Douluo: I Fabricated the Future

I felt that the part where I met Ning Rongrong was too awkward. Originally, the protagonist didn't go to Qibao for twenty years because of Ning Fengzhi. Not to mention how much he held grudges about this situation, but he definitely didn't have a good impression of them. Then when he first met Ning Rongrong, he was overwhelmed by her pretending to be wronged. After that, he felt like he wanted to be a peerless good brother. It was really embarrassing. Just lick it? In this case, if it were me, I would just pay the bill and leave. Why don't I just sit here and watch her perform? Anyway, I didn't have a good impression of their sect at first. As for promising them, just protect them secretly. Why are you talking to them so much? Do you really want to be a sister control?

Is there any Shen Nong spoiler to tell you how good it will be later? The previous feeling was very novel. When I met Ning Rongrong for the first time, I was so embarrassed that my toes were on the ground. Is it necessary to persist?

The protagonist has always been a real character and a human force. Can he create a villain or a spirit beast force? Otherwise, it will be difficult to abduct the Silver Dragon King. In the Blood River of the Killing City, you can get a Thousand Soul Blood Refined Extreme Douluo, and take advantage of the lower realm of the God King's consciousness to inherit the Shura God's throne first. Get a variety of monsters from the soul beast, and collect the blood talents of thousands of soul beasts to become a beast god. A bunch of vests and a big melee, the plot is too bland now, it needs a big scene to attract people.

You have already reached the limit of Douluo. You can learn how to cover the sky for a few more lives. For example, you can destroy your twin martial souls and live another life. For example, you can dig out your own soul bones and live another life. You can realize your soul rings and so on. You can turn your own bones into soul bones without using the original soul bones, etc. The female protagonist can accept a harem but not a stallion. Too many female protagonists will be marginalized, too few and it will feel uninteresting. (These are purely personal opinions)

Author, you are so invincible. You can write about daily life and vests in the future. Why not create a super villain force?

It seems to be okay so far, but the main character is directly a Ultimate Douluo. It may not be easy to write later, but he can do Zhutianliu. It depends on what the author thinks.

The heroine Bibi Dong, there must be Bibi Dong, and Bo Saixi, the two royal sisters, I really like it.

I would like to make a suggestion to write less about the waistcoat and more about the protagonist. After all, writing too much about the waistcoat will inevitably touch on some emotional stories, using someone else's appearance to pick up girls, and pretending to be cool always feels too poisonous. You can expose some of the protagonists who will become gods in the future and fight Qian Renxue Bibi Dong, and there are some wonderful stories between the three people, such as two mothers and daughters who hate the protagonist because of their love. In reality, two people are curious about the protagonist and go to find the protagonist. Isn't this delicious?

In order to go further, God Shura had to pass on his divine status, but he was not willing to develop the divine world for tens of millions of years. The power of faith was particularly easy to use. It would be much smoother if Tang San was the Shura God and his soul was separated by an evil thought. In order to cleanse Tang San of the Shura God aura and prevent others from discovering it, Tang San was asked to go to the small world to arrange training. Moreover, there are also problems with Tang San's Xuantian Kung Fu. If a martial arts technique can still be used by the God King, there must be problems. It must be that God Shura's own major skill was castrated to Tang San. As for other Tang Sect techniques, they are incidental. When it comes to Douluo, why would Tang San know the fairy grass in a small world? God Shura helped him. Tang San's life was arranged, and his reincarnation as Tang Hao's son was arranged. His mother was killed by Wuhundian, a natural enemy. And it can also collect and rob faith. Could it be that Tang San and his grandfather were kidnapped by the Bat King and the Asura God didn't know it? He didn't leave it to Tang San as a stepping stone to legitimately inherit the Shura God's throne. But Tang San himself also worked hard and not only got the Sea God's throne, but because he was the reincarnation of the Shura God's split soul, he could obtain the dual god's throne without risk. Otherwise, why would other gods have the same god position? In the God Realm, he also helped him recruit a group of minor gods to join Tang San's friends in the God Realm. In the end, it is understandable that the God of War and Shura resurrected Tang San. The tool man he arranged would be killed or he would be in trouble. Tang San's own opportunity was the Sea God's throne, the immortal grass and the Shura god's throne were clearly arranged by others. God Shura was still one move away from him, but he didn't expect that Tang San was still in love and could give up the God Realm to find a wife.

I was speechless when I saw the author's assessment of a person's character. A group of people say they are patriotic, but you have no idea what they are thinking. They are two-faced and inconsistent. They may smile on the surface, but they may be trying to trick you in their hearts.