Jingtian Douluo of the Peerless Tang Sect

As for the configuration of the protagonist, he is 11 years old, has twin martial souls (weapon martial soul + beast martial arts), three ultimate attributes of light, darkness, and ice, starting soul beast sacrifice, son of luck, quasi-god inheritance + knowledge inheritance of the entire Douluo Continent. I originally worshiped a master, but as soon as Munn said he would accept a disciple, he knelt down and started kowtowing without hesitation.

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It's so funny, some people are scolding the protagonist for not taking all the opportunities from Huo Yuhao, and some are scolding the male protagonist for being greedy and trying to take some of everyone's opportunities. Reading the comments is more interesting than the novel. I suggest you scold each other first, and whoever wins the scolding will guide the author in writing the book.

Really, every day I talk about how awesome the protagonist is, but when it comes time to do something, he is timid. The Ice Emperor specially waited for Huo Yuhao for two days, waited for him to finish absorbing the soul bones, and then failed to fuse the soul ring before looking for the Ice Emperor. The same applies to the current game. 1. You are not destroyed by the evil soul master like in the original game. The main team is almost completely wiped out. 2. Your protagonists are the ones with the highest soul power in this competition. In the end, I had to write a dozen fucking chapters while others slowly played the game. I especially had to write two or three chapters for Huo Yuhao to show off, but what about your protagonist? It's fucking borderline ob, you're a level 63 person with 6 genuine soul rings that are over 100,000 years old, in a competition where the average level is over 40 and the highest level is 67 or 8. You are so crazy that you write about your teammates. Am I here to watch you write about how awesome your teammates are? The group talks about the will of the world every day. Tang San Buddha comes to round out your settings, but you write them in a book. If I read your book, I have to combine your comments in the group to understand the settings, right?

Tang San has been looking at the son of the plane. As mentioned in the prologue, Douluo has a new star who has an entanglement with the Tang clan, and Huo Yuhao's mother has just died. This is another handle, plus Tang Wutong's handle later, there are two generals of Hengha, Qingniu and Orangutan. They will kill you directly. What kind of hell boss Tang San

I would like to recommend some good fanfics to Peerless Tang Clan: The Light of Douluo Peerless; The Glory of the Sun and Moon of Peerless Tang Clan; Douluo's Dragon Sings in the Sky; Douluo's Ice Demon and Rain Hao; Douluo Peerless: Sun, Moon and Rain; Douluo People's Fake Gods in Peerless; Peerless Tang Clan's Destiny Villain; Douluo Dark Rhythm Hunting Gods Peerless Tang Clan: Demonic Eyes Burning the Sky Peerless Tang Clan: I Am the Evil Eye Peerless Tang Clan: Vitality Knight Douluo: Traveling through Huo Yuhao, starting with Yaolao Peerless Tang Sect: I am Yuhao's demon brother

Author, I feel there is something wrong with the portrayal of the protagonist! The protagonist seems to have never thought about his parents. His first thought is to share the benefits with Jiang Nannan, not his own parents. The reason for accelerating the creation of the meditation method was also because of Jiang Nannan. When sharing the meditation method, I shared it with Jiang Nannan first, without thinking of my parents.

He was poisoned and died. The nanny gave him the opportunity to level up and stepped on all these poisonous spots.

He just forced her to be his soul while the Snow Emperor was transforming. After all, they accepted the fact. When the Ice Emperor was in danger, the Snow Emperor asked to see what was going on. The Snow Emperor was so anxious that the protagonist kept watching slowly from behind. The Snow Emperor was even begging. The protagonist was still watching despite the fact that there was no danger. After the person died, he could use his soul as a spirit. He also said that you have the ultimate light attribute, you can't be too calculating and scheming, and you always look down on Tang San. I think you are the moral, intellectual, and physical beauty, ice, pure, and jade.

The protagonist can directly tell Huo Yuhao all the plot and opportunities, and then help him chase girls and recognize him as his big brother. Wait for Huo Yuhao to take him away. When you are a nanny, you should be thorough.

