.