Law Enforcement Officer

Chapter 17 The female police officer kills the key person I would say that a thug can also be used At present, the promotion reward received by the protagonist has not been fully realized →_→, nor in other aspects of monetary status. If only because of a little kindness in my heart. So, it would be too much. Also, he is too mortal. With this look in his eyes today and that look in his eyes tomorrow, can the protagonist still not survive his life? Do you want to surrender on the spot with a look in your eyes during the battle? There is nothing wrong with writing a mortal protagonist, the main thing is that it is too unsatisfactory. Give clues and be arrested as a prisoner. There is no benefit in finding key evidence. I still have to risk my life to catch the criminal, but I still know that I can't beat him. The truth was finally revealed, but he was killed by his companions again. The protagonist in this book will definitely give the author a big fight

It's pretty cool, but I feel like no one is watching it.

Before I read this book, I hadn't found a good new book for a long time. The writing is really good. Good luck to the author!

After watching more than half of it, I realized that the protagonist does things without considering the consequences at all, right? Chasing a murderer in the sewers, good guy, a murderer who has tortured several people means chasing him alone, without a gun or a knife, without notifying other people, just with a short stick. In the law enforcement officer exam, you clearly know that the church attaches great importance to that unknown totem, but you still dare to show off, and you don't have any brains to show off for the sake of showing off? I'm afraid that the church won't know that it has a problem, right? There is also that totem. Yesterday, the crazy woman mentioned to you that totems have side effects. She dared to use them again the next day without knowing anything. What she wrote was true courage.

There are still people writing traditional crime novels these days, instead of cool novels about the Shakou system punching and kicking foreign gods in the past, and there are no messy two-dimensional stuff like girly tentacle monsters.

I scrolled through the comment area and found that there are still people talking. To be honest, I am quite happy. Thank you all readers for your love. The comment I read the most is - the author is very surprised why he didn't say a word and didn't say anything after it was put on the shelf. Ha, to be honest, when it was 200,000 words, the editor looked at the background data and informed me, "It can be cut. Let's change it to a different theme." I have actually studied fast-paced cool writing before, and I tried to apply those plots when writing this book, but I found that I just couldn't write that thing, haha. I can only write this kind of slow stuff, and I feel quite comfortable writing it, so I didn't plan to cut the text and focus on a rebellious character. Then a few days ago, I saw the editor asking me, "Aren't you going to put it on the shelves?" I thought to myself, if I wasn't asked to cut the article, it could still be put on the shelves? I replied that I could go on it, and then I went on it... As expected, the first order was sold out, but writing this thing is equivalent to finding a place to hide and have fun. I am very satisfied if there are so many brothers who can follow me and have fun. (Thanks again to those brothers and sisters who patiently watch my nonsense every day). Let's talk about this subject. I usually can't sleep on high-speed trains or airplanes when I'm on a business trip, so I specifically found some hypnotic novel audios to listen to. Well, that's why I fell in love with the Cthulhu Mythos inexplicably (some of Lovecraft's books are really hypnotic). Then I thought, with such a grand and mysterious worldview and rich setting materials, why not use them, so I started writing this book. Oh, yes, there are also old friends who give rewards. When I was fishing at work, I saw a pop-up on my phone saying "You have received 500 starting coins from a handsome guy." I was always happy haha ​​(how cool is it? It's even better than going to the Fun House). However, the function of thanking fans in the background of the software has been stuck and cannot be used. Maybe I don't know how to use it, haha, so I would like to express my thanks here to all the friends who give rewards! Line up and one person will give you a pout. Don't crowd the people behind you, they all have a share. PS. All the above content was originally intended to be written in the "Author's Words" in the next chapter. As I was writing it, I found that I could only write 500 words there, which was not enough for me to write, so I changed it to the comment area. It is really a big deal, and the comment area is also good.