By the way, author, you don't underestimate the combat power of low-level soul beasts, right? If the combat power is as described in the book, why are there so many people directly hunting white soul rings? To put it bluntly, most non-genius soul masters, soul masters and below can be killed directly by armored soldiers. In other words, given the abilities of the protagonist's father, it is highly unlikely that he can defeat a four- to five-hundred-year-old spirit beast in this situation. Well, unless it's a soul beast at the lower end of the food chain. After all, a great soul master can hunt soul beasts that have been around for hundreds of years, so why are there so many people whose first and second rings are all white, and some even have white first and second rings? After all, the characters that can appear in the original work are basically of high quality. Then bring in those ordinary people. That is to say, as long as there is a great soul master level, it is guaranteed. The first soul ring is a hundred years old. Why are so many people white? To put it bluntly, hunting for low-level soul masters is really troublesome.

No one complained about Zhang Lexuan's behavior of falling in love with the protagonist because of the protagonist's hypnotherapy? I feel quite dirty 😰

Several times, the protagonist wrote about how awesome the protagonist was, but later on, he boasted about it. One of the more obvious ones was that the protagonist competed with Xu Sanshi Beibei. The protagonist used the second soul ring of more than a thousand years and the third soul ring of more than 4,000 years at the same time. The protagonist was still level 36. He beat Xu Sanshi Beibei, who was 27 and 8, who only had a century-old soul ring (even though they are geniuses), but he didn't even kill him instantly (normally, they are both geniuses, and the protagonist is still the ultimate super). The genius of Wuhun, one thousand-year soul skill can almost solve the battle. The protagonist can't solve both, which is really funny), and he actually has to add his own soul skill to win (and to be honest, the protagonist doesn't even describe the development of his own soul skill, so he goes to create his own soul skill, which is really speechless). The protagonist can feel that the soul skill is quite strong except when absorbing the soul ring, but when it comes to the real fight, it is all rubbish. Anyway, I can't understand what the author wants to express.

Can you still watch? The introduction has poisoned me to death

The protagonist's library contains the knowledge that exists in Douluo Continent, the Tang Sect's Xuantian Treasures, and Shrek's knowledge accumulated over thousands of years. What's the use of going to Shrek except for high-level soul masters to help hunt for soul rings, and Shrek is really rubbish. Xuanzi, a level 98 titled Douluo, can't protect a few soul emperors and soul kings, and so many people have died. , I feel that the protagonist just goes to Shrek to gain a sense of presence, which is of no use. It is better to go it alone, and the protagonist has Electrolux to guide him. Do you still need to go to Shrek? Besides, there are so many undead in Electrolux's demiplane. You can also hunt high-level soul rings later, and going to Shrek can easily attract the attention of Gou San. Isn't it too troublesome?

The fighting force is too exaggerated, dual ultimate martial arts, level 45, the first martial spirit is yellow, purple, purple, black, the second martial spirit is red, a 190,000-year-old soul bone, a 50,000-year-old soul bone, and the innate skill brought by the auspicious beast is time-freezing. The results tell me that I can defeat the Soul King? But he retreated calmly under the Soul Emperor. The protagonist was quite proud when he talked about it, which made me laugh out loud.

Jiang Nannan

After watching Sun and Moon Yuhao and watching Joining Shrek, I really can't stand it. It has nothing to do with the author's writing style. I just think Shrek is a big poison compared to Sun and Moon.

This writing style is a bit awkward. If you had a harem, you can already imagine how embarrassing it would be. Now that there is only one, the communication between her and the male protagonist is..., Withdrawn.

Isn't this the kind of article that licks Huo Yuhao, acts as a nanny for Huo Yuhao, and gives opportunities to Huo Yuhao? ! If this is the case, why not change the character cards. Huo Yuhao is the male protagonist, and the "dog-licking protagonist" of this book is the male supporting character.

The indigenous protagonist didn't know the plot or Shrek's position, he licked Huo Yuhao like crazy, worked as a nanny, his soul power level and combat power were ridiculously high, he had parents, and later he got a younger brother.

After reading the comments, the character collapsed after entering the main story? Became a bitch?

