Naruto: I Want to Be Raikage

What a bullshit introduction you have, I have no desire to read it.

No, buddy, your profile is getting more and more difficult the more I read it, you should change it.

What does this introduction mean? I don't understand. What does discipleship mean? Who is a disciple, and whose disciple is a disciple? Why are there so many disciples? Is the protagonist called a disciple?

Naruto: I want to be the Raikage Traveling through Naruto, but being born into the most unattractive ordinary ninja family? There is no bloodline limit, no wealthy background, and even the amount of chakra is only at the mid-to-lower level - but who stipulates that only geniuses can reach the top of the ninja world? Others roll up the leaves and fight for the Hokage, but I want to take root in Kumogakure and start from the lowest level of ninja school students: • Learn the basics of Thunder Release and polish the accuracy of "Thunder Release: Pseudo Darkness" in actual combat; • Use the Body Knocking Technique to train the "Thunder Release Chakra Mode" to cover every inch of the muscles in the body; • Win over future strong men and seize their own right to speak in the power vacuum after the death of the Third Raikage. While Konoha is still fighting for the "Hokage Successor", and when Sunagakure is trapped in a lack of resources, I have led Kumogakure's Thunder Division to suppress the rebellion and shock the nations! "What is the limit of blood inheritance, what is fatalism?" "In my hands, Thunder Release is the strongest shield and the sharpest spear!" "From today on, I will set the rules of Kumogakure; I will change the order of the ninja world - because what I want to be is the unprecedented [Fourth Raikage]!" I feel that whatever I create is better than what the author wrote, and AI is still very easy to use these days.

The author wants to write something in-depth but his writing style can't keep up. He wants to establish a ninja school system. The descriptions of "The Will of Thunder" are completely in vernacular. If the writing is not good, it can be modified with AI.

Please rate it and delete it if you don't like it. First of all, the writing is readable, at least above the passing mark, and there are no problems with the plot design. It will steadily improve its status. The next step is the shortcomings First, randomly changing the level of Ninjutsu. Ninjutsu is not judged by power alone. If you have a D-level Earth Release with a beheading in your heart and you change it to B, the reason is just because you think this jutsu is powerful. Secondly, the main character's shape is too problematic. The shock of seeing a wooden figure is much more shocking than seeing Ye Yueyai later. Third, the protagonist showed no emotion when he saw those children sacrificing themselves for themselves. Then I can think that the protagonist is an extremely self-centered person who is intangible with emotions and anger, but how could he be so cowardly when facing the village's advisor Kumogakure and Konoha Danzo? At least the mentality should be stable, right? Fourth, what is your purpose of setting so many children to die for you? Show the cruelty of the ninja world? You didn't write it out to show the ruthlessness of the protagonist? If you didn't write it down, why did you write it down?

Brainwashing the ninja school, stealing ninjutsu, Byakugan's blood leakage, White Fang's suicide, taking in the Uzumaki clan, the destruction of Taketori, the annihilation of the Uchiha clan, the murderer who planned the collapse of Konoha

An ordinary person is destined to fail. Such a protagonist cannot survive more than three episodes. And since when did Yunyin Village only have Lei Dun?

There are several time bugs in Naruto. Some can be explained, but some can't be solved. Please help me think about how to explain this bug: Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara fought in the End Valley. Both of them are in the strongest form, and Uchiha Madara is equipped with nine tails. Hashirama died after the battle in the Valley of the End. Hashirama captured nine tailed beasts, and then at the five-kage meeting to allocate the tailed beasts, Senju Hashirama was so strong that he kowtowed and banged his head, not looking like he was about to die at all. Also, Uchiha Madara met with the second-generation Tsuchikage Mu and the third-generation Tsuchikage Onoki. At that time, Mu seemed to be the talker of the Iwa Ninja Village. The question is: Which of these things comes first and which comes last? And when did Uzumaki Mito become the Nine-Tails Jinchūriki? Is it possible that after Hashirama caught Kyuubi, he first thought of his good gay friend instead of his wife? So it was always kept in a jar, just waiting for Uchiha Madara to use it? Give it to Uzumaki Mito after you use it up?

No wonder the Third Hokage is so tolerant of Danzo, it's really useful. . .