After reading the previous article, I would like to mention to the author that science is a way of thinking that recognizes the real world. Materialism is based on the observable results and evidence of reality. If there are supernatural beings in the world, then the supernatural will also become part of the scientific system, just like the expansion from the Newtonian worldview to the quantum relativity worldview. The author's attempt to show that the protagonist is an intelligent and rational thinker just exposes his ignorance. He has no rational cognitive thinking, so when the world changes, even if a pile of evidence is placed in front of him, he cannot reconstruct a new world view. Of course, maybe the author wants to use the protagonist's disbelief to trigger subsequent plot conflicts, but as a reader, this kind of intelligence reduction is a bit poisonous.

This female law enforcement officer's writing is really terrible. The protagonist had just saved someone from the crime scene when she turned around and was knocked to the ground by her. It's like he's a criminal. When facing a suspect, you wouldn't use force until he shows no intention of resisting, right? What's more, he also saved people? The scene on the carriage at the back was even more terrible as a group of law enforcement officers. What was the female law enforcement officer doing when the inspector asked what the protagonist was doing? Throwing the protagonist over her shoulder? Others don't know that you don't know how to find the carriage. Anyone with any brain knows that the protagonist is looking for clues and is very likely to succeed, right? Shouldn't this support the protagonist? If you can only follow orders, you should be a soldier instead of sitting around trying cases. Then there is the inspector. The inspector should know the process of the case as soon as he arrives at the scene, right? Then how come he didn't mention finding the carriage? Doesn't this naturally lead to the protagonist? I really don't know the outcome, and he was punished by the church people. How about the calmness that a law enforcement officer should have? How about meticulousness? After the protagonist broke into the crime scene, the inspector did not ask the female law enforcement officer for a reason, and it just passed. When I think of the crime law enforcement officers in the title of the book, I also think of the law enforcement officers' performance in the first five chapters alone. I feel like there is no need to read any more.

The previous part was okay, but the recent assessment part was really too pretentious and slapped in the face, almost like having the words "I have a problem" printed on my forehead.

The story is like a story that took place 10 years ago, and the writing also seems like it was 10 years ago. He gained the ability inexplicably, and was attracted by a woman from a certain family. He kept talking to women all the way.

It's really not good, it's poisonous! Are all the routines like this: traveling through time, getting involved in events, gaining strength, and creating family ties? Or a conflict about love or something? Change again? Nothing new!

To be honest, it's best for a Ke-type novel without a female protagonist. It's not that I like eunuchs, it's just that the description is not good, so I might as well not write it at all. Personal opinion!

You are also awesome. I admire you. You are much better than most authors at Qidian.

There is a strong sense of fragmentation in this book after reading Chapter 100... It is obvious that the soul has passed through and mastered the knowledge of occultism. Does it have to be explained by getting into science? Even if you hate religion, you shouldn't ignore the facts, right? Since he has doubts about the Golden Rule Church but does not investigate or even guard against the Church, the aura of the protagonist is too high.

Chapter 18, I can't stand it any longer. If there are any clues at random, the heroine will get rid of them. If there are any clues, she will get rid of them. She won't read any hints. She will turn around and forget what she said. I really can't stand it.

Um, it looks quite embarrassing. The protagonist is a time traveler, right, but he looks like an aborigine.

I have followed "I Am the Villain" all the way The Villain is my favorite novel so far It's a pity that I can't read it Now I am chasing this book, I hope you will really stop being a eunuch ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

After reading fifty pictures, my feeling is that it is cliche + intellectual. Many old plots are basically forced on without much modification, and the characters are forcibly reduced to intelligence in order to advance the plot.

The logic is really not flattering, the main point is inexplicable

The story development and setting are not bad, but many plots are too stiff and give people a sense of fragmentation, just like suddenly swallowing a piece of meat while drinking porridge, and suddenly choking you.

The protagonist's sister seduced a nobleman, and was rescued by the protagonist. His sister castrated the nobleman. The protagonist confronts the nobles and private soldiers, and his brother laughs out loud, and even calls the protagonist brother when he is caught by the private soldiers.

Aboriginal protagonist? It's good, but I don't have any sense of empathy for the natives from another world. Goodbye,

Is it finished or stopped? I haven't written for almost a month

The middle and last chapters are very good. The writing has become much more mature since the small town of Ikemu. The character creation is very good. Nero commits suicide to rebel against the past. He is handsome and a real hero.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.