The more you go to the back, the more poisonous it becomes. With the ultimate attribute level 6, using the hundred thousand year soul ring skill, can you give me a sentence that is comparable to ordinary Contra?

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The male protagonist is extremely bright, and Yan Shaozhe specially prepared a five-thousand-year-old rabbit soul bone for him. Is this hurting the protagonist or looking down on the protagonist? It doesn't matter how old you are, your attributes must be right. Wang Dong's left arm bone in the original work is much better than this one. If you write anti-Shrek, so There is absolutely no problem in writing, but what the hell are you writing about Shrek? It's as disgusting as watching the original novel where Huo Yuhao and Wang Dong were almost killed by Ma Xiaotao and ended up being sent away by two soul-producing pills. The author couldn't have written like this even if he wanted to give Jiang Nannan a soul bone, and he only gave her five thousand years. This is still the heroine. I'm speechless.

Damn it, for a freshmen competition, it would only be a few thousand-year soul bones. After all, it is impossible to give anything good, but the people in the protagonist group seem to be so precious just a few thousand-year soul bones... People still refuse in various ways. What's more, after reading too much fan fiction, I think ten thousand years' ones are very common... Even if ten thousand years' ones are not common, with a group of geniuses like the protagonist group fusing such a group of low-level soul bones... Isn't it a pure waste of talent? I wrote about how precious these are, as if they were the soul bones of some ferocious beast.

The protagonist, aboriginal, doesn't know the plot, but knows that the protagonist in the book likes to be a nanny for the protagonist group. He watched the Ice Emperor being absorbed in front of his face, but he still didn't take it seriously after the Snow Emperor begged him. He voluntarily put on Shilek's dog leash. His writing is also terrible.

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It's not fun at all. He has been making nonsense theories all day long, and he was absorbed by the Ice Emperor in front of his face. He was so powerful that he couldn't do anything in a fight. Just like the previous plot, when he wrote about leading Huo Yuhao and Tang Wutong to fight Tang San, he should have thought that there is nothing exciting about the lower realm. Because to be honest, if you write it like this, who is the biggest boss in the lower world? Holy Spirit Religion, or the Sun and Moon Empire? You also made me laugh with your promise of an orange. Really, it's just a bland plot and there's nothing exciting about it. There is also that library. I only read part of each book and I recognized all the characters in the peerless Tang Sect 😰. I am able to write this book to completion. I really want to thank the readers for their tolerance and appreciation.

I have read 54 chapters so far. There are so many flaws that I feel uncomfortable if I don't mention them. I won't mention some minor flaws. I can only say that the author's writing style is not good enough. I can still bear it. I will list the others that make me uncomfortable. I will list them slowly 1. The so-called self-created soul skills of the protagonist really make me uncomfortable. They have fancy names but they are essentially just battle methods and sickle skills, which are beyond the scope of self-created soul skills 2 When the auspicious beast is sacrificed, the martial spirit is improved. It is no problem for the dragon's martial spirit to be raised to the extreme, but it is difficult for the sickle to reach the ultimate light. It is clearly mentioned in the previous article that the sickle at that time was only a high-level martial spirit. The power of the sacrifice was used to upgrade the dragon martial spirit. The power of the sickle is enhanced by the light sword absorbing the power of the sacrifice. This is good for being promoted to the top martial spirit. It is so easy to improve when the ultimate power is ruined 3 Tang Ya's character is too social. In the original work, she is lively and cheerful, but not so social, and the emotional fluctuations are too strong 4 This article is the first time to write about Beibei and Zhang Lexuan's emotions when they met. Beibei regarded Zhang Lexuan as the sister who took care of him and did not know about the child-support wife. In this article, Zhang Lexuan's emotions when seeing Beibei and Tang Ya together were also wrong. Her character would not shed tears, but was silently sad in her heart. The emotions in this article were too much 5 The protagonist's first and third soul rings are a bit repetitive. They are both attacks. Why not change the first soul ring to an amplification type? 6 I feel that the author is not very good at writing fighting scenes, and the pretentiousness is also blunt. The technique of hiding the soul ring and revealing the martial soul would not be a little exaggerated when written by a teacher of the Soul Emperor That's about it, there are others that are still bearable