Naruto is about bloodline theory. Many anime and novels are actually about bloodline theory. The real world is all about bloodline theory. Ordinary people who are not from aristocratic families or whose bloodline is not noble cannot reach the top level in the extraordinary world. Just like Namikaze Minato and Sandai in Naruto, they can reach the Kage level at most. This is already the highest state of ordinary people (ninja world).

Which eye pattern do you want?

I feel like writing about ninjas is too poor. You have to know that in a logical and harmonious real world, the treatment of strong people is definitely not bad.

Before the birth of ninjas, the realm of mortals had existed for thousands of years. The daimyo, nobles, and lords use myths, bloodlines, sacrifices, and traditions to shape themselves into kings granted by heaven, divinity on earth, and the foundation of order. After thousands of years of education, this concept has penetrated into the instinct of every mortal: The daimyo is inviolable, and resisting the nobles is going against heaven. This is a set of underlying cognition that precedes chakra and ninjas. Until the Six Paths Sage spreads chakra. His original intention is to use chakra to connect people's hearts, communicate emotions, and eliminate disputes. But he did not expect: When all humans in the ninja world gradually awakened to chakra, the consciousness, memory, common sense, and beliefs of countless people were invisibly connected into a collective subconscious network covering the world. Everyone is a node, and everyone is connected, resonant, and synchronized unconsciously. The ancient common sense that "the daimyo is supreme" has been deeply rooted for thousands of years and covers all mortals. At the moment when the chakra network was formed, it was permanently written, solidified, and diffused, becoming the ideological stamp of the entire race. The more important thing is: The stronger, purer and more sensitive the chakra is, the more deeply bound it is by this network.

The protagonist's combat ability is too low. If nothing else, if you want to be a Raikage, you must at least have the ability to reach Raikage level, right? Otherwise, it is the best breakthrough point

Is it time for the protagonist to get married? I thought I brought Xiangling's mother back to get married, but it turned out to be a pimp She's already over 20 years old, it's time to get married

There are many bugs in the author's time. The first is the character of the Eight-Tails. The second is that when Nagato went berserk, Obito was wearing a mask and Madara was dead. The third is that Orochimaru's corpse reincarnation was only developed after he defected. I feel that the author should have adjusted a lot of it when reading the memories.

I read in the comment section that it was well written, but why are so few people commenting? If I hadn't done a special search for Tsuchikage, I wouldn't have even been able to find this book.

The problem is that many of the fan fiction novels only focus on beauties, but not all of them. Many of them are not interesting to read.

Who gives the protagonist a nickname? The protagonist plays a conspiracy, similar to the Darkness of the Ninja World. The previous book was the Rock Ninja Fox.

As long as Shosuke marries Terumi Mei and promises to make their son the Sixth Mizukage, he can stabilize the situation!

There are some minor issues, but if you put it aside, you can still read it during the book shortage period.

I'll give you three, keep up the good work😡

Just writing in blind, speechless😑. . . .

This golden finger is too unclear. I mentioned it in the introduction, can Naruto do it without cheating?

In fact, the writing is okay. The protagonist steadily improves his strength, but there is no cheat code. In addition, the protagonist is a pure ascetic monk who has no interest in women and does not fall in love, so not many people watch it.

Author, I have already predicted what you will write in the next two books. Civilian ninjas from the Kingdom of Wind and the Kingdom of Water

The protagonist was an ordinary person before time travel, but after time travel, he is just a low-level loser. I think it's nonsense to rely on foresight to absorb geniuses and then let them teach you. People's physiques and brains are different, and they cannot be mastered by teaching. For example, even if Qian Xuesen was resurrected and taught me for a thousand years, I wouldn't be able to do it. The King of Boxers Tyson taught me that I can't beat ordinary players in city-level competitions. My innate physique and IQ determine my upper and lower limits. It just so happens that the protagonist doesn't have a golden finger yet. A person has been an ordinary person for two lifetimes and has not failed. To be honest, there is no way to reach the later stage unless the author forcibly opens up the halo of the protagonist. Otherwise, even a B-level ninjutsu can be practiced for decades and its performance is average. If you can become a master just by teaching, then everyone in the descendants of Qianju can open the Great Buddha, and there will be as many shadow levels in the world as dogs.

After the author finishes this book, he will switch to Rotten Eggplant. It will be good to make a second creation and anime based on the theme of Naruto.

Isn't the decapitation technique in the heart a D-class ninjutsu? How did it become B-